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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 7:
Announcement: SO.....DID U GUYS ENJOY???
audience: YEAH!!
Announcement: DO U GUYS WANT MORE?????
Audience: YEAH!!! WE WANT MORE!! WE WANT MORE!!! WE WANT MORE!!
Announcement: OK OK GUYS COME DOWN. NOW.......IS KHUBSURAT SHAAM KE AKHRI PERFORMANCE BY THE DANCING GIRLZ.
lights go off. spotlight falls on the girlz. They are wearing sorta punjabi salwar suits. All the boys are shocked. especially Armaan. he talks to himsef.
Armaan: abbe yaar ye log to sab kuch pehente hain. I mean inko dekhke laga toh nahi tha ki yeh salwar suits pehente hain par ab toh lag raha hain ki ye log hamesha salwar suits hi pehente hain. Itna comfortable lag rehe hain. kya yaar ye log ARMAAN ko confuse kar dia. WOW.
Ridhima is again in a blue outfit, and all the girlz are in the same color outfit from their first performance. Song starts playin:

gore gore yeh chhore - (2)
Girlz point at all the boys....
The other girlz go off the stage and starts dancing with evryone around them.
yeh ishk ishk chillate hai oooh yeah
yeh galee galee mandaraate hai oooh yeah - (2)
shadee kee degar naa jaye magar
yeh gore gore se chhore - (6)
They pull Armaan to the stage and then start dancing and pushing him and bothering him and evrything. Just like in Hum Tum.

andher se chahe kuchh bhee ho yeh, aadha magar hai heero wali
din rat kitaabe parthe hai yeh, ladakee kee taswiro wali
kahee jivan mela oye shava, par shadee jamela oye shava
darwaja inhe dikhlaao jara
yeh gore gore se chhore - (6)

gore gore yeh chhore - (2)
shadee kee jo bat karo toh buri yeh halat karthe hai achcha mmm
bin shadee sang rehne kee yeh badee wakalat karte hai
har ladakee pyari oye shava, bin jimivari oye shava
laila ke bina yeh majhnu bane
yeh gore gore se chhore - (6)

They push Armaan off the stage and obviously u guys can imagine Armaan's expression at the time (lol poor thing)
jab yeh budhe ho jayenge, kans kans ke reh jayenge
kande par koi hath naa hoga, ham dum koi sath naa hoga
tokar kayenge oye shava, phir pachtayenge oye shava
tab yad inne aayenge ham, yeh gore gore se chhore
yeh gore gore chhore, yeh gore gore se chhore
yeh ishk ishk chillate hai oooh yeah
yeh galee galee mandaraatei hai oooh yeah
shadee kee degar naa jaye magar
yeh gore gore se chore - (6)
Song ends and evryone starts cheering. Armaan still has a shocked expression on his face. haha.
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Part 8:

RECAP: Song ends and evryone starts cheering. Armaan still has a shocked expression on his face. haha.

Armaan: Abe yaar, mood kharab kar di

Announcer: wat do you think girls?

Girlz: They're Awesome

Anouncer: OK GUYS BEFORE WE GE THE BEGINNIG OF THE YEAR PARTY GOING ON, WE HAVE ONE MORE PERFORMANCE TO PRESENT, SO R U GUYS READY

Audience: YESSSSSSSSS!!!

Announcer: O.K'..HERE IT GOES

THEN THE CURTAINS FLY OPEN AND YOU CAN SEE FLOWERS ND THE STAGE COLOR LOOKS LIKE IS GONNA RAIN ON A SUNNY DAY..

THEN''''.

Ridddhima is again dressed in a blue dress which luks like this..the linkhttp://www.nexteve.com/images/D/F6221a-01.JPG

Then she has the necklace on which is also shown in the picture. Her hair is like how it is before. And she also has nice long blue earring on. She doesn't have a lot of make up on though. She has blue eye shadow on

Aaakash is wearing a light blue long sleeved shirt and white pants.

Then riddhima enters the stage, Armaan is staring at her like anything, he just can't take his eyes off of hers, they're so beautiful. She's so beautiful, armaan thought but didn't know why he was thinking like that about her

Armaan: No way dude, focus, focus, es lardki, ES LARDKI NE TUJHE BASKETBALL NE HARAYAYI HAIN , TU ESE KAISE PASAND KARSAKTI? And as you know he said it out loud.

Rahul: Armaan, tu theek to haina, tu eye sabkya bawkwas karreyin?

Armaan: Kuch nahi yaar

Rahul: Oh ok

Armaan was then again smiling at riddhima but his smile disappeared as soon as he saw aakash come and hold her hand

Armaan: Abe eye Bindas kya karreyin, woh abhitak choti hain eak lardki ki haat pakar karne kiliye. Lekin, mujhe kya farak partha hai haina armaan. Abe kya karreyin , lardki ki haat chod warna main abhi waha..

Anji,rahul, muskaan: Armaan, ARMAANNN

ARmaan: Kya hua

Anji: tum kya kahereyon

Armaan: Who kuch nahi Anji, concert dekhe, hehe with a fake smile

Armaan: humsha mujhse kyu hota hain yaar

Anji: ARMAANNN

Armaan: Kuch nahi kuch nahi, aapni behen ko dekho, I mean concert dekho'

Then the song starts and riddhima and aakash atrt their performance'

Aa aa..aa aa'aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai

Tum Se Hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona hi hai

Aa aa..aa aa'aa aa..aa aa.. aa..

Aankho mein aankhe teri
Bahoo mein Bahe teri
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha
Hua kya
Bathon mein bathein teri
Rathe saogathe meri
Kuyn tera sab yeh ho gaya
Hua kya
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Shor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi si behoshi hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Aa aa aa aa aa aa'

Aadha sa vaada kabhi
Aadhe se zyada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is tarah
Wafa ka
Chode na chute kabhi
Tode na toote kabhi
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya
Wafa ka
Mein tera sarmaya hun
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi
Raaste mil jate hai
Manzile mil jati hai
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na khona he hai
Tera na hona, jaane
Kuyn hona he hai

Aa aa aa aa aa aa '

Everyone is clapping and cheering and armaan is ripping up the concert flyer as he hates seeing riddhima and this aakash dude together and you can hear armaan growling

Muskaan: Kya hua armaan, performance ccha nei laga?

Armaan: Nei, nei. Bohot''''''.CLOSE tha, You know what I mean bohot close, duskro ka bahon mein tha u know, Indian lardkis ko esa dance ei karma chahiye

Anji: To tum kahoge Indian lardki ko kaisa dance karma chahiye

Armaan: Nei who, kuch nahi'.

LEMME KNOW WAT U GUYS THINK, K!!!
Edited by armanlover - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
omg!! im loving this, guys do keep comenting ok
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Part 9:
At the party:
Anji: ye bar kitna achcha hain na?
Armaan: ha ha tu toh aise baat kar rahi hain jaise ki tu yaha kitne barso se aa rahi hain.
Muskaan: ARMAAN!
Rahul: Kya? Isne thik hi toh kaha hai.
Anji: ok ok whatever. Let's go inside na. Kahi Ridzy aur wo sab hamse pehle aa jaye toh? Aur wo pagal Atul bhi toh aaj aane wala hai.
Ridz: Hey everyone!
Anji: Hi Ridzy. oh main toh tum sab ka introduction kara na hi bhool gayi. Guys, obviously ab tak toh tum log realize kar chuke honge ki yeh meri pyari behen Ridhima hain.
Muskaan: Hi Ridz. Ridz bolke pukar sakta hoon na?
Anji: Yeh hain Muskaan.
Ridz: ya sure, Muskaan.
Rahul: Hi ridhima.
Anji: ye hain Rahul.
Armaan: are Rahul nahi Anji, Raool.
Anji: and yeah of course this is Armaan Mallik jisko agar tumhe yaad hain tumne basketball mein haraya tha.
Then all the bunch of boys and girlz that were dancing at the concert comes in.
All: Hey Anji. Kaisi hain yaar?
Anji: hi guys.
Anji (to Armaan and the rest): Guys yeh hain hamare Ridz aur uski super cool group. In short hamara cousins ka group. u guys remember them. The announcer in logo ka introduction to de hi di thi. ye sab bhi Ridzy ke saath hamare college join kar rahe hai. Sharmita, Koel and Payal are our cousins. Deb and Prashant are brothers and their dad and our dad are best friends. and Aashish and Akash are both cousins and they r Deb and Prashant's cousins.
..................................................................................................
Everyone is inside the bar now sitting at the table to eat. Everyone is talking and it's really noisy.
Ridhima: Di main abhi ati hoon, washroom jana hain.
Armaan (thinking to himself): Awesome idea. Awesome dude u r the best. Abhi dekhti hoon ye American churail ko.
When Ridhima was passing by Armaan, Armaan foot his foot out to trip her. Ridhima trips and falls at the floor.
Everyone is laughing.
Anji: Ridzy samhalke chala kar na.
Armaan: Abbe yaar Anji, e teri behen. wo American churail ko agar heels pehen ke chalna nahi ati toh heels pehen ti kyun hain?
Ridhima makes the expression she always does when Armaan does sum prank.
Ridz: abhi dikhati hoon, freakin loser.
Ridz takes a glass of soda and dumps it on Armaan's head. Armaan was eatiing spaghetti with meatballs and spaghetti sauce. he took a whole bunch of spaghetti with the sauce and throws at Ridz. Ridz takes chocolate cake and throws but hits Payal instead.
Payal: RIDZ!!! MERA DRESS!!! Payal takes another piece of cake and throws it at Ridhima but misses and hits Anji.
Anji: ye tune thik nahi kiya Payal. and throws some cake at Payal but hits Armaan.
Armaan: ANJI!!! He throws a glass of Soda but hits Rahul.
Rahul: SAALE!!!! He throws some more cake and hits aakash.
Aakash: Yo dude. What the hell? He throws spaghetti and hits Aashish.
Aashish: AAKASH!!!! YE MERA FAVORITE SHIRT THA!!!! Aashish takes some Pasta and throws at Aakash but hits Koel.
Koel: AASHISH!!! WAIT I'M GONNA GET U!! She takes some pudding and throws but hits Sharmita.
Sharmita: SIS!!!! NOT FAIR! ITNE SAARE LOG HOTE HUE AAPNI BEHEN KO KOI MARTA HAI??? She takes some Mashed potatoes and throws, hits Muskaan
Muskaan: EWW!!! I HATE MASHED POTATOES. AISE KOI DOSTI THORI NA SHURU HOTI HAIN???? She takes some custard and throws hits Deb.
Deb: Itna beautiful ladki ko ITNA GUSSA SUIT NAHI KARTA KUCH MEETHA KHA LIJIYE ITNI KARWAHAT ACHCHI NAHI HOTI. and he throws strawberry jelly. He is the only one to be able to get his target. Muskaan takes some baked beans and throws but hits Prashant.
Prashant: OH NO U DIDN'T!!!! and everyone starts throwing whatever food they can get theirhands on even soda, water and wine.
RIDHIMA: ENOUGH GUYS!!! STOP IT!!!! MERA ITNA ACHCHA DRESS RUIN KARDI MERA BAAL BHI KHARAAB KARDI!!! AB BAS BHI KARO!!! BOHOT JIYADA HO GAYA!!! Ridhima starts yelling and everyone shuts up.
Ridhima: hhahaha Guys u shudve seen your faces. It was so funny. u guys were totally scared of me.
All: yeah right!
Then after having a blast at the party they go home as they have college the next morning.
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part.. loved the food fight!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
heyyy dear,
nice parts
thanks for PM.
continue soon

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
awesome parts
loved them all
loved seeing armaan jealous
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Don't worry guys we'll update soon and anyways we have summer vacation from the 28th.
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btw guys there's sumthin I forgot to tell u guys. THis is a story where-
NO SID IS GUARANTEED
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 10:

In the morning at college:

Armaan obv enters playing BB

Rahul, Muskaan and Anji standing togethter looking at him.

Rahul: Aaa gaya saala.

Muskaan: oye Kamina, use Saala kyun bolta hain tu? Kitna sweet hain bechara.

Rahul: Ha ha tujhe toh sirf wo hi sweet lagta hain. Is duniya uska ilawa koyi aur toh sweet hain hi nahi.

They start arguing. Pulling each other's hair.

Anji: GUYS STOP IT. Aur ye Ridzy kaha reh gayi? Gos yeh ladki bhi na. Oh she's here.

Ridhima comes with Koel, Sharmita, Payal, Deb, Aakash, Aashish, and Prashant all together. All of them have (obv) western clothes on. Boyz looking very cool. All the girls staring at them. and all the guys in the college ogling the girlz. Armaan looks that way and is again dazzled.

Armaan to himself: Dude WTH is this? u r going crazy.

.Ridhima: Hi Di. Sorry I'm late. wo kya hain na mujhe in logo ko pick up karna tha na isiliye.

Anji: It's fine.

Rahul: Hello, Ridhima. Hey Sharmita. You're looking very nice.

Sharmita: umm.......Thnx. u too.

Muskaan interrupts them.

Muskaan: Hi Prashant.

Prashant: Hey, Muskaan tumhare is really cute, I like curly hair glancing at sharmita as she has straight hair.

Rahul: Vaise I gotta say Sharmita, I love the color of highlights in your hair, its really pretty

Sharmita: THnx umm..wat's ur name again

Rahul: Rahul

Armaan: Rahul nahi Raool

Sharmita starts laughing a little bit

Riddhima just rolls her eyes

Riddhima: Hey guys, class mein report nei korni?

Anjali: Oh haan Ridzi, chalo guys

Armaan: CHaloow

Riddhima: Such a jerk

Armaan: Kuch kaha, jorse kaho na

Riddhima: MANIE KAHA JERK, she said it with a really irritated face

Armaan: Oh! You want me too jerk

Riddhima: No thank you

Then they reach to geneics class and Ms.Mallika is teaching and Anjali introduces riddhima and her group and Ms.Mallika is really pleased to meet them

Riddhima and Anji sits together so muskaan has to go sit somewhere else because she used 2 always sit with anji b4.

So she goes and sits in the desk behind them. Meanwhile sharmita comes and sits at a random desk and prashant is heading for the desk next to her but eventually rahul comes nd sits in it and sharmita smiles at rahul.

Seeing this Prashant gets irritated and goes sits next to Muskaan.

In the meantime, Armaan is noticing all this and smiling by him self and thinking this year is going to be tough.

Then Ms.Mallika tells da sttudentts since its first day they cud have freetime.

So then all the students starts talking and Armaan is flirting around and thinking about getting riddhima back someway.

Rahul: Sharmita, aap bohot aacha dance kortiho

Sharmit: thnx yaar Rahul, ur so sweet

Rahul: Lemme see your hand sharmita, by looking at someone's hand I could tell If dey have a good heart

Sharmita: Oh wow! Cool

Rahul: You do havea good heart sharmita and tum bohot chalak ho

Sharmita: Oh really!

Rahul: yes

Then they both start laughing and kind of touch each others hand mostly you can say they were holding each other's hand

Prashant is burning mad

Prashat: Aww! You guys look adorable together jaiseki love birds.

Riddhima notices his and understands the situation as she knows a lot of history of shamrmita and prashant.

Prashant: Anyways, muskaan can you come to the bathroom with me, mujhe tumse kuch kahena hain, looking at sharmita

Muskaan: haan chalo, confused

Sharmita just slammed he pen she had in her hand and left the room while she had tears in her eyes. Armaan riddhima and prashant had noticed the tears.

As soon as sharmita left the room riddhima came to prashant and started yelling at him

Riddhima: Prashant, what the f**k is your f**ken problem?

Every1 is shocked as they know that those are some very bad words and they know its kinda cool 2 use them. The teacher wasn't also in the room because all teachers had a meeting in the staff room so da students were alone in daclass and no 2 told them what to do.

Riddhima: Mujhe pata hain kit um loko ki fight hui, iss ka moltob eey nahi hain ki tum humesha ka shormi ko tease korte rahoge, dusri lardki ko saath flirt karogi, uski samne.

Prashant: Main Muskkan ki saahflirt nei korreithi riddhima and relax, maine tumse kuchh nei kia.

Riddhima: Haan lekin meri behen se kia and you know main bohot der se eye notice korke jareuyin liken maine tumse kuch nei kaha bar aur nahi, tum India ake bhi sudhre nei, same flirting boy rahe geyo aur sharmita ko dukh dereyo.

Prashant has slight tears in his eyes.

Seeing this riddhima realizes she yelled a little too much at him and she relaxes.

Riddhima: Prashant, you know you love her, she said it in a very calm voice.

Every1 is shocked 2 hear this except 4 koel and payal cause they already knew

Prashant: Toh what u want me to do, its not like shes gonna believe me.

Riddhima: So you have to make her believe you.

Prashant: But how? Ridz

Riddhima, Koel, Payal, Muskaan, Anji: Hum tumhe madat karongi

And then they all realize that muskaan and anji 2 want to help.

Den prashant hugs all of them and says thnx.

Riddhima: Lekin mujhe jakar shormi ko rona band kar na hoga barna atlan tic ocean bana dega bathroom mein,

Evrey1 stars laughing and ridz runs out of the room 2 find sharmita and finds her patting a cat

Riddhima: sharmita, tum kya korreuon?

Sharmita: Dekh na ridz, eye cat abhi yahan se girne wala tha, agar main time ke ake ese na pakratha to shayat ab maarjata.

Riddhima: Oh! Um eseliye class se bahar nikal aya?

Sharmita: Haan

Riddhima: Oh! Maine socha

Sharmita: kya socha?

Riddhima: Nei, nei kuch nahi

Sharmita: ok

Riddhima: lets go bak 2 class

Sharmita: tum jao mein eye billi ko bahar rakhke phir auongi.

Riddhima: ok In a confused voice.

After riddhima leaves

Sharmita to herself.

Sharmita: sorry ridz, maine tum loko ka sab baat sunliya aur mujhe nei lagta, mujhe tum loko ki help chahiye aur I'm not sure ki main ab usse pyar korti hu ya nahi

Prashant: Riddhima, kaha hain woh?

Riddhima: who areheyin aur woh ro nahi rehen

Prashan: Kya

Riddhima: Yea

Then the lunch break bell rings

Armaan: Les go guys, lunch time.

Ridddhima: Hume pata hain ki lunch time?

Armaan: Ok, so chalo

Riddhima: kisiko saath chalogi lekin tuhari saath nahi chaligo

Armaan: Toh ume kise pucha mere saath jaane ke liye, thank god tum mere saath nei jana chati, vaise mera koi shak nei hain tumhare saath lunch pe jana

Anji: OK guys enough, chalo

At lunch, sharmita comes and sits next 2 riddhima and the whole gang is chatting with each other and eating and for some reasons armaan keeps glancing at riddhima and aakash notices this as he himself always stares at riddhima with his light brown dreamy eyes.

After a while a big group of boys enter with a a really brolic guy leading them. He has a sleeveless black jacket on and when he was coming, riddhima was throwing away her garbage and she bumped into him and he caught her. After he saw her he couldn't ake his eyes off of her, he just kept staring. Armaan saw this and he didn't feel right about it so he got up and said

Armaan: Wats up Ranvijay, to the guy

Ranvijay: Hey armaan, how r u letting riddhima go.

Armaan: gud, aaj subah mein kyu nei aaya ?

Ranvijay: Woh actually mein bhul gayi thi ki aaj mera pahel din ka 4th year.

Guys Ranvijay will be a new character, he will help armaan riddhima get 2gether but he too lokes riddhima in da beginning but den stops as he knows armaan loves her.

Armaan: Hey guys, eye hai Ranvijay, eye iss college mein senior hain, es saal eski akhri saal hoga.

Ranvijay: Hi guys, etna sab noya lok kon hai, anji

Anji: Eye meri behen hain, pointing at ridzi aur baki sab hamara cousins, seb, aakash, koel, prashant, sharmita and eye hain payal

Ranvijay: Oh! Tum lok America se aye hu right?

Sharmita: Yeah

Ranvijay: You guys look gud especially you pointing at riddhima, tumhare aankhos contachhain or real eyes?

Riddhima: They're my real eyes

Ranvijay: Wow they'r ereally green and pretty.

Riddhima: Thnx

Ranvijay: Are eye kya, tum sabka ankhos hi either green, gray or light brown wow!

guys i know it waas boring but udn worry

Edited by armanlover - 15 years ago

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