The Hard Reality of Life (AR FF)Note - page 122 - Page 81

Originally posted by: hunder

shin sirf like button hi press karogi ya comment bhi karogi😉

Don't worry abhi k liye like button se kaam chalau. Ab tumne update karne pe time lagaya hai to hum bi comment karne pe time lagayenge 😉😛

hi PJ i think PJ is good
kam akal nahii kahoo gi caz kam akal hoti tu itna dhamakedaar FF nahi likhti.
the part is very nice
Armaan: oh that's great, congrats for ur red belt but u know u are talking to a black belt kid.(yaar yeah kkon se angle se kid lagta hai ager kid aise hai tu hunk kis ko kehte hai)
yaar arman is so phekko (Armaan: u know Jackie Chang was my student and I taught him everything he knows.)
ager jackie chang is ka student tha tu brusli koon tha phir.
or haan late reply kar rahi ho kya karo yaar shadi season chal raha tu busy busy thi (I HATE SHADI).
tum mujhey (TUBELIGHT or KITTI )bula sakti ho mere husbad mujhey pyar se (TUBELIGHT) bulate hai. meri daughter usko jab mera naam call karna nahi aata tha tab woh mujhey KITTI bulati thi. so ur choice .
waise ek baat hai tumhara FF sani character ke bina kuch incomplete lagta hai so us ko thora sa bhi add kya karo apne FF mein tumhare FF ki 50% jaan hai woh.
abay yaar yeah tumhare FF ki ridz kis pe gai hai pecha hi nahi chorti or yeah arman bhi naan maze bhi aa raha woh nawab ko bhi lakkain bhav bhi khana hai .
waise u r right ridz ne scale jaise stright sharif arman ko jalebi jaisa seeda kar diya hai. woh kehte hai naan (kharbooze ko dekh kar kharbooza rang pakarta hai) tu arman ji bhi ridz ke rang pakkar rahay hai but bechare ko pata hi nahi us ke upper bhi filert ka rang char gaya hai.
ab humari masti or humare kaarnaame tu yaar chalo basic basic bata deti ho jo hum log aksar karte the like coloney ke watchmaan ko usi ke cottage mein lock kar dete the.
every afternoon cricket khel kar logo ki neend haram karna kisi window pe lag jay tu (4 run means chooka) ager gate pe lage tu (6 runs chekka).
humare uncle ka garden se fruite chori karte the .
ek baar aisa howa tha ke (dog) kutte peche par gey the wow woh din tu mein kabhi nahi bhol sakti OH GOD bhag bhag kar halath buri ho gai thi meri life bhayanak din mein se ek us ke baad tu kaan pakre ke ab kabhi uncle ke garden mein chori karne nahi jay gey. waise chori kar ke khane mein itna maza aata hai naan ke itna tu plate mein saja sajya mil jay tu bhi nahi aata kya karein chori ka khud ki jaan mehnat ka hota hai naan waise humare uncle hum logo bhut acche se jaante the is liye tu DOG pale the phir.
hum log humare tuttion ke sir ko bhut tang karte the college ke moniter ki baat nah sunna princi or prof ko topi dena .
mummy ko bhut tang karte the .
humara sab se sab se favourite mein favourite kaam spy jasoosi karna humare area mein kis ka affair kis ke saath chal raha kis ka brerak up howa . but hum log um ko kabhi tang nahi karte the bus sirf jasoosi karte the. hum log humare jo engaged cousin the un ki chori chori sari baatein sunte the phir un ko blackmail karte the like kabhi un logo se hotel ya tu ice cream ki demand karna aisa.
mein 1990 mein (INDIA) aaye thi tab hum log humere village gey the waha (pecock) moor or (monkey) bander bhut aate the
or humare village mein gas timming se aata tha tab hum ne i mean or my lit bro hum dono ne sara khana jo bana tha humari nani banati gai or hum (monkey) bander ko khila khila kar aate gey and the end bander khush or hum dono ki shamat aa gai bhooka marna para or upper se daant kha kha kar peet bharna para woh alag. yaar or bhi bhut kuch phir kabhi bataoo gi.
abhi i m going .
or haan tum dosro key liye writter nah sahi mere liye tu mazak mein hi sahi but best writter ho or mein apple polish nahi kar rahi sahi keh rahi ho but ab yeah sun kar hawa mein mat urna warna tumhare pocket mein mujhe change rekhna parae ga.
hey ek or baat tum shar-shaiyri ka use karti ho ager us mein kuch words aise hai jo urdu ke hai ager mein un ko sahi kar ke tumhein bataoo tu tum mind tu nahi karo gi like
(Teri Zustzo main humne Sitaron ko dekha!)
(Teri justjo main humne Sitaron ko dekha!)
plz mind mat karna tum bhut accha lakhti ho or mein chahti ko ke or bhi accha lokhoo bus tumhari help karne ki koshish kar rahi thi i know hindi or urdu mein thora diff hai bus mujhe laga ke mein bata do tu meine bata diya plz mind mat karna.

finally read both 7 and 8....good parts...i wanted ridhima to shut up too..i am TEAM ARMAAN! lol

Hey bro,
How r u?
I read the part and truly loved it.
But truly let me say Ridhima is really chipku, hehe, Armaan ko chain ki saans bhi nahi lene de rahi thi... Poor Armaan but then again he was liking her company.

Sid is a kamina, Vinz ko phsa raha hai and then Ridhima ke saath set hona chahta hai but I am sure ke Vinz usse line per le aayegi.

Nattu ois too much, kissi ko to chor do hum single girls ke liye, sab ke peeche par jaati hai Lolz... hehe...

Justin bechare Shin ko like karta hai par woh usse attention hi nahi deti but I know you must have planned something for the future.

And my poor Sani, Arun completely ignores so bad of him but then I think he should be the one for her. Sani's true love.

I think yeh kafi long comment that, so now continue soon and thanks a ton for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

res! I shall edit after saturday or on saturday! exams!! also I've to read d whole FF!:) plz check ur scrap nd testi!

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YAY part 8 is updated. Chalo itna din intajaar karwaya ab comment bi kar lete hai.😊 Well I must tell ki the part was worth waiting; it really was. 😃 I already told u earlier too, this FF is just mind-blowing and the more you read the part's you just keep falling in love with the story over and over again. (Well for the least, I do). 😳 Could I expect something more justice in this part? NO WAY. This part simply rocked it on its own. idk who wrote it but absolutely a great job done by the writer. 😆 Agar wo writer Liner hai na ? Then am proud that I "once upon a time" gave him Mahabharat lessons. 🤣 (khudh credit lene mai kya jata hai right) Kk enough of that, coming to the part.

Awww I really feel bad for armaan you know. Bichara soja saja armaan kaha ye boss ki bethi k saath pass gaya.😆 Well ridz bi bohot chalu hai I must say, armaan ko chor hi nahi rahi. Not bad at all. HAHA the rape part, red & black belt part was just hilarious.😆 🤣 (why do i feel that the belt part was known from before😆) Loved it, it indeed was a great laugh. 😉 AR's dad are just so cool yaar and ishaan my god, he should have been armaan's son LOL. YAY dinner and movie time, 🥳 aarey ek baat batau yeh armaan hamesha movie mai sota hai kya ? 😕 kamina kuch to kadar karna sikle, ek larki k shaat gaya hai yaar. Well no problem humari pyaari se ridz hai na isse thik karne k liye, jeez she threw water on his face.😆😛 She is awesome, love her. HAHA ridz k dimag mai haar problem ki solution ek hi hai. Lets start flirting, 🤣🤣 u know armaan sach mai ullu hai yaar.😆 Larki keh rahi hai she will kiss him, he is such a duffer ROFL, well chalo kohi baat nahi. Awwwwwww armaan's (liner's) shayaari's 👏 mannnnn m so much in love with them, no wonder I have already told u many times about this before but phir bi kehne mai kya jata hai right ? 😃 Bhai u definitely should be using them more often. 😊 Wah kya baat hai mr. armaan jee to love guru bi nikle yaar that's very nice.... well chalo khutta-bili are really fun to read 😃

Awww poor vini, me feels so bad for this character.. usse iss sanshar mai kohi nahi mila ta kya uss gadhe sid k siwaye and how dare he call her looser yaar that's so cheap URGH. 😡 But wow I loved how vini was talking about lecture note's on the phone. Haha bichara sid kaha faas gaya. 😆😉

Sani-Arun: hayeeeee.... sani is fav character I must tell that. 😊😛 "sani bechari aapne dill ki maari" ROFL.. poor my sani... chalo m sure iss ka bi kuch na kuch to jarur hoga.😃 Hum bi dekhte hai ye arun ka baccha kab tak sani ko ignore karega 😆 awww isn't she so cute 😍 she slept talking on the phone.. hehe wow no wonder her 50 hubbies. ROFL.

Well mujhe shin k part mai jyada comment karna aacha nahi lagta coz I believe shin k part parke I see wht opinion's u guy's have on me BUT iss baar I think I need to comment on everything u written abt it. U will find my comment in the boxes

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Whereas Shin after going home ate her dinner and while dinner her mom told her that Justin had called several times when she was not at home and she should call him now as he may have something important to tell her. (interesting, very very interesting) Justin was a very caring and nice person. (aww, really was he ?) He was Shin's best friend and used to like her a lot but Shin thi ki kabhi bechare Justin se thik se baat hi nahi karti thi. (was ? used? poor guy justin...shin is so arrogant.)Aur dark e maare bechara Justin kabhi Shin ko bata hi nahi pata tha ki how much he used to like Shin.(well chalo thik hi hai ki he used too like her nah ?) Well before Shin could call her phone started ringing and to her surprise it was Justin only. (surprise hone wali kya baat thi? Ya sayad thi I guess) Well as shin was tired after the 1^st day of training so she told Justin to quickly say what he wants to say because she wanted to go to sleep after that. (that's so rude of shin, I don't like this shin at all) Well Justin asked her about her 1^st day experience but Shin told him that she will tell him some other day as she was tired today.(phir bi kuch to keh sakti thi nah, kamini kitna bhav khati hai) Well then Justin invited her to his house for a party next day as it was his birthday. (that's sweet) Well she agreed and also told him that she will share her experience with him in the party.(finally kuch to akaal ki baat ki) This made Justin really happy and then after wishing her good night he disconnected the call. (thank god)

Well liner, nice story of ur characters; justin n shin, I love how you make such great stories. Isiliye to I love ur ff so much.

Nattu- haw.... yeh trainee bi kya nikli yaar. Aapne hubby hote hote. Ek doc pe itna laddu ho rahi hai. Poor moiz uska to phone hi rak diya, yeh nattu ko to sidha karna parega ab. Aunty ki chinta nahi hai isse, srif uss doc k.. haw 😲

Awwwww their first day ended that's was such a lovely funfilled day.

n oo yeah OVERALL fantabulous 👏👏⭐️👏👏

the part was mindblowing do continue soon n thanxssssssssssssss for the pm😃