Mayur OS - Dil Dosti Etc

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(mayank aur nupur last kai saalo se ek dusre ko mile bhi nhi hai, naa hi kafi time se dono ki baat huyi hai.. dono ko ye bhi nhi pta k aaj wo party me milne wale hai. Samrat aur gunjan mayank k bare me kuch nhi jante. K mayank aur nupur college me sath me padhte the)

(Nupur party me enter karti hai)

N (thinking) : Kyun aa gyi main party me. Ye samrat bhi naa. Usse pta to hai k main kisi bhi tarah ki parties attend nhi karti.. by god.. official party ka naam de kar mujhe bula lia.Aur khud pta nhi kahaan hai.. Aur main to yahaan kisi ko khas janti bhi nhi hu.. kaise hoga.. kya karungi.. main yahaan….(tabhi nupur k mobile pr samrat ka call aata hai)

N (with anger) : kahaan ho tum??? Main party me tumhara wait kar rhi hu?????

S : kya??? Tum party me pahuch gyi??????? Mujhe thoda time lag jayega.. Actual me hum log traffic jam me fas gye hai..

N : by god… samrat…. Tum ghar se jaldi nhi nikal sakte the..

S : oh hello.. tumhara ghar bar nhi hai.. Mera ghar hai, biwi hai, ek sweet heart beti hai.. Aur tumne shadi nhi ki.. to isme meri galti nhi hai.. agar tum thik whqt pr shadi kar leti to tumhe pta chalta… k family k sath ghar se nikalna kitna muskil hota hai

N : by god.. ek to tumhara yahaan wait karo.. upper se tumhara ye lecture bhi suno.. Main jaa rhi hu.. yahaan se..

S : Meri maa.. ruk jaa wahi thodi derr me main gunjan k sath wahaan pahuch raha hu.. aur ye hamare movie project k liye bahut zaruri hai.. aur iss baar teri bhi kuch zimedari banti hai..

N : by god.. jo sara project main dekhti hu.. wo kuch nhi.. ye official parties to tum bhi akele handle kar skte ho.

S : bas aaj handle thoda sa co-operate kar le.. fir nhi bolunga.. bas thodi derr me hum log pahuch rhe hai.

N : thik hai.. bas thodi derr.. warna main yahaan se chali jaungi

S : ok meri maa.. hum aa rhe hai

(dono phone cut karte hai)

(on the other hand Mayank in same party)

M (had smile on his face) : Nupur ko aisi parties kitni psnd thi.. Pta nhi wo kahaan hogi kaisi hogi.. ab to uski shadi bhi ho chuki hogi..I hope k usse apna rajkumar mil gya ho.. waise bhi usse badi jaldi thi k usse apna rajkumar mil jaye aur bas fir wo shadi kar le.. Kash wo rajkumar main hota.. Pr main kbhi ban hi nhi pya.. ya fir uss whqt maine ban na hi nhi chaha…(ussi whqt koi mayank ka naam bulata hai)

P : Welcome Mr. Sharma.. Aap kab aaye party me..

M : Hello Mr. Khurana. Bas abhi aaya hu.. Nice party Mr. Khurana

K : thanx Mr. mayank.. Aaiye main apne Kuch business partner se milwata hu. Chaliye.

(Mayank aur Mr. khurana party me logo se milne lagte hai..tabhi mayank ki nzar nupur pr padti hai, Pr mayank isse apna wahm maan leta hai)

M POV : syad aaj kal mujhe nupur ki kuch zyada hi yaad aa rhi hai.. tabhi to mujhe kahi bhi nupur nzar aa jati hai.. Nupur aur yahaan??? Aisa to bilkul nhi ho skta. Aur iss tarah ki dress to usse bilkul nhi psnd thi.. tabhi to college me usse chidane k liye sab usse behanji kehte the.. wo baat alag hai k maine usse mazak me bhi kabhi behanji nhi kaha tha.. pr uss pr wo chudidar pajmi suit bahut achcha lagta tha.. wo iss western outfit se kahi achcha tha..Ye nupur nhi ho skti.. Syad mai kuch zyada hi nupur k bare me soch rha hu.. isliye nupur nzar aa rhi hai mujhe..aur waise bhi ab tak to uski shadi ho gyi hogi aur ab tak uske 2-4 bachche bhi honge.ye nupur nhi hai

(tabhi party me samrat entry karta hai.. aur wo nupur ko dur se dekh kar hi wahi se chikta hua aata hai)

S : Nupur?????/ Aa gya main…..(samrat ek dum nupur k pass khada ho jata hai)

(samrat k muh se nupur ka naam sun kar mayank ko yakin ho jata hai k ye nupur hi hai..wo nupur aur samrat se kafi dur khada hai usse nupur aur samrat ki sari baatein nhi sunai de rhi hai.. ek baat to wo sochta hai k nupur k pass jaaye.. pr wo ruk jaata hai)

Nupur and samrat

N : badi jaldi aa gye..main to bas yahaan se jaane wali thi

S (apne kaan pakadte huye) : sorry traffic me late ho gya tha.. warna meri himmat k main aur tumhe wait karwau.. Mujhe apna project bahut pyara hai

N : ah ha.. tumhara project

S : sorry again mistake hamara project.

N : ab thik hai.. baki sab kahaan hai

S : aa rhe hai.. kahi tum party se nikal naa jao.. isliye main aa gya.. sab abhi aate hi honge.

Mayank (POV) : syad ye nupur ka husband hai.. nupur itni badal skti hai maine socha bhi nhi tha..aur samrat k sath wo khus bhi lag rhi hai.. aaj itne saalo baad nupur ko dekha. Syad mujhe uss se nhi milna chahiye.. usne kabhi syad mere bare me apni family ko mere bare me bataya hi naa ho.. aur batayegi bhi kya.. aur achanak se uske saamne aake sab kuch kharab nhi kar skta.. (tabhi Mr. Khurana aa jate hai)

K : Mr. Sharma inse miliye Mrs. C.J.. ye aapke London wale project se kafi impressed hai

(Both smiled.. as they are best friends in college.. after college no contacts)

M : hello Mrs. C.J.

CJ (surprisingly) : Mayank tum aur yahaan????? Main koi sapna to nhi dekh rhi hu??? Lgta hai sab nupur ka asar hai...

M : Ye to pta nhi k kis ka asar hai.. Pr tum Mrs. CJ.. Ye shocking hai..

CJ : kyun??? Mujhe shadi nhi karni thi kya??? Maine to kabhi aisa college me announce nhi kiya tha

K : well excuse me. Jab aap log ekdusre ko jante hi hai… to Mujhe thoda kaam hai. Aap log baatein kijiye..pls don't mind

M : ya sure

( Mr. khurana wahaan se chale jate hai.. unke jaane k baad nupur ki nazar mayank pr padti hai)

N to herself : Mayank aur aisi party me??? Ye yahaan kya kar rha hai

S : tumne kuch kaha.. kya???

N : nhi kuch nhi

(tabhi gunjan aa jati hai)

G : kuch to nupur..

N : kuch khas nhi.. (mayank ki tarah ishara karte huye) Usse dekh rhe ho.. wo mere college me hi padta tha.. ek dum sadu kism ka insan hai.. wo pta nhi iss party me kya kar rha hai

S : kya kar rha hai matlab??? Party hai usse kisi ne invite kiya hoga tabhi aaya hai

N : haan wo to pta hai. Pr usse college time me parties me jaana psnd nhi tha.. kafi badal gya hai

S : sab badal jaate hai.. uske sath wo ladki dekh rhi ho.. ladkiya to achche achcho ko badal deti hai.. jaise hume gunjan ji ne badla hai

N : sahi kaha.. Chalo achcha hai. Waise jis se milwane k liye tum mujhe lekar aaye ho.

S : Pr apne college friend se to mil lo

N : Mujhe kisi se nhi milna hai..

(Mayank nupur ko gunjan samrat k sath dekhta tha to socha hai yahi sahi whqt hai nupur se milne ka. Jo bhi ho.. unhe atleast baat to karni chahiye. Last time jis tarah se wo alag huye the baat karna to banta hai..Mayank nupur k pass jaata hai aur sath me CJ bhi)

M to N : Hi Nupur.. Kaisi ho.

N : mayank tum yahaan????

M : kyun mere yahaan pr ban lga hai kya??

N : nhi aisa kuch nhi hai. Aisi party me tumhe dekh kar thodi hairaan hu.

M : main bhi…kabhi socha nhi hai k tum aise milogi..(interrupted by samrat)

S : sorry to disturb you.. but kya hai k hum log apne aap ko thoda neglect feel kar rhe hai

N : haan pehle tum hi mil lo.. Tum badal mat jaana.

S : wo to main kabhi nhi badal skta. NUpur ji

S to M : Hi.. Samrat Shergil.

M : Mayank Sharma

S : Nupur meri business partner hai. Aur Ye jo mere sath khadi hai ye meri life partner hai Gunjan Shergill

M : Oh ho.. Mujhe lga..k samrat aur nupur sath me hai.. sorry for that

N : tumhe to kuch bhi lagta hai mayank..

CJ : Hi Nupur.. lgta hai tumne pehchana nhi.. syad pehle kabhi aise Indian look me mujhe dekha nhi hai

N : Hi CJ.. Tumhe kaise bhul skti hu.. Pr jaisi bhi ho achchi lag rhi ho..(dono gale milte hai)

N to CJ : tumhe dekh kar sach me bada achcha laga

M to N : CJ nhi Mrs. CJ kaho..

CJ : Shut up mayank.. Ye bachcho ki tarah chidana band karo.. ek to itne saalo baad mile ho..uper se ye bachcho wali harkate..

N (shocked) : itne saalo baad??? Matlab?? Mujhe lga k tum aur mayank sath me ho

M : Kya nupur tumhe bhi kuch bhi lgta hai.. Ye sab chodo bas CJ se itna puch lo wo badnasib hai kaun???????

CJ : Shut up mayank.. Tum fir shuru ho gye…

N : mayank tum chup karo.. CJ pr tum ye to batao k tumhare Mr. kahaan hai

CJ : well uday ko ab tak aa to jaana chahiye tha … Pr pakka wo kahi restaurant me ruk gya hoga

M N (shocked) : Uday??????

CJ : isme shocked hone wali kaun si baat hai…

N : nhi kuch nhi…

(mayank nupur aur CJ college k dino ko yaad karte hai..Nupur kafi khus dikh rhi hai, samrat aur gunjan bhi ye dekh kar khus ho jaata hai. Uday bhi aakar nupur mayank aur CJ ko join kar leta hai. samrat client se khud hi mil leta hai aur business k regarding baat kar leta hai.. at the end of party samrat nupur & gang k pass aata hai)

S : Nupur.. Hum logo ko chalna chahiye..

N : ruko samrat main bhi aa rhi hu

S to M, CJ & U : Hey guys waise ek baat kehni thi.. Nupur aaj kafi khus hai tum sab se milkar aur ye dekh kar main aur gunjan bahut khus hai.. hamari recent film ki shooting issi shehar me chal rhi hai.. main chahta hu k tum log wahaan aao.. aur dekho k nupur hum pr kitna rob zamati hai

M : ye to iski purani aadat hai

N : achcha tumhe meri sari aadate yaad hai

M : main to kabhi bhula hi nhi tha

N : lgta to nhi hai

M : lgne me aur hone me fark hota hai

CJ : well excuse me.. tum dono abhi tak ladte ho.. uff. Nupur tumhara kya hoga..

U : iska kuch nhi ho skta..

N : Fine.. to koshish hi kyun kar rhe ho

S : Nupur… bas karo.. aur aap sabhi meri taraf se invited hai.. shooting dekhne k liye.. taki issi bahane hume packup jaldi mil jaye

N : meri shooting pr koi invited nhi hai

S : Main film ka producer hu

N : Main director hu…

U : nupur mera mann hai film ki shooting dekhne ka.

N : Uday tumhe puchne ki koi zarurat nhi hai.. tum kabhi bhi aa skte ho aur kisi bhi location pr

S : aur abhi to tum mana kar rhi thi

N : pr abhi mera mud badal gya hai..

S : ok decided..

G : samrat kafi derr ho gyi hai hume chalna chahiye

S : Sorry guys hume jaana hoga home ministry se order aa gye hai.. warna kuch bhi ho skta hai

(sab apne apne ghar chale jaate hai.. Nupur apne ghar pr usse nind nhi aa rhi.. wo mayank k bare me soch rhi hai.. k

FLASHBACK

(mayank aur CJ college me itne achche friends the aur Nupur jo mayank ko itna psnd karti thi.. mayank k bare me wo kya sochti hai wo aaj to mayank ko bta hi degi iske baad to mauka mile naa mile.. aur mayank usse nhi psnd karta hoga kam se kam ye to hoga k usne apne dil ki baat keh di.. college ka last day hai.. fir pta nhi kabhi mauka mile naa mile apne dil ki baat kehne ka.. Nupur yahi soch kar library jaati hai k college k last day bhi sirf mayank ki library me hoga.. aur koi hoga bhi nhi.. pr jaise hi wo library me enter hone lagti hai usse mayank ki kisi se baat karne ki awaz sunai deti hai wo chupke se dekhti hai k mayank apni knees pr CJ k saamne baitha hua hai.. aur uske hath me red roses hai.. )

M to CJ : CJ ye zyada nhi ho rha hai

CJ : aise ladkiya nhi manti.. Chup chap jo keh rhi hu karo

M : Mujhse ye sab nhi hoga

CJ : Ok fir kya hoga..

(Mayank khada ho jata hai.. aur red roses CJ ki taraf bada deta hai)

M :Main tumse aur sirf tumse pyar karta hu, Meri har saans, meri har dhadkan me tum aur sirf tum ho..Mujhe yakin hai k main sirf isliye janma hu k main tumse pyar kar saku, aur tum sirf isliye k tum meri ban jao..Tum meri ho.. aur agar tum apne dil se puchogi to jaan logi k main sach keh rha hu..

(ye sab sun ne k baad nupur wahaan se chali jati hai..Nupur ki aankhon me aasu hai.. usse lagta hai syad usse ki galat lagta tha k mayank usse psnd karta hai.. wo bina bataye college chod kar chali jati hai.. aur apne exam bhi nhi deti.. kisi ko nhi pta k wo kahaan gyi.. )

FLASHBACK END

N (POV) : college k last day jo maine library me dekha wo sach tha ya yeh jo aaj dekha.. CJ aur mayank ko to sath hona chahiye tha, aur agar wo baad me alag bhi huye to unko dekh kar lag nhi rha tha k unme se kisi ko apne purane dino ka dukh hai.. Kahi uday ne to CJ ko meri feeling mayank k bare me nhi batayi.. sirf usse hi pta tha k uss din main mayank ko apne dil ki baat batane wali hu.. Nhi aisa nhi ho skta.. agar aisa hota to CJ aur mayank kuch to bolte.. Aisa kuch nhi hai..

(On The Other Hand Mayank bhi college k last day k bare me soch rha hai.. K usne kitni muskil se CJ ko manaya tha practice k liye. Mayank nhi chahta tha k nupur k saamne uss se koi galti ho.. isliye wo college k last day bhi CJ ko library le gya.. Mayank chahta tha k wo nupur ko ekdum waise hi purpose kare jaise filmo me hota hai.. aur bhi without retake.. isliye wo last day CJ k sath practice kar rha tha… pr uss din achanak kya hua jo nupur chali gyi.. exam bhi nhi diye.. aur achanak aaj jab saamne thi to kuch puchne ki himmat hi nhi huyi…)

(uday aur CJ ek dusre ko baato baato me batate hai k mayank nupur ko aur nupur mayank ko psnd karte the.. uday CJ ko ye bi batata hai k college k last day nupur mayank se apne dil ki baat kehne library gyi thi… pr pta nhi achanak kya hua.. k wo bina kisi ko kuch kahe college chod kar chali gyi… CJ ko sara scene samjh aa jaata hai.. )

Next Morning

(CJ mayank ko call karke sidhe order deti hai k CJ, Uday aur mayank aaj Nupur ki film ki shooting dekhne jaa rhe hai.. aur iss se pehle mayank kuch keh pta CJ phone cut kar deti hai.. Mayank CJ aur uday ko pick karne unke ghar aata hai.. CJ k hath me red roses hai)

M to CJ : tum aur red roses… ek aur shock

CJ : ye tumhare liye hai

M : uday ko jealous feel nhi hogi

U : nhi nhi.. mayank ye meri taraf se tumhare liye hai bas de CJ rhi hai

M : iski wajah jaan skta hu

CJ : sabkuch yahi bta de.. ya raste me bhi thodi baatein kar lenge

(teeno location k liye nikalte hai.. raste me )

CJ to M : mayank tumne abhi tak shadi kyun nhi ki

M : kyun??? Tumhe nhi pta kya??

CJ : pta hai.. bas confirmed kar rhi thi.. to aaj bhi tum uss se utna hi pyar karte hp

M : Duri hone se pyar kam nhi hota badh jaata hai..

U : ye to achcha hai

M : isme achcha kya hai

U : yahi k pyar badha hai kam nhi hua hai

CJ : to aaj usse apne dil ki baat bta do

M (shocked) : tumhara dimag thik hai.. agar hume milna hota to hum pehle mil gye hote

U : yahi nupur bhi sochti hogi

M : tumhe kaise pta nupur kya sochti hai

U : mujhe sab pta hai.. Mujhe nupur ne bataya..

M : Kya??????

(uday aur CJ dono milkar mayank ko sara scene samjhate hai.. aur mayank shocked reh jata hai k uske sath aisa hua.. itne me wo shooting location pr bhi pahuch jate hai.. CJ k hath me red roses hai.. teeno ander jaate hai… Nupur kafi busy hai..wo apni film k actor pr literally chilla rhi hai

N to A : kya ho gya hai tumhe???????? Ye tumhara 58th take hai.. tumhe ladki ko purpose karne nhi aata kya??????? Isme to acting ki zarurat hi nhi hai.. tumse itna sa scene nhi ho rha hai.. aaj sara din issi scene me lagana hai kya?????

A : sorry mam..

N : it's ok.. chalo dobra karte hai

(actor apni lines bolna start karta hai.. nupur ko Mayank aur CJ ka library scene yaad aata hai.. k mayank ne kis tarah CJ ko purpose kiya tha..tabhi ek awaz aati hai)

N : cut…

N to A :kya hai ye.. aisa karoge to kaise chalega.. tumse nhi hota hai to bta do.. kitni baar samjhau tumhe…

(tabhi samrat aa jata hai..)

S to N : kya nupur.. uski 1st film hai.. aisa mat karo.. itna mat chilao.. uss pr..

(samrat actor ko 10 min k break pr bhej deta hai.. aur khud nupur k liye aur khud k khane k liye lene chala jaata hai.. tabhi nupur ki nzar mayank pr padti hai)

N thinking : syad mayank k bare me zyada hi soch lia.. tabhi wo mujhe yahaan nazar aa rha hai. Aur main apne kaam pr dhyan nhi de paa rhi hu

(tabhi film ka actor aakar kehta hai k wo ready hai.. aur dobra se scene shoot hota hai..actor apni line bolta hai.. aur nupur ko iss bar bhi psnd nhi aata pr jaise hi wo cut bolti hai.. wo saamne se mayank ko red roses k sath aate huye dekhti hai.. aur mayank nupur k ekdum saamne aakar apni knees pr baith jaata hai aur kehta hai..

M :Main tumse aur sirf tumse pyar karta hu, Meri har saans, meri har dhadkan me tum aur sirf tum ho..Mujhe yakin hai k main sirf isliye janma hu k main tumse pyar kar saku, aur tum sirf isliye k tum meri ban jao..Tum meri ho.. aur agar tum apne dil se puchogi to jaan logi k main sach keh rha hu..

(nupur surprised aur shocked hai)

N to M : ye line to????(interrupted by CJ)

CJ : ye line mayank ne boli mujhse thi.. pr wo bas ek practice thi..ye line sirf tumhare liye hai Nupur. mayank nhi chahta tha k tumhare saamne wo retake kare…

(Mayank abhi tak apni knees pr baitha hai nupur ki taraf roses kiye huye)

M : kya scene perfect hua.. ya retake karna padega…

N (blushing) : tum koi kaam bina perfectionism k karte ho kya??????? (nupur mayank se roses le leti hai)

U : to main haan samjhu

M & N together : Haan….(nupur again blushing tabhi ek aur awaz aati hai)

S : Pack up………

S to N : I am happy for u.. atleast koi to mila tumhe

S to M : isne tumhara bahut intzaar kia hai

M to S : ye isne kahaa tumse

CJ to M : kya tumne kahaa kabhi humse.. nhi naa. Bas dosto ko pta chal jata hai..

S to CJ & U : thanx.. waise inn logo ko thoda akela chod do.. hume kafi taiyari karni hai.. agar inka mud badal gya to ye shadi nhi karenge

CJ : yes ofcourse… to love birds aap thoda time ekdusre k sath bitaye.. tab tak hum apni zimedari nibhate hai…

(after one week.. nupur & mayank get married)

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heyyyyy anu:) really nice os
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Hi Anu
Lovely OS
Very cute and nice
loved mayur so much
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hey anu nice os
really well written
feelings were well expressed but it would be more beautiful if u have added some romance after their confession...........
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sweet OS dear love mayur thnx
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hey u just rock . please include me in yuor world dear😳👏
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yaar amazing but need more oses of mayur😲

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nice one !!
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Hey Anu

Fantastic OS dear

Typical Mayur misunderstanding

But at last CJ and Uday and Samrat helped a lot

Do write more soon

Love,
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