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Update is coming Reaaaaallllllyyyyyyyyyy Sooooon! -Jassi
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Chapter 1

"Wake up Nupur!" yelled a 24 year old girl named Ridhimma. She was yelling at her sister to wake up, because she was supposed to go on a job interview. A 20 year old girl gets up rubbing her eyes and sleepily saying "Huh' kya time hua?" "Tumhare utne ka time hua hain! Abh jaldi utho" she screamed in Nupur's ear. "Stop Di! I hate when you yell in my ear!" she shouted. "Acha!" she screamed even louder in her ear. They continued fighting. Then the door opened. Both shut up right away, because the person at the door looked angry. Normally they wouldn't care if someone came to their door with an angry look, but this was their brother Maan Kapoor we're talking about.

Ridhimma and Nupur looked at him kind of scared. "Shut up both of you!" he yelled, "Meri neendh kharab kar rahi ho" saying this he left. Both breathed a sigh of relief. Maan is a really sweet brother but when he is angry he is scary.

Nupur was getting ready for her job interview for a personal secretary. She wore dark blue skinny jeans and a purple shirt with a white light jacket over it. She put some eye-liner and lipgloss on. Then she put on her specs which she didn't need but she wore them sometimes anyways. They were good luck for her she thought. She left her hair open. Then she went outside and sat in her black car, which she was really fond of.

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She drove to a huge building. It was so cool! There were windows all over.It was even cooler inside. There were cabins made of glass, and had luxurious furniture (desks, chairs etc) that she could tell were really expensive. She walked over to the front desk. "I'm here for an interview." she said. The lady pointed to a room made out of glass, she saw all the people sitting there. She walked in gently pushing the door, thinking it might break. She looked at how many people were there for an interview, but didn't get nervous. "So what if there's all these people. I will still get the job" she assured herself. She sighed and took a seat. She looked around and saw only girls, wearing tons of make-up and some were even wearing indecent clothes. She wondered why. The girl on her left noticed Nupur getting disgusted by some of the girls. "Yeh sab Mayank Singh ko impress karna chahti hain." she said. "Kyun?" Nupur asked confused. "Arre he's so hot! Aur uske paas itne paise jo hain" she responded. Nupur thought that was so stupid. So what if he has money and is good-looking, what if he's not a nice person.

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It was finally her turn, after waiting a whole hour. She walked to his cabin and knocked softly. He was sitting at his desk on the computer. "Come in." he said sternly. He had a deep voice. She slowly walkedin and waited for him to tell her to sit. After a few minutes, he looked up from his work. Nupur didn't like that. She thought that was really rude. She was atanding like a loser and he's just too into his work to notice her standing there. Mayank looked at her and couldn't help but think "She's so pretty" It was a windy day, and the windows were open. Her hair was flying with the wind. She was looking beautiful.

And a tune was playing in the background!

Background Tune:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFxisBZRqMU

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GFxisBZRqMU[/YOUTUBE]

He kicked himself inwardly for thinking like that. He looked at her file. She didn't have any experience but she had great marks. He didn't expect a 20 year old girl to have experience anyways. He asked her a few questions that she answered with confidence. He was pretty sure he would give her the job, because almost all the other girls came just to try and impress him. This one didn't seem like that. Nupur didn't get what the girl was saying. "Hot? Are you kidding me! Such a sadu akdu! He kind of scares me" she thought in her mind. The look on his face and the way he talked did indeed scare her. Finally he was done interviewing her. Nupur walked out and sighed a sigh of relief. "It would be real hard working with him!" she thought. Nupur went home thinking if she'll get the job.

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Mayank was finally done with the interviews. Soon his worker and one of his best friends, Samrat called. "Did you choose yet Mayank? I need to go home, jaldi bata do" he said in a hurry. "Umm'I chose #157" he replied. "Oh! Nupur, meri achi dost'waise tum dono ki jodi achi lagegi, isiliye toh maine usse yeh job recommend ki" he said smiling. Like everyone else, Samrat was also always after him to get married. He always thought that he was too work-engrossed and needed someone to change him. That was the same way his family thought. "Shut up Samrat! Tum apni knowledge apne paas hi rakho, abh mujhe jaana hain! Bye!" he said and put the phone down. Samrat smiled and prayed to god that Mayank and Nupur fall in love. He thought Nupur was the right girl for Mayank because she wasn't after money.

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Kaliya Bariyan Ve Gaddiya Nu Main Laawa

Speed Main Do Son Bhi Di Chala

Ae Police De Samne Main Nahi Rukda

I'm A Knight Rider!

...

Ni Gaddi Sade Bhe Ja

Ni Jattiye

Ni Dur Tanu Le Ja

We Arriye

'

-the song went on

In case, you guys don't know this song, here is the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuCFRaFWjwY

Song: Amplifier

Album: Unforgettable

Singer: Imran Khan

It was Nupur's cell phone (an iPhone) ringing. Her ringtone was one of her favourite songs 'Amplifier'. It was so loud. She wondered how it all of a sudden became so loud. She made a note in her head to fix the volume. She stopped her car because she doesn't talk on a phone while driving. She answered the call. She got one of those recorded messages.

"Congratulations Ms.Kapoor. You have gotten the job, of Mr. Singh's personal secretary. Your work hours are from eight in the morning to eight at night. Press 1 to hear this message again. Press 2 to confirm you've received the message."

Nupur pressed 2 and hung up. She was so happy she got the job. She really wanted the job. Then she remembered her new scary boss. She took him out of her mind. She wanted to be happy right now. She turned her car and drove to a resturaunt. She bought some 'Ras Gullas' and returned home. She took out her keys and entered into her house. Maan came towards her. "Bhai! Mujhe job mil gayi!" she said excited. "Arre! Yeh toh bahut achi baat hui" he said and hugged her. Ridhimma came and hugged her from behind. "Mujhe pata tha tujhe hi milegi" she said smiling. "Arre! Yeh kya? Ras Gullas" said Maan excited and trying to take them. "Abhi nahi! Pehle Bhagwaan ji se bhog lagwaana hain" she said. First she went and told her mom and dad and they congratulated her. Then, she went to the small temple in there house. She thanked god. She was happy that she got the job. She wouldn't be bored anymore. Otherwise, it was so boring all alone. Her dad left for work early around seven, Ridhimma would leave at nine, and be back at eight-thirty. Maan would leave at nine, and be back by nine. And her mom would always be busy doing work. That was the routine for the past month, ever since she came back from Canada.

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Nupur got up in time to get ready. She brushed and took a shower. She put on white half-sleeved blouse, and a pink skirt, that went up to her knees. She dried her hair and combed it. It was in beautiful curls. It was her natural hair. She wore white hoop earings and pink sandals. She didn't wear her specs today. She went downstairs. She made herself bread and poured some milk for herself. She decided on asking her scary boss if she could begin at nine and end at nine instead so she could have breakfast and dinner with her family.

She still had time left, so she thought of revenge against Ridhimma for screaming in her ears and ruining her sleep. She slowly walked into Ridhimma's room. Without making a sound, she changed the time on Ridhimma's clock so she'll wake up an hour earlier. She smiled mischieviously and left for work by auto. The car was only for special occassions.

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She got to the huge building. She was a minute late. She knocked on her boss's door. He looked up and said "Come in" the way he said it last time. He looked up and his eyes met hers, for the first time ever. They were both standing looking into each other's eyes, when Nupur felt uncomfortable and looked downwards. After a minute Mayank said "Tum late ho" kind of angrily. "Sorry sir'lekin ek hi toh minute late-" she started but got cut off. "Tum late ho" he said as if confirming it. She looked down. "Phirse mat hona'who paas wala tumhara cabin hain, wahan par kuch files pari hain, unhe type kardena" he said sternly. "Ji" she said softly and left. She was pretty angry. "Toh kya hua agar main EK minute late ho gayi!" she thought angrily. Samrat who had seen Mayank getting mad at her for being late shook his head and sighed.

She entered her cabin. It had four walls, out of which two were see through, made of glass. It was beautiful, but what troubled her was that her scary sadu boss's cabin was right beside her's. There cabins were connected with a glass wall. She started typing. Mayank was sitting in his cabin. He turned right and saw Nupur completely into her work. A strand of her was troubling her. She was typing and trying to put it behind her ear. She looked so cute. He stared at her for a while. Nupur turned and saw Mayank looking at her, and quickly turned back to her work.. He quickly turned around, and saw Samrat standing smiling. That could only mean one thing, he caught him staring. "Shit!" thought Mayank. "Ahem, Ahem" Samrat fake coughed. "Agar tumhari staring session khatam ho gayi ho toh main kuch bolu" he asked happy that he caught him. "Kya kehna hain" asked Mayank as if he hadn't heard what Samrat said. "Bhul gaye kya? Meeting hain Sharmas ke saath" he said. "Arre haan, chalo" he said.

Samrat went to Nupur's cabin to call her for the meeting. "Hi Nupur" he said. She looked up and smiled. "Hi Samrat" she said. "Yeh kaam baad mein karna, abhi ek meeting attend karni hain, chalo" he said. "Okay" she said getting up. They walked to the meeting hall. The meeting was going on and Nupur was sitting bored. Just then her phone rang, playing her ringtone ever so loudly.

Ni Gaddi Sade Bhe Ja

Ni Jattiye

Ni Dur Tanu Le Ja

We Arriye

...

Nupur's eyes grew big with fear. All eyes fixed on Nupur questioningly, except for Samrat's who's were smiling as if trying to assure her 'it's okay'. She quickly cut the phone, and turned it off. "Sorry" she squeaked. "I'm so stupid! Phone hi nahi off kiya'aur volume bhi nahi kam ki!" she said in her head and slapped herself inwardly. She quickly adjusted the volume too, incase she forgets again. She was hell scared after Mayank gave her an angry look. The meeting got over, that was just what Nupur feared. Everyone left the meeting hall. Nupur and Mayank were left in there. Nupur thought she could sneak out queitly and Mayank wouldn't notice, but she was wrong.

She slowly walked towards the door, but Mayank pulled her back in by her wrist. "Tum itni stupid kaise ho sakti ho! Tumhe pata nahi hain ke meeting mein aane se pehle apna phone bhand kar dena chahiye. Tum mein itni bhi sense nahi hain! Your so dumb! Why are you so careless and irresposible. Pehle late aati ho upar se yeh'" he screamed angrily tightening his hold on her wrist hurting her. Nupur had tears in her eyes. Nobody even in her family had ever yelled at her like this. And over that he was hurting her wrist. "Please mera haath chodiye'" she said so softly, it sounded like a whisper. He noticed he was holding her wrist. He let go but his arrogance and ego didn't let him, say sorry. He also noticed there were tears in her eyes. She quickly left from there. He felt guilty now.

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Okay guys, I can't write more!

PleasePleasePlease Comment!!!

Also tell me which FF I should write the next part of first!

RuBaRu

Or

Forever'

Also I made a Shahid Siggie!

If any1 wants to use it they can:

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Edited by xxJaSsIxx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's sooooo long!
And Boring
But it's needed for the story to progress
Please Comment!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Jassi,

Loved the firs chapter ,it wasn't boring at all
i loved nupur and Mayu is so arrogant
Sami is too smart
Loved Nupur's sweet family
they are really sweet
and Samrat ka idea for making them together he is too intelligent
and next is Mayank 1 min late also is that matter you are late i hate time table
and nupsi was wrong not reducing her mobi sound but it was not the way to talk
Mr Sadu Mayank Singh
but as a whole wonderful update
update soon
Aruna
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely start
its not at all boring
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Amazing,faboulous update
i loved it
it not at all boring...
i loved mayur scenes.....
plzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon
eagirly waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Jassi 🤗
It was a total awesome update. Very well written. So now, we know something more about the characters. Awesome work!
Great Job.
And do continue soon
Love <3<3
Daania
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JASSI i loved it and it was not at all boring next time make it even more longer plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz and update soon haaaaan
thx alot for the pm love u for that
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Posted: 15 years ago
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tht was soooo awesome part and nice sigge of shahid kapoor
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hey Jassi amzing concept na !!
so Mayu starting his dadzz bussiness n Nupur needzz a job !!!
seemzz interesting
can't wait to read more
P.S. I love the title
-Lina-

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