I am always yours- Maneet ff-Note pg 10 (7/5)

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Hi guys,
Some of you may know me from my ffs on AR like forbidden love or taken over by love. In fact this ff, I am always yours, was originally based on AR. However, due to what has happened in DMG with AR, I could not bear to continue writing about them anymore. It hurt too much😭..I had actually given up on ffs since I had lost my inspiration. Then a very loyal reader of mine 'Sweet_Ashum' convinced me to convert the I am always yours ff into a Maneet ff and continue with it as she and I are both crazy about them (thanx hon🤗)..and since I have been thinkins about writing a ff on Maneet and had not yet found a good storyline, I thought this story would really suit the intensity of Maan and the innocence of Geet. So here I am, writing a story about how Maan would always be Geet's😳.
Just a little note about the characters of the ff, since there are not a lot of nice ppl in Geet😆, I had to turn Dev and Naintara to nice human beings in this story. Sasha will of course remain evil.
I hope you will love this story about Maneet as you have loved my AR ffs. And to anyone wondering about updates on my AR ffs, sorry guys, DMG is a closed chapter for me now. I don't even watch old videos of AR anymore..And I think my ffs were at a good final point, so just think of those as THE END.
And to those who have no t yet read my stories before, I hope you'll give my ff a chance and see if it strikes a cord within you😊. So here goes.
part 1- pg 1
part 2- pg 2
part 3- pg 6
Part 1
It couldn't be her!
Maan told his breath to calm down while he stared in disbelief at the figure standing some 100 feet away from him. She was staring off into the ocean while the waves tickled her legs. The darkness of the night must be playing tricks on him. But he knew that height, those curves and those luxrious waves of long tresses could belong to only one person. A person who had haunted his dreams for the past 2 years. He glanced around at the people, his friends, who were sitting around the bonfire, all ready for a night full of fun and masti at the beach. There were no one else except his friends at the beach. The hotel they were staying at had just opened and didn't have any guests except for their group. At least that's what he'd been led to believe. If that was the case, then what was SHE doing here?
"Hey, who's that?" he asked the gang trying to unravel the mystery. The gang consisted of him, Dev, Gurwinder, Naintara and Rajji and Sasha. They had all
gotten to know each other about a year ago at a French language training workshop. They were a mix of odd personalities, but complimented each other very well. Pinky, who was Naintara's cousin from Canada, in India for a month's vacation, had tagged along for the trip to Goa. He had only just been introduced to her as he had just arrived with Sasha. At his question, everyone looked at the direction that he was pointing out. The surprise that he'd experienced wasn't showing on their faces, which meant that they knew her. Maan's heart skipped a beat waiting for answer. Could it be HER?
Pinky answered. "Oh, that's my friend from Canada, Geet. We're both in India for vacation. I guess you didn't meet her since you just came"
Maan could feel his heart drop to his stomach. IT WAS HER! God, how long!how long had he been wanting to see her again! Ever since she'd left him, all he'd wanted to do was to run after her and ask her why she'd left him like that. Ask her how could she tell him that she didn't love him. But she'd never given
him the chance. Geet had simply disappeared from his life, never to be heard of again. That was, until now. And all the old feelings, feelings that he had closested deep inside his heart swam to the surface again. The disbelief, the anger, the hurt and the pain, but most of all, the LOVE were engulfing him and chocking him.
"Then what is she doing there instead of here?" Sasha asked, feeling slight pangs of dislike for the woman. She had not liked the way that Maan had stared at the faraway figure in white. She moved closer to him and put her hand on his arm. Maan and Sasha weren't a couple yet, but she knew it was only sometime. He knew she liked him and he hadn't discouraged her from getting closer to him in a more than friendly way.
"Oh, she just wanted to play in the water. Geet is like that. She likes nature more than people." Pinky babbled on enthusiastically.
Maan could feel a moment of nostalgia. Yes, Geet was like that. She noticed clouds in the sky or the flowers in the garden more than the people around her. It had been a quality Maan, being the hardcore businessman, had admired. He forced himself back to the present. He could see that his interest in her had aroused the curiosity of his friends. And he didn't want for them to suspect anything. They all knew that he had been hurt in the past. But they had no idea about who the girl was or what had really happened. Maan changed the subject and everything returned to normal. They sat around the fire and talked and laughed about their lives, the politics, the weather and just about everything under the sun. They were always like that. That's why Maan liked this particular group of friends. They were mature enough but also knew how to have fun. They could laugh at themselves and make jokes and nobody would take offense. And he knew that Sasha was interested in him as more than a friend. She was a nice enough girl and he had no particular dislike of her. Which was why he hadn't brushed off her attempts at getting closer to him, as he had done with countless other girls after Geet had left him. Maybe he had given up on finding Geet again. But look at the hand of destiny. Just when he was thinking about moving on, destiny brings her into his life again.
Maan waited until the group was suitably distracted before he made his move. Geet still hadn't returned from her tryst with the waves and Maan itched to run to her. But at the same time, he didn't want her disappearing again. He needed to make his way slowly. The gang had started anatakshari and Maan excused himself under the pretext of going to the washroom. He went towards the hotel and took a detour to where Geet stood. With every step he took, his heartbeat increased uncontrollably. He could feel his breathing becoming erratic and he prayed for strength to hold strong when he faced her. Geet stood, her hands spread out as if bathing in the moonlight, her face serene with a slight smile playing on her lips.
"Geet," he whispered huskily standing to her side, almost afraid to break the trance that she was in. Maan could see the smile freeze on her face at the
sound of his voice.
She heard that voice as if from afar. MAAN??? It couldn't be!!! She could feel disbelief wash all over her. No, It wasn't possible. Geet couldn't believe that he could be HERE, of all the places. But she couldn't mistake the deep timber of that husky voice. God please, make this a dream! she prayed while she willed herself to face him again. Geet, be strong. You can do it, her mind told her. But her heart told another story. All it wanted to do was run and hide from his deep brown eyes, which she knew would gaze at her intensely, melting all her resistance. It had always been like that. He would look at her and she would melt, which was why she'd never told him goodbye. She had simply disappeared from his life, leaving only a letter.
"Geet," he whispered again, patiently waiting for her to turn to him. She was even more beautiful than he could remember. The past two years had been good to her, moonlight emphasizing her feminine curves and giving a sparkle to her eyes. This was a moment that he had waited for since the moment she had left him. If he could, he would freeze time and capture the moment in his heart. Maan could see her slowly closing her eyes and opening them again. Good! that meant she was affected by this as much as he was. She slowly turned to face him and Maan's breathing intensified again.
"Maan," she uttered expressionlessly. Her eyes belying the void of emotion in her voice. Oh yes. She was affected at this chance meeting as much as he was. But the lack of emotion in her voice angered him. How dare she say his name as if he had never meant anything to her!
"Where have you been?" Tryng to get one up on her, Maan too asked nonchalantly as if he wasn't really angry at her. As if he was talking to a stranger when all he wanted to do was put her over his shoulder and carry her away with him forever. Or shake her and kiss her senseless until she begged for mercy.
Geet knew the wealth of emotion hiding in his words. She had always been able to guess exactly what he was thinking. And she had been the person that he had shared all his thoughts and dreams with. Geet had been his lover as well as his best friend. She knew that he was hanging on to his control only by a thread. But she also knew that if she gave in now, all that she had worked for in the past two years would be in vain. She had left him for his own good. For his future. And if she give into those breathtaking eyes now, she'd only ruin his life. Geet decided at that moment to act indifferent to him. He would grab the opportunity if she appeared weak even for a moment.
"Oh, just here and there you know," she answered acting for all purposes and intents as if he'd asked how the weather was. Maan started angrily at her
response. He directed his lethal gaze on her. Maan's eyes poured into her soul, locking her in an embrace that she couldn't struggle out of.
"Hey Maan, there you are. I thought you went to the washroom." a chirpy female voice shook them out of their reverie. Geet broke away from his eyes to take in a girl of about her age angling close to Maan. She put her hand on his arm as if SHE had a claim on him and Geet had a violent urge to scratch the girl's eyes out.
"Oh, hi Sasha. Yea I did go to the washroom but I saw Geet when I was coming back. Just wanted to say hi and welcome to the group." Maan said looking at Sasha with a smile. Geet looked up at Maan in surprise. Which group was he talking about? And why did he act like as if she was a stranger?
"Oh that's nice of you. I was just thinking that too since we were all sitting there and Geet was out here alone." Sasha said with a nod at the gang sitting
faraway around the fire.
It couldn't be!! Please God, please tell me that Maan and Sasha weren't part of the group that she would be spending the week with!!!!Geet prayed. It simply wasn't possible. How could God be so cruel with her? She had just known it was a mistake to come to India with Pinky. But when Pinky had invited her, she simply couldn't have said no. Pinky was getting married to Adi in a month or so. An arranged marriage. She had wanted a last
chance at freedom and Geet hadn't the heart to refuse her. Pinky had been her salvation during her dark times and Geet considered Pinky her best friend. But never again would she let Pinky's puppy dog eyes lead her astray.
"Hi Geet. We saw you before and I wanted until you came back to the bonfire to say hi. But I guess you really couldn't tear youself away from the salt
water," Sasha said jokingly but Geet could feel undercurrents of sarcasm behind her words as if belittling Geet for playing with the waves. So, Sasha didn't like her. But what had she done to her? Geet didn't even know Sasha had existed before this moment. However, she didn't want to make a huge deal out of it. Therefore, she decided to act indifferent.
"Hi Sasha. It's very nice to meet you. But I guess we should go back now. Pinky must be waiting for me," Geet made her escape before either of them had a chance to complain. Geet really did not want to be in their company, especially when Sasha was all over Maan. Why wasn't he even taking her hand off him!!!!!!??? she thought angrily as she stalked away from there.
Maan stared after Geet as she walked away. He didn't try to pursue her. He had a week to find out exactly what had happened two years ago and plan his strategy to get her back. Because he knew. There was no chance in hell that he'd lose her again!
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so, that was part 1. I'll convert the other parts soon too (2 more) and upload them. I have been working on a new chapter as well..So, lemme know how you guys liked it😳...
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R-O-C-K-I-N-G!!! 😃 Update soon dear!
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hey hon🤗..good to see you too!!!!!!😳 and I am head over heels in love with Maan n Maneet..I never thought that I could like someone so much after AR. But Maneet is totally getting there😛..N I'm just gonna post the next part..
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Hey guys..😃

I am so glad that you like the ff so far. Trust me it only gets better..:) I am a total M & B n fairytales fan. So while my stories have twists n turns, they ALWAYS have happy endings....And do let me know if you want me to pm you. I'll make a list. And Its good to see some old faces too..really happy😳...so here goes part 2.
Part 2
Geet walked back to the gang as fast as her feet would carry her. The shock of meeting Maan, on top of having a girl all over him was just too much to take. But why are you upset Geet? Didn't you leave him so he could be happy with someone else? her mind mocked her. Yes she did, but she never thought that she'd have to see it with her own eyes. The pain of seeing him with someone else had confirmed one thing. She still loved him as much as she had the day she left him. But she would never let him know. Geet had said in the farewell letter that she had never loved him, and that was the stance that she would take. God, why was life so difficult? Geet reached the fire and composed herself before anyone questioned her sudden entry. She sat by Pinky after giving everyone a smile.
"You're back, finally. You were missing out all the fun here Geet." Pinky said.
"Yea I know. But it's ok Pinky. Let her have fun with the waves as much as she wants, after all when she goes back, what will she play with? There are no
oceans in the province of the big cold country you guys live in!!!" Naintara teased.
"HEY! For your information, we have 5 HUGE lakes!!! They are as big as you could possibly want any ocean to be" Pinky defended the country she had grown up in.
"Sure sure, but it's still a lake! No ocean." Naintara poked her tongue at Pinky and Geet could see that Pinky was getting worked up over it. It was always
like this, Pinky and Naintara were as close as sisters. And what was sisterly love without some nokh-jokh. And they sure had this in abundance.
"Listen you!.." Pinky bit out but Geet quickly interrupted her. She didn't want World War III to start.
"Ok ok guys. That's enough. I love both countries, so stop it you two!" Geet said holding her hands out in peace.
"So, you're from Canada," she suddenly heard Maan say. Geet shot her head up in the direction of his voice. When had they come back? Walking back to the fire, Maan and Sasha settled down across from her. Maan's eyes pierced through her. So Canada was where you were hiding from me, his eyes seemed to say. Geet turned her gaze away from him.
"yea," she answered as she had no other choice. Everyone seemed to be waiting for her answer.
"Did you go there recently or have you always lived there?" Maan continued ruthlessly. Geet sighed in helplessness. Maan you know very well that I went there recently! Why are you torturing me??? her mind screamed. She braved a glance at him and he raised his eyebrow in challenge. The atmosphere tensed with something unknown and Geet could see that even the gang could feel the tension. It was his voice. The way that he asked the question made it seem like much more than a simple question. Geet needed to bring everything back to normal. What could she do? Idea!
"Ah..I just went there recently. Anyways, guys, since all of us are here now, why don't we play a game??" Geet quickly laid out her idea. And everyone agreed excitedly. phew.
"So what should we play?" Rajji asked.
"Truth or Dare." Maan suggested in a stark voice. His voice made Geet tremble, with fear or feeling, she couldn't decide. And she had the premonition that playing this game could be injurious to her heart. Her knowledge of Maan screamed that he would not stop until he got every scrap of truth out of her. But to her misfortune, everyone jumped at the idea.
"I'll go first," Dev spun the bottle. It stopped on him and Gurwinder, with the open end pointing at Gurwinder.
"Truth or dare Guru? Dev asked, mischief prominent in his eyes.
Never one to back down from danger, Gurwinder answered. "Dare." Everyone laughed at the way Dev stood straight and rubbed his hands together with an evil grin.
"Ok Guru, I dare you to tell Rajji about how you really feel!"
Gurwinder's shocked face and Rajji's shy one at the dare told Geet that those two really liked each other. And the way everyone looked on gleefully at Gurwinder, waiting for him to complete the dare told her that everyone else knew about it too.
Maan looked happily at Gurwinder who was taking deep breaths to calm himself down and find the courage to complete his dare. He winked at Dev, who winked in return. Finally!!! Gurwinder and Rajji had liked each other from the moment they had met. But the coward that Gurwinder was, he had never confessed his love. Even when EVERYONE had given them hints about it, the two idiots had done nothing about it.
"So Guru, we're waiting," Sasha teased with a giggle.
And finally, as if making a momentous decision, Gurwinder nodded his head and stood up. He went to where Rajji was sitting down and grabbed her hand. Everyone catcalled and whistled at his behaviour. Geet, too, joined in the laughter, smiling at the way Rajji's face turned as red as tomatoes. Gurwinder, probably understanding professing his love infront of his rowdy friends would ensure life-long teasing helped Rajji stand up and started walking away from the fire.
"Oye hello! Where are you going?" Naintara yelled out. Everyone protested at Gurwinder's actions.
"Guys, you didn't really think that I was gonna confess in front of all you idiots, now did you??" Gurwinder winked at them as the couple tread towards the ocean.
Geet and the others watched smiling as the couple stopped near the edge of the beach. They saw that Gurwinder got down with a hand on his heart and mouthed the words that had been in his heart since he first laid eyes on her. Even though, they couldn't see Rajji's expressions, the way she jumped on Gurwinder after he got up, sure told them that she was as ecstatic about it as they were. The gang clapped and laughed at the happy couple when they returned after sharing an emotional hug. They congratulated Gurwinder and Rajji on their happiness with lots of hugs. Then they all sat down once again, and resumed the game.
"Well, that went well. Thanks guys. Now it's my turn." Gurwinder spun the bottle with a huge smile on his face. Rajji, now sitting next to him, couldn't hide her happiness either. Geet's heart smiled to see such joy being bestowed upon them. At least God united some couples.
The bottle stopped on Naintara and Pinky, pointing at Pinky. "Pinky, truth or dare?" Naintara asked her.
"Truth," Pinky said with a smile. Nope, she wasn't the bravest person in the world.
"OK, why are you marrying Adi?" Naintara asked and Pinki's face fell at the question.
It was a question that Geet too had asked, but had gotten no reply. Pinki was the kind of girl who believed in fairy tales and prince charming. She waited for her one true love to come and whisk her away. Therefore, her acceptance of an arranged marriage was baffling. And looking at the shuttered expression on her face, Geet knew that they won't get the answer today either.
"Oh just, momma and papa asked me. I couldn't say No you know. Parental emotional blackmail," Pinki answered with a fake smile, which was recognized only by Naintara and Geet. The others, satisfied with the answer nodded their heads. They all had known some form of emotional blackmail from parents at some point or the other. Pinki taking advantage of the opportunity, quickly spun the bottle again.
And to Geet's dismay, it ended up on her and Maan with the bottle pointing towards her. Her breath quickened as she waited for the axe to fall. She clutched on to her dress nervously waiting for Maan's question. Her sweating palms and pounding heart asked only one question. God, how could you?
Maan stood up straight at the sudden opportunity. Thank you God! It seemed as if God was finally on his side after two long years of suffering,
"Truth or Dare Geet?" he raised his eyebrow at her again.
It was a habit of his that she had loved immensely before. In the olden days, she would kiss his brow whenever he had raised it at her. But at the moment, it reminded her of exactly why he was known as a ruthless businessman. His sharp gaze was piercing in to her soul challenging her to pick dare, telling her that if she picked truth he was going to ask the question she dreaded the most. The tension they had created again could be cut with a knife. Geet knew that everyone was curious at their behaviour even though the gang had no idea why they were since Maan and Geet weren't doing anything out of ordinary. It was the feelings Geet, her mind told her. It was the feelings you both share. You couldn't hide your love before when you were together and you can't hide it now. Geet's breathing deepened as she weighted her answer. Should she choose truth or dare? If she picked dare, he'd know that she's running scared and thus might suggest something outrageous. But if she picked truth, he might ask why she left him!
Maan could see the play of emotions on her face as she struggled to reach a decision. He knew exactly what she was thinking. He knew she feared that he might ask why she'd left him. But of course, he had no such intentions, at least not right now. That was a question he'd ask when they were all alone, not surrounded by this many people. Because if he wasn't satisfied with her answer, he wouldn't be responsible for his actions. No, there was another question that was swimming in his mind. As firmness dawned on her face, Maan could see that she had reached a decision.
"Truth!" Geet decided, the desire to show him that he didn't affect her overriding her fear. But her heartbeat increased in anticipation of his query.
"OK Geet..hmm" Maan pretended to think and Geet could feel her blood pressure riding up.
"Have you ever been in love?" he smirked.
WHAT? Geet opened her eyes wide in surprise to ensure that Maan had indeed asked this question. But this was even worse than the question she had anticipated. She looked up at Maan's face and his eyes challenged her to tell the truth.
Resisting his intoxicating eyes, she looked away and replied, "NO."
Then Geet quickly spun the bottle without giving him a chance to protest.
Maan was absolutely LIVID!! He curled his fists in anger. How dare she!!!! Maan remembered every instant she had whispered or screamed her love for him! How dare she say no and deny all those wonderful moments they had spent together! He longed to reach over and strangle her until she screamed out her love for him again. Geet how could you??? he asked her silently, his heart hurting.
While Maan was lost in his anger and pain, the bottle stopped spinning. It stopped on Maan and Sasha, pointing towards Maan. Sasha, who had been quietly observing Geet and Maan with distaste jumped at the opportunity this provided. Leaning towards him, she asked.
"Truth or dare Maan?"
"Truth" Maan didn't really care at this moment. All he could think of was Geet's denial. Why was she denying her love for him?
"Ok Maan..hmm..tell me, what kind of a girl do you like. Your dream girl, you know..?"
The gang, knowing Sasha's infatuation with Maan, snickered behind their hands. Geet stood straight waiting for him to reply. SHE had been his dream girl once. And Maan had told she'd always remain so. Would he keep to his promise?
Maan was surprised at the question. The first thing he did when he heard it was to look at Geet. From the moment he had seen her, SHE had been his dream girl and would forever remain so. But looking at the question in her eyes, he had a sudden urge to hurt her as much as she'd hurt him a couple of minutes ago! He looked at an eager Sasha waiting for his answer. He leaned in closer to her and replied.
"My dream girl..hmm..someone exactly like you Sasha," he winked at her. While Sasha was simpering with excitement, Maan looked over at Geet to garner her reaction.
Geet closed her eyes in pain. Well, what did you expect Geet! He'd always love you even after you left him like that??? You are being delusional if you think he still feels the same way as he did once before, her mind mocked her. Suddenly she felt it hard to breathe. She needed to get out of there. Geet swiftly got up, surprising everyone.
"What's wrong Geet?" Pinki asked looking up at her.
"Pinky. It's late. I think I'm gonna turn in now. Good night guys. See you tomorrow." Geet quickly made her escape leaving everyone to stare after her.
AGAIN! She had run from him again, Maan thought with anger. And the satisfaction he'd thought he'd feel at hurting her was nowhere in sight. Maan you idiot! Why did you have to hurt her? He should apologize. Yes he should. But just not yet. He'd do it when they went back to the hotel.
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