MAYUR os gallery by shruti

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi guys
i just came up with this different idea of a patch up between mayur after the scholarship fiasco and thought that i'll share it with all of you.
this is not exactly an os. it will have 2-3 parts and i will keep updating this gallery as and when i get new ideas.
i know aap sab ko lag raha hoga ki main pagal ho gayi hun i mean main apni baki ffs update nahi kar rahi lekin yeh nayi story start kar rahi hun.
then u r rite main pagal ho gayi hun
so u will have to bare with me

scroll down for the first part

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Posted: 15 years ago
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INDEX


MAYUR PATCH UP part 1: pg 1
part 2:pg 4
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 15 years ago
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MAYUR patch up part 1



Nupur is waiting for mayank to give him the good news.


Mayank arrrives



N: mayank kahan the tum? Mujhe tumhe kuch batana tha aur tum…tum ghar par hi nahi the
M: woh main pareshan tha isliye
N: aisi konsi pareshani thi jo tum mujhse share nahi kar sakte
M: nupur who…nupur is waqt yeh baccha hum afford nahi kar sakte lekin tum chinta mat karo koi na koi rasta zarur nikal aayega



N: kya…chinta rasta…yeh kya baatein kar rahe ho mayank? Aur tum baccho ke baare main kyun baat kar rahe ho?
M: kyun? Tum pregnant ho nupur toh mujhe fikar nahi hogi?
N: pregnant?? Main…mayank main pregnant nahi hun
M: toh phir…yeh celebration…yeh decoration
N: tum sach main pagal ho gaye ho mayank
M: ab tak toh nahi tha lekin ab ho jaunga. Tum pregnant ho yeh soch kar mera dimag kharab ho gaya. Main scholarship ke last round main ja hi nahi paya aur who scholarship mujhe nahi mili. Main haar gaya. MAYANK SHARMA haar gaya
N: scholarship?????
M: haan who youth scholarship. Uske liye maine din raat mehnat ki thi nupur. Maine apna 100% diya tha aur main fail ho gaya.
N: tumne scholarship ke liye apply kiya tha? Lekin kab last date se ek din pehle toh tum ghra hi nahi aaye the…
M: wahi toh kar raha tha nupur. Maine socha ki main tumhe surprise dunga par
N: By God tumne scholarship ke liye apply kiya tha aur maine bhi. Mujhe laga ki main tumhe surprise dungi aut tum mujhpar proud feel karoge.



M: acha toh tumne bhi apply kiya tha
M: acha hain. Atleast tumne try toh kiya. Mujhe scholarship nahi mili toh kya hua main agli baar dobara try karunga



N: lekin tumhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki tumhe scholarship nahi mili toh mujhe bhi nahi milegi? Mujhe scholarship mil gayi hain mayank
Mayank shocked
M: kya? Tumhe mil gayi? Tumhe pata hain ki mujhe is scholarship ki kitni zarurat thi? Tumhari pregnany ke baare main soch soch kar main padai aur scholarship par dhyaan hi nahi de paya. Samajh nahi aa raha tha ki tumhe kaise bataun ki main abhi baap nahi banana chahta. Tumhe mujhe batana chahiye tha. Tumhari wajah se aaj mujhe scholarship nahi mili.



N: mayank tum khud 3-4 dino se khoye khoye se ho tumhare paas baat karne ka time nahi tha aur agar tumhe galat fami ho gayi thi toh mujhse toh puch lete
M: tumhari wajah se main haar gaya
N: tum theek kah rahe ho. Zindagi main tumne jitni bhi cheeze khoi hain meri wajah se…tum apna career nahi bana paye meri wajah se…tumhe scholarship nahi mili meri wajah se kyun? Kyunki tumne mujhse shaadi ki kyunki main pregnant thi haina?



Theek hain mayank mere paas tumhare sare problems ka ek hi solution hain hum kuch dino ke liye alag ho jate han toh shayad shayad hume apne apne raaste mil jayen…main ja rahi hun



M: jao. Waise bhi tumhe kaun rok sakta hain. Tumhe jo karna hain karo.

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Mayank starts missing nupur n realises that he is at fault. He also realises that always nupur apologised to him but now he will apologise to her. Mayank goes to meet nupur at bhushan mansion. Nupur opens the door
N: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
M: nupur mujhe tumse baat karni hain. Jo kuch bhi hua..
N: dekho mayank mujhe us baare main kuch baat nahi karni hain. Tum yahan se chale jao.
M: nahin nupur. Main samajh gaya hun ki galti meri thi aurr main tumse maafi maagne aaya hun aur tumhe ghar wapas le jane hun
N: konsa ghar? Mera ghar yeh hain
M: acha aur who ghar kiska hain?
N: who ghar hamara tha lekin ab sirf tumhara hain mera nahi
M: yeh tum kya bole ja rahi ho nupur?
N: main theek kah rahi un. Mujhe divorce chahiye
Mayanks world comes crashing down
M: yeh nahi ho sakta
N: haan mayank main har roz ki ladayiyon se thak gayi hun. Tumhara mujhpar ilzaama lagana. Main thak gayi hun mayank. Main galat thi hamare pyaar ne ghutne tek diye sachai ke samne. Bauji sahi kah rahe the.
M: tum yeh kya kah rahi ho? Maine galati ki hain aur main maafi maang raha hun. Plz aisa kuch mat karo jisse hum dono ko baad main pachtana pade.
N: bas mayank. Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna. Main sirf aur sirf tumse taalak chahti hun
Mayank is broken from inside and nupur is in no better condition. But in his anger and frustration
M (shouts): theek hain nupur tumhe yeh papers kal tak mil jayenge.
Nupur does not say anything and mayank leaves
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice OS and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice update.
Do continue soon.
Thanx for PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice os dear...pls continue soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
it was so nice
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shruti
very cute and lovely os
do continue it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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an os......... wow
congrats on your os gallery first of all
i really loved the first part of the os
i can't waitto read the next part
but don't forget your ffs
continue soon
luv
mahima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice It reminded me of the epi

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