Maaneet FF: Destined To Be...[Note Pg. 30] - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

226

Views

40.3k

Users

52

Likes

397

Frequent Posters

wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey nice update... waiting to c maan's reaction on knwing geet's past.. do continue soon


Hey Swetha... thanks for reading and commenting. Also, let's see if geet's past comes out or not 😉

<3 Heena
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Will do... sorry for the late update for ryt now though

<3 Heena
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

why did u have to stop
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon


Hey sweet cherry!

Thanks for reading and commenting and will continue soon from now. sorry for the delay!

<3 Heena
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great update, im glad this is no where near Kekta's storys.

Maan Khurana asking to be friends that with a woman, that truly is astonishing! So in teh next update he'll probably know about her past...?
Please do continue soon
Anji
PS: Love your Chapter titles!


Hey Angel! thanks for reading and commenting! hmmm about the past you guys might have to wait a little! and glad that you like the chapter titles, but guess what i am already out of ideas for them😆
<3 Heena
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: anufa

awsum....now maan ll not misunderstand geet in future!!!!!

update sooN!!!


Thanks for reading and commenting anufa!

<3 Heena
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sarita21992

add me 3 ur pm list yr


Will do sarita! thanks for reading and commenting!

<3 Heena😃
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#67

😉Hey guys! I apologize for the SUPER late update just got caught up with college. Also, I have decided to change the title to Destined to Be or Destiny because I changed the plot a little... so which would you guys prefer? Lemme know... also thanks for taking the time to read.


Part 4

Geet's Past?


"Maan thank you for being so thoughtful, lekin sach ek na ek din samne aa hi jaata hai so better early than late, aur waise bhi jab tak main apko bata nahi deti I won't feel comfortable being your friend and going back with you so please bear with me," Geet pleaded again she WAS going to tell him everything, she had to.


Maan aapne mujhe hoshiyarpur main mere bade bhai se bachaya tha, but you don't know the reason. You don't know about my past and that's what I want to share with you now that we are friends. I, Geet Handa... she started but was rudely cut off by the shrill ringing of Maan's cell-phone.


"Hello, ji, ji dadima we're fine, Geet yahan hai mere saath woh bhi theek hai, ..... pata nahi I'll ask her! Yes, don't worry we're on our way home right now."


Sorry geet but I don't think we continue with this right now, dadima ghar par akeli hai and we need to be on our way... waise you still havent' told me what are you doing here.... tum dadima ko bina bataye agayi, tum jaanti ho she's not feeling well and still... do you have a sense of responsibility or not,? asked Maan irritably.


"Woh .... woh ma..in," geet stammered, but Maan was not in a mood to be patient with her today, he had to get home. Dadi was home alone and ill too. This senseless girl was going to drive him mad one day.


"Geet ab hum dost ban gaye hai na.. so we can have this chit-chat later abhi dadi ghar par akeli hai and we need to get home," Maan said dragging her towards the car.


It took them two hours to get home due to traffic, and when they did they found Dadi peacefull sleeping in her room in the Main house. Maan went and sat on the edge of the bed checking dadi's temperature, she seemed to be fine and took a deep sigh of relief. He got up from the bed and headed towards the door where Geet was standing looking back at him.


"um....uummm... sir main bhi chalti hoon raat bahut ho gayi hai aap bhi araam kijiye," geet said hurriedly and started to leave for the outhouse, but before she could cross the threshold Maan caught her hand and pulled her towards him, putting one of his arms around her waist and holding her there. "Geet I am really sorry once again for everything I said earlier and umm now that we have become friends I really hope that we can get to know each other and try and get over the misconceptions we have of one another. I look forward to this journey of friendship with you," he said softly.


Geet was mesmerized by his mere presence this close to her and with all that he'd just said she couldn't be happier to have found a new friend in him. Sure, Pinky was her childhood friend and a girl who would understand Geet but Maan had given her a second chance at life and had been here knight in shining armor, he had seen her in her hardest times and was somewhat responsible for the much more confident Geet, he knew more about her already compared to pinky and that's why she was sure that his friendship would definitely mean a lot to her and she would cherish it.


"Thank you sir for everything and you don't have to apologize anymore, I agree what you said this evening was unacceptable and harsh, but you were angry and that's why I don't hold any grudge against you. About our friendship, again thank you for it too. I am glad that we can finally stop fighting at petty things and try something like friendship," Geet replied.


She finally realized their close proximity and moved a little farther away from him and said good night giving him a small smile. Maan couldn't help but smile back and bade good night too her as well and watched her retreating back with a smile on his face till she disappeared in the night.


Precap:

Maaneet Sunday = Friend day?


Hey guys... I know i was late in updating, but please do comment, criticize and if you're in a hurry at least hit the LIKE button! Your comments help me in improving my writing and motivate me to update faster 😆😉

<3 Heena

Edited by wintersunshine - 14 years ago
funnymonkey thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Hey great fan fic...please continue on and add me to ur fan fic lol
wintersunshine thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Maan4EVA

Hey great fan fic...please continue on and add me to ur fan fic lol


Thanks for reading! will do :)

OfTheHeart thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Star Thumbnail 15th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 14 years ago
#70
beautifull update dea.........
i loved it!!!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

7 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".