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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 53

They are all sitting on the floor facing each other….with the grls on one side boys on the other……….mihika decides that there is gng to be a bowl of names….one bowl for boys and other bowl for girls………..names will be picked up accordingly and one name for boys will come come up and one for girls...they need to sit opposite each other and do what they are told to do...one by one each other's chance comes up when suddenly the last two names mihika tricks the names to be maan and geet...they both feel awkward but accept the challenge thereafter...they both sit opposite each other...they both speak in their minds while mihika thinks of working out her plan...to bring them together...

Maan:oh God!...pata nahin ab kya hoga!..geet ke saath muqabla...oh no...pata nahin kya karne ko bolenge...arey geet ke saath competition karunga toh main toh chahunga ki geet hi jeete...par agar usse jeetene diya toh yeh ladke meri dhulai kardenge...yeh pyar me kya kya karna parta hai...haarna bhi itna achcha lagta hai...neway maan jo hoga dekha jayega!

Geet:no way...aaj aisa kyun lagraha hai ki maan sir se main,main geet bakshi haarjaun!...kya maine pagalpan ki saare levels cross karli...pata nahin yeh kya hai!...neway geet jo hoga dekha jayega!...

Mihika(in her mind):ab aap dono kaise bachoge?...iss game se hi pata chalega ki aap dono ek dusre ke liye kya feel karte he?..hmm bro...ab aap kya karoge!

They both sit opposite to each other while both look lovingly at each other..the game is played between both of them to pass the pillow...they start playing the game an dpass the pillow...while playing the game both of them are absolutely lost in each other ans smiling...mihika notices all dis and gives a smirk and finds it very exciting...the music stops but they are so lost in each other that they keep on playing and passing...the other ppl find it weird when suddenly mihika shouts to stop... they suddenly cum bk to reality and find everyone staring at them weirdly which they also find it weird...

Mihika:finally tumlog ruke toh sahi varna mujhe lagraha tha ki humein kal subha tak wait karna parega!...nahin nahin continue playing...hum log subha tak wait karlenge...no problem...!

Maan:mihu???

Mihika:kya mihu?...aap dono do din tak khelne ka plan banarahe the na?..aise kya khogaye game me ki music stop hone ke baad bhi aaplog khel rahe the...!

Geet:upp mihika..kuch nahin...woh game...

Mihika:neway...ab yeh dekhna hai ki jeeta kaun...agar geet jeet ti hai toh girls jeetengi aur agar maan bhaiya toh boys..huh!

Neha:par jeeta kaun?...woh toh humne dekha hi nahin!

Geet:arey main batati hoon na...main haari aur maan sir jeete...simple...

Neha:kya?..pagal he kya?

Geet:nahin..main kehrahi hoon na ki main haargayi aur maan sir jeete!

Neha:anki...yeh geet ko kya hogaya...isme achanak social worker ki aatma aagayi kya?..yeh geet kabse itni dayalu hogayi!

Ankita:wahi toh main bhi sochrahi hoon...mujhe lagta hai ki main sapna dekhrahi hoon...

Geet;arey kuch nahin...simple calculation...main haargayi aur maan sir jeete...tumlog maante kyun nahin...

Neha:maanna bohot mushkil he...tu aur khud kehrahi he ki tu aargayi...unbelievable!

Geet:uff ho...dekh khel kaun rahi thi?...main...toh mujhe hi toh pata hoga na!...

Neha:geet tujhe zara sa bhi idea he ki tere aisa karne se hum haarjayenge?

Geet:toh kya hua!...jab main jeetungi tab main kahungi ki main jeeti...agar nahin toh main cheating kaise karsakti hoon...aur geet hamesha fair game khelti hai...jo jeeta ussi ko toh sikandar kahungi na!

Maan:geet...one mintue..interruption...suno..tumko koi galat faimi hui hai...jeeti tum ho aur haara main hoon...tumne theek se notice nahin kiya!...im the loser..ur the winner...

Mihika:bro?...yeh aap kehrahe ho?...aap toh hamesha kehte he ki maan singh khurana kabhi loser nahin hosakta hai!...toh aaj yeh kya kehrahe ho?

Arjun:yah dude...yeh kya kehrahe ho..we will loose yaar!

Maan:jo bhi kaho tumlog...jo sahi he woh sahi he...usse badal toh nahin sakte na?..toh its decided..main haara aur geet jeeti!

Geet:hahaha...achcha joke tha...par mujhe hasi nahin aayi...dekhiye main kehrahi hoon na ki aap jeete he...aap meri baat kabhi maante kyun nahin...

Maan:kyunki geet..tum hamesha wrong hoti ho aur main right...

Geet:aapka toh poora ka poora dimag hi wrong he!...dekhiye aapne dhyan nahin diya...main haargayi...main kyun jaanboojh ke aapne aap ko harvaungi...

Mihika murmurs...

Mihika:haare toh dono he...apna dil...(laughs)

Geet and Maan point fingers at each other and fight sweetly...

Geet:dekhiye aap boss honge apne office me ...yahan main kehrahi hoon ki main haari aur aap jeete...

Maan:geet...boss hoon...aur har jagah pe main tumhara boss hoon...aur boss ke commands follow kiye jaate he!

Neha and mihika and everyone stare and gaze at this unusual fight...

Neha:pehli baar aisa fight dekhrahi hoon yaar...pehli baar do logo ko ek dusre ko winning position dene ke liye ladai karrahe he!...wow!

Mihika: really man...pehli baar main apne bro ko aise ladte hue dekhrahi hoon yaar!

Geet:aap hamesha se apni hi karte he aur sunte he!...meri kab maante he aap mr.maan singh khurana!

Maan:oh really ms.geet bakshi...kaun kisko kya sunata hai yeh sabko pata hai...toh plz..zabaan mat khulvao!

Geet:dekhiye seedhe maan jaiyye...aap jeete

Maan:geet...tum jeeti...

Geet:aap jeete sir...

Maan:tum geet...

Geet:aap maan!

Maan:tum geet...

Geet:aap!

They continuously go on bickering when mihika finally decides to put a stop on this as it was getting out of hand...

Mihika:ok...ok...now freeze please.yeh kya karrahe ho aap dono...bachcho ki tarah ladai karrahe ho?..bro ...geet...whats up wid u guys?...stop it now come on...fine...ab yeh decide hogaya he ki dono me se koi bhi nahin jeeta...ok...atleast shanti toh hogi varna abhi ke abhi third world war shuru hojata!

Neha:ur ryt mihika...aisi strange ladai pehli baar dekhi maine...actually geet jis ladai me hoti he woh toh obviously ajeeb hoti he !

Maan:par mihu...

Geet:par mihika...

Mihika:bas...bohot hua...its a tie...agar hum yeh speculate karne bethe ki kaun jeeta toh 2 din tak koi ghar nahin ja payega...

Geet laughs and maan gives her a stern look...mihika settles the matter and advices all to proceed for dinner...while evryone moves to hve dinner geet and maan give each other a loving look while mihika notices that...and understands the love she can see in their eyes for each other...she decides to talk to maan about it and know what is the real matter...on the other hand while maan is having dinner with his sister and others too,he hears noises of sumone shouting out loudly on sumone..he realises the noise is cuming from where the food is served...he goes and sees..and of course its none other than geet fighting with the waiter who is serving dinner...

Geet:oye...ye kaisa khana hai haan?

Waiter:madam kya galti hui?

Geet;isse tum khana kehte ho?..yah toh tum khana banana chordo nahin toh mujhe banane do..maan sir ka naam aise kharap mat karo...

Maan:geet..kya hua?...kyun daat rahi ho bechare ko?...kya hua tumhe khana pasand nahin aaya?

Geet:sir bechara?...aur khana pasand nahin aaya...yeh khana he...

Maan:par geet...khana toh bohot hi achcha hai...infact yeh toh Indian food hai...tumhe pasand he na...

Geet:par sir aapko toh continental pasand he na?

Maan:haan geet par iss khane me kya burai he...

Geet:sir isme kitna theeka hai sir...itni saari mirchi daali he isme ki mirchi ka khet lagraha hai!

Maan:par geet tumhe toh theeka pasand he na?..tum toh theeka khane ki expert ho toh abhi kya hua?

Geet:sir main apne baare me nahin aapke baare me baat karrahi thi...aap kaise aisa theekha khana kharahe he!...aur aaj continental kaise nahin banaya woh bhi aapke liye?...kaisa waiter he sir aapka...kaisa chef he aapka...mujhe toh khane ke baare me kuch pata hi nahin tha...woh toh mihika sambhal rahi thi ..agar mujhe pata hota toh main aisa kabhi nahin hone deti...par mujhe yeh samajh me nahin aaraha he ki mihika ko bhi toh pata hona chahiye tha ki aap theekha indian khana nahin khasakte toh phir?

Maan:uff geet,,,,,saans lekar baat karo plz...varna dusro ko saans lene me taqleif hojaegi!...woh isiliye ussne nahin banaya kyunki tumhe theekha khana pasand he aur yeh ghaas puss nahin ...isiliye maine mihika se tumhare liye sirf Indian specialities banane ko kaha!...kyunki tumhe continental pasand nahin he...isme iss bechare ki koi galti nahin...aur jahan tak theeke ka sawaal he usse maine kaha tha theekha banane ke liye...samjhi?

Geet:sir...mere liye...???...aap bhi theekha khayenge...?

Maan tastes the food from geet's plate and says...

Maan:oh c'mon geet...yeh itna bhi theekha nahin he ok...khaya jaa sakta hai aur agar tumhe nahin khana toh kuch aur banvadeta hoon tumhare liye...aur btw tum itna kyun chillarahi thi?

Geet':sir yeh khana theek he...main toh aapke liye kehrahi thi ...aapko toh theekha khane se allergy he na isilye...

Neha:hmmm...amar prem...dono ke beech me dekh...pehle larne se thakte nahin the aur ab ek dusre ke liye charity karne se

Anki:charity nahin ...pure love..love story 2011...!!!

Mihika:par bro...aapko toh theekha pasand nahin he..toh ab kaise?

Maan:ab he!...

he says that and looks at geet and smiles... who smiles in return...!...

Maan:dosti ke liye itna toh karna hi parta hai...mujhe kisine bataya hai ki dosti me ek dusre ki pasand aur napasand ko pasand apnaya jata hai!

Geet: haan...dosti me ek dusre ke pasand ko apni pasand banane ki koshish karni chahiye!

she looks at maan and their eyes freeze towards each other...they finish eating dinner when mihika thinks of another plan to bring them closer...she decides to persuade maan to drop geet home...

Maan:ok geet...gud nyt...

Geet:bye sir...

Mihika:upp geet...ruko...

Geet:kya hua mihika?

Mihika:geet...tum ghar kaise jaogi...itni raat hogayi hai...??

Geet: arey main neha,arjun aur anki ke saath chali jaungi ...woh drop kardenge...

Mihika:nahin...

Geet:kya?...kya matlab?

Mihika:uppp...mera matlab hai ki unki gari me toh jagah nahin hogi...

Geet:kyun?...?...abhi tak toh thi...aur arjun ne kuch bhi nahin bataya..

Neha:hmmm...mujhe sab samajh me aaraha hai...upp geet...woh arjun raghav ko bhi drop karne wala hai...aur yeh arjun apni choti gari lekar aaya hai...isiliye geet...gari me jagah nahin hogi ..

Geet:toh phir pehle kyun nahin bataya...ab kya karoon?

Maan:haan geet...ab kya?..bohot raat hogayi hai...ab kaise ghar jaogi tum?

Mihika:bro...arey aap kya usse poochrahe he...aap bhi toh usse drop karsakte he na?

Maan:main?

Mihika:kyun?...aapko driving nahin aati he kya?..c'mon bro go n drop her na...itni raat ko woh ghar kaise jayegi ?

Maan:yah ok...chalo geet...main tumhe ghar drop kardeta hoon...!

Geet:ok sir...!!!

They both leave in the car and mihika is ecstatic as they will get to spend some time alone...!

In the car...both feeling awkward to talk to each other...

Maan:achcha geet...kal woh lonavla ki project ka plan ready karlena..kal sabse pehle ussi ki meeting he!

Geet:hmmm ok...sir kal kitne baje office ?

Maan:9 baje aajana!

Geet:ok sir!

they both feel stupid at their behaviour...they themselves dnt knw why they behaving like this!...finally geet's house cums and geet gets dropped from the car!...while getting out geet's gown gets stuck while closing the door...she is unable to take it out when maan realises that he should go n help her...

Maan:geet...kya hua?

Geet:arey dikhai nahin deraha hai kya?...dress atakgayi he...aapki gari bhi na...tang karne me expert he..

Maan:oho geet...ruko mujhe help karne do...

very romantically he moves close to her...both feeling the closeness to each other...very sweetly he removes her dress stuck and leaves it looking into her eyes...geet feels shy and looks down...she says bye to maan and is abt to leave when maan stops her...

Maan:geet...

Geet:ji sir...!

Maan:kal nau baje...office...!

Geet:main janti hoon sir...ok sir bye sir..good night...!

Maan:uppp geet...

Geet:ji sir...?

Maan:party pe aane ke liye thanks...

Geet:sir...aap itne ajeeb baatein kyun karrahe he...actually woh toh main pehle se hi thi..taiyyariyan maine ki na?

Maan:oh ya...!

Geet:kya ab main ja sakti hoon?

Maan:haan...sure..its late!

Geet starts to walk and again...

Maan:geet...

She gets furious...

Geet:aapko hua kya hai sir...achanak aap me ajeeb aatmayein kaise ghusjaati he?

Maan:geet...plz...maine tumhe thank you kehne ke liye bulaya hai!

Geet:aap?...mujhe thank you?

Maan:haan...main...tumhe thank you!

Geet:wow...gr8...ur welcome...!..toh agar aapki ijazat ho mr.boss ...toh kya main ghar jasakti hoon?

Maan:yah geet...bbbye bye geet!

Geet starts walking talking to herself...and even maan too...

Geet:agar inhone dobara bulaya toh main na inko...

Maan:agar phir se bulaya toh geet mera akhri din banadegi...mera yahan se jana hi theek he!

Geet keeps on walking and maan walks down...while geet turns back and looks at maan walking and when geet is walking,maan turns back to see her!..they both smile and go ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
superb
do continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it. continue soon. thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
late update
but cute update dear
really loved it
waiting for the next part
pls update soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally got the update..thanx yaar..
wonderful one...luvd maneet's convo..
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏awesome update👏
loved their fighting😆😆😆
continue soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww how cute
i cant believe they were fighting because they both wanted the other to win... so sweet
aww geet was shouting at waiter because he didnt make maans favorite, nd maan said he likes her favorite now sooo romantic and sweet
just luved it
continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome bickering
oh i so missed reading such bickering
love u 4 writing it

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