when u say nothin at all(mayur ff)NOTE-PG 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey pooja...
amazing concept! pls add me in ur pm list!
cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
MIND BLOWING concept yaar i loved it plz cont writing and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINKI

superb

mindblowing concept
wow
first ff me solid concept
and yaa pls pls pls
update soon
waiting to read further




thanx lot
ill update soon mostly in 2 days

Edited by koolwaters_poo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mwwwahhhhhhh
lovely pooja its to cutee
plzz updte soon
where is mayanks sekch????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: waterbaby_tanu

mwwwahhhhhhh

lovely pooja its to cutee
plzz updte soon
where is mayanks sekch????


thanx sooooooooooo much tanu😃 n time aane par u'll get mayank's sketch😉 for now nupur se kam chala le 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolwaters_poo


thanx sooooooooooo much tanu😃 n time aane par u'll get mayank's sketch😉 for now nupur se kam chala le 😆

thik hai to phir mmein chala lungii
aur koi option hi nahi choda tumne😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first of all guys a big big thank you for likin my ff 😊n a bigger sory coz i dint reply to each one bt nw onwards ill definately reply
the next part is a lil borin but plzz bare wid me as this is jus the begini picture to abhi baki hai mere dost


Guys before u read I noe that yeh part ke liye mujhe shayad sade hua tomatoes milenge bt trust me this is only the beginning .

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Part 1


When you are in love you can't
fall asleep because reality is
better than your dreams.

The same was with nupur, living in her dream land though the dream land had its share of monsters but that gave nupur no reason to accept defeat .An absolute headstrong girl, speaks her heart out, very optimistic, practical n very ambitious.

She studies in excel college in Mumbai. Her frns list is pretty long considering her fun loving nature but there were frns she considered way tooooooo special .Samrat who also happens childhood buddy n lives in the adjacent bungalow he is two yrs younger to her by 2 yrs n happens to be in the same college obviously as a junior

Their gang in college was the perfect gang .The perfect blend of shy dia, cool ranvijay, sexy sheena, naughty samrat, funny benji, nerd uday and nupur

Dai n uday were her cousins n she stayed with them (dia n benji are samrats age n uday, RV n sheena are as old as nupur)

Though they all were best of friends ,samrat n rv were the two ppl who were very close to nupur. They felt that they knew her inside out but girls toooo complicated to understand n with the girl being nupur was like a cherry on the cake. They were best frnds.

Though nupur was an extrovert she did not like telling her actual feelings to any one. She kept it all inside like treasure in the chest, one of which was the fact that she liked RV .yes she liked him a lot may be she herself was nt too sure abt it. Nupur liked RV, the credit goes to sheena(hang on guys don't remove ur chaku n talwar to kill sheena in fact here is where the story gets a l'il complicated)

Sheena n nupur have been together since the first day of college, since then they have not just been like frns but also sisters. There was nothing in sheene's life that nupur dint know of.

Sheena was madly in love with RV but not many aware of this .24x7 all that sheena did was talk about RV .She knew RV before college ,they were in the same school infact the only reason she joined excel was coz RV joined eccel.

Nupur n RV were close frnds more over sheena kept on talking to nupur abt him. The day sheena told nupur abt her crush on RV she was furious not only coz she happened to like the same guy as her frns but also coz sheena took such an important decision of her life(her currier) based on suthing as lame as puppy love.

N: girl u got to be kiddin. U've actually put ur future to a risk coz u like a guy who might not even like u back!!

S: I noe nupur but I think that its worth it I relly love him in fact(hesitantly) there is something I got to tell u

N: go on

S: u remember RV told us that he'll be going to the states after this term?

N:yeha(getin a little suspicious)

S:I've applied for the same university n mostly I am through I too will be leaving after this term

N: (shocked) why dint u tell me earlier? But i hope u knw wat ur doing. But that is gud university I knw that u'll do gud. But'.

S: nupur relax I'll be fine n I don't knw wat I am doin is right or wrong but all I want is ur support

N: n u knw that I'll always support u come wat may june n july

m sooo gonna miss u (hugging her)

S: thanx m gonna miss u too

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That night at the bhushan house

nupur was in her room writing her diary, there were several questions coming to her mind. She kept on asking her self as why did she not fee bad that she n her frnd liked the same guy infact when sheena told her the whole story her felt bad that sheena her risked her currier. That's when she came to the conclusion that this thing she had for RV was nothing but infatuation . She was pretty good at self analysis. She like RV as a frnd but when sheena went on on of how good he was that's when this infatuation come into the picture. It happens some times u tend to like the person u often hear abt or talk abt. Now she was positive abt her conclusion

PRECAP:

DIA: nupur jaldi chalo..college jana hai uday ko pick karne n then airport bhi to jana hai we'll get late jaldiiiiii u knw naa she hates to wait outside the airport


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SAMRAT: haan maa don't worry . I remember that I have to go to pick bhai. After all I'll be seein him after sooooo long



PS: PLZZZ LEAVE A COMMENT n press the "LIKE" tab

hope u'll like it i noe u'll r wondering ki yeh mayank kaha hai right but have patience .mayank to hamara hero hai sooooo .......bas bas ab aur nahi bata sakti n i'll try to give the next update as soon as possible bt first i need a lot of comments frm u guys


love u'll

pooja😉




Edited by koolwaters_poo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy...
nice concept...
plzzz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
nice part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
awesome update dear plzz cont soon with long part 😊 thnx 4 d pm

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