ArTi FF ..~WrittiN DestinY~..ParT Two PG 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
wow arjun
awesome update
past and present were well written
great job yaar
it was short though
and hope rati is fine
continue soon
luv
nupur
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
haey dear

Awsume ff

Add me 2 pm list.

Love
*kulsum*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
awesome ff
cont soon n pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Sam🤗
awesom update🤗
do continue soon
waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
such a lovely update sam..its really touchy!!cant wait 4 the next part...looking forward to their togetherness!!continue soon 🤗
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Finallyyy Updated IT😃

Edited by ArTiToTheEnd - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

here is the Sec Part hope u all will Like IT>3

Do Comment 🤗

ParT 2 ..Written Destiny..

Rati's Pov

When I've entered the bar I felt something's different that i haven't been feeling for it since long time ago I felt like someone whom I love is there but I don't know where…... Ahh sure it just random feelings…maybe ohhh yeahh…….. she was sitting with her friends Sanam and Mari they were her best friends from the college till now……

before they came to the bar they were trying their best to let rati to come out with them to enjoy the night because they were trying to let her out of her thoughts *that she was thinking none stop about her first love Arjun and her last forever*…..

they were asking her none stopping to come and she was like NO I don't want I will watch TV u go ahead and enjoy the night lemme be alone……

then they stopped for moment and sanam and Mari were talking about a guy his name is Arjun and Rati's face was LIKE OMG I am dreaming Orr what did I hear Arjun or what then she asked them did u galz said Arjun or I was wrong………they replied yeah we knew a guy who is a drunker due to his first love lost and he couldn't found her long time ago maybe 10years……

And her pale face had come alive for a moment while hearing his name once again they didn't knew that she was his love and they were talking about her….

Then she decide to go with them to that bar to find whatever Arjun is there or not….but in vain she couldn't even saw him…..he saw her but she!....

They were continuing talking about him till they saw her in teary eyes asking her why u are crying *Bina Tere Na Ek Pal Hoon Na Bin Tere Kabhi Kal Hoon* for him u know him kya!?.....

She replied the only word came out from her mouth she was soo shatterd that she knew bc of her he became a drunker they were trying to know whatever whom is his first love they were asking her but she couldn't reply she said only I want to go there! And they were so happy that finallyyy she is going with them out!!

Then three of them got ready soo fast and they decide to find Arjun!!

The Three of them were searching for Arjun and they were asking anyone who were there do u know a man called Arjun they answered NO all of them were shocked they didn't knew that when he came into the bar he changes his name so if anyone asked about him they wouldn't find him and so he doesn't want to meet *his college friends Expect Rati*….. he was calling himself *Sam* his best friends name *girl name* ME…. They conutined their searching till they got depressed and when Arjun closed his eyes Rati went and was crying….

They went back to their home they then Rati went to her room not letting them to come in she was soo sad….Background song was playing on *without you this river has no shore, Jaan *

She woke up the next day she wished that she dead never to come back….

After almost one week she was soo depressed she want to kill her self intsed of being a life…… alone but not alone without her friends alone without her Life Arjun her everythings in this life…..

Her Friends used to play with her and let her to be happy as much as they can….they wants her to be happy like she was 10 years ago……

They decide both of them to go and find Arjun for her and they really did find him they knew him bc of his pic was in Rati's wallet the only difference was he was tanager in that pic but he havent changed at all…..

He was at the shop mall with his best friends chilling going out they were going to their were in the cinema then……..

When Mari and Sanam saw him they runned towards him they shouted Arjun Arjun…… and he truned to see whom is calling him he went to them saying excusme never saw you then how u knows my name they asked him that they wanna set and talk with him bc it's somethings really urgent we need to talk to you he agreed…..

There was a coffee shop beside the theatre they went there and sat and they orderd some drinks…….

Here they start the story they told him everythings……and Arjun was almost in watery eyes couldn't say anythings they can only see his smile which crapt on his face….*Sigh* after soo many days he smileedd…….

He asked whatever where is she now he wants to meets her wants to talk to her…….

He didn't knew that she leaves with them…..they now told him that she is absolutly fine but she is soo depressed without you….! He was shocked that she still loves him as he too loves her a lot never they forgot each others!!

Home…….!!

Hearing knocking of the door Rati got up to see who is knocking she thought they are her frineds they might forgot the keys….!!

But when she opend the door!! It was none than other her LIFE………

She was soo happy seeing him and soo he was and they shared an small eyelock it was asking eyelock where u were this years😳!!

Haila Am Hell Tireddd am gonna con sooon>3

Hope You Will Like This Part Thanks for your Precious Comment and Do leave your comment love ya all………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

res

SHAMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
Jaan! Where have you been this whole time
I missed you toooooo much 😭
LOVE YOU!!!!!
Okay coming to the story
whoa a lot just happened
and that too,
in such a short part? 😡
Oye don't worry,
I write short parts too 😆
but seriously,
amazing part!!!
Continue soon!
Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

res

SHAMMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
Jaan! Where have you been this whole time
I missed you toooooo much 😭
awww jaaan!!! u didnt knew kya i had some net pro thats way couldnt come here proplry but know it's working thanks god😃
awwww missed u too jaan love ya tooooo muahhhhhhhh
LOVE YOU!!!!!
Okay coming to the story
whoa a lot just happened
and that too,
in such a short part? 😡
haila is it short part i tried my best to kept it as long as i can😆😆 but haila seemz in vain i cannot😆
Oye don't worry,
I write short parts too 😆
but seriously,
amazing part!!!
Continue soon!
awwww thanks hun will inshallah con it soon😃😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
shamsa wonderful update
but was short loved it
n plzz update soon if u got time
thanks 4 d pm 🤗

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