thori se wafa chaiye (mayur)..part 2 updated pg 4!

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 15 years ago

welcome to my new ff "thori si wafa chaiye" with mayur in it
title song of this ff
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mOVmCXkCIrk

this story is mainly about mayur....but they will meet to each other later n this ff will only have 17 partz
i will start this ff from 2morrow
but all of the created will go to yasir nawaz....cuz its his drama story...but m telling this story as mayur the couple in it=)

hope u all lyk my conceptz
but i need very very good pm list to start that
becuz i cant just write this ff for 10 to 20 or 5 to 10 peoplez
plz guyz try to understand..it takes much of tym!!

so now my next post is my pm list
if u wanna receive pm abt it plz hit lyk button on it
by telling people "pm me abt that"
m not going to pm lyk that
i will pm only the people who will be on my pm list!!
thanks
luv mehr🤗

part 1 on page 2
part 2 on page 4

Edited by missinguonly - 15 years ago

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sis congratzzz on ur new FF na !!

very looking forward to it !!!!!
loved that itzzzzz on MayUr!!!
do continue soon na!!!

n haan plezzz add me in ur pm list !!

luvv ya🤗
-Lina-

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Alisha

@alishaL786

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey gurli!
Congrats on your new FF! I cant wait to read it! 😊 Please add me to your PM list! 😊
I ❤️ YOU!
~Alisha~

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

Congraz on new FF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Add me too PM 😳

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-sam-

@-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey I am in..
continue soon...

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey, I also want this story on Mayur i have watched this serial... But please Make an alternative ending... nd yes do add me to ur PM list... 😊

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 15 years ago

plz pm me too loved the concept

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 15 years ago

part 1 of my ff

thori si wafa chaiye

part 1

@first benji is sitting with his kid n its raining just thinking....diya is sleeping on bad n benji comes
benji: aisa kya hai diya aaj 3 saal se zayada aane ko arahe hai or diya ki kashish waise hi jaise 1 din thi....aisa kyun hai kuch to zaroor hai diya jo shayad kisi or mei nahi
and its raining a lot so benji is standing by the window so diya comes
diya to benji: jaa rahe ho??
benji: hmmm
d: rukh jao na
b: wo office hai mujhai jaana zaroori hai kal shaam ko aoonga na
d: acha thori dear jab tak ye barish thal nahi jaati
b: ye barish to kabhi nahi thalegi....jaana hoga jaane do na diya
than diya goes outside with benji to drop him to his car in night suit when she comes inside her dad is sitting inside and see her lyk that...diya just walks away from there!!
now we will go to nupur...who is benji's wife for now
nupur's kid...who is arsal...is sleeping in his room and its raining a lot.....nupur goes in his room n put the blanket on him n turn off the light n goes from there
than nupur walks in her daughter room...who is maham
Nupur: maham beta aap abhi tak soye kyun nahi??
Maham: mama mujhai neend nahi arahi
N: letogi ankhein band karoge to neend ayegi na
but kidz were worried about their dad...who has never give them love!!
benji is going home in his car and listening the song and singing too....@ home nupur is worried about benji
now its gonna go on diya's dad
diya comez
diya's mom: dil ka dora chara hai mene dawayaan rakhi hai kahi or bhool gaye hoon
diya: mene hi kahi rakhi hai
than she brings the medicine and give it to him
now we will go on nupur....benji get home
N: khana khaoge??
B: nahi bhook nahi hai
N: bhook nahi hai ya khake aaye ho...nahi khake aaye ho to laga doon
B: kaha na nahi khana khana na khane k liye explanation zaroori hai kya??
he walks in his room nupur goes in there
N: subha se tumhai call karrahi hoon....nahi uthaya na call back kiya
B: main meeting mei tha
N: konsi meeting thi itni raat ko subah tumhai bola bhi tha k parent teacher meeting hai...thatz whtz more important
benji ignore her n start drinking water
nupur start screaming
N: benji tumse baat karrahi hoon...jawab kyun nahi dete mere baat ka why ur ignoring me?? tumne mujhai purane samaan ki tarah ghar mei daldiya hai or bhool gaye ho waha rakhe........sun rahe ho main tumse baat karrahi hoon lagta hi nahi k ye ghar tumhara hai main tumhari biwi hoon or ye tumhare bachay hain
B: haan haan sun raha hoon tumhari baqwaass bhera nahi hoon
N: bakwas?? tumhari biwi hoon koi nokraani nahi stop talking to me like that
B: biwi ho to sar pe charadoon tumhai kya......
N: akhir mene aisa kya kardiya hai jo tum mujhse aisa behave karte ho
B:ek to raat k 1:30 bajay shor ghar mei dhakil ho or phir tumhari bakwas....n u push me to doing things lyk this
after saying all this he goes from there....and the song comes on nupur......jeena koi mushkil to nahi bas thori si wafa chaiye
in the moring benji, nupur, and their 2 kidz are on breakfast...
N: arsal beta ye kya dood finish nahi kiya?? dekho maham ne bhi khatam kiya
A: mama mujh se piya nahi ja raha
N: nahi beta finish to karna parega
than nupur to benji: kal phir arsal sar mei dard ka keh raha tha
than benji walks out and calls arsal
N: jao beta papa bula rahay hain
benji to arsal: kya howa phir sar mei dard howa??
A: haan
B: mujhai lagta hai tumhai mujhai eye specialist k pass lejaana parega tumhari ankhein kamzor hai we will go to eye specialist
than nupur took her kidz to drop skool
maham: mama aaj phir papa naraz lag rahe thay...aap logo ki larai howi hai kya??
N: nahi beta bilkul bhi nahi howi..ap ko kyun aisa laga??
m: wo aaj subah papa baat nahi karrahay thay
N: beta wo office k kaam mei busy hai is liye
arsal: mama papa humain kyun skool nahi chorne aate??
N: beta sab ki masroofiyat hoti hai
A: lekin...
N: beta chalo shabaash skool agaya
kidz: Allah Hafiz
N: Allah Hafiz
than she sits in the car n crying......
n now we will go to diya
diya's phone rings
her mom was calling her
D: haan maa bolo
D's mom: beta wo malik makaan aaya tha
D: kya keh raha tha wo?? abhi is mahine ka kiraya to de diya hai usse
D's mom: kehraha tha k ab 6 mahine ka advance liya karega
D: pagal ho gaya hai kya wo?
D's mom: haan beta mene usko bola per usne kaha dena hai to do warna ghar khaali karo
D: kya??
D's mom: haan usne yahi kaha k 10 tareeq tak nahi diya to ghar khaali kar dena
D: lekin maa 6 mahine ka kiraya to taqreeban 150 lakh ki keemat banegi
D's mom: isi liye to main pareshaan hoon itne rupo k intezaam kaha se hoga
D: acha theek theek hai...main kuch karti hoon aap relax ho jaye
D's mom: acha beta mujhai phone kardena
now its gonna go to nupur...who is on his brother arif house eating.....
his big brother luks at nupur sitting and thinking something
N's bro: kya baat hai nupur?? tum kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho
N: bhai jaan main aap ka malitia se wapis aane ka wait karrahi thi....mujhai aap logo se kuch baat karni thi
N's big bro: kyun kya baat hai??
N: bhai jan benji ka rawaya ab bilkul nakaame rawayya hota ja raha hai pehle baat or thi bache chote thay ab bache bare ho gaye hain..wo bhi sawal karte hain
N's big bro: or??
Nupur's little bro..whose name is arif
arif: mujahi to pehle se hi pata tha ye admi nupur k liye bilkul theek nahi tha
N: or ek or baat hai jo mene aap logo ko kabhi nahi bataye...wo benji ka dusri larkiyo se affair tha jab se humari shaadi howi thi...lekin aap log parehsaan nahi ho is liye mene aap logo ko ya kisi ko bhi ye baat nahi ki..lekin ab to had hi hogaye hai na itne itne dino tak ghar hi nahi aata wo
arif: kya??
N: bhaijaan mujhai lagta hai he is stress.....wo mujhse bacho se us ghar se apni zimedariyo se chutkara paana chahta hai....basically humse chutkara paana chahta hai
arif: isi liye...isi liye mujhai hamesha aise logo se nafrat rahi hai...haram ka paisa ghar mei aane lagta hai to yahi sab hota hai...lekin bhaijan main usko nupur or usk bacho ki zindagi taba nahi karne doonga.....wo samajhta kya hai apne aap ko...uski aisi ki tessi...sarkar hoga wo apne ghar ka...lekin usko main maimaani nahi karne doonga
N's big bro: arif aise mamlaat gusse se nahi sanjeedgi se soche jaate hain
arif: gusse ki baat nahi hai bhaijaan.....wo kya samjhta hai....k humari behan nupur akeli lawaris hai...main us ko bataoonga wo akeli lawaris nahi hai....us k 2 bhai zinda hai abhi
now we will go to diya...she is in her office with a boy asking for the money
boy: advance?? lekin diya tumhai to pehle hi 2 mahine ki pay advance agaye hai....or wo to abhi deck bhi nahi howi hai
D: lekin meri majboori samjhne ki koshish karo yasir...makaan malik ne achanak hi 6 mahine k mutabila karliya..main....
yasir: wo to theek hai lekin m sorry ye advance impossible hai
D: yasir
y: diya....ye bilkul possible nahi hai...main is silsilay mei koi tumhari madad nahi kar sakta
D: agar tum jabar sahab se baat karo to??
y: unka pehle bhi khayal hai k main tumhai bohat favour karta hoon..meri position kharab hogi...tum samajhne ki koshish karo
D: hmmm....theek hai
diya walks out from there....n she goes in her cabin and her mom calls her
D: jee ammi??
D's mom: haan beta kuch rakam ka intezaam howa?
D: nahi ammi kuch nahi bana....koi jadoo k chirag to hai nahi mere pass jo ragroo or jinne paise leke nikal ayega....karrahi hoon koshish...kuch intezaam hoga to batati hoon apko!!
D's mom: acha beta
now its gonna go to benji...he is in his office
Benji: siddique sahab....khurana ka kya howa yaar??
siddiqui: wo ho jayega aap fikar na kare
B: ho jayega ho jayega...25 din se ap mujhai yahi keh rahe hain yaar..mujhai zaroorat hai sab intezaar karrahe hai yaar...kaam kardiya hai or 15 din ki baat ki thi aap jaldi kardiye yaar
siddique: hmm
B: acha ye file usko de dena or kehna k agar file band ho sakti hai to khul bhi sakti hai

this part has finished hope u all lyk it=)

Edited by missinguonly - 15 years ago