ommmggg bhaiiiiiii๐๐
OMG sis๐๐๐๐ OMG sarru๐๐๐๐๐
kaha chup kar bethe the????? ur such an awesome writer n kone mein hum sab se chup kar beth gaye taake hum sab ko pata na chale ๐ก๐ buttt well ab ye raaz raaz nahi raha n we all know how gr8 writer u r ....n we all want instant updatesss๐๐
sis mein attitude namak CC mein chup kar nahi balki king bana baitha tha๐๐๐.......oye madam mera dimag kya kya kar sakta hai yeh CC par tumne kabhi notice nahi kiya kya, sis mein writer nahi hoon but haan jo dill mein hota hai woh bolne se ya likhne se nahi darta๐๐๐.........sis i am not great, this is my first time and i want to learn something new๐.........sis updates to mere mood ke hisab se honge tumne attack karna hai to kar dena๐๐๐๐i know sarru ab tum hi king banaoge na hum to king banne se rahe we all r queeenss๐๐...i knoww bhai mene ap ka dimaagh dekh liya hain ....kabhi kisi ke dimaagh mese idea chori karta hain ๐๐ to kabhi kya karta hain but dimagh bohat mast hain...i think mere saath reh reh kar apka dimaagh acha hota gaya๐๐wese gud thing bhai.....jo dil me aye wo likh lena chaiye but sometimes i find it hard ....wow...phir to obv ur gr8 its 1 time n stil itna acha likhaa...i pat on ur back from mahan habiba๐๐ saru ...hum to apke mood per depended nahi reh sakte na to hum to hamare attacks jari rakhnege jo abhi see shuru ho gaye hain๐i really loved the convi armaan n his dad had....specaillly propose wala part๐
thanks sis ab convo ko interesting banana hi to asli challenge tha na๐๐๐bhaiii abhi asli challange to ana baaqi hain๐i couldnt stop laughing ke armaan apni gf ko nahi balke gf apne armaan ko propose karega๐
well sis ab yeh plot to kisi ki life se churaya hua hai and aapko pata hi hai kiski๐๐๐.......ab kya karen mujhe sach likhna acha lagta hai na๐๐๐๐i knowww or isiliye ye ff or bhi zyada intresting ho gaaa...kyun ke uski life bhi utni hi intresting hain๐ n acha hain apko acha likhna acha lagta hain to ab hume sab kuch sach or acha milega๐wese....ye story kisi se bohat relate karti hain na๐๐ ek larki ne ek larke ko propose kia tha๐ kuch yaaad aya bhaiiiii.....๐๐
well sis kaha na sach likhna meri aadat hai๐๐๐............aur haan tab situation alag thi aur yaha baat kuch aur hai๐๐๐........but ab aap samaj hi gayi hogi ki convo kiski life se inspired hai๐๐๐hhahaha ....to kya huwa situation alag ho but larki ne propse kiya na....uff wo larka itn aklitna sharmila thaa ke wo khud na kar saka๐๐ kya usse ye bhi pata tha ke wo usse pyar karta hain ke nai usse tub realise huwa๐ ya larki ne realise karwaya๐ wese dekhte hain yaha kesi situation ati hain๐n the character skecth was hella gudd n the amazing part was it had all of in it abb armaan to obv app ho ...but shy ke mamle...i mnot sure/..?? r u shy ???๐๐ but propse ke mamle to bilkul sahi tha๐
well sis armaan kaun hai abhi isey raaz hi rehne do and trust me ki mein sach hi likhta hoon so don't think ki mein masala add kar raha tha, actual mein jo armaan hai woh shy hi tha shuru mein๐๐๐๐๐ but hamesha shy rahega aisa zaroori nahi hai na๐๐๐......well sis haar mamla sach hi likhyunga shayad aapko bohot se sawalo ke jawab bhi dheere dheere mill jayenge๐sarru i think mujeh pata hain ke armaan kon hain ๐๐๐ n plzzz ab armaan ko change mut karna mujhe ese parhne mein zyada maza ayega๐๐ pluss sab kuch sach hoga๐๐๐ha ha obv abb...baad mein to shy nahi hoga na....uski life mein ridhima jo ajayengi ...usse flirt karna sikhayengi or sani ke saath bedroom talksss ...to obv sarru wo kese shy reh sakta hain๐๐n hhehe mujeh teacher bana diya heheh bohat maza ayega ab ap sab ko punshih karugi n daatugi ...n even hit u
well sis maine kab kaha ki aap hamari band nahi bajayogi but sis aap yeh kaisey soch sakti ho ki hum aapko chopr denge๐๐๐๐haaa lekin uss ka bhi mein badla lungi naa....ab mera bhai mere liye itna to kar hi sakta hai na๐or sab log kaaan khol ke sun le specail sanzzzz....GAAAALIYA IS NOT ALLOWED IN MY CLASS๐๐๐
well sis mujhe galiya likhna acha bhi nahi lagta but jahan zaroorat hogi waha use karunga๐๐๐๐kis ke liye sid ke liye ...?uss kaminey ko itni gaaliya dena itnoi gaaliya dena keee wo .....pata nahi bus bohat gaaliya denasanzz i hope tu tere gaaliyo ke begair thore time tuk zinda reh sake๐๐
woh galiyo ke bina reh sakti hai but hubbies ke bina nahi๐๐๐๐nahi sarru hubbies ke begair to wo mar hi jayegi bu gaaliya ke bager bhi wo nahi reh sakti๐bhaiii ...everthing was perfect n frankly speaking bilkul bhi borin nahi tha n bohat hi intresting thaa
thanks sis for these amazing comments but aapko ek baat kahun ek acha dost woh hota hai jo apne dost ko uski galtiya bhi bataye, i have always believed that critics are ur best friend so please tareef bohot ho gayi ab galtiya bhi batao and most important some suggestions to improve the FFi know bhai but belive me mujhe kuch esa nahi dekha intro mein.....i really liked it ....but ha dont worry agar age kuch esa laga to zarur bata dungi pr agar apko improve hi karna hainto do one thing ....ap na roz update karo thts ur improvemnt๐๐plzz continue sooo hame zyada intezaar mur karwana nahi tum hum yaha per bhi morcha strt kar sakte hain....๐ actly wil be here soon
sis intezaar ka bhi apna maza hota hai and hume intezaar karane mein maza bhi bohot aata hai๐๐๐๐......aur rahi baat morcha gang ki to apne hi gang se mein nahi darta, i am not afraid of gang war๐๐๐๐plzzz...already sanzz or dusre kamino mujhe bohat intezaar karwate hain ab or nahi saha jata mujhse๐๐ to plzz...ap intezaar mut karwana๐๐ n i know ke hum sab ek hi gang mein hai but aage aage ap ko hum se dar zarur lagne lage ga๐๐sanzzz ab tera badle ka time agaya ...๐
diiii kyu mujhse hamesha panga leti ho jab pata hai ki aapka plan backfire kar jayega๐๐๐๐mein kaha panga le rahi hun...see mein kitni innocent hu ..apne itni innocnet larki kahi dekhi hain kabhi๐ณ๐ณ๐ณcontinue soooonnnnnn plzzzz for god sake add me to ur pm list ufffffffffff ye to pehle hi karn a chaiye tha apko
sis jab koi comment karega tabhi uska naam PM list mein dalyunga na๐๐๐................i have added ur name so chinta mat karo๐but mein kab se like press kar rahi thi wo dikh nahi raha tha๐
bhai plzzz edit tht thingy๐ n hai kitan color ful lag raha hain
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