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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

where is the bloody update hunder?😆



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Posted: 15 years ago

who r u ??? do i know u ?????😉😆😆

u don't know me😭😭😭😭...................aapne to mera dill hi tor diya.............ab chunnu munnu ke mama ko pehchanne se bhi inkaar kar diya aap ne😭😭😭..............ab aapke bacche kisse mama bulayenge😆😆😆😆

mein ne itne ache writer ko kahni nahi dekha pehle😆 kya part tha saru ..a pat on ur back😆
ab zada aasmaan par mat charao itna bhi acha nahi tha aur mujhe pata hai ki mein koi itna acha writer nahi hoon to zada tareef mat karo yaar, mujhe sach zada acha lagta hai aur frankly jab mujhe koi meri galtiya batata hai to zada acha lagta hai kyunki fir hi to best banne ka safar shuru hota hai😆😆😆😆😆😆

i couldnt stop laughing ....plus i was imagining everyone ....or sid ka chera to nahi pata to mene mokey ki shakal daal di thi😆😆😆 bohat hi acha lag raha tha actly lets say baboon😆😆😆 kyun ke...dmg wala sid to iss sid se bohat acha hain😆😆
ab mera FF hai to sense bane na bare FF ki but hassi to aayegi hi itna mein guarantee le sakta hoon😆😆😆😆😆........wah aapne to imagine karna bhi shuru kar diya, mein kabhi imagine nahi kar pata, pata nahi kyu?😕.......arey sid wohi hai na DMG wala😆😆😆.................ab baboon kya hota hai diiiii😆😆😆.........arey yeh DMG ka sid hi hai dii😉😆😆😆😆
n sani....ufff us madam ka kya hoga i couldnt stop laughing ..socho saru sani ..ofice mein beth kar lecture suni ke bajai apne dhun mein khuoi huwi hain n is thinking ke how sexy shasnk looks in his suits n is thinking to make his 51 hubby 😆😆😆 sachiii meri to hasi hi nahi ruk rahi thi ...has has kar meri aankh mese ansun bhi nikal gaye😆😆...
oye sani mera FF ka one of the most special character hai aur future mein is character ko dekhna kitna aap sab ko hasayega😉😉😆😆😆😆.......ab sani to sani hai na apne hubbies ke bina nahi reh sakti na😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.......ab kya karey hamari sani ko har buddhe ko dekh kar bhi yahi khayal aata hai ki kaash yeh 20-25 saal chota hota to mein is ko hubby bana sakti na😆😆😆😆😆😆.......oye ab zada bhi mat hasso warna aage ke parts mein kaisey hassogi😆😆😆😆
n shin ufffff us larki ka ghussa naakh per hi chara rehta hain😆😆 apne boss ko hi bolte hain KYUN DO U HAVE A PROBLEM ....now this is wht i call attitude😆😆
well yes abhi to aapko shin ka gussa dikh raha hai but aage woh bohot achi dost bhi banegi sab ki😃

ab vini ka kya bataw.....wo to pointss banane mein itn intrest rakhti hain or kamini ko or points chaiye haiiii itna konnn attention deta hain😆😆😆
well vini ka character abhi mujhe thora acha banana parega, mujhe pata nahi kyu lag raha hai ki abhi vini ka character thora boring na ban jaye😃

n ridhima....ate hi bf dhundne beth gayiii...but usse thori na pata ke uska humsafar uske samne uske enemy sid ke pass betha hain😆 or usse dhundne ki bhi zarurat nahi hain😆😆
ab riddhima BF nahi dhundegi to armaan ko kaisey patayegi sis😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.......aage aage dekho ridz aur ridz ke BF dhundne ki dastaan😃
bhai.....part bohat hi acha tha.....u made my nite ...ab raat ko parha to obv u made my nite👏👏😆
sis frankly ur comment made my day.......love u for this sweet comment

plzz update soon
zyada bhav mut khana ok😆😆
thik hai update kar dunga, trust me mujhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi paregi

love
habz

LOVE
SARU😆😆😆😆😆


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Posted: 15 years ago

PART – 2

Well as soon as she entered Shashank introduced her as their trainer and then went out to do his work and carry on with his meetings.

Nattu: hello boys and girls so how was Mr Gupta's session.

Everyone said that it was interesting as they didn't wanted to mess with their bosses on 1st day.

Nattu: so do u guys need a break before I brief u about your training.

Shin: ya u better give us a break before I bang my head on the wall because of irritation.

Nattu: well Miss Shin why do u always remain so angry. Are you some kind of factory where anger is produced (started to giggle loudly after her comment)

Everyone also broke into laughter after listening to that

Shin: Excuse me Miss Nattu, u have no rights to talk to me like this (looked at all the other 5 with narrowed eyes which were speaking just one thing, stop laughing or get ready to get your ass kicked by me)

Everyone got afraid by her looks and immediately stopped laughing

Nattu: Sorry Shin, I was just trying to make u laugh, chalo now everyone listen to me, I am giving u a break of I hour but I want everybody back within 1 hour warna u will will be paying fine for coming late into my training.

Armaan: sure mam we all will be back within one hour, can we leave now

Nattu: ya sure, u guys can relax in the canteen and jisko bhi bahar jana hai who bahar ja sakta hai but come back within 1 hour

Everyone: ya ya we will be there in 1 hour (just thinking in their hearts ki agar late ho bhi gaye to kya bigar legi yeh hamara)

In The Canteen everyone ordered coffee and were sitting in pairs like sani was telling riddhima and shin about all the crushes that she had in her life and was speaking non stop and poor shin and riddhima were listening to her very carefully. Vini was sitting next to them on the table looking at all the notes that she made out of that session and was looking non interested in sani's talks. Whereas armaan and sid were standing on the other side of the canteen.

Sid: yaar the damn lecture was so boring, I was sleeping half the time or looking at the girls yaar……………what about u, tujhe koi larki pasand aayi kya???

Armaan: dude I agree the lecture was quite boring but I did pay attention to that as whatever he said may help us in our career.

Sid: what the hell dude, look I will do the things how I want then to be done, I don't need advice or suggestion from anyone. Abhi to training period hai yaar masti kar kyat u bhi us boring lecture ko seriously le raha hai. Dekh na samne kitni hot larkiya khari hai, koi pasand aayi kya?

Armaan: well dude Mr Gupta is a very experienced man, its better we learn something from him. His experience and his words can be very good for us and for our career. Rahi baat larkiyo ki to mein yaha kaam karne aaya hoon larkiya tarne nahi.

Sid: chal chor yaar yeh sab baatein, chal wahan ja kar un larkiyo ke saath baathte hai.

Armaan: dude mera man nahi hai, a girl talk may be going on out there and hamare jaane se kahin who sab awkward feel na karen. (deep down armaan was feeling really shy to go and interact with those girls)

Sid: abe chor na unki girls talk ke baarein mein sochna, hum colleagues hai chal chalke atleast unke saath jaan pehchan to kar lein (well sid was all the time thinking of how to interact with riddhima and usey kaisey pataya jaye taki who shashank ko bhi impress kar sake.)

Armaan: mera mood nahi hai yaar (he didn't even complete his line when he was dragged by sid to the table where girls were sitting)

Sid: hi girls, so whats the discussion going on? I am siddhanth modi and u guys can call me sid and he is (looking at armaan to speak up)

Armaan: hi I…I …I am Armaan malik and u guys can call me armaan (somehow finished his statement as he was not feeling comfortable standing out there and talking to girls like this.

Riddhima: (was checking out armaan and was thinking Good personality...beautiful smile.. solf voice...smart speaking..GOOD vision......charming eyes looking.....
The most important good heart.....kind....person whereas armaan was thinking ki pata nahi kyu mujhe aisey ghur kar dekh rahi hai) hey dude andar to bohot confident lag rahe the and yaha dekho haklana shuru kar diya.

Armaan: (for the first time looked at riddhima carefully and was impressed by her beauty, She was young with beautiful emerald eyes and long flowing light blond hair. When she smiled, it was smile to warm even the coldest of hearts, yet it was her voice, the voice of an angel, that captured his heart, suddenly waiter came with the coffee and he came in present) and said nothing its just that I am not feeling bad after that session (trying to avoid that convo)

Sani: he guys I am sani and pata hai what I have had 50 crushes till now and I have dreamed of marrying all 50 of them. I was just telling ridz, vini and shin about that only. Pata hai I even had dreams of divorcing them and then getting huge alimony from them and become rich by this method.

All started laughing at her silly talks but were really enjoying her company aswell. She was one very honest and fun loving person.

Shin: look sani do u ever talk of anything other than ur crushes and your obsession towards having so many hubbies.

Sani: shin yaar why do u always remain so angry, thori masti kar logi to tumhari health kharab nahi ho jayegi………chalo from now on I won't call u shin, I would rather call u my twinzy.

Shin: what on the planet does twinzy mean?

Vini: well shin she meant u are her twin sister.

Sid: wah wah kya twin sisters hai, ek ko mazak ke ilawa kuch nahi sujhta aur dusri hai jisse gusse ke illawa koi aur emotion pata hi nahi hai (and started laughing)

Shin: so what dude, tum apne aap ko bara super cool samajte ho, agar meri twinzy ke baare mein kuch kaha na to tumhara muh tor dungi, fir ghumte rehna apne tede muh ke saath haste hue

All started laughing on sid after listening to this, whereas armaan was constantly admiring riddhima's beauty which didn't go unnoticed by riddhima.

Sid: so Riddhima is Mr Shashank Gupta ur dad (finally after lot of thinking he decided to start the talk with riddhima as he wanted to make her his girl friend)

Riddhima: ya he is but I will appreciate if we can keep my personal life away from professional life

Sid: oh ok I was just clearing the doubt in my mind

Armaan: (wow dude this girl is really great, stop dude this is office, stop thinking about her before u are kicked out of this company) ok riddhima we will remember not to bring ur personal life in the company again.

Riddhima: thanks Mr Puppy dog

Armaan: now what was that? (armaan now was confused that why is she making fun of me)

Riddhima: no no its not like that, whenever I like someone I love giving them nicknames. I hope u don't mind that. (gave a very sweet smile to armaan)

Armaan: (now really feeling confident in talking to riddhima, wow dude she said she likes u, teri to nikal pari armaan, life mein pehli baar tujhe koi larki achi lagi and usne first meeting mein hi tujhe kaha ki she likes u………no no no dude, she is your boss's daughter, zada flirt karega to kahin company se bahan hi na ho jaye, chal usey irritate karne ki koshish kar taki uska dhyaan teri taraf se haat jaye) well if u will call me puppy dog then do u mind if I call u Pussy cat

Riddhima: oh my puppy dog I really don't mind that u calling me that, so how should we great each other in the morning………like I will say meow meow to u in place of hello or hi

Armaan: well in that case I will do bhau bhau

Both started to laugh loudly and everybody was amazed by their talks but joined then in that laughing session whereas sid was laughing but deep down was feeling jealous of armaan and wanted that somehow he can prove that he is better than armaan so that ridz could fall for him.

Vini: Has everyone gone mad, Miss nattu gave us 1 hour and its almost 1 hour and 15 minutes, we are late, ab pata nahi miss nattu kya punishment degi.

Shin: arey chill kar na vini koi school thorna hai jo madam hume bench par khara kar degi.

Everyone started to laugh

Sani: aur agar punishment di bhi to mein apne 50 hubbies mein se ek usey gift kar dunga, rishwat chalti hai yaar, corruption zindabaad.

This made everyone laugh like mad.

Riddhima: comeon everyone vini is right, we are actually late, chalo jaldi se chalein issey pehle ki miss nattu trainer se churel ban jaye aur hamara khun chus le.

Armaan: ok now everyone stop laughing and lets move to the cabin.

Everyone started moving towards the room when riddhima said tum log chalo mein apna purse shayad canteen mein bhool gayi hoon, abhi le kar aati hoon……everyone nodded and started moving towards the cabin. As soon as riddhima went into the canteen the lights in the canteen went off and someone hugged riddhima from the back. Riddhima was shocked to encounter such a scenario, before riddhima could say anything that person tried to get cozy with riddhima and said words that really made riddhima shocked.

Person: "Your skin is so creamy I bet you never even had a zit on your ass."

Riddhima: (she immediately jerked out oh his hug and gave him a very hard kick) how was that kamine (then she quickly ran to turn the lights on)

As soon as the lights were turned on there was no one in the canteen. Riddhima searched in the canteen but could not find anyone. Then she started moving back towards the cabin with thinking deeply who could be that cheap person.

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Posted: 15 years ago

yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i m 1st



wow....mein 1 hun....mujhe to yaqeeeen nahi a raha after such a long tiem mein kisse ke ff mein 1 comment kiya😆😆😆😆 i knwo tu ye soch raha hain ke isme itni kushi ki kya baat hain but ....boaht ki kushi ki baaat hain😆
chalo ab mein part per ati hun😳😳😳
obv ....bohat hi acha thaa n saath mein funny tha.....MR A or caramel ke ff ke baad ye pehla ff hoga jisme mien itni hasi hogi......my cheeeksss r hurting becoz of u ....n i m all red....n meri mom abhi thori der pehle ayi so me n left thinking i have gone made😆😆 saru zyada has mut sab teri wajah se huwa😡😡😆😆
oiii shinnn......teacher se aise baat karte hain😆😆😆 shukkar hain nattu * rolling eyes* is a nice human being😆😆 n zyada ghusse waale nahi hain nahi to to tujhe * desk ke uper khara kar deti*😆😆😆
wese wah wahh ,,,,,dekhaa mein kitni achi hu..tujeh hasne ki kosish kar rahi hun.....
n bachuu ap tum sab log phase kisne kaha tha 15 minz late awo ab...sab ke sab ko punishment milegaa
sarru zara achi punishmnt dena ab ....tum log bhi uss bichari nattu ko to chorne waale ho nahi😆 badla to loge hi ...to plzz ha ye jo punishmnet ho usse mera dil kush kar dena ok??😆😆
wese canteeen mein bohat maza aya
sani ko to aone hubbies ke ilawa kuch or sujhta nahi hain bicahre shin or vini ko bhi wo sab sunna padaga...ohh n ridzy ko bhi bichare wo teeno ..soch rahe honge kaha phas gayee😆😆
n usss sid ko to mein jaan se maar dungi...I SO HATE HIM...kamine....bus larkiyo ke baare mien hi sochta rehta hain kamina kutta ....ab mujhse or gaaliya nahi nikalti lekin usne kuch or harkat ki na to zarur bolungi ...ab ye bhi obvs hain ke us ridhima ke saath esi harkat us kamine hi ki hogi or kon kar sakta hain....😡😡😡😡
n haiii armaaan....heheh wo kitna sharmata hain ab usse mien sharmila bulawugi jab tuk wo pranky armaan nahi ban jata ...
n bhai i really loved the way armaan n ridzy interacted with each other
the puppy dog n pussy cat was soo sweett...mere aankh mein aansu agaiy😆😆😆 nahi but sach mein it was really sweet
plzz jaldi continue karna.....i m really waiting for the next part
love
habs



Edited by princess52 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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*EDITED*

Wohooooooo ..m second......🤪

Hey partner 🤗

WOW ..it was an amazing part yaar .. m loving d story as it has a bit of realistic touch........😆😆

Tune Shin ko kya Angry young lady banaya h....🤣..itna bhi gussa nae karti yaar ..usse jyada toh nattu karti h.......😉😆😆 ....par isme toh nattu ki bolti band kardi shin ne .. aise bhi koi teacher se baat karta h kya?....bechaari nattu mam..😆

N man, u actually made me a geek in d FF... i cudnt stop laughing at dat......🤣... pehle toh itne borin lecture ke notes banaye n upar se unhe padh bhi rahi thi and dat too in d relaxing time... 😲🤣.. mere dimaag ka fuse udana h kya ?

Aww.. shin n sani yahan bhi twinzy 's ban gaye... it was soo sweet....😳... N dis Sid .😡..himmat kaise ho rahi h uski ridz par line maarne ki?....😡..i wonder who had so much guts to touch her like this.. such a cheap jerk.... i wud kill him.. n why i feel it must be sid...nerve of dat guy ..😡

Btw, AR ka meow meow n bhau bhau thing was sooo funny..... 🤣.. ll u keep ur towel dance too ??....i ll help u selling the tickets of d show....😉😆😆😆
It was all over a nice update..

Continue soon.. thanx 4 d pm (finally u added me to ur pm list.....😡😆)...

Love
Vini





Edited by coolvini4u - 15 years ago
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res. hmph am 3rd.😆 EDITED😉 kam akkal kamine it was a superb part. simply minblowing. man i was laughing like maniacs after reading ur dialogues. u defo know how to entertain ur audience bhai😆😆😆
i mean the way you portrayed every character is just superb and especially my fav characters till now- sani and shin.😆 man i loved them, sacchi not cuz sani is me and shin is twinzy but the way they are portrayed in ur ff are just too good and hilarious.😆😆😆
bhai hats off to you ki aap new writer hote hue bhi itna acha likha. loved to the core bhai.

Shin: Excuse me Miss Nattu, u have no rights to talk to me like this (looked at all the other 5 with narrowed eyes which were speaking just one thing, stop laughing or get ready to get your ass kicked by me)

haye meri kamini twinzy ne aate hi apna aatank phelana and apni dadagiri shuru kar di🤣

Everyone: ya ya we will be there in 1 hour (just thinking in their hearts ki agar late ho bhi gaye to kya bigar legi yeh hamara)
nattu ko kam mat samajhna. she is an atom bomb, jab phategi tab pata chalega in trainies ko. sirf bholi bhali dikhti hai nattu kamini, hai nahi🤣
Armaan: well dude Mr Gupta is a very experienced man, its better we learn something from him. His experience and his words can be very good for us and for our career. Rahi baat larkiyo ki to mein yaha kaam karne aaya hoon larkiya tarne nahi.
arey mere shareef zyaade armaan. dekh bhi hot larki ko, mar nahi jaoge😆😆😆 god armaan is too sidha saadha😆😆😆
Sani: he guys I am sani and pata hai what I have had 50 crushes till now and I have dreamed of marrying all 50 of them. I was just telling ridz, vini and shin about that only. Pata hai I even had dreams of divorcing them and then getting huge alimony from them and become rich by this method.
bhai nalayak, meri izzat ka faluda bana diya aapne iss dialogue mein. i mean itni despo and greedy! thora to kam karte🤣
bhai i loved the way you showed contrast between two twinzies. i mean meine bhi aaj tak nahi socha tha ki mein and twinzy itne opposite hai and still like best friends, wah aapne notice kar liya😆😆😆
and uff that dialogue when shin got all protective about sani and thretened sid, i wanted to hug u for writing such a fab dialogue and kiss twinzy on her cheek for saying that.😆😆😆
armaan and riddhima's bonding is going quite good. love that meow meow and bhau bhau thing😆😆😆 that was cute😳
Sani: aur agar punishment di bhi to mein apne 50 hubbies mein se ek usey gift kar dunga, rishwat chalti hai yaar, corruption zindabaad.
bhai ab aur kya baaki reh gaya hai.😡😆😆😆 meri image ki ko watt lag gayi aapke ff par🤣 ab mein corrupted bhi hu and apne hubbys gift bhi karti hu, wah🤣
last scene was a shocker and i kinda know who that person is😉😆😆😆 but riddhima's kick was haye mein mar jawan. aapko itna acha idea kis mahan aatma ne diya bhai🤣
wow yaar itni bari comment meine apne life mein kabhi nahi di🤣 a superb part bhai and a total entertaining package😆😆😆 ur ff is going hit bhai. ur just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good u know. and the funny thing ki aapko bhi nahi pata ki aap kitne ache writer hai.😃 now i seriously can't wait for the nest part and aaj aapne muje subah subah part 3 bhi pm nahi kiya😭. now update soon warna i'll eat ur pages up bhai😆😆😆
love
sani
p.s- kamine reply jaldi karna and muje batao na sani ke opposite kaun larka hoga. *sani looking at bhai with a puppy face*
Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago
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kamino res hi karte rahoge comment to karo.....................partner tune to ab tak ek bhi comment nahi kiya hai i am really angry with u
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Hey partner 🤗
Finally tumne comment to kiya partner
🤗
haan ab tune mandir me prasad chadaya ya nae ... 🤣


Wow !! I luvd ur concept... n i was really a great start .!! ... i luvd Armaan 's family intro .. esp his bonding with his dad.. par u know wat update
bahut bahut bahut bahut hi chotta tha.........😆
sis ab jitna likh saka utna likh diya afterall intro hi to tha😆😆😆..........ab intro mein 90 page ka mahabharat to nahi likh sakta na😆😆😆

wow ..!! not bad idea...soch kitna unique FF hota na tera ... 😉😆😆😆... waise u can use it in ur next FF.........😆

N on top jab mene CS padha toh pata nae mujhe PJ missing mila.. woh bhoot ko is FF se door hi rakhna warna yahan par bhi mental asylum kholna padega..........
🤣..pata nae kyun khud ko hamesha Armaan samjhta rehta h... 😉😆😆.. uska dimaag bilkul satak gaya h shyad.. tabhi kam akal se bin akal ho gya....... ...par suna h aaj kal genius kaam bhi karne lag gaya h kyunki mera partner ban gaya h na...........😉😆...
partner baat sirf itni si hai ki mujhe fictional characters par FF likhna acha nahi lagta, mein to real life characters par FF likhna chahta tha, aur yeh FF sirf mera ek POV hai iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki jo mein likhu wohi sahi ho

N partner i actually luv d concept of real characters ... u can try it ..m sure it ll be hit too.......😃

waise, thank god! finally sani ko uska Mr A mil jaayega yahaan..........nae mila toh uske saath kaam kar ke hi khush ho jayegi...
😆😆 ... n bewkof tujhe sharam nae aati mere mom-dad ko yahaan kyun publicly declare kar raha h....unki bachi kuchi izzat bhi kharaab ho jayegi....😆
nahi partner just wait and watch ki kaun kisko milta hai and maine kab tumhare mom and dad ko publicly declare kiya maine to sirf tumhare join karne ka ek reason diya hai na😆😆😆
yaar mere parents ko toh baksh deta... 😆... n mujhe bhi dekhna h kaun kisko milta h .. bas sid ko kisi ke saath pair up karne se pehle soch lena..bahut joote padenge tujhe.........😆😆😆😆

btw, partner ..tu toh bilkul chupa rustam nikla .. u got a nice writing style........ ab toh lagta h yahan bhi attacks hone lagenge ...(waise hone lagenge nae abhi se hi update soon ke demands aane lage h) ..tera FF toh Super duper hit ho gaya yaar ........😉😃😆
oye partner mera style kaisa hai pata nahi kyunki issey pehle kabhi yeh chees try nahi ki hai........aur attack kar dena i don't mind but bata kar


Oh ...so u need a warning before attack..chal koi na..kar denge..waise abhi sani ke 3 FFs and habz ki FF baaki haina?? .........😉😆😆😆

see finally aate hi teri FF first padhi n comment bhi kar diya.. ab toh jaldi se reply bhi kar dena...😛
kar to diya partner😆😆😆
toh mene bhi kar diya na.....😆😆

Continue SOON...😆..n Tune mujhe pm list me add kyn nae kiya............??😡
oye jab comment karogi tabhi to PM list mein add karunga na😆
kyun tujhe doubt tha ki me tera FF padhoongi ya nae? ?........😡

Love
Vini


love
PJ

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder

kamino res hi karte rahoge comment to karo.....................partner tune to ab tak ek bhi comment nahi kiya hai i am really angry with u

sabr ka fal meetha hota h bacche... 😉😆😆😆

p.s- just read 1st part... n editing the comment now.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
n m the 1st to comment 😆😆😆 the part was fantastic i loved the talk between armaan n riddhima n sid was irritating as usual 😆😆 n the suspense is gud so somebody is after ridzs 😡 but no problem armaan hai na😆😆 n plz continue soon n yah thanxsss for the pm😃

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