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jyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

annieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i loved the update cont soon

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..Naina..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#782

ommmmg! awesome part annieee! haha i loved the jealous Nikki :) totally awesome....and 😳the way you described everything was just aahmazinggg...so cutee! can't wait for the next part!

~Naina

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

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Posted: 14 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: Naina2127
ommmmg! awesome part annieee! haha i loved the jealous Nikki :) totally awesome....and 😳the way you described everything was just aahmazinggg...so cutee! can't wait for the next part!

~Naina

well, Naina, I have decided not to talk to you or Aish until you update Bairi Piya....😒

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#784

Annie, I'm still reading your update but I just wanted to say that I like Abhi better when he's clean-shaven ^^

But of course, the stubble looks good on him too...gives him a rugged look and increases his dukhi-aatma appeal, if you know what I mean hihi!

The only thing I really can't tolerate is his beard...chhhiiiiiiii

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

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Posted: 14 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: wow123
Annie i read your update. Its lovely update dear but i don't why i find it wiredly hilarious.

First they drawn to each other with desire and kiss each other as long lasting than trying to converse each other as stranger as how they are doing in work and all. May be my mind is wired but i find it little hilarious.

She can't forgive him uptill now still full chance maroying on him😆

Gr8 going dear. Keep updating and entertaining us.😉

Hey Shale .... hota hai aisae ..... when u meet a person you were so close to after more than a year...... you cannot express yourself in words. And AN were never good with words. They should open their mouths only to kiss, not to talk to each other 😳

Since AN have been apart for a year, and that too after a huge mis-understanding, are like strangers .... when it comes to talking ..... but in their hearts they are still together .... the passion is still alive .... though Nikki's is trying hard to fight it .... but she is failing miserably .....😉

And you know about the magnetic pull they have on each other .... they just cannot resist each other .... they will end up kissing even while fighting .... 😆

Aur Abhi ne to deside kar liya hai, ki he is not letting her go .... so he is going to use each and every trick he can ... to make her his again ...... so either make her jeolous, or kiss her, or fight with her, or be toooooo sweet to her ..... and finally if nothing works bully her. But he is determined to win her back.

And now he had Armaan's and Sid's support too. 😃

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

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Posted: 14 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
Annie, I'm still reading your update but I just wanted to say that I like Abhi better when he's clean-shaven ^^

But of course, the stubble looks good on him too...gives him a rugged look and increases his dukhi-aatma appeal, if you know what I mean hihi!

The only thing I really can't tolerate is his beard...chhhiiiiiiii

Deary, I am talking about the 5 o'clock stubble here ......... even I hate beard .... yuk .... so dirty!

Edited by ANfan_1810 - 14 years ago

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#787

Oh okay...that one is good enough, and that's the one I'm referring to.

I seriously hate that beard...

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#788

I FINALLY finished reading your update, Annie! *dances in celebration*

Ufff...I never take this long but sheesh. Today, everything in my head is going haywire.

Whatever.

Anyway, thanks for the dedication! Spamming buddy! *dances to ringa-ringa-roses with Sheenu*

It was hotttt...*fans herself*

You got me blushing and blushing and blushing...and I sound like "chakki peeessssing and peeeessssing and peeeessssing..." of Sholay when I say this ROFL!

Anyway coming back to the point...I'm so glad to see the ice breaking between the two. Stubborn nuts, both of them.

Glad they realised they still love each other and get jealous at the sight of them with someone else!

Will be waiting besabri se for the next part Annie! Update soon! 🤗

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#789

Shale...did I comment on yours? I don't remember. Eh, who cares...I'll say it anyway!

It was really good...glad that chudail is in jail...I wanna barsao gaalis on that woman but when it comes to her, I run out of gaalis...there's nothing bad enough in my stock deserving of her. Horrible woman.

And she actually has the audacity to say that she never intended to harm Abhi!

I don't care what her intentions were, she's evil! *mentally shoots Jiah with an AK-47 rifle and feels great about it*

My Abhi is out of jail...I'm so happy! *sheds tears of happiness*

Now he can finally go and take a nice warn shower and use his nice-smelling soap and put some perfume and sleep...away from the dirt and muck of jail yay! Call me weird, but yes, I'm plain obsessed with smelling good all the time. Hehe!

And the others respect him now as well! I'm so proud of Nikki...I like the lawyer as well...maybe she can buy a new home now that he's given her the extra money back.

You have a knack for logical endings Shale...and good believable twists. Even after finishing this one, don't give up writing. You've nice ideas and they're meant to be shared...don't worry about the grammer. You'll always find someone who's willing to beta read and you'll get better with time anyway!

Great job!

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shalini

@wow123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810
Hey Shale .... hota hai aisae ..... when u meet a person you were so close to after more than a year...... you cannot express yourself in words. And AN were never good with words. They should open their mouths only to kiss, not to talk to each other 😳
😆😆😆😆Amazing thought Annie

Since AN have been apart for a year, and that too after a huge mis-understanding, are like strangers .... when it comes to talking ..... but in their hearts they are still together .... the passion is still alive .... though Nikki's is trying hard to fight it .... but she is failing miserably .....😉

And you know about the magnetic pull they have on each other .... they just cannot resist each other .... they will end up kissing even while fighting .... 😆This becoem the root cuase of all their problem😃

Aur Abhi ne to deside kar liya hai, ki he is not letting her go .... so he is going to use each and every trick he can ... to make her his again ...... so either make her jeolous, or kiss her, or fight with her, or be toooooo sweet to her ..... and finally if nothing works bully her. But he is determined to win her back. Abhi kuch karne ki jarurat nahin hain Nikki khud bin paani ki machali ki tarah ho jaati hain usek samne😆😆

And now he had Armaan's and Sid's support too. 😃 Hey-3 Phaasi.................