The World's Oldest Story!! - AR - Page 76

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey

updates r really fantastic.....loved da way AR relation is developng strong n unbreakable relation.hpe nw Riddhima's family...sp Shanky dont create ne problem...

love all 3 updates....waitng fr da nxt part.

love

sania

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Posted: 15 years ago
the part was awesome i just love thhe way u r showing the growth of their relationship step by step is very impressive n clearly stated n the way each n every emotion wheather it is love ,insequrity ,jealous etc is very nicly expressed through ur words n way of wriying between ar rm an...........😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello.....

I'm really sorry for replying so late but really couldn't help it...
Was busy with visarjan n all till late last night and was out the entire day today...
Anyway, lets not bore you anymore and come straight to the point....
Rahul and Muskaan-finally progressed...
Abhi and Niki-Very cute but since they were moving in together, I thought they already had a physical relationship but was surprised to read that they used different rooms.
And coming to Armaan and Ridhima-
Well, LOVED IT!
Finally, Armaan opened up to her....
And it was like the cutest description ever...
But I still have a feeling that theres more to his parent's story than he narrated, I dont know why!
And about the physical intimacy, well, very nicely described, but I was wondering what was making them awkward now. I mean, the first time you mentioned about the awkwardness because they had gone to a different level of intimacy then, it obviously made sense but somehow, now they should start getting used to the growing intimacy, right?
Why did they have to feel awkward or embarrassed or sorry as a matter of fact. Theres nothing wrong in expressing love physically, is there? And I think both Armaan and Ridhima agree to this!
Anyway, it was just my opinion. You must have a reason to put everything in the story....

And as far as comparing you and me is concerned, I dont wish to keep fighting over who is better. I just want to say that your story actually made a lazy butt like me comment, so it has to be commendable! 😛

Update super soon(NOW 😛)!

Love,
Anokhee! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear
wonderful part
AR relation is quite cute as well as serious
at last armaan tell riddhima his past

update soon

simran
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Posted: 15 years ago
the part was awesome i liked abhi n nikky nice moments n loved the way rahul n muskaan r finally going forward in their relationship n loved the way riddhima went to meet him n then armaan told her about her past n then their little moments n then riddhima saying she wants the key of her home 😃 thanxss for the pm n continue soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey,

Will ya update today?
Waiting :D
By the way... i've edited my comment on pg 107!
(:
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

Hey,

Will ya update today?
Waiting :D
By the way... i've edited my comment on pg 107!
(:

Yes i will update later today.. wait for it!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
yayyyy...!!! u gonna update today???

wen wen wen??? wat tym?????????
jaldi jaldii...plijj 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: baby bubbles

yayyyy...!!! u gonna update today???

wen wen wen??? wat tym?????????
jaldi jaldii...plijj 😉

in two hours.. i have to go for ganpati celebrations.. sorry! 😔
But will finish the part asap and pput it up when i get back! so wait for it! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
waitinggggggg.......😊

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