Crumbled- AR OS - Page 2

Hey Kiran!

Originally posted by: -Steffz-

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Ah, first one to reserve, 4th or 5th one to comment 😆
This was a sad one shot, I dont usually like not so happy endings because it makes me think too much and then I end up in a land of unending thoughts, its a while before I come out of it. Ah, my boring woes, coming back - the emotions in this one was depicted in a different way and thats what I loved so much, simple, yet the depth was inexplicable.

Nice one Kiran.
Thanks for the PM.

- Steff </font>

Steffiiee! :) Thanks for the comment girl! Yeah, I know many who have a thing against the unhappy sad endings...but I guess the whole OS here was sad and melancholy and makes you sad :S thats how the book made me feel! Thanks for the comment again :)

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

i seriously am almost crying after i've read this....god kiran how do you get this good???
u r a total genius....the shot was brilliant primarily because of the realistic story...
just real love...just truth....no pretence, no hiding....
i don't even know how u come up with such great stuff...i could feel the pulse of armaan throughout....
sad though it is....i enjoyed reading this immensely!
now if you will please update madam????
love
sumedha

hey sumedha! :) thanks a lot for the comment! I am glad you liked it...and yeah, update is on its way, soon! :)

Thanks again.

Kiran

Originally posted by: CZ..

reserved :)

thanks for the pm kiran :)

*Edit - Brilliantly written Kiran. I'm glad this section is finally maturing and people aretaking risks such as this one. I could imagine each and every scenario in my head, you wrote it just so beautifully. The writing was crisp and the to the point, and yet so amazingly beautiful and deep. I think all I can say is - I could feel the pain.

Great job Kiran!Looking forward to more such great pieces from you 😊

Once again, thanks for the pm!

Neeetz!! :) for some reason, you were one person whose comments I was looking forward to, perhaps cuz you did the Binge Living shot and I loved it! :) I am glad this section is getting some good stuff written too, have had too much of mush love :P Thanks a lot for the comments, I am super happy that you liked it!

And usually I don't do one shots, let's see if I get moved enough to write more. Thanks again!

Kiran

U made me cry yaar.
It was Just too Good.

Hey Kiran

This one-shot was really well penned. I usually avoid depressing read like a plague! This reminded of an one-shot CZ wrote a while ago, I remember after reading her one I was left with crumbling thoughts just like yours did.

I was planning to read "A million little pieces" but haven't got round to it yet. However after reading this I'll surely take some time out to read it.

Hope to read some more from you :-)

Nahida

One life such, lifeless becomes
lonely one lives, death precedes
Other people, friends and family
Need be all, wanted felt greed
reasons not enough, living one's
Second by the clock, for you
myself, tear by the feeling
Stop won't do, i don't any, like you.

Life is a struggle for everyone everyday. People are your necessity to breathe and live. The question doesn't arise for the survival instead for those who learn to exist on their own. Humans are greedy creatures - for life, people, love..everything. Empty souls.

I liked it Kiz, though i would have liked to unreserve a spot better.

luv,

nij

My chappals r coming your way!
Tht was painful man, I cried!

Very well written though!

This makes me want AR together more!