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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder

ommmggg bhaiiiiiii๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
OMG sis๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† OMG sarru๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

kaha chup kar bethe the????? ur such an awesome writer n kone mein hum sab se chup kar beth gaye taake hum sab ko pata na chale ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜† buttt well ab ye raaz raaz nahi raha n we all know how gr8 writer u r ....n we all want instant updatesss๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
sis mein attitude namak CC mein chup kar nahi balki king bana baitha tha๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.......oye madam mera dimag kya kya kar sakta hai yeh CC par tumne kabhi notice nahi kiya kya, sis mein writer nahi hoon but haan jo dill mein hota hai woh bolne se ya likhne se nahi darta๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.........sis i am not great, this is my first time and i want to learn something new๐Ÿ˜ƒ.........sis updates to mere mood ke hisab se honge tumne attack karna hai to kar dena๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
i know sarru ab tum hi king banaoge na hum to king banne se rahe we all r queeenss๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...i knoww bhai mene ap ka dimaagh dekh liya hain ....kabhi kisi ke dimaagh mese idea chori karta hain ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† to kabhi kya karta hain but dimagh bohat mast hain...i think mere saath reh reh kar apka dimaagh acha hota gaya๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
wese gud thing bhai.....jo dil me aye wo likh lena chaiye but sometimes i find it hard ....wow...phir to obv ur gr8 its 1 time n stil itna acha likhaa...i pat on ur back from mahan habiba๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† saru ...hum to apke mood per depended nahi reh sakte na to hum to hamare attacks jari rakhnege jo abhi see shuru ho gaye hain๐Ÿ˜†
i really loved the convi armaan n his dad had....specaillly propose wala part๐Ÿ˜†
thanks sis ab convo ko interesting banana hi to asli challenge tha na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
bhaiii abhi asli challange to ana baaqi hain๐Ÿ˜†
i couldnt stop laughing ke armaan apni gf ko nahi balke gf apne armaan ko propose karega๐Ÿ˜†
well sis ab yeh plot to kisi ki life se churaya hua hai and aapko pata hi hai kiski๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.......ab kya karen mujhe sach likhna acha lagta hai na๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
i knowww or isiliye ye ff or bhi zyada intresting ho gaaa...kyun ke uski life bhi utni hi intresting hain๐Ÿ˜† n acha hain apko acha likhna acha lagta hain to ab hume sab kuch sach or acha milega๐Ÿ˜†
wese....ye story kisi se bohat relate karti hain na๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† ek larki ne ek larke ko propose kia tha๐Ÿ˜† kuch yaaad aya bhaiiiii.....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
well sis kaha na sach likhna meri aadat hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†............aur haan tab situation alag thi aur yaha baat kuch aur hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†........but ab aap samaj hi gayi hogi ki convo kiski life se inspired hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
hhahaha ....to kya huwa situation alag ho but larki ne propse kiya na....uff wo larka itn aklitna sharmila thaa ke wo khud na kar saka๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† kya usse ye bhi pata tha ke wo usse pyar karta hain ke nai usse tub realise huwa๐Ÿ˜† ya larki ne realise karwaya๐Ÿ˜† wese dekhte hain yaha kesi situation ati hain๐Ÿ˜†
n the character skecth was hella gudd n the amazing part was it had all of in it abb armaan to obv app ho ...but shy ke mamle...i mnot sure/..?? r u shy ???๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but propse ke mamle to bilkul sahi tha๐Ÿ˜†
well sis armaan kaun hai abhi isey raaz hi rehne do and trust me ki mein sach hi likhta hoon so don't think ki mein masala add kar raha tha, actual mein jo armaan hai woh shy hi tha shuru mein๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but hamesha shy rahega aisa zaroori nahi hai na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†......well sis haar mamla sach hi likhyunga shayad aapko bohot se sawalo ke jawab bhi dheere dheere mill jayenge๐Ÿ˜ƒ
sarru i think mujeh pata hain ke armaan kon hain ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† n plzzz ab armaan ko change mut karna mujhe ese parhne mein zyada maza ayega๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† pluss sab kuch sach hoga๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
ha ha obv abb...baad mein to shy nahi hoga na....uski life mein ridhima jo ajayengi ...usse flirt karna sikhayengi or sani ke saath bedroom talksss ...to obv sarru wo kese shy reh sakta hain๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
n hhehe mujeh teacher bana diya heheh bohat maza ayega ab ap sab ko punshih karugi n daatugi ...n even hit u
well sis maine kab kaha ki aap hamari band nahi bajayogi but sis aap yeh kaisey soch sakti ho ki hum aapko chopr denge๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
haaa lekin uss ka bhi mein badla lungi naa....ab mera bhai mere liye itna to kar hi sakta hai na๐Ÿ˜†
or sab log kaaan khol ke sun le specail sanzzzz....GAAAALIYA IS NOT ALLOWED IN MY CLASS๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
well sis mujhe galiya likhna acha bhi nahi lagta but jahan zaroorat hogi waha use karunga๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
kis ke liye sid ke liye ...?uss kaminey ko itni gaaliya dena itnoi gaaliya dena keee wo .....pata nahi bus bohat gaaliya denaAngryAngryAngryAngry
sanzz i hope tu tere gaaliyo ke begair thore time tuk zinda reh sake๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
woh galiyo ke bina reh sakti hai but hubbies ke bina nahi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
nahi sarru hubbies ke begair to wo mar hi jayegi bu gaaliya ke bager bhi wo nahi reh sakti๐Ÿ˜†
bhaiii ...everthing was perfect n frankly speaking bilkul bhi borin nahi tha n bohat hi intresting thaa
thanks sis for these amazing comments but aapko ek baat kahun ek acha dost woh hota hai jo apne dost ko uski galtiya bhi bataye, i have always believed that critics are ur best friend so please tareef bohot ho gayi ab galtiya bhi batao and most important some suggestions to improve the FF
i know bhai but belive me mujhe kuch esa nahi dekha intro mein.....i really liked it ....but ha dont worry agar age kuch esa laga to zarur bata dungi pr agar apko improve hi karna hain
to do one thing ....ap na roz update karo thts ur improvemnt๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
plzz continue sooo hame zyada intezaar mur karwana nahi tum hum yaha per bhi morcha strt kar sakte hain....๐Ÿ˜† actly wil be here soon
sis intezaar ka bhi apna maza hota hai and hume intezaar karane mein maza bhi bohot aata hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†......aur rahi baat morcha gang ki to apne hi gang se mein nahi darta, i am not afraid of gang war๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
plzzz...already sanzz or dusre kamino mujhe bohat intezaar karwate hain ab or nahi saha jata mujhse๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† to plzz...ap intezaar mut karwana๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† n i know ke hum sab ek hi gang mein hai but aage aage ap ko hum se dar zarur lagne lage ga๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
sanzzz ab tera badle ka time agaya ...๐Ÿ˜†
diiii kyu mujhse hamesha panga leti ho jab pata hai ki aapka plan backfire kar jayega๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
mein kaha panga le rahi hun...see mein kitni innocent hu ..apne itni innocnet larki kahi dekhi hain kabhi๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
continue soooonnnnn
n plzzzz for god sake add me to ur pm list ufffffffffff ye to pehle hi karn a chaiye tha apko
sis jab koi comment karega tabhi uska naam PM list mein dalyunga na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†................i have added ur name so chinta mat karo๐Ÿ˜ƒ
but mein kab se like press kar rahi thi wo dikh nahi raha thaAngry๐Ÿ˜†
bhai plzzz edit tht thingy๐Ÿ˜† n hai kitan color ful lag raha hain

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

waah wah kya baat h ? waise tere examz khatam ho gaye kya ?...........๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ƒhw were they ?



Yeah exams khatam actually have to wait for result agar points kaam hue to I have to pass few of them :'(
Kese hue???
na pooch, na poocho na poocho
na pooch, na poocho na poocho
ki hua yeh haal yeh dil ka kaise
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princess52

is ths a cc by any chance?



Habs tujhe kiya lagta hai ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishk



Yeah exams khatam actually have to wait for result agar points kaam hue to I have to pass few of them :'(
Kese hue???
na pooch, na poocho na poocho
na pooch, na poocho na poocho
ki hua yeh haal yeh dil ka kaise

yaar ab toh mene pooch liya......ab gaane ka koi faayda nae h....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
n points kam kyun? i hope aisa na ho..........๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 15 years ago
*edited comment on page 12*
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

yaar ab toh mene pooch liya......ab gaane ka koi faayda nae h....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
n points kam kyun? i hope aisa na ho..........๐Ÿ˜•



I also hope the same :D
chalo I have to leave this famous FF as I have to update the promo of my FFs :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder



thanks ashu for liking it *mimicking bhai with a change* sis bolte ho phir thanks bhi bolte ho?
I do believe in praising that which deserves to be praised.
Dean Smith
ye kabhi suna nahi kya?

aapka naam add kar diya hai sis๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

sis actual mein sab original cgaracters hi hai and sooner or later u will come to know of it๐Ÿ˜† oooooooooo phir to I'm waiting eagerly for it ๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishk

reserved

Hey Bhai,
how r u??
Am I dreaming to see you here or are you actually here๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Coming to the intro it was awesome, I loved it.
So Armaan a shy banda and Ridhima a bold one, good good, good going bro, keep it on :D
Continue soon and thanks for the PM :D

Luv u<333
Kashsih



i am great sis

well ur dream has come true now๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

thanks for liking the intro
well sis ab mujhe jis tarah se story aage barani thi waisey hi bara raha hoon๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

well don't worry sis jab bhi update karunga tumhe zaroor bata dunga๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey partner ๐Ÿค—
Finally tumne comment to kiya partner
๐Ÿค—

Wow !! I luvd ur concept... n i was really a great start .!! ... i luvd Armaan 's family intro .. esp his bonding with his dad.. par u know wat update
bahut bahut bahut bahut hi chotta tha.........๐Ÿ˜†
sis ab jitna likh saka utna likh diya afterall intro hi to tha๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..........ab intro mein 90 page ka mahabharat to nahi likh sakta na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


N on top jab mene CS padha toh pata nae mujhe PJ missing mila.. woh bhoot ko is FF se door hi rakhna warna yahan par bhi mental asylum kholna padega..........
๐Ÿคฃ..pata nae kyun khud ko hamesha Armaan samjhta rehta h... ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.. uska dimaag bilkul satak gaya h shyad.. tabhi kam akal se bin akal ho gya....... ...par suna h aaj kal genius kaam bhi karne lag gaya h kyunki mera partner ban gaya h na...........๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†...
partner baat sirf itni si hai ki mujhe fictional characters par FF likhna acha nahi lagta, mein to real life characters par FF likhna chahta tha, aur yeh FF sirf mera ek POV hai iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki jo mein likhu wohi sahi ho


waise, thank god! finally sani ko uska Mr A mil jaayega yahaan..........nae mila toh uske saath kaam kar ke hi khush ho jayegi...
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ... n bewkof tujhe sharam nae aati mere mom-dad ko yahaan kyun publicly declare kar raha h....unki bachi kuchi izzat bhi kharaab ho jayegi....๐Ÿ˜†
nahi partner just wait and watch ki kaun kisko milta hai and maine kab tumhare mom and dad ko publicly declare kiya maine to sirf tumhare join karne ka ek reason diya hai na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

btw, partner ..tu toh bilkul chupa rustam nikla .. u got a nice writing style........ ab toh lagta h yahan bhi attacks hone lagenge ...(waise hone lagenge nae abhi se hi update soon ke demands aane lage h) ..tera FF toh Super duper hit ho gaya yaar ........๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†
oye partner mera style kaisa hai pata nahi kyunki issey pehle kabhi yeh chees try nahi ki hai........aur attack kar dena i don't mind but bata kar


see finally aate hi teri FF first padhi n comment bhi kar diya.. ab toh jaldi se reply bhi kar dena...๐Ÿ˜›
kar to diya partner๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Continue SOON...๐Ÿ˜†..n Tune mujhe pm list me add kyn nae kiya............??๐Ÿ˜ก
oye jab comment karogi tabhi to PM list mein add karunga na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Love
Vini


love
PJ


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hunder



sis mein geeta par haath rakh ke kasam khata hoon ki jo bhi likhyunga sach likhyunga aur sach ke illawa kuch nahi likhyunga๐Ÿ˜†

sis but agar koi rotra character FF mein add kiya baad mein to bura mat manna plzzzz๐Ÿ˜†

sis ab mein bus purple ka peecha hi to nahi chor sakta na๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†aapke sach kafi DANGEROUS honge๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

NAHIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!....ye nahi ho sakta๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

aapka FAV coloue green hai na๐Ÿ˜ณ........to green ke piche jao๐Ÿ˜‰....meri PURPLE ko akela chod do๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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