Fairytale in the middle of my life *Complete-Pg36* - Page 14

OMGe........she tells abt her pregnancy.....gosh Maans heart must b ripped...😲.... but i luvd how he regained composure n says..that if the luv in her eyes is for him...then she is his...or he will let her go...

that was so heartbreaking the way u explained maans heartbreak was soo beautiful but soo sad at the same time... i felt maan's pain... 😭 ur updates were awesome...😛 i'm hopin maan is able to stop geet form leaving... eager to read more 😊

I loveee the way u have described maan's lovee for geet.
So geet has accepted her love for maan.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.


Fatima

Ankita dear ... i dont have words .....brought tears to my eyes ...so beautifully written ...hats off to you girl .... 👍🏼

superb!

That was fab yaar

I've just spent more than an hour reading your FF....

I loved every bit of it.... It was truly a fairytale even when nothing in it was so unearthly but the feelings were for sure.... The parts are just brilliant.... I enjoyed every bit of it, and to be honest I would actually never like this story to see in a show, because nothing can supercede the way you've written this story in this concept, it would just haze my own pictures that I say while reading....

I laughed at the small jokes, smiled at the understanding characters, and cried with their pain(my eyes are still misted).... While reading this story, I so strongly wished it would be a novel, or a book, that I could actually keep in my cupboard and read it very often.
But, it's okay, coz I thnk I'm going to cherish this FF in my mind and heart.

It's really wonderful how u've written in a unique concept and adhered to that concept. Those little thoughts that you use before the chapters are truly beautiful....

And lastly if not for you, I would have not witnessed something as Superb as this....👏👍🏼


THANX!!!!!


With Love.
Jhankaar

really gud.. plz add me to ur pm list!!!!

plz continue writing

omg that was fantastic