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Character Sketches:

Heer Maan:

Heer Maan: quite an attractive girl in a wholesome sort of way. Her light black hair which gave a browny-golden look in light were often in a pony tail that reached to mid-back. Heer Maan a sweet and a girl of pleasing appearance far waway from that Heer remains very sserious and often lost in sea of thoughts.

Prem Juneja:

Prem Juneja having a pleasing appearance & expression a cute handsome boy. His smile was to die for. He is an attractive guy. But along with that Prem's caring, gentle and sincere to his work. His parents had died when he was teenager-15yrs. He lived in India from then He was not interested in his dadzzz business at all so he got a job somewhere else

*****Heer Mann and Prem Juneja belong to well off families****

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part3-page19
love,
haju
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khajju
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Posted: 15 years ago
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elooooooooooooooooonnnnn

dosto
howz
mah and khajjuz
noh totally khajjuz kuzz idea was hersss
i just dissolved it up in words
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sohu, aishu, ayeshas(both ayesha i know) and nidhi tum laugon ne comment karna he warna my arrows are at you guys remember that
these are links to other premeer ffz i write
any1 interested in reading u can click n see
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice one, now I see some action too.
well done.👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice start
Look forward to reading more 😛
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Heer Maan lying in her bed thinking of her prince charming takes her teddy in to her chest and puts her chin over teddyz head Her hair cover her face. Her dreamy eyes turn full of desires.

Heer:thinking: ❤️He should be taller than me atleast four inches I m so tall thatz why. His hair should be like ebony and silky so that I ruffle em up. His smile it should be the one that makes me smile. It should be the best smile I can get. He should be handsome and even able of giving his hand to some needy. He should be caring loving, gentle

When I meet him I want him to be the one who will hold my hand and then move closer to me and

Just then her mom came and told heer to get up they were being late for the flight. Heer smilingly left with her mom dad.

In the long way flight from her hometown to Mumbai. India

Heer was just thinking and dreaming of the well off handsome guy😳 and after which she had a nap.

Heer had a whole week exploring the city with her cousin sister Maher. But then one day Heer drove off herself towards the megamall. She did a lot of shoping. Heer was driving off back home. She stopped her car at a road side and picked up Maher's call. Maher loved to chat so they both taked long. So when finally Heer was about to enter the car. A drunk up to the hilt arrived and held her hand Heer tried not to cry but anyhow she gained the courage and raising her sandal she whirled the heel over that person's foot. Heer pushed that person back and walked back to the edge of the road. Tears ran down her eyes as she closed her eyes. After few minutes likely 10minzz some1 came held her hand drawing her closeer and then hugged her up. She held the stranger's hands tightly and then turned around and hugged him back. Heer could not see the face that who was the person but still she at least fell that it was her savior. Heer tried to hide her inside that person. After a lot of crying Heer parted.

Heer sat in the strangers car and

Heer: Thanxxx

Prem: smiled hearing the sweet voice: Tum bolti b ho ronay k ilawa

Why don't u try for a hindi serial

U will turn famous for free

Heer: I m not intrested in this stupid fame kuzzz I live in Dubai. Not here.

Prem: Fine

Waisay tumhari car

Heer: Oh damn

I just 4got

Prem: My driver he has flew it home. Whatz your address here

Heer:heer cried:address????😭

Mujhay nahin pata I have been here for five days only.

Prem: phone number ya your own cell

Heer: saw her hands and remembered: who toh wahan neechay gir gaya

As Heer cried Prem pulled her a bit closer to him and curved his arm around her neck

Prem: Acha baba theek he. I will find u your family. But yeah dobn't start crying.😭

love,

haju n khajju

Edited by Hajz95 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lol...heer a cry baby..😆
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Originally posted by: blufate.14

lol...heer a cry baby..😆

yeah she isss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nyc 1 again
really awesme
do conti it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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akeli na bahar jaya karo....😆car😭address😭 phone😭

😆😆😆
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heer cry baby lolzz saas bahu lolzz continue both of u amazing

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