The World's Oldest Story!! - AR

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solembaum

@solembaum

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#741

Thankyou so very much for this lovely update.... Much needed after the fiasco in the serial! Was really feeling down! Thankyou again!

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#742

woowowowwo lovely part

AR sooooooooo cute

love armaan sooooo much

poor he lost his parents when he was 10

god did send an angle 4 him hope they unite soon

love the last para

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coolgirl319

@coolgirl319

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#743

hey!

sorry couldnt comment earlier...

wow!!! these parts were super!!!!!!!!

loved the way such simple messages were conveyed through such a small gesture..

keep writing like this!!!!
cheers!!

-D

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#744

awesome update

loved it

love how u show AR r 1

and cant stay without eachother

loved RM

so cute

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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karan-007

@karan-007

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#745

the part was wonderful n ossom loved it 😃

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#746

Hhheyyy!!

Sweetie the part was not filling yaar!!
I was reading and then I didn't realize when it stopped!
Definetly a good writers trait!!
It was sooo romantic and sensuous!
I really enjoyed reading it!
Loved it!!

Jinszyyy!!

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Heaven

@HeAvEnS

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#747

lovey part

loved the right u have decribed

they have on each other

Loved it

Update soon

heaven

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#748

amazing part

i really liked the way u showed how AR'S relationship is progressing and the way they both finally told each other that they belong to each other was really nice.The scene were ridz demands to get her key was the best because it shows how much the key ment to her it was a way 4 her to say that they will be together 4ever.finally rahul and muskaan confessed the scenes between them were amazingly potrayed.