Sanraj Always Together 2 Epi 5 pg 23 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
you are very talented priyankapatwa👏... i really like your writting
although i haven't read the other parts i have to say that this is an amazing update👍🏼
keep up the great work...continue soon 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

awsome awsome sweety

i feel every part ...lonly sadness pain
and everything
u great writter ever
continu sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

ok but plz try to write soon ... plzzz 😉



Okk dufford :p
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bishop22

wowww

just loved it...
write the next part soonnn jaaneman




Jaanejaaa will surely write soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shabz50

Finally we get a update Priya glad to see you writing after ages please post next one soon




Shabz...thkss alot
glad u lyked it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eli0103197

Great, great part Priya, loved it!!! 😊




Thksss alot eli 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hina91

Ohhh finally u continued priya...great update n please post ur next part sooon :))




Hina...thkss aton...will try 2 post soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi10

you are very talented priyankapatwa👏... i really like your writting

although i haven't read the other parts i have to say that this is an amazing update👍🏼
keep up the great work...continue soon 😊




Mimi... thkss for ur compliment dear...:))
its nice 2 know u lyked it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love2211

awsome awsome sweety

i feel every part ...lonly sadness pain
and everything
u great writter ever
continu sooon




sweetypie luv u thksss u soo much
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Posted: 14 years ago


Episode 5


Why...?????


His heart ached listening 2 those 3words said by her "Just leave me"...He could feel d pain in her voice' she felt as if she was just some1 he didn't care for'...he had tym for each and every1 in dis world but not her'...she couldn't understand why did she love him so much?...why did she care for some1 who didn't care for her?...why did he luv hurting her?...and still she loved him from d bottom of her heart no matter watever he does...no matter how much ever he hurt her...how much ever he leave her alone for months for his work...she still couldn't stop her from luving this man...why d hell couldn't she stop herself frm loving him...why??????

She wanted 2 stop...she wanted 2 tell him that she hated him even though it wasn't true''she wanted 2 do d same he did with her'..even though she knew she could never do so''bec just by seein ghis face she would forget everything''but not this tym she promised...she wont talk 2 him...she wont listen 2 any of his excuse...not now not ever...because she knew if she did she will again loose herself in him...he always had d power 2do so,,,,,,

Wen she heard him breathing...d room was still quite...she felt irritated wat was he waiting for...?????...wen d door knocked and santu asked in clam voice "who's der...kaun hai?"...she still didn't even looked at him'..

Champa:malkin Baa aap ko aur malik ko niche khaana khane ke liye bolaa rahi hai''

Before Santu could reply Dm replied her "Champakali we are coming"...Santu frowned under her breath...she wasn't going down not at any cost...who d hell was he 2 decide''she pressed her face more in his plam...wat did he think was she her puppet dat she was going 2 listen 2 him all d tym...no way not dis tym she said 2 herself...he could leave now for U.S if he wanted...why 2 wait for for some hours at home...was he thinking that all d tym he has got right 2 play with her emotions...she did care n weather he was der nor not...when she knew watever she say wont make any difference...bec she was carving for him...she was soo desperate 2 see him n be in his arms'''2 tell him dat he cant leave her yet again 2 live alone...

She sighed n digged her nails in her hair...wen he said finally "dis is wat I hate abt u...bitting ur lips wenever u r angry"...,. he frowned.

Hope u all lyked it''

Thks a lot for giving ur preciuos tym'

Luv u all''muahhh'..

Edited by priyankapatwa - 14 years ago

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