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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: mitzification
Khushboo write a new scene ....what wld happen if AN met o an airport ....? something like that.......?
or niiki falin in love wid d sadu n sadu avoiding her ...cause he has a dark past or just cause he's sadu or has a daughter.......write something like that naa ..maybe a small ff

I'll try...

But you didn't like the one I wrote? 😕

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mitzification

@mitzification

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

I like it but its a one shot :(

and every one on this challenge r coming with new twists n turns ,whereas everyone earlier wrote on the same story line ....... so i want something diff ..outta the box !

like niiki being crazy abt abhi ..abhi being attracted but avoiding cause he was hurt by his ex love ......... aisa kuch likho naa

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: mitzification
I like it but its a one shot :(
and every one on this challenge r coming with new twists n turns ,whereas everyone earlier wrote on the same story line ....... so i want something diff ..outta the box !

like niiki being crazy abt abhi ..abhi being attracted but avoiding cause he was hurt by his ex love ......... aisa kuch likho naa

I should have kept it as the parts and not clubbed them together 😛 😆

Par tumko yeh sab kehne ke liye main hi mili? I'm soooooo busy mujhe nahi pata main likh paungi ya nahi And is the thing you said going with the theme? 😕 I need to think about it...

Will try if I manage some time...I've to update my FF as well yaar...

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Annie!!!

I just read the two parts, and I must say this is getting better and better.

Armaan's "dhanya ho" was 😆 😆 😆 Loved it! Sid standing up for Nikki and even fighting with Abhi 😲 wow...that man sure has guts 👏

I loved the convo between Ridzi and Abhi. I love the bond they share, and I'm glad he listens to someone!

And Tia Modi finds a way to enter his life once again! 😃 Ah, I know we're all so in love with Tia! 😳 All thanks to Honey!

Will she make an appearence here? I wanna see her!

But I liked the fact that you tried a different take on Abhi's past rather than the usual heartbreak in love. I like it. ⭐️

And Nikki is unwell...and she fainted too OMG! But when Abhi is there, no fear...banda time pe pahuch gaya! Now he'll take care of her awww! 😳

Waiting for the next part! 🤗

And P.S. - I love your speed. *wink*

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago

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mitzification

@mitzification

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

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Par tumko yeh sab kehne ke liye main hi mili? ..

Yaa cause ur d only writer who is ot writing in this one ...😛

theme ....yes u twist it n think abt it hehehehe

update ur ff later its ok ............first enter d challenge ..............😃

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

@Shale...this is interesting. Abhi is such a mama's boy...it's both their fault. Letting someone else take a life-changing desicion for him when he knew very well that he wasn't ready for it was a blunder in itself. I can't just blame Jiah for it.

But of course, she's such a devil!!! She slept with that guy!!! And now she's here defending herself, wah. What a creep!

And poor Nikki is in a fix. I hope Armaan and the others don't try to do too much and in turn hurt Nikki further.

Update soon!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: mitzification
Yaa cause ur d only writer who is ot writing in this one ...😛
theme ....yes u twist it n think abt it hehehehe

update ur ff later its ok ............first enter d challenge ..............😃

I did write in the theme...go through the lyrics and see...aankhein phaad phaad ke. I thought about it for long before I decided to post it here...😉

No I finished this one fine, but I want to update my FF first...if I don't update now, I'll have continuity problems. I don't want to abandon it.

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago