thori se wafa chaiye (mayur)..part 2 updated pg 4! - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

great star dear

i wish d name's were nupur n mayank other's is ok cint soon n thnx 4 d pm



all right so i will change the name to mayur in next part!! okay?? or u also want me to change it in this part too??
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey mehr😃
awesomeee part😳...loved it👏
and once again congooo on ur new FF🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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congo on ur new ff.. gr88 part..do cont soon.. n pm me too
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Posted: 15 years ago
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LOVE IT
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Congrates on ur new ff
great part liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
amazing job
part 1 is awesome
waiting for mayank's entry
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continue soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WoW nice start.... I wsih the sotryy coudl just forward it too amyur... Btw congrats on ur new FF

... nd plz add me to ur Pm list...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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YAY!! congrats on your new FF! 😊 I love part 1! its incredible!! 😆 Thanks for the pm and please continue soon! 😊
~Alisha~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The following 11 member(s) liked the above post:

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thanks a lot guyz=)

thori si wafa chaiye

part 2

now it cums to benji who is sitting in office
arif calls him
b: hello
a: hello arif baat karraha hoon
b: main abhi busy hoon baad mei baat karta hoon
a: dekho baat suno main or bhai tumhare ghar aana chah rahe thay shaam ko
b: main ghar pe nhi honga mere meeting hai
a: lekin??
b: kaha na mene 1 baari mei baat samajh nahi aati kya tumhai
he cut the phone
now its cum to diya
calling benji
b: hello
d: hello diya bol rahi hoon tum mujhse aaj ******** restaurant pe mil sakte ho?? ek problem hai
b: haan abhi milna hai??
d: haan
benji: theek hai main phonchta hoon
benji goes there
b: aisa kya problem tha jo mjhai abhi bula liya
diya tells him everything about rent n money n all that
benji calls on band n say the account number of diya's account n tell the man to transfer 5 lakh rupees from benji's account to diya's account
b: bas ho gaya problem solve
diya smiles n say yes
suddenly benji's phone rings
diya left from there
b: hello
arif: hello arif bol raha hoon..tum kaha ho hum tmhare ghar aaye howe hain
b: mene tumse kaha tha na main ghar pe nhi honga
he cut the phone
now it cums to diya
who is vomiting
goes to doctor
doctor: mubarak ho ap maa banne waali hain
diya: jee?? doctor agar humain abotion karwana ho toh?
doctor: jee ye to humare hospital ki policy nhi hai srry mam
diya: okay
diya left from hospital
now its gonna cum to benji
who cums home
n: tum kaha thay abhi abhi arif or bhaijaan tumhara intezaar kar kar k gaye hain yaha se
b: mene keh diya tha unhay k main gahr pe nhi honga per wo 1 baari mei nhi samajhtay na
n: khabardar benji agr tumne mere bhaiyo k baare mei 1 word bhi kaha to
b: to kya karlegi tu haan unko bulayegi
benji start hitting nupur
kidz cum downstairs
kidz are crying
kidz: papa mummy ko mat maaro chor do plzz
b: tum log abhi abhi apne kamre mei jao
n: jao beta apne kamre mei jao
kidz goes in room n calls arif
arif: hello
maham: uncle aap jaldi ajaye papa mama ko bohat marrahay hain
a: beta tum ro nahi hum log abhi arahay hain
he takes U turn n comes to nupur's house
a: benji choro usse
b: tum mere or mere biwi k beach mei mat aao
a: mene kaha choro usse
benji holds arif shirt
b: nhi choroonga kya karloge haan??
arif slaps benji
nupur: (screaming) arif
n benji goes in his room n arif left and kidz went in their room
next day in the morning
n: benji main jaanti hoon jo kal raat ko howa tha wo nahi hona chaiye tha...main tumse arif ki jaga maafi mangti hoon
benji picks up his bag n going out
n: ye sab kya hai?? tum kaha ja rahe ho?? plz mat jao bachay bohat sawal karte hain plz mat jao
b: ab jahan tum rahogi waha main nahi reh sakta
n benji left from there
n: mere baat to suno
now it cums to diya
who cums to benji's office
b: tumhai kitni baar kaha hai yaha nahi aaya karo
d: main kya karti baat hi aisi thi
b: ab kya hogaya???
d: m pregnant
b: what??
d: or main kya karti yaha aane k ilawa
b: acha na tum abhi yaha se jao kahi bahar milke baat kareinge abhi to mujhai bohat kaam hai
d: har waqt kaam kaam?? ek baat dhayan mei rakhlo.....agar tum mujhai ignore karne ki koshish karrahay ho na to bhool jao tum nahi kar saktay ho
and diya left from there
now its cum to nupur
who is driving n went to benji's assistant home
b's a: mam aap yaha?
n: dekho mujhai tum plz batado k tumhare sahab ka kis larki se chakkar chal raha hai plz batado mujhai
b's a: mam mere majboori hai mere nokri ka sawal hai
n: tum fikar nahi karo...tumhari nokri ko kuch nai hoga mera vaada hai tumse
b's a: us ka naam diya hai or wo or sahab or har kahin bahar milte hain
n: kya tum mujhai uska address de sakte ho?
b's a: jee uska address ye hai **** *************** ****** ********
n: thanks ab main yaha se chalti hoon
b's a: per mam mere nokri
n: tum tension nhi lo tumhari nokri ko kuch nhi hoga
nupur left from there

this part is done=)
hope u all lyk it=)

Edited by missinguonly - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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tht was nice part and confuse n as well benji is nupur husband

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