Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 40

kya baat hai.....

Part 32- The "so-called" Date Sequence contd.......

The Rain sequence........

Geet and maan cum out of the beach....maan asks geet...

Maan: geet..ab hum kahan jayenge......!

Geet: sir chaliye na....hum dhanno pe bethke duniya ki sabse behtareen sadak pe jayenge.....

Maan: sadak?

Geet: hmmmmmm...aap chaliye na.aap baatein bohot karte he sir...!

Maan: hmmm..main hi bohot baatein karta hoon......

Geet and maan sit on dhanno and leave....geet brings maan to a road where on one side kids are playing.people are nice evening walk......stalls of all kinds of food and tea specially......nice wind blowing..d sky is surrounded by clouds ....smell of rain to come is cuming.....geet parks her scooty.and just runs in d middle of the road and starts taking fun of the cold winds. .......maan says........

Maan: geet....sambhalke.......

Geet: sir.yahan ki thandi hawaon ka mazaa lijiye sir.yahan ki shaam sabse achchi he...abhi toh yahan pe dikhai derahaha he....ek baar baarish aagayi toh dikhai nahin dega '.ekbaar baarish aagayi toh yahan ghane badal chajayenge.....sir aayyie na!

Maan: geet please.....aisie road ke beech me.....geet gari aajaegi......

Geet: sir iss sadak pe saamne se koi gari nahin aati-jaati......

Maan: par geet dhyan se''..

Geet: uff ho sir ''aap bhi na'..

Maan stands near the scooty while geet is njoying d cold weather as it is going to rain''.maan is constantly watching geet'lukin how different her style of living is''maan thinks'..

Maan: geet'.tumhare jeene ka tareeka kitna alaag he.aisi zindagi maine kabhi nahin ji'..aisi zindagi main jeena chahta hoon geet''.aur aisi zindagi sirf tum mujhe jeena sikha sakti ho''aur koi nahin'.

Geet calls out to him''

Geet: sir'.!...kya wahan pe bhoot ke jaise khade he..aaiyye na''

Maan: nahin geet.main yahan theek hoon''..!

Geet: sir'.aap na!

Just then geet says this it starts raining heavily''maan who was standing near the scooty..looks up to the sky and says'..

Maan: oh God!....baarish'

Mana goea and stands under the roof of the tea stall behind''geet looks up and is absolutely elated to see the rain falling on her'she stretches her hands and enjoys the rain thoroughly'.maan sees dat and says '

Maan: geet'!....wahan kya karrahi ho'.bheeg jaogi''.bohot tez bearish horahi he'bimar par jaogi.geet!

Geet closes her eyes and feels d rain falling on her face..she says'.!

Geet: sir 'koi bevaquf hi hoga jo aisi baarish me nahin bheegega'sir yeh mausam ka pehla baarish he'.sir aap mazaa nahin lenge toh iska matlab yeh nahin he ki main nahin lesakti'..sir mujhe toh bohot mazaa aaraha he''!

Maan: yeh ladki poori pagal he'..!

Just then maan turns towards geet and looks at her intensely''geet is absolutely njoying lyk a kid''she is jumping, njoying d rain drops falling on her''maan sees dat and smiles'he slowly looks at every move she is making'..geet suddenly realizes she should bring maan in to get wet''.

Geet goes to maan and says'..!

Geet: sir..aap yahan kya khade he'chaliye na'.bheegte he'.!

Maan: geet'paagal ho kya'.aise tez baarish me main bheegoon'.tumhe pata he na ki mujhe baarish me bheegna achcha nahin lagta'

Geet: uff ho sir'.aap na sach me insaan nahin he'.sir aap ek laute insaan he shayad jise baarish jaisi achchi cheez pasand nahin he'sir yeh mauka aapko dobara nahin milega.yeh mausam ka mazaa he '.isse toh aapko lena hi parega'..aur main aapki dost hoon na toh ek achche dost ke naate aapko meri baat sunni paregi''.aur main toh competition bhi jeet gayi thi'.sir isse pehel ki baarish ruk jaaye aap chaliye mere saath''

Geet dsnt listen to maan at all''.

Maan: par geet'..

Geet: par var kuch nahin chaliye'.

Maan acts reluctantly but geet holds and pulls maan's hand'.maan loos at that geet has hold his hand'.he gets lost into that moment and just gets flowed away in that moment''!geet brings maan to the centre and tells him to enjoy ''.geet plays wid d kids arnd who were also enjoying d rain'.maan looks at geet and just gets lost in her again''.he totally gets itno her innocence and cuteness'he moves arnd her and just looks at her intricately''. Then a song plays in d bg'..wich maan feels for geet'..

Aa aa..aa aa'aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kyun hona he hai

Tum Se Hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kyun hona hi hai

Aa aa..aa aa'aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Aankho mein aankhe teri
Bahoo mein Bahe teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha
Hua kya
Bathon mein bathein teri
Rathe saogathe meri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi si behoshi hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Aa aa aa aa aa aa'

Aadha sa vaada kabhi
Aadhe se zyada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is tarah
Wafa ka
Chode na chute kabhi
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya
Wafa ka
Mein tera sarmaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste mil jate hai
Manzile mil jati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kyun hona he hai

Aa aa aa aa aa aa '

While dis song is gng on'geet is playing wid d kids''.and maan and geet dance in the rain''.maan just keeps on looking at geet while dancing.they share some intense moments togedr''.geet is totally unaware dat maan is really close to her'geet leaves maan..she says'.!

Geet: sir '..mazaa aaya na?

Maan: haan bohot mazaa aaya'!

Geet: toh sir chalein!

Maan: kahan?

Geet: wahan..ek garma garam chai ke liye!.....aur saath me kuch pakore bhi!

Maan: wat?....wahan?

Geet: sir bheeg toh gaye he na.thand lagjaegi.iss mausam me agar chai nahin pi aur pakore nahin khaye toh kya faida'baarish me bheeg kar chai peene ka alag hi mazaa he aur yahan ke pakore toh .yummy''sir main yahan jab bhi aati hoon toh yahan chai peeye aur pakore khaye bager nahin jaati''aur aaj aapko mere saath chalna chahiye'..!

Maan and geet go to the tea stall''maan makes geet sit'..geet and maan order tea and pakoras for themselves'..deir order cums and geet starts having ..

Geet:'..mmmmm'.yummy he sir.,'aise pakore toh naseesb walo ko naseeb hote he aur aisi chai'wah mausam ka mazaa agaya'sir aap khaiyye na'!

Maan: geet r u sure yeh main khaoon!

Geet: nahin'use pakarkar aap puja kijiye!...sir obviously use khanaa he'khaake dekhiye na sir '.aapko bohot achcha lagega''.!

Maan has it and has d tea too'he finds it really tasty'..he says'.

Maan: hmmm'..sach me geet 'yeh toh bohot tasty he'..

Geet: dekha sir maine kaha tha na'bohot tasty hoga!...sir yeh toh world best he!

Maan and geet are njoying in d tea stall''

Geet: sir'aapko yeh mirchi ke pakore khane he?

Maan: geet'mera mazak udarahi ho?

Geet: nahin sir'.main toh aise hi'.mujhe to iss baat se tajoob hota hai ki waise toh aap sher bane ghumte he par aap ek choti si mirchi khane se darte he?

Maan: main darta nahin hoon''mujhe mirchi khana achcha nahin lagta''!

Geet: achcha nahin lagta ya aap darte he?

Maan: mujhe achcha nahin lagta 'aur main kisi cheez se nahin darta'.!

Geet: achcha!...toh iss mirchi ke pakore ko khaake dikhaiyye!

Maan: ok'.

Maan has one by one all d mirchi pakoras'.geet watches him and njoys it wen she sees dat after having all d pakoras maan's eyes are red and watery'she notices dis and says''.

Geet: arey sir ke aankh se paani '.sir'yeh lijiye paani!!!!

Maan has d water but still he feels spicy '''geet gves d tea to maan'maan has that 'his spicy ness goes a bit but his eyes are still watery'.!...geet takes her dupatta and gves warm blows to his eyes thru her dupatta'maan looks at geet's care for him and gets impressed'..he says''

Maan: geet'.its ok''main theek hoon''!

Geet: sorry sir..phir galti hogayi..!....main na kabhi kabhi kuch zyada kardeti hoon''..!

Maan: its ok geet!......

Maan and geet finish their tea and food and leave from there'''its raining slightly''.geet and maan go near the scooty''maan says..

Maan: geet abhi bhi thodi baarish horahi he''.isme tum dhanno ko chala paogi'..?

Geet: haan sir'main kitni baar chala chuki hoon baarish me'.sir baarish me dhanno ko chalane ka alag hi mazaa he'.bethiye na'!

Maan: geet'.raaste kafi phisle huye honge'..toh dhyan se haan'..

Geet: dnt wry sir 'kuch nahin hoga.!

Maan: waise mere paas insurance he''!

Geet and maan laugh at dis joke for a long tym and maan sees geet laughing..he smiles''..!

Geet: sir bethe''im sure aapko aapki insurance ki zaroorat nahin paregi!

Maan: par ab hum kahan jarahe he'.

Geet: sir bethiye toh sahi'.hum ek bohot hi special jagah jarahe he'.mumbai me aisi jagah dhundne par bhi nahin milti.par yeh meri fav jagah he.aapko Mumbai dikharahi hoon toh yeh last fav jagah toh dikha hi sakti hoon''!

Maan: ok'chalo''..

Geet and maan sit on d scooty''..they leave'.the night approaches and maan and geet are on their ride''.maan and geet reach a place'its still raining lil bit and geet and maan are totally wet'.geet says'..

Geet:sir 'aagaye'.!

Maan: yeh kaisi ajeeb jagah he geet'.itne andhera'..

Geet: sir who dekhiye'.woh aapko unchi parbat jaisi jagah dikhrahi he?..sir who he meri fav jagah''.aiyye na''.!

Geet takes maan to a place wich was mre like a cliff guarded by railings'.a high cliff from where d entire city is visible''wid lights all arnd'.cold wind blowing''slight rain falling'.

Geet: sir yeh dekhiye''yeh he meri sabse fav jagah'!

Maan: yeh khaai jaisi jagah?...geet ek baat batao 'tumhe sari ajeeb cheezein kyun achchi lagti he?

Geet: yeh khaai he dusro ke liye lekin mere liye mere saare problems ka solution'yahan aakar dil ko jo sukoon milta he who baki jagao me kahan?

Maan:kya..?.....problem ka solution''.?

Geet: hmmm'jab bhi mujhe kisi problem ka solution dhundna hota he na toh me yahan pe aajati hoon''.

Maan: sach'?.tumhe yahan saare problem ka solution miljata he?

Geet: haan..par ek problem ka solution nahin mila''.

Maan: kaunsa?..

Geet: aap'..

Maan: main problem hoon..

Geet: hmm..ab aapse bara problem kaun hosakta he''..aur aap aise problem he jiska koi solution nahin he''

Maan: geet'.

Geet: oho sir.aaiyye 'idhar aiyye''dekhiye yahan se poora sheher dikhta he'.har taraf roshni'.bethiye na sir''!

Maan: kya bethoon?

Geet: haan toh kya khade ko baat karne ka iraada he?

Maan: achcha theek he!

Geet and maan sit to chat for a long tym''the y both sir wid their knees folded.geet loos in frnt.soft cold winds are blowing'..geet starts d conversation''.

Geet: sir aapko pata he yeh jagah mujhe sukoon kyun deti he'yahan pe aake me aapne saare dukh dard bhool jaati hoon.duniya bhar ke tension se door yahan aake iss akele pan me jo khushi mujhe milti he na sir'..aur kahin par bhi nahin jakar milgei!

Maan: geet'tumhe aur dukh?....kaisa dukh?.....kis baat ka dukh he tumhe?

Geet: sir.aap mere dost bane he toh main aapko batati hoon''.sir main jaise aapko dikhti hoon main hoon toh waisi lekin mere life me bhi problems hui he.kaafi dukh dekha he main isilye toh me itin khush rehti hoon'''sir me delhi se nahin aayi hoon'.main bhatinda ki rehne wali hoon''wahan mera ghar he'.meri ek bohot bari khati-peeti family he''..meri mummy ji aur papa ji bhi wahin pe rehte the mere saath'.dai ma bhi bachpan se hi mere aur antara ke sath he..apni mamma se zyada me apni dai ma se close rahi hoon'.!....isilye who aaj bhi mere saath he'..sir main ne apni school ki padhai bhatinda me complete ki.complete karke me aage ki padhai karne ke liye delhi chali gai 'wahan me hostel me rehti thi''.wahi par neha aur ankita mere dost bane..delhi mein gayi aur jab maine aapni 11 ki padhai complete ki toh mujhe mummy ji aur papa ji ke guzarjaane ki khabar mili'..mujhe turant bhatinda jaana para'wahan gayi toh mere saare realatives meri shaadi ki chinta ko lekar bethgaye ..mujhe mummy ji aur papar ji ke dukh se ubharne ka tym hi nahin diya'.meri zindagi ko badalne ki koshish ki jarahi thi''itni choti umar me meri sagai kisi ladke ke saath tai karne jarahe the'mujhe raazi karvane ke liye har atyachar kiya gaya tha'..dai ma ne unn sabko samjhane ki bohot koshish ki lekin kisi ne unki baat nahin suni.saath saath meri aur antara ki padhai ko bhi rokne ki koshish ki'..meri mummy ji aur papa ji ka sapna tha ki me ek kamyaab insaan banoon'..lekin meri family ne mujhe kabhi aisa karne nahin diya'.antara ki bhi zindagi kharap karne ki koshish ki.iss tym meri madat dai ma ne ki'.hum teenon delhi bhag ke chale aaye jis din meri sagai tai hone jarahi thi''.antara ko ek achche se school me bharti karke dai ma ne delhi me ek chota sa ghar kiraye par le liya.main to hostel me rehti thi lekin jab meri padai khatam hogayi toh hum teenon Mumbai aagaye''..yahan mujhe aaye hue ek saal hogaya'.ghar liya'.antara ko school me bharti karaya lekin mere architectect bane ka sapna adhura na rahe isilye 6 mahine tak me naukri ki talaash me thi.naukri milte hi sane office me mujhe aur mere kaam ko bohot pasand kiya.....!bas tabse apne gharwalo se chupkar yahan rehrahi hoon..lekin ab mujhe darr nahin lagta ......kyunki Babaji he na mere saath!

Maan is absolutely startled to hear her entire story.he cant believe dat d cheerful and bubbly geet has problems in her life too.

Maan: geet.mujhe lagat tha sirf mere life me dukh he pareshani he problems he lekin tumhari life me itni bari problem ''lekin tumhare gharwale tumhe kabhi samajh nahin paaye geet'..itni choti umar me tumhari shaadi kardeni chahi?.....kyun''.achcha kiya jot um wahan se chali aayi..aise gharwalo ke saath rehna bhi theek nahin he'.lekin kya tumhe apne ghar ki yaad nahin aati?

Geet: sir aati he..wahan ke khet'wahan ki galiyan'.wahan ke log''wahan ki lodhi.baisakhi.diwali 'sab kuch yaad aata he''yahan tak ki apne mamma papa ki bhi yaad aati he kabhi kabhi

Sayin dis tears cums to geet's eyes wich roll down slowly'maan notices dis and removes geet's tears from her face and says'

Maan: geet bakshi ke aankhon me aansoon achche nahin lagte he'geet pareshan karte hue'galti karte hue'.masti karte hue aur haste hue achchi lagti he'.dukh tumhe suit nahin karta''aur tumne hi kaha tha na ki tum apne mamma papa ko yaad nahin karti kyunki woh tumhare saath hamesha rehte he aur tumhare dil me rehte he.

Geet: sir yeh maine kab kaha tha''woh bhi aapse'.?

Maan: kaha tha uss din ..jiss din tumne'u knw pili thi.uss din tumne kaha tha''..

Geet: sir'aur kuch toh nahin kaha na?

Maan: nahin?......

Geet tells maan to tell wat hapnd dat night and maan tells d entire story aftr wich they both laugh their hearts out'..aftr laughing geet looks in frnt wid her hands on her knees..she smiles slightly and maan is lukin and adoring her wet look'..her wet hair and her simplicity'.he says in his mind'.

Maan: tum kis mitti ki bani ho geet'.tum itne dukh sehne ke baad bhi itni khush rehti ho'aur me.har problem ko dard banakr rakhta hoon'..kyun me tumhare tarah nahin soch sakta'

While maan is looking at geet'geet suddenly asks maan''

Geet: sir'aapko kya dukh he sir'.mujhe nahin pata tha ki aapko dukh he''.kya dukh he aapko?

Maan: geet kisi din aur bataunga'.promise apne iss naye dost se kuch nahin chupaunga'.

Geet: toh theek he'chaliye..chalte he'aapko ghar chodke me ghar chali jaungi.agar aur thodi der rahi na toh dm ko lagega ki mera kidnap hogaya he'.

They get up..

Geet: sir agar aapko kabhi bhi koi problem ho ya koi dukh ho toh aap yahan pe chale aayyega'apni aankhein band karke apne dil ka sawaal pooch lijiyega'aapko aapke har sawaal ka jawaab miljayega'.!

Maan: really?...toh theek he?....main try zaroor karunga.ab chalein?...

Geet: ji sir!

Geet and maan sit on the scooty and leave'all d while maan is looking at geet and recalling d entire day they spent'..he sees how different she is from d odr grls''..he looks at her smiles.she is bus riding'..they both speak in minds'''

Geet: maan sir itne bhi bure nahin he'..achche he''mujhse dosti bhi karli!

Maan: geet''tum bohot achchi ho 'mujhpar bharosa karke tumne apne bare me sab kuch bata diya''.!

Geet and maan reach maan's house'..itwas raining slightly so they were still wet''maan gets off the scooty and says to geet..

Maan: ok geet'chalo'.gud nyt''!

Geet: gud nyt sir'..!

Maan is walking awy towards his house wen geet calls him from behind and says''.!

Geet: sir'!

Maan: yes geet'

Geet: sir'aaj aapke saath yeh din main kabhi nahin bhulungi''sach me''.aur haan aap na muskuraya kijiye'hasa kijiye''sehet ke liye achcha hota hai'..aur aap haste huye sach me bohot achche lagte he.ek dost ki free advice he''!

Maan: thanx geet'bye'..!

Geet: bye sir'..!

Geet leaves from dere and maan says

Maan: aaj ka din main bhi kabhi nahin bhulsakta geet'main vadaa karta hoon tumse geet ki tumne jo bharosa karke mere saath dosti ki hai usko main har mumkin tarike se nibhaunga'.aur haan geet mujhe zindagi jeena sikhane ke liye shukriya''.aaj sach me ek din me bohot kuch hogaya ''.bye geet'.gud nyt''.!

wow that really great update superb 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏