$$FrIeNdS FoReVeR$$(a sayank ss by dolly n me)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤗 🤗 NIKKI DI SURPRISE🤗 🤗
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Hi to all my loving buddies out there...🤗.guys for the first time something really big is gonna happen on this forum...bcoz today three hugeeee sayank fans have united to do something really BIG....just pray for us and urself too...😆.okii jokes i mean my pjs apart...guys for the first time i and my jaan dolly have planned to write a joint ss on our januable sayank and thats specially for hum sabki pyaari....our sweetheart...the janu of the forum....thats our nikki di.🤗 guys its a surprise for her as we all know that she is the biggest fan of sayank on this forum.😳
As for this ss guys...the entire credit goes to my jaan dolly...she is the one who has written this part for di...i just asked her once and she helped me out in a single go....and seriously i just cant thank her more for this....
she truely is my magical saviour...luv u sooooooooooooooo much jaan....luv u forever...muaaahhhh...!!!❤️


So here goes the first part guys....

$$FrIeNdS FoReVeR$$

(A Sayank ss)

Part-1


Mayank was sitting alone in the vast staffroom..
The room was empty yet still he could feel it overflowing with his pain.
He closed his eyes as a lone tear escaped through them .
Some one kept hand on his shoulder
He blinked n looked behind
There was no one there

M=nupur??
He got up n looked all along the length of the room
No one
M= nupur tum kahan ho? I miss u
Mein tumhare bina aur nahin jii sakta nupur
N=mayank.
Mayank froze.
N=mein tumhare saath hii hun mayank
Aur tumhe kya laga kk aaj k din mein tumhein akela chod dungi??
Nahin bachu itni asaani se apni is biwi se chutkara nahi milega
tumhein..
Mayank turned and soo nupur looking angelic sitting on the chair that he had occupied just few
Moments ago. He wanted to run n hug her
Yet he moved slowly afraid that if he showed much impatience, nupur would disappear again.
he knelt in front of her.
Looking towards her, and trying his best to memorize each n every little expression she gave
Mayank entwined his fingers in hers.
Nupur smiled ant yet her smile didn't quiet reach her eyes
She looked sad
N=I miss u mayank
M=I miss u too.tum vapas aa jao na nupur pls
N= maine kaha na mayank mein tumhare paas hun humeshan.
She placed her hand over his heart
N= mein humeshan tumhare dil k kareeb hun mayank.
Aur aaj k din to hum dono ek huye the
Aaj k din mein tumhe akela kaise chod sakti hun??
Scene 2
(by samrat)
S= shukla sir aapne mayank ko dekha??
Ss= kya hua mahodaya?? Aap itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe ho??
S= vo kuch nahin sir.bas aise hi mayank se kuch baat karni thi .aap jaante hain k vo kahan hain??
Ss= are mahodaya aap unse phire phone pe varta laap kyun nahi kar lete??
S= sir vo mera phone nahi utha raha
Ss= kyun?
S=shayad kahin rakh k bhul gaya hoga
Aap bas mujhe yeh bataiye k mayank kahan hai??
Ss=are mujhe kya pata samrat mahodaya.yahin kahin honge vo aap unhe khoj lijiye..
Ok I was really happy that in three years I had learned to control my anger
If that had not been the case I would have strangled shukla sir for sure.
Instead I just rolled my eyes at him n went from there.
Mayank aakhir gaya kahan???
Riya keh rahi thi ke vo staff room mein hai lekin vahan bhi vo hai nahi
Aakhir vo hai kahan??
He wasn't even picking my phone.
I knew he was angry at me. but he could have picked up the phone.
I was college's trustee after all
Ok ok samrat u need to control urself. why r u going so hyper huh??
But then may it was today's date that made me restless .
It was their marriage anniversary today
A day which
For the past three years had been the biggest torture for me..
But today it was different from the past three years
Today mayank was close to me
And that meant that today I could not leave him alone
Nupur would have never wanted him to be alone on this day..
But then did mayank want his company..
Well answer to this question was simple
NO
Mayank's hatred made me hurt all over
He had been my best friend for ages and then I destroyed his life. Completely.
Well whatever this wasn't a time to feel guity
I needed to find him n be with him
Even if all he did with me was shout at me
I deserved it

M=I miss u nupur..
Mayank's voice marked the end of my internal babble I looked around and so him standing in the library
He had sth in his hand ,which I couldn't see
As his back was turned to me.
I was happy for that
When mayank had spoken ,I had felt so much pain in his voice that it had been killing .
It would really be too much for me if I had to see those emotions on his face too..
He had a carat opened in front of him ,filled with number of damped looking library cards .
I knew what he was doing. He had given ria the task of clearing the library cards of the old students
He might be helping her with it
I entered the room.
There was no one there except him
Mayank sat on the chair near by to the desk.
Something about him striked me as odd.
He looked tired n his eyes were red
I had never seen him so pale before
It was as if the only colour on his face was the red of his eyes.
He was holding sth tightly in his hands.
I walked upto him n sat besides him
I waited for him to shout at me
To say that he didn't want me around .not today not ever
I waited for him to say that he hated me..
I waited
But nothing happened
He didn't even speak or show any reaction at my arrival.
I suddenly felt too worried
Was he alright ..
S=mayank??
He jerked and looked towards me shocked
It was as if till now he hadn't even realised that I was there sitting beside him..
M=tum tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??
S=mayank mein to bas
M=pls samrat mujhe akela chod do
Atleast aaj k din mein tumhari shakal bhi nahin dekhna chahtaa
S=mayank meri baat to sunno pls
M=kyun abhi kuch aur kehne aur karne ko reh gaya hai kya samrat
Leave me alone
He got up n started moving towards the lib door
But he looked imbalanced
I was really afraid for him now
Dunno why but suddenly he looked too vulnerable to me
Even his anger at me looked half hearted.
He looked well weak!!
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Thats it guys the first part. we hope u liked it...will wait for ur feedback😳
loads of love
😊 dolly and malika 😊


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sushups thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wah wah
kya baat hai
itni acchi jugalbandi ho aur ff accha na ho aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya
aur mera bolna bhi zaruri nahi hai ki mujhe yeh ff kitna pasand aya hai
u simply rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏
love sayank a lot too😳
plzz update soon will be waiting
love ya 🤗
muahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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shit sush tu first aa gayi
di where r u??
*edited?*
awwwwwwwwwwwww dii kaisa laga surprise???
i hope u would like it
mallu ne bahut mehnat ki hai ispe
infact saare ka saara concept bhi uska hai dii
nn well its a awsome concept diii
just wait for te next part ko mallu likhegi diii
n dii yeh mujhe humeshan faltu mein credit deti hai
maine sirf kuch likha jo usne plan kiya
n di aapke liye ek badiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sii hugggggy n kisssii
lov u diii u r the best n cutestttt😳
Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ya main first aa gayi hee hee
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Posted: 15 years ago
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terrific Part dears! I loved the way you started tellign it to be Nupur's death aniversary and how mayank imagined nupur. You both even described Samrat's feelings perfectly telling how devoid and empty he felt.. good work :)

Add me to your PM list :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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its lovely dolly and mallika....im waiting eagerly for the next part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks shrutii di , lipsi n sush for liking it
we r glad u liked itt
will update soon well mallu will update soon hee hee
nn nikki di cum soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yessss..............dekha....dolly....my guess ws rite.....i askd u na...is it a combined sayank ss by u n maalu....uff i am vry smaaaart na.....😎.....hehe....

this ws toooooooooooooo emotional part re.....i cried readin this.....coz truly this is my mayank....samrat....vich made my sayank...n aftr me....onli u two-dolly n maalu...hv undrstud them.....

i lovvvvvvvvvvd lovvvvvvvvvvvvd this part re....d way mayu imagind nups.....n usse zyada d way u xplaind mayu's condn...sam's monolgue...ughh..yes sab itna touchy tha ki i cried.....😭😭😭😭.....

plzzzzzzz dolly n maalu.....i want my sayank to reunite in this ff...in d mst emotional yet mst beautiful way.......

nw comin back to surprise........thnxxxxxxxx a zillion billion ton to u......u two r my mst fav & onli fav SAYANK story writers....coz its onli u two undrstnd d soul of sayank....aur tum dono ne aaj sirf mere liye yeh combind Sayank ss start kiya....n i cant tell u hw muccccccccch it touchd me...hw much its makin me happy..........this is truly d bestest gift u hv givn to this hardcore sayankian......🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.............donno hw to thank u enuf for both for this.......luv u both loads n loads......🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

WARNING...agar iss SS ka regular update mujhe nahi mila...toh tum dono ki khair nahi.....😆😆😆😆😉😉
Edited by nikki028 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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no di u didnt guess
aapke hazaar guesses mein se yeh ek tha
so u were surprised hee heeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
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owwwwwwww my two fav in one frame gosh love u yashi and dolly for this superb treat 🤗 and loved this first part can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm yashi and dolly 🤗

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