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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1121

honey an awesome end loved this fic wish u had written more to it loved it

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1122

honneeyyyy 🤗 awesome update dear 😃
As usual I loved the diary part!! Abhi a prince charming so true😃 hope Ill also get one soon 😉
lovely fiction once again by u...... Thanks.

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1123

Honey

U filled me with all happy and blissfull emotions today but i m sad too as this the end part. I loved whole convo of Abhi-Nikki and their desire which drive them crazy😆We are carzy for them but i m not able to digest the fact that its finally end

We want more

We want more😆

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1124

Honey I can't smile anymore...my cheeks are aching and I think they're stuck just as they are coz I can't stop smiling...😕 😆 😆 😆 weird situation!

OMG Honuuuuu where's my shirtless Abhiiiii *whines* Yeh return gift diya tumne mujhe mere 3 sigs ke liye? 😲 Mujhe shirtless Abhi chahiye chahiye chahiye...iss FF mein na sahi toh kissi aur FF mein, scene mein, kahin bhi. I don't care. Bas chahiye. 😳

Achha ab update pe aati hoon...

heee heeee heeeeeeee *giggles* I got my giggle-itis back

Honu you made me guess till my brain went haywire but I thank you for finally telling me where it was...I love you 🤗

Abhi was so subtly cheeky all through this update, na...😆 Saying they'd never have left the house had he looked at her 😲 now that's called brutal honesty 🤣

But you didn't tell me what he was wearingggg 😭 me wants to know!!!! And his entire wardrobe of shirts strewn all over his bed? 😲 Hawwww...I bet it formed a mountain of sorts on the poor bed...with the number of shirts he owns! 😲 He must have over a hundred!!!

Nikki was naughty enough...hihihi I loved the part where she turns around to show him what was in store 😆 😆 😆 peechhe toh window hai 😲 😆 bechara Abhi...got a better view than I guess he would have liked 😆

The date was all about himmm...*sigh* A date in the planetorium...sounds super nerdy 😆 but at the same time sounds so much like Abhi...not in the nerdy way, but it reflects his calm side...he's so quiet and reserved, it seems like a place he'd go to.

Works for free...awww! Few docs do that, but I'm so proud of him! 🤗 Empathy runs in Modi blood 😳 That Amrita is such a...chhodo I'll not say 😉

Sid got into a fight over which car was better! 😆 😆 😆 He sounds like me...I think yesterday or the day before I was arguing ovre same thing 😆 telepathy! 😲

He likes Spanish food? What is Tapas? 😕 okay so I Googled it and I didn't understand what I saw 😕 looks like pizza toppings on toasted bread and salads and pickles and chole bature and meatballs and oyster shells and...uhhh what kind of a dish is that? 😕 Honu please elaborate...me is very confused.

Dekho maine Tapas pe pura research kar liya 😆 😆 😆 me and my fetish for food 😆

Achha anyway, toh coming back to the update 😳

Abhi kissed her tears away...awwww! 😳 Cho chweet...I'm shocked it didn't end up in a I-don't-need-oxygen-I'm-too-busy-kissing situation 😆 😆 😆 Honu yeh tumhe kya kiya!!! 😲 🤣 AN ko ek bhi proper kiss nahi diya planetorium mein?! 😲 🤣

I love the last scene...I miss their hugs! 😭 She looked so small and cute in his arms...😳

Achha I'll grieve later. 😉

The diary par is my fav...and I'm again shocked that he's willing to wait even for 2 months! I was thinking he'd bring a marriage certificate for her to sign in the airport itself 😆 he sounded so impatient in her room after the date 😉 I'm glad she was in her senses...or else he was busy pulling at her dori 😲 and saying he was itching to do that ever since he saw it!!! 😲 Hawwww cheekiness, Modi! 😆 Loved it!

Okay so coming back to the diary part, yes Abhi is indeed the Prince Charming...his charm is utterly irresistible simply because its effortless on his part...I love how, even when unprepared, he manages to look good or say something nice that's not overly sappy. Thanks for retaining that essence in this FF, Honey. You did truly a wonderful job...portraying Abhi as he is isn't an easy task, but kudos to you for perfection! 👏

I love Abhi ....he is my world....I hope every girl in this world ends up with her Prince.

Doesn't every girl hope for an Abhi as her Prince these days...*sigh* He's not just Prince Charming, he's the God of effortless charm as well 😳 Perfect with all his imperfections! ⭐️

Thanks, Honu...for such a beautiful FF...I'm still wishing it had never ended, but I guess if you had written any more then you'd surely have gone mad 😆 We pester so much 😳

Now that this one is wrapped up, I'm gonna go pester you for THE LOVE THING! 😃

Awesome, awesome job, once again Honey...you're the BEST! 🤗

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 14 years ago

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1125

Honiiiiiieeeee🤗

thank u & lov u for updating and ending my miseries .......... 😆

I will be back and comment on the update ....... as usual it is the best!

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1126

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
Honey I can't smile anymore...my cheeks are aching and I think they're stuck just as they are coz I can't stop smiling...😕 😆 😆 😆 weird situation!

OMG Honuuuuu where's my shirtless Abhiiiii *whines* Yeh return gift diya tumne mujhe mere 3 sigs ke liye? 😲 Mujhe shirtless Abhi chahiye chahiye chahiye...iss FF mein na sahi toh kissi aur FF mein, scene mein, kahin bhi. I don't care. Bas chahiye. 😳

Achha ab update pe aati hoon...

heee heeee heeeeeeee *giggles* I got my giggle-itis back

Honu you made me guess till my brain went haywire but I thank you for finally telling me where it was...I love you 🤗

Abhi was so subtly cheeky all through this update, na...😆 Saying they'd never have left the house had he looked at her 😲 now that's called brutal honesty 🤣

But you didn't tell me what he was wearingggg 😭 me wants to know!!!! And his entire wardrobe of shirts strewn all over his bed? 😲 Hawwww...I bet it formed a mountain of sorts on the poor bed...with the number of shirts he owns! 😲 He must have over a hundred!!!

Nikki was naughty enough...hihihi I loved the part where she turns around to show him what was in store 😆 😆 😆 peechhe toh window hai 😲 😆 bechara Abhi...got a better view than I guess he would have liked 😆

The date was all about himmm...*sigh* A date in the planetorium...sounds super nerdy 😆 but at the same time sounds so much like Abhi...not in the nerdy way, but it reflects his calm side...he's so quiet and reserved, it seems like a place he'd go to.

Works for free...awww! Few docs do that, but I'm so proud of him! 🤗 Empathy runs in Modi blood 😳 That Amrita is such a...chhodo I'll not say 😉

Sid got into a fight over which car was better! 😆 😆 😆 He sounds like me...I think yesterday or the day before I was arguing ovre same thing 😆 telepathy! 😲

He likes Spanish food? What is Tapas? 😕 okay so I Googled it and I didn't understand what I saw 😕 looks like pizza toppings on toasted bread and salads and pickles and chole bature and meatballs and oyster shells and...uhhh what kind of a dish is that? 😕 Honu please elaborate...me is very confused.

Dekho maine Tapas pe pura research kar liya 😆 😆 😆 me and my fetish for food 😆

Achha anyway, toh coming back to the update 😳

Abhi kissed her tears away...awwww! 😳 Cho chweet...I'm shocked it didn't end up in a I-don't-need-oxygen-I'm-too-busy-kissing situation 😆 😆 😆 Honu yeh tumhe kya kiya!!! 😲 🤣 AN ko ek bhi proper kiss nahi diya planetorium mein?! 😲 🤣

I love the last scene...I miss their hugs! 😭 She looked so small and cute in his arms...😳

Achha I'll grieve later. 😉

The diary par is my fav...and I'm again shocked that he's willing to wait even for 2 months! I was thinking he'd bring a marriage certificate for her to sign in the airport itself 😆 he sounded so impatient in her room after the date 😉 I'm glad she was in her senses...or else he was busy pulling at her dori 😲 and saying he was itching to do that ever since he saw it!!! 😲 Hawwww cheekiness, Modi! 😆 Loved it!

Okay so coming back to the diary part, yes Abhi is indeed the Prince Charming...his charm is utterly irresistible simply because its effortless on his part...I love how, even when unprepared, he manages to look good or say something nice that's not overly sappy. Thanks for retaining that essence in this FF, Honey. You did truly a wonderful job...portraying Abhi as he is isn't an easy task, but kudos to you for perfection! 👏

I love Abhi ....he is my world....I hope every girl in this world ends up with her Prince.

Doesn't every girl hope for an Abhi as her Prince these days...*sigh* He's not just Prince Charming, he's the God of effortless charm as well 😳 Perfect with all his imperfections! ⭐️

Thanks, Honu...for such a beautiful FF...I'm still wishing it had never ended, but I guess if you had written any more then you'd surely have gone mad 😆 We pester so much 😳

Now that this one is wrapped up, I'm gonna go pester you for THE LOVE THING! 😃

Awesome, awesome job, once again Honey...you're the BEST! 🤗

hehehe i know Honey n khush thinking what i m doing by quoting khush comment and bold some of lines as same things i liked to say to u honey as i very tired to write.

Khush is always good in commenting.So i m just coping her comment without her permission.😆

The way she comment i think is best. I m smiling with shyness that can't write😉

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#1127

aww this ended sooner than i thought honey! - but then, all had been falling in place and getting well since the last couple parts - despite the coup you pulled with the ICU scare 😆

a nice and cute fic - thanks for sharing, and completing it, despite the contest being long over!

cheers,
nj

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jibreen

@jsha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1128

hey honey that was simply beautiful 😃 i m sorry i m not so good in expressing my feelings in words so i just concluded it only in one sentence thnx for writing a masterpiece again again u done a superb job 😃love uuuuuuuuuuuu

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1129

@Shale...😆 thanks for commenting on my comment...lolz that sounded so weird! 🤣

Haan theek hai churao, churao...jitni marzi churao. Main kuchh nahi kahungi...mere comments par mera copyright nahi hai 😉

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1130

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
@Shale...😆 thanks for commenting on my comment...lolz that sounded so weird! 🤣

Haan theek hai churao, churao...jitni marzi churao. Main kuchh nahi kahungi...mere comments par mera copyright nahi hai 😉

tu hamesha sahi baat bol deti hain janeman😆