When Two Became One -MayUr SS

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Prologue

She stood in the balcony letting the cool sea breeze caress her face. She was dressed in a long white gown and her beautiful black hair with a tint of brown was lying loose on her shoulders, just a little here and there held back by a tiny white clip.

Everything was perfect. Today was her wedding day, the day she had looked forward to her entire life. She was wearing the most beautiful gown ever, her hair looked lovely, the decoration did too (it was held at a beach), and she had the perfect bride groom.

She had lived a dream love story. She met him in pre-school when he was the cute nerdy boy and she was the adorable princess, the apple of everyone's eyes. They became friends instantly and even their family were really close.

In college they started dating, and she found out that her nerd best friend was the best boyfriend in the world. He loved her like crazy was utterly romantic. They fought too, in moderate amounts, but that just bought them closer.

She felt a hand on her shoulder and she turned back. It was her best friend Sanam.

"Hey," she said.

"Nupur I can't believe you are getting married," Sanam said.

"Neither can I," Nupur said smiling. "But he and I will finally become one after our wedding."

"Both of you have always been in love, the perfect couple," Sanam said. "Now it's your time together, just you and him."

Nupur blushed and her cheeks turned bright pink. Yes, it was finally time for just her and the man whom she loved with every fiber of her living. Her mother called out to her, and the two friends went downstairs.

Nupur's mother, Stuti Bhushan gave a tight to her young daughter. She was proud of Nupur's choice and knew that he would keep her happy. She hadn't seen a couple who loved each other more than Mayank and Nupur.

Mayank Sharma was Nupur's fiance and the love of her life. He was an intelligent and smart guy and to top it off he had really good looks. Nupur was his first friend and his best friend and before long he fell deeply in love with her. It took him long to confess to her because he was afraid she wouldn't reciprocate the feelings. But when he mustered enough courage and told her, she ran into his arms and scolded him for not telling her earlier.

They were a perfect match. Unsaid words mattered most of them. They understood each other so well and one wouldn't hear a single thing against the other. And they looked so beautiful together, it was very difficult to find another couple like that.

"Someone has sent this to you," Stuti said, handing over a piece of paper to her daughter.

It was a handwritten note from Mayank. Nupur's eyes welled up with tears as she read it.

Dear Love,
Today we unite a unison which is experienced by many,
but what we feel for each other is something only U and I know about.
I love you sweetheart and forever will.
I promise to be next to you every moment of our lives, our hands entwined together.
I promise to kiss every tears of yours away.
I promise to kiss you and mean it.
I promise to hug you and not let anyone take you away from me.
I promise that the love we have will increase with every passing day.
With love,
Your Mayank


Tears of happiness fell from her eyes and she kissed the note. Love like theirs was rare and hard to find. They both loved each other so much, so much, that the mere thought of not being together killed her.

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Nupur walked down the wedding aisle with her father. She saw Mayank standing up front with the priest. He looked as handsome and amazing as ever and she smiled at seeing him. He looked at her and smiled softly at her.

Her father, Mr. Raj Bhushan escorted Nupur to Mayank and gave her hand in his. The mere touch of his hands made Nupur shiver in pleasure. She smiled softly at him as he gave her his million dollar smile.

As the lovers went up to the priest, Mayank leaned closer and whispered into her ear "You look beautiful, just like an angel. My angel."

Nupur blushed hard on hearing that and softly muttered and thank you.

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The ceremony began.

"I Mayank Sharma, take you Nupur Bhushan to be my wife, my partner in life, and my one true love," Mayank began. "I will cherish our union and love you more each day than I did before. I shall trust you and respect you, laugh with you and cry with you, loving you faithfully through good times and bad. I shall give you my hand, my heart, and my love, for this day forward as long as we both shall live."


"I Nupur Bhushan, take you Mayank Sharma to be my husband, my partner in life, and my one true love," Nupur said. "I will cherish our union and love you more each day than I did before. I shall trust you and respect you, laugh with you and cry with you, loving you faithfully through good times and bad. I shall give you my hand, my heart, and my love, for this day forward as long as we both shall live."

"I now pronounce you man and wife," the priest said. "You may now kiss the bride."

Mayank leaned in, cupping her face and softly pressed his lips against Nupur's. He kissed her lovingly and passionately and she also kissed him back. Her hands snaked around his neck and she pulled him closer to her.

***********

Soft, romantic music played in the background while various people danced. Mayank and Nupur were dancing together, not taking their eyes of each other.

"Other men have seen angels, but I have seen thee and thou art enough," Mayank said.

"Thanks," Nupur said, turning a dark shade of crimson.

"That's even better," Mayank said, running his thumb over her cheek.

"I love you," Nupur said suddenly.

"And I love you more than you can imagine," Mayank said.

"I love you more," Nupur said.

"No I love you more," Mayank said.

"No I do," Nupur said.

"I love you so much that even if the entire universe was my heart, there wouldn't be enough space to fill it up with my love for you," Mayank said, kissing her cheek.

She hugged him and he snaked his strong protective arms around her. He caressed her hair as she buried her face in his chest, her home.

"I love you Nupur," Mayank said. "I really do love you."

"I know," Nupur whispered. "I really love you too."

And they danced away to glory. They also danced with their friends and relatives, after which the two of them left for their honeymoon.😳

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Hope you all liked it😳
It's really mushy and sappy I know, but I want to write this one./
It'll be a happy MN SS with all happy moments😳

Do comment,
Nidz😃

PS:- This SS is dedicated to Sanu 🤗 Happy recover jaan!! And also to my amazing friends from MF CC (Janwar, Dania, Sam, Mari, Hinzie etc). LOVE YOU ALL 🤗

Title credit:- Dania the great, my twinster😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Niddy, Meri Twinno 🤗🤗🤗🤗
Eeeepp! This is just amazing. I am grinning like a total idiot now. it was like P E R F E C T.
From the first word to the last it was like a beautiful dream for me. 😍
Such a beautiful wedding. I could imagine it all. Nupur gorgeous as ever in a white gown, Mayank, beyond handsome in a suit. And then the wedding. I swear I was crying at the time of the vows😳
I love how you've added the CC members at different points in it. It was very sweet.
Their love story is so sweet and pretty. A happy, joyous couple.
Ah, Niddy, you've mesmerised me. I feel under a beautiful trance, never wanting to come out of it.
I just know it that I am going to love this SS. Yay !
It was F A B U L O U S...
Come on Niddy, now jaldi jaldi update it.
Please continue it soon.
Loads of love <3<3<3
Your twinster,
Daania
Edited by -Daania- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its just fab dear
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nidz

awesum update yr
loved it a lot
esp tht letter part
and wow stuti role was😆😆😆😆😆😆

nyc yr loved it lot
sweet simple but lovely

luv sehr not suzzzu
Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res EDIT
Loved it Nidz
LOL you didn't add my name in the MF CC thing
it's fine 😃
it was definately amazing
(and mushy 😆)
no doubt about that
it was too cute
made me smile!
Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago
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Nidzzz....such a BeautifuL Start....😃
loved it to da coree...
n dat Kisss...OMG....WonDerfuL....😍

Thanxxx 4 dedication....Love ya Sweet Heart..
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🤗🤗
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nidz this's sweet n wonderful SS plzzzzzzz do cont n pme if u can thnx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow nidz..jst beautuifully written...i alwys love 2 read lovey dovey FF..it jst made my day..cont soooon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh it was sooooo romantic 😍
i realllyy loved it, i feel like i was transported to an amazing happy land of Mayur, 😆./ i mean i could imagine being there, and i was smiling through out! 😆
😳 😳
I realllllllyyyy loved it!, plz do continue Nidz!
Im looking forward to reading more 😳
~Rue
Edited by ruexangel - 15 years ago

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