Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely
next part must be awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago

Heyy Guys!!

This is dedicated to Sahana (mjht26).. Shes been telling me to update this one from a lot of time!! (actually bugging me!)
And so here it goes...
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The state now!
Samrat getting ready to go to Gunur's house!
Mayank getting ready to meet the Trustee..
Nupur thinking of a plan!!
Gunjan and Riddhima worrying abt what to do.. as they know sam is coming and Armaan isnt picking up his phone!!!!
Armaan was ready and was out buying a gift for Riddhima!
........ Mayank reaches first at 7.........
G thinks it mite be samrat so she rushes to open the door and sees mayank
G: oh! mayank! hi! tum yaha? di se milna hain?
M: hi gunjan.. nahi.. main sir se milne aaya hoon...
G: oh! come.. woh room main hain..
G takes mayank to her dads room..
Dad: hi mayank.. tum yaha?
M: ji sir...woh kuchh zaroori baat karni thii!!
Dad: ok.. aur gunjan.. tum kahi ja rahi ho?
G: nahin.. bas kuchh frnds ghar par aa rahe hain!!
Dad: oh good! toh mayank bhi tumlogo ko join kar lega!!
G: sure.. (aise bhi itni tension main ek aur aadmi shaamil ho jayega toh kya phark parega!!)
Excuse me...
She leaves...
They talk in the room for sometime.. Meanwhile nupur is trying to eavesdrop on their convo but she cannot hear anything!! Suddenly mayank opens the door and sees nupur in a nice red dress!!
M: hi..
N: (nervous) hi..baat hui?
M: hmm.. aur tumhari date? cancel ho gayi? 😊
N: nahi.. samrat ghar par hi aa raha hain!
M: good! waise bhi main ruk raha hoon!
N: what?????
M: yes.. gunjan ne mujhe invite kiya!!
N: ha? gunjan ne?? GUNJANNN!!!!!
She rushes to her room....
R: gunjan hum kya karenge!! agar bhai ko pata chala na.. hum gaye!!
G: Ridzz chill sit..(making her sit) kuchh nahi hoga! main kuchh sochti hoon!!
R: plzz gunjan.. bhai toh humme maar hi daalega!
G: kuchh nahi hoga! agar tu apne bhaiya se itna nahi darti na toh aaj in sab ki naubat hi nahi aati!! uff!! main kuchh sochti hoon!
N: kya? kya zarwat thi mayank ko invite karne ki!!!!!
G: di? kya hua? yaar mayank ko maine nahi dad ne invite kiya hain!! aise bhi aapke wajah se itni tension hain!!
N: mere wajha se?
G: haan.. tumne hi toh samrat ko bulaya na!!! gawd! ridz aurr armaan ki date kharab karne!!!
N: what? tu kya keh rahi hain mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha !!!
G tells her the whole thing from the beginning!
N slaps her head.. looks at riddhima..
N: im SO sorry!! I din know.. mujhe pata nahi tha ki sam.. i mean tumlogo ki date hain..
R: thats ok.. but agar bhai ko pata chala toh...
N: par samrat ko nahi pata na ki armaan aa raha hai?
G: nahii...
N: toh bas... agar armaan pehle aaya toh usse wapas bhej denge.. aur agar samrat aaya toh... umm...
G: wohi toh problem hain di.. sam pehle aaya toh?
N: IDEA! tum.. tum armaan ki date banne ki acting karo na!!
G: par main kaise?
N: ab itna toh kar hi sakti hain tu ridz ke liye??
The doorbell rang again!!
G ran out just praying it would be armaan!! and again to her disappointment it was samrat!
G: Shitt!!!
S: what?
G: i mean.. Hi!
S: isse phle tumne kya kaha?
G: woh.. galati se... anyway hi!
S: hey!
R: hi bhai!
N: hey sam!
S: hi guys.. so aaj toh sab yaha hain.. including.. mayank! hey dude!
M: hi sam!!
G's head was about to spin when.. TING TONG!
R and G exchanged glances!! SHIT!!!!!
G: tumlog hall main baitho main aati hoon..
S: ok.. he went in with nupur and riddhima..
Mayank was still there.. Gunjan smiled at him..
She opened the door..
A: heyy!! im soo sorry abhi 26 missed calls dekhe tumhare!!
par anyway.. ridz kaha hain... and he walked in..
G: shhh.. ander mat jao..
A: hey mayank!! tum yaha bhi.. OMG! NUPUR aur tumhari bhi aaj date hain!!
M: bhi? matlab aur kiski?
G: umm umm MERI!!! meri aur armaan ki date thii..
M: oh..😉😉😉
A: What Rubbishh!! and he walks into the hall!!
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A: hi rid.... (is shocked to see everyone..)
G runs in after him..
S: tum bhi..??
G: haan.. woh hamari date thii..😳
S: WHAT??😕😡 (wait a sec he thought.. why m i so shocked?)
G: haan... kyun? main date nahi kar sakti???
R: exactly! isliye toh gunjan aaj itni pretty lag rahi hain..
(she had worn normal clothes)
G: What?
S: whatever.. you guys enjoy! but.. phir ridz ko dinner pe kyun bulaya tha?
G: woh.. woh.. woh humme join karne waali thi!!
S: date par?
A was still in shock..!! he had planned so much!!
N: samrat! ab plz.. CONCENTRATE kare?
S: oh haan.. waise aaj meri aur nupur ki bhi date hain!!!
R A G: KYAAAAA!!!!!!!
G: di? isse date kar rahi ho??
A: mujhe laga tumhari aur mayank ki date thi!!
R: bhai?? yeh sab?
S: gunjan!! what do you mean by "isse date kar rahi ho"???
G: Listen IM NOT TALKING TO YOUU!!! di!! tum isse kaise date kar sakti ho?? yeh tumse chhota hain!!!
N: plz!! khud ke date ko dekha hain!!! no. 1 casanova!!!
R: nahii.. woh itna bhi bura nahi hain,...
Eyelock of armaan and riddhima!!
S: riddhima!! tum uski side le rahi ho???
R broke the eyelock..
R: i meant.. ki aap.. aap itne bhi bure nahi hain!! phew
S: matlab main bura hoon??
G: y dont you understand di!!!
N: gunjan plzz
M: ENOUGH GUYS!!!!!
everyone is silent!!
M: baat kaha se kaha lekar jaa rahe ho!! kaun kisse baat kar raha hain kuchh samajh hi nahi aa raha!!
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Precap: Hungama continues!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤣🤣wow!!!! i really LOVED & ENJOYED the convo bwn these guys!!
ITS REALLY FUNNY!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok Manjari...I am IN.. I told you right?? Agar mayur hai ,im automatically IN... I was just waiting for mayur to get some space..that too on equal grounds.. Now I am waiting for more updates 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic part
loved the confusion
do continue asap😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Edited!!!!

Wel Manjari......once again a rocking update honey.....

Tis tym it was damn funny n hilarious......

Loved n enjoyed every bit of it.......yesterday I was feeling low, but ur update applied a healing touch!!

Thanx for this amazing work dear.......you are one of the best writers in IF!!!!!


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Edited by Dr.Zombie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow wow wow
🤣
Tht was damn funny
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahahaha omg omg wat a funny update too much confusing m loving dis a lot hahahah too funny manjari dear u rock
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update.Gunjan confuse me a lot.Hope she figure out her feelings fast.Continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
lolz really good n funny update it was..!!!

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