The Hard Reality of Life (AR FF)Note - page 122

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naureen

@Norz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#211

great part

finally armaan spoke to riddhiam

woh kaun that jiss ko riddhiam ne kick kiya

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Paramjeet Singh Sachdeva

@hunder

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Posted: 15 years ago

#212

next update will be on 30th

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Paramjeet Singh Sachdeva

@hunder

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Posted: 15 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani
nalayak sabar naam ki cheez nahi hai kya?😆 ab itna bara comment likhne mein time lagta hai balak😆

nahi sis mujhe jaldi se comment chaiye hota hai mujhse sabar nahi hota😆😆😆😆😆

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#214

omg
that was such a wow part
truly rocking
i really love the whole scenario
n tht last part
it left me amazed
who cud tht person be
was it sid?
i dont think so
thanks for the pm
do update soon

pooja

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sangeetha

@sangii

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#215

PJ.. papa.. how si that cheap person?? is it sid?? i am breaking my head.. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tell me... dont forget to PM ok.. pleasee.. awesomee update.. take care... ok al the best.. awesomee...

sangii

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sangeetha

@sangii

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Posted: 15 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: hunder

sangee beta u liked the FF mujhe acha laga, don't worry abhi kafi updates ke baad kuch hoga to tum bhi FF mein aa hi jayogi😉😆😆😆😆😆

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,,, thank you sooo much...

but tell me who hugged ridz.. was it sidddddddddddd???????? if yesssssssss i hate himmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😡😆😆😆....

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

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Posted: 15 years ago

#217

Awww.. such an lovely part, but i got a complain against u.. part itna chota kyu tha ?

abhi abhi to itna maja aaraha tha aur part khatam hogaya..... itna chota sa part likhte ho aur comment mahabarat chaiye huh ? not fair ... i better get long update next time.

actually no, u can do that after ur exams. 😆😆

well chalo abhi iss part ki baat karte hai so Mr. Liner ek baat batau mujhe...

so mai bohot hi gusse wali lagti hu right ? ROFL ... well sach mai liner remember maine tumhe kaha ta ki yeh ff parne k liye bohot hi fun hai, like really i was craking up reading some parts there. and yeah mujhe twinzy se agreee karna padega ki i m lovin' ur character "shin n sani" n as she told it, its not coz that is us but coz u have like just made then so fun to read about.

apart from that i loved the AR talks... jeezz meow meow n bhau bhau .. ab yeh yaha bi suru hogaya 🤣 vini... hmm omgsh she is just so parandas yaar... too serious....

man i hope shin sane na hojaye itni serious larki k saath kaam karte karte ... and hmm nattu ROFL she sound like a friend more then a trainer but its gonna be interesting to see wht she punishes them when they are late... hmm ab kisko miss kiya maine ...

hmmm n yeah sid man he is always a KMH no doubt in that...

and @ the end poor ridzy kaun tha wo kamina ? URGH ...

anyways nice cliff-hanger i must say..... over all i LOVED it 😃

Well after reading my comment on the part, you must have already realized how great I feel reading it. So, since I enjoyed reading this part, I hope you enjoyed reading my creepiest comment on the part. I really love ur concept of including every single character in ur every part. that really makes the reader feel like it's really happening and a story of an entire day.

Love ur concept bhai. Okay overall a super-duper cute part.

continue soon. Will be waiting..

Love yaa' <3

Edited by shininggal2008 - 15 years ago

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Paramjeet Singh Sachdeva

@hunder

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Posted: 15 years ago

#218

well thanks for such lovely comments and i will reply to all of them within 1 day

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Sammy

@-ArohaAngel-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#219

mein mahabharat nahi likhne waali, filhaal mood nahi hai 😆 great concept, awesome first 2 parts and intro, add me to that PM list.....and mommy hi bana diya mujhe?? 😆 WAH! my pati better check this out! hamara FF-FF ka saath hai mere puttar ki wajah se...🤣 oh BTW, in ur nick-names u didnt mention puttar.... *heart break* lol

awesome job, continue soon

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Paramjeet Singh Sachdeva

@hunder

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Posted: 15 years ago

#220

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i m 1st
lo fir aapka gift

wow....mein 1 hun....mujhe to yaqeeeen nahi a raha after such a long tiem mein kisse ke ff mein 1 comment kiya😆 i knwo tu ye soch raha hain ke isme itni kushi ki kya baat hain but ....boaht ki kushi ki baaat hain😆
chalo fir issey baat pat hamari taraf se aapko ek siggy gify kar rahe hai ussey apney siggy box mein rakh lo

chalo ab mein part per ati hun😳😳😳
finally warna mujhe tumhari aur poll bhi kholni parti😆😆😆

obv ....bohat hi acha thaa n saath mein funny tha.....MR A or caramel ke ff ke baad ye pehla ff hoga jisme mien itni hasi hogi......my cheeeksss r hurting becoz of u ....n i m all red....n meri mom abhi thori der pehle ayi so me n left thinking i have gone made😆😆 saru zyada has mut sab teri wajah se huwa😆
chalo acha hai ki mera FF par kar koi to itna hassa and hasna buri baat nahi hoti islia hasti raha karo aur aapko mom ko to pata hona chaiye ki aap pehle se hi pagal ho😆😆😆..........wah ab iske liye mujhe hi blame kar rahi ho, mujhe zada gussa mat dilao warna nattu ki saari poll kholni paregi😆😆😆.............waisey MR A to pata hai bu yeh caramel kiska FF hai??????

oiii shinnn......teacher se aise baat karte hain😆😆😆 shukkar hain nattu * rolling eyes* is a nice human being😆😆 n zyada ghusse waale nahi hain nahi to to tujhe * desk ke uper khara kar deti*😆😆😆
ab kya karen diiii agar nattu jaisey teacher ho to koi bhi aisey baat kar sakta hai na😆😆😆😆........well nattu nice human being to hai hi but kitni nice hai yeh hum aage ke parts mein dekhyenge😉😉😆😆😆😆😆.........don't worry nattu mujhe desk ke upar khara karey na karey but ab nattu ko mein kahan khara karunga aap zaroor dekhna😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

wese wah wahh ,,,,,dekhaa mein kitni achi hu..tujeh hasne ki kosish kar rahi hun.....
mujhe hasne ya hasane ki koshish diiiiiiiii😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

n bachuu ap tum sab log phase kisne kaha tha 15 minz late awo ab...sab ke sab ko punishment milegaa

dekh lenge diiii ki punishment milta hai ya nahi and milti bhi hai to kya😉😉😆😆😆😆😆
sarru zara achi punishmnt dena ab ....tum log bhi uss bichari nattu ko to chorne waale ho nahi😆 badla to loge hi ...to plzz ha ye jo punishmnet ho usse mera dil kush kar dena ok??😆😆
diiiii punishment ka pata nahi kyunki abhi part likha nahi hai aur uske baare mein kuch socha bhi nahi hai but dekhte hai kya hota hai😆😆😆😆.......aapka dill to hum kisi aur tarah se khush kar denge😉😆😆😆

wese canteeen mein bohat maza aya

sani ko to aone hubbies ke ilawa kuch or sujhta nahi hain bicahre shin or vini ko bhi wo sab sunna padaga...ohh n ridzy ko bhi bichare wo teeno ..soch rahe honge kaha phas gayee😆😆
oye sani mera sabse special character hai uska mazak mat banao, aage aagey dekho shayad usey koi sach mein mill jaye is company mein😉😆😆😆.............aur woh teeno bhi koi shareef nahi hai riddhima bhi to hot larke dhund rahi hai😆😆😆😆😆

n usss sid ko to mein jaan se maar dungi...I SO HATE HIM...kamine....bus larkiyo ke baare mien hi sochta rehta hain kamina kutta ....ab mujhse or gaaliya nahi nikalti lekin usne kuch or harkat ki na to zarur bolungi ...ab ye bhi obvs hain ke us ridhima ke saath esi harkat us kamine hi ki hogi or kon kar sakta hain....😡
diiii aage aage dekho kya kya karta hai woh, sis woh larkiyo ke baare mein hi nahi unhe use karne ke baare mein bhi sochta hai😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.................sis yaha dill khol kar galiya mat dena warna warning mill jayegi, use PM service for that😆😆😆😆😆............sis abhi kya pata koi bhi ho sakta hai, aap to abhi bina pata lage hi sid par shaq kar rahi ho😆😆😆😆

n haiii armaaan....heheh wo kitna sharmata hain ab usse mien sharmila bulawugi jab tuk wo pranky armaan nahi ban jata ...
diii actually woh naye logo ke saath thora sharmata hai but jaisey jaisey mix up ho jayega waisey hi uska prankster wala roop bhi bahar aa jayega shayad😆😆😆😆😆😆

n bhai i really loved the way armaan n ridzy interacted with each other

the puppy dog n pussy cat was soo sweett...mere aankh mein aansu agaiy😆😆😆 nahi but sach mein it was really sweet
sis abhi to shurwaat hai aage aage dekho hota hai kya😆😆😆😆😆

plzz jaldi continue karna.....i m really waiting for the next part
nahi sis ab thora time lagega because of exams but i will try😃

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habs

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PJ