Maaneet FF: A Twisted Fate #1: Link Pg. 148 - Page 57

may I just take the time to say that Maan is a complete idiot?😆 I loved the bit with the "what was so funny?" HAHA! he's awesome!

I'm reserving this spot for now, I'll definitely come back with a longer(and better) comment later today! (:

-nitya

p.s. you updated ALL of your FFs?! :O holyfishpaste! that must've taken a lot of work!

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww'
d room was just specially romanticccccccccc
luved maan singing 2 geet in d taxi
though thy fight thy hv started liking eachother

awesome update. naina!!
excellent work dear
plzzz do continue soon
waiitng for much more fun hehehe😆

hey wow Naina... lovely update..... Geet was so "J".... I loved der fight..... and Pls PM me for the next updates of all yr FF's .... once again... just loved it...

oye u! how Cute! a birthday update?? wooooh! you're Awesome and So, Sweeeet Naina-Maina-Shaina!! thank u baby!! 🤗 I was grinning like a phoooool when I read what u wrote at the end - awwwwwwwwww!!!!!

OMG now... LOL I love how they're behaving like a typical couple in the eyes of everyone else, it's just confusing them more and more and it just made me laugh throughout..! Their accidental lovey dovey exchanges awww hahahaha was all fab!!! Smart ideas and also so much fun to read!

I cannnottt believe Maan broke out with "tujhe dekha to ye.." omg..! How Unlike him, yet So like him... I thought he might be doing it to bug her, but when he was shocked at himself for doing that too - awwwwww I thought it was So cute! DEFO the magic of the place - it's intoxicating them, I can't wait to see what more it'll lead them to do lol

You have portrayed Maan as super duper adorable as well so freakin' FINE! I can't blame the receptionist for flirting - but I can't believe how innocent he was in the situation 😕 😆 I thought he was deliberately flirting - esp with what he was saying!! 😆 Lovely work with him yaar!

and... My, Oh My, Geet is one hotheaded little missy aint she!! Making sure to keep her Maan all to herself! lol aaaaa, she Actually got jealous? Oye Hoye!!!! I Loved that - her reaction to it, how she dealt with BRIJ-ETTE! and how she told Maan off too - 😉 FAB WORK right there Naina!

Keep it UP! Please don't get lazy, I hope you update faster! You have SUCH aweseome ff's and ss's.. You Better be more consistent! I don't wanna have to wait too long for updates! 😛

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx *MASSIVE HUG SONIYE*

Amazing! They really can't keep their hands off each other....lolz. Only if people knew what kind of "romantic" couple they are.....lolz....all in all a very fun update.....do continue soon.

great update!!!

A-W-E-S-O-M-E Naina