Another Chance -MayUr FF Part17-Page 133-LAST PART - Page 101

Originally posted by: JaeeDevRathore

First of all, I am really sorry for being extremely late but I was just caught in a lot of things but now I have read the last part finally and I just want to tell you that this is what I wanted - this is the end I wanted for the story ...

Hey Jaee, Thats all right dear :) 😃 I am lad it turned out the way you wanted it to be 😃

I somehow was really attached to the title - Another Chance ... when I had started reading the story - that is a long time back - frankly speaking, I could not relate to the title; actually I didn't believe in the title but things change and so did my opinion about the 'second chance' ...

In this whole story, time and again I found something to which I could relate to - sometimes it was Mayank's inner thoughts, the other times it was Nupur's trauma - these little things attracted me more and more ... If I need to say one word about this story - it would be Realistic - no over the top drama but exactly what happens in reality ...

Thanks a lot dear 😃

Past can never be forgotten - it remains inside you but one needs to learn that you cannot live in the past - you need to move forward ... No one can live alone and no one can drink the salty sea - it takes time to move on but when you have a companion holding your hand throughout the journey - the process becomes beautiful and easy and that is why I liked the ending because you didn't show completely besotted by each other instead you gave a new beginning to their story - they were best friends and somewhere in the time, gradually they would become the companions that they are supposed to be - but the way you mentioned the presence of the past made me love the ending - it was beautiful and I am extremely happy that I read this story ...

God bless you dear ...

Originally posted by: zishaRP

wow u updated!!!! im vry late huh😭but anyways now im goin to comment.😃

YOU NO WHAT I LUV UR WRITING SKILLS THEY R TREMENDOUS N I MUST SAY THIS IS UR MASTER PIECE GIRL.U WROTE IT BEAUTIFULLY.OH GOD I HUV LACK OF ADJECTIVE TO PRAISE THS STORY .I NEVER EVER HUV SYMPATHY FOR MAYANK IN ANY ANOTHER STORY THAN THS BEFORE ACCORDING TO ME HE IS THE BEST CHARACTER IN YOUR STORY.N I LOVE NUPUR TOO.
U R BESTEST BUDDY MAY GOD GIVE U ALL SUCCESS IN UR FUTURE. REGARDZ
N HA I LOVE THE LAST LINE N LAST PART OF THIS STORY IS GOIN TO BE MY BOOKMARKS.
LOVE U HOPE SEE U SOON.