Another Chance -MayUr FF Part17-Page 133-LAST PART

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#971

nice subtle ending sam..absolutely perfect ending...😊do come up with a new concept soon..plzzz

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#972

It was a beautiful part.Loved d dialogues.Nupur telling that tho she loves Mayank she can't 4get her past,she loves Adhiraj.

Mayank's dialogue was superb.

I want to be your present and your future.

Nice ending

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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#973

This is not done no ways

you told in the last update that some more parts

and there is a difference in some more and one part

thodi bahut angeji mujhe bhi aati hai Miss Sami

I was hoping it will turn slowly but no it happened over night I am angry now :( and disappointed also

But the end was amazing ,and the best thing they both thought that they were wrong

Nupur needed time and mush obvious reasons she cant forget everything in one night too

I am happy that you leaving writing for some time bcoz studies take priority

Take care and all the best Sami,

Aruna

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#974

Part 16:

Finally he confessed

Did not exPect all this

Cont soon

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#975

Part 17:

Awww wht an end

Loved it

Totally made for each other

Do write more

Gonna miss this ff

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#976

One of my fav FFs :( I'm sad this is over, but it was a beautiful journey Sam...Mayank and Nupur, meant to be and they got another chance, finally...it was gr8!! just lovely!

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#977

First of all i apologize for commenting this late😊...!!!

Okk update came as a shock...yess a shock as i expected to get atleast 1 or 2 more parts...but still u managed to end it beautifully n perfectly...!!!

Actually we longed to get some Mayur moments not that typical romance but the way they manage to cover the distance btw them with the help of kashika ...though we didn't get much of Mayur but u beautifully connected them both with the angel...loved the way Mayank confessed that he wants to be Kashika's father... wants to give her all the happiness n not that he wants to give Nupur all the happiness of the world...he confessed to be her present n future in the most realistic way...the sweetest moment when the angel said her very first word n addressed mayank as Pa Pa...!!!

Lastly holding hands on swing n someone Bless them from above is the part where i felt my eyes moist...u truly deserve this👏...!!!

Brilliant work of urs...will truly miss this FF as its one of my most fav...n i will miss bugging u for updates too😔...this FF is n will be always close to my heart...n please no longgg break as we can't afford to miss u for thisss longg...so come back soon...!!!

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#978

OMG... u did tell me that I'll get a shock when I get back to IF.. but you should have mentioned the nature of shock too... that would have done the job easy for me... I understand your POV too and all the best for that.. and FB is always there right??

Coming to the update, I loved the way they used their another chance to get back love in their life keeping their friendship intact.. and the way you have written is really praise worthy..

Will miss your writings and this FF too.. coz only I know the amount of threats I used to get for not commenting on time... and the bribe i used to give you to cool down your anger... LOL.. i'll miss the bribing sessions too...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#979

Well, Sam, I finally was able to read this entire story. In the past year, I see a Sam becoming more mature in her writing. Sure, the waits for another update were terrible, especially to the readers, but you managed to complete this entire ff in a time lapse of a year. You should definitely come back to this ff in the next years and show that you have accomplished in making a masterpiece.

The closing sentence was perfect. Inferring that it was Adiraj, I'm glad that you mentioned him in the last part. That proves that you can feel the way Nupur would be feeling. Sure, maybe not the exact feelings, but you created her. Thus, you would know the way she felt.

Trust is love, I believe. You showed this perfectly. Honestly, I was in awe of Adiraj's character. I'm not sure why, but I like the side characters more the main themselves. You've read my fan fiction, and the final letter [to Nupur] was not as important to me as some of the others in that fan fiction. I'm the weird type, but the characterization of Adiraj was wonderful.

I'm not going to point out mistakes, because you have improved immensely.

With love,

Nikki