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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#241

no ways ruchs..continue it the way it is...as i know very well that at the end of the day mayur r gonna be together 4 sure..and i have this much trust on u...its completely offbeat and outstanding...and i m enjoying it..to be very honest..as the writer is none other than u..😊🤗plzzz continue it as u have planned 4..there must have some reason as to why he is negative..and with time..i m sure their relationship wil take a different turn..luv u..plzz dont change it at all

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Marium

@maloo19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#242

no dear plz dont do that

i just love dis ff

n i think its your awesum writting skill bcz of which ppl are not liking mayank character in dis ff besides ppl love him so much

n i think you had written dis neg character of mayank so beautifully

that ppl are actually hating it

i really love ur ff plz dont close it

Marium

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#243

hey Ruchiii plezzz continue this FF na !!

I really really love it
!!!
sachi mein !!!

this one of my fav FF!!!
plezzz do continue na !!!

-Lina-

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
NOTE -

heyy al !

wel...after readin ur response ...i culd feel ..u all are not happy with mayank in negative shade . with the story..he is gonna remain negative for 4-5 updates minimum...but if readers are not happy..then i can suspend this FF..

i need ur honest opinion guyz...i truely need it

-Ruchi

its ok ruchi
if u have a plan to turn his char into positive then its quite ok
we will wait for 4-5 update.
at the end i want to c mayur together with their happy life-thats all .

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affu123

@affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Its ok Mayank as -ve...but plz dont pair up Mayank with sum other gal and they break up coz of Nupur in the flashes 😛

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#246

ruchi sorry buddy little busy
bnut yaar i really love all the parts and honestly i love this maynk too .......
yaar this is different plz don't stop buddy plz plz
otherwise we will kill you

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#247

No please... Don't do anything to it... Mayank in negative role is mainly oen of the many reasons i love ur FF... It's not the typical plot.. Where mayank nd nupur both are positive they becum frnds nd then eventually married...

I love ur ff cuz it look so real... Nd i love mayank in a negative role becoz it makes it diffrent and im sure it's a good reason behind his attitude... So please keep it like tht alteast for a while... Nd mayank being rude,harsh s a very intresting twist becoz then it's intresting to read why mayank is like that & why do nupur hate him?? if he becomes nice soo fast then the story will loose it's intrest.. I wanna read on what happens and then maybe after tht he can become nice... Soo please continue the way ur wirting nd mayank in grey shade is okey...

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anju011

@anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#248

hey don't suspend this ff yaar.
we know its just for the time being that he's shwon as -ve. but he will change after that.
plz do continue this yaar.
i love to read it.

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#249

Ruchi dear ,Let me give honest opinion..If you had asked this qn in the start of FF, I would have told not to write it on Mayur,any other couple..bcs it hurts to see mayur like this,for whatever reason..

But then you started, filled us with suspense and now pls don't suspend this one.. I am sure that there will be a convincing reason (atleast from his side),even though it won't justify his actions.. Its better you continue this one and clear everything from past... If you stop it here, that negative mayank will remain in my mind and his ghost will haunt us ever ;)

So please- take 4 or 5 updates, and then clear off that negative side from him in a natural way ..I love your writing style.

Edited by Nirvrithi - 15 years ago