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Sujata

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Posted: 15 years ago

#581

very romantic update...........n dialogues r funny.............mughl-e-azam k brand ambasdr n sahi bol rahi hai chasmish..............lolz.🤣

continue soon.

thanks 4 pm.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#582

hey guys here the update goes
so as u know
kal kam se kam 5 ya 6 ghante mayur baarish mein the
now in the morning
everyone except mayank and nupur on the breakfast table
shilpa:arre dia.........mayank aur nupur nahi uthe
gunjan:han roz ..................jiju toh subah subah hi uth jaate the
samrat:han....aj toh mayank mujh se bhi late hai
benji:aur nupur bhi nahi uthi
preeti:pata nahi kya hua dono koh
pranam:aj papa neh mujhe subah se danta bhi nahi
dia:pata nahi kya hua
shilpa:main jaa kar dekhti hoon
gunjan:ab.................aunty main aur samrat bhi aate hain apke saath
shilpa:han
now cut to mayur room
mayank and nupur both are shivering in their balnket
shilpa:arre yeh dono kamp kyu rahe hain
she goes and touches mayu's forehead
it was burning with fever
shilpa:OMG..............iss kah matha toh tap raha hai..............bukhar se
gunjan:di ka bhi
samrat:par yeh sab hua kaise.............aik minute............yeh dono kal raat koh bahar gaye the na.........
shilpa:han
samrat:raat koh toh bohot tez baarish ho rahi thi
gunjan:kahi yeh dono baarish mein............
samrat:woh sab chodo pehle in dono koh jagao
now they wake both of them
both wake
and sit on the bed
still shivering a bit
shilpa:tum log kal poori raat barish mein bheeg rahe the?
mayank:woh maa.............ham toh aise hi...............leikin ap ko keise pata
samrat:itni boori tarah se kamp rahe ho dono..........aur..........ooper se dono koh tez kisem ka bukhar bhi ho chuka hai
mayur:kya!!!!
trio:han!!!!
mayank:joh bhi ho..........mujhe bacho koh parhana hai main jaa raha hoon
samrat:aik kadam bhi neeche mat rakhna
mayank:kyun
shilpa:kyunke pehle hum log tum dono keh temperatures lein ge.............aur phir doctor ko bulaye ge..........did u get that..........(in an angry way)
both:ok maa
now cut to the kids room
neha:bohot acha hua na mayank uncle koh fever ho gaya...........
preeti:neha...........yeh acha nahi hua yaar..........leikin aik tarah se acha bhi hua........kam se kam ab parhna nahi pade ga
pranam:han
anjali is lost in her book
pranam:aik taraf ham hain jinhe kisi seh bhi parhne se dar lagta hai...aur aik taraf yeh hai...isse kabhi bhi koi bhi parha le........isse maza aata hai
they go and move anjali
anjali:kya hua preeti di neha aur pranam.........
neha:di......ap yahan kitabo mein khoi hui ho...........wahan mayank uncle aur nupur massi koh fever ho gaye hain
anjali:kya...............fever...............papa koh bhi.......oh no...........
preeti:tumhe dukh fever ka ho raha hai ya na parhne ka
anjali:dono ka..............
neha:huh............main kuch nahi kar sakti.............di ap kabhi nahi badlo gi na
anjali:OMG...........shayad ap log bhool rahe ho............keh beshak papa bed par hain.........leikin gunjan massi toh hai na..........
trio:oh no!!!
anjali:oh yes!!!!
ok now lets cut to mayur room
samrat checking nupur temperature
gunjan checkin mayank's temperature....
and shilpa and benia watching
after sometime
both sajan
take out the thermometers out of mayurs' mouths
and start reading
both:kya..........103!!!!!!!!!!!
mayur:kya!!!!!
shilpa:han.........ab poori raat baarish mein bheego ge toh yehi hoga na
mayank:maa.......
shilpa:maine tujhe romantic hone ke liye kaha tha...........sehet keh liye hanikarak hone ke liye nahi😆......chadha liya na bukhar
nupur:sorry maa
shilpa:arre meri pyari nupur...........beta tumhe sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai
mayank:maa...........yeh kya hai..........aap ab nupur ki side zyada leni lagi ho
shilpa:sahi hi toh keh rahi hoon........kal nupur neh tujhe kaha hoga na baarish mein na rehne ke liye
mayank:kaha tha magar
shilpa:dekha.......
mayank:magar abhi mujhe bacho koh parhana hai aur main jaa raha hoon
shilpa:khabardaar joh tu bed se utha toh
mayank:kyun maa
shilpa:leta reh wahi........tabyet theek nahi hai teri........aise aur kharab ho jayegi
mayank:please maa
gunjan:jiju..........ap fiker na karo.....main bacho koh parha doo gi
mayank:oh thanks alot gunjan

ok guys that was enuf for today
hope u liked it
do rate and comment
precap:kids ki shamat ayi(parhayi)😆
thanks for reading
love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 15 years ago

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#583

Tu bahut zaalim hai ya gunjan banegi jalim for kids😉

Loved the part very much and it was really-2 wodeful and hilarious dono ko 103 woh do continue soon wait for ur next update

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Posted: 15 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: Ritu_Cute_2197
hey,annie
how r u ? all's well?
sry fr late commenting .....EXAMS.......
Bt they all were AWESOME!!!!!!

ya everything is gud................koi baat nahi yaar........dosti mein no sorry no thank u

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Posted: 15 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: sharma.nat
Tu bahut zaalim hai ya gunjan banegi jalim for kids😉

Loved the part very much and it was really-2 wodeful and hilarious dono ko 103 woh do continue soon wait for ur next update

han g..........main toh yehi zulm karti hoon na............poora din beth keh sochti hoon keh raat koh kya likhoo gi..............i am very zalim shalim ji😆