Dil Mil Gaye -an AR FF part15b UPDATED@pg12

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I just joined India-forums and I saw all these amazing fan-fics and me and my friend got an idea. Why not write a new DMG? and oh yeah OBV No changing Armaan but Ridz and all other characters will b changed and everything. I am sure it won't b as good as everyone else who's writing but We will try our best to come up with something good. Arman and Ridz are in Med College. and There's some new and awesome characters. and Ridz is very popular, she will b coming from US.



Pg. 1- part 1 and 2
Pg. 2- part 3
Pg. 3- part 4 and 5
Pg. 4- part 6, 7 and 8
Pg. 5- part 9
Pg. 6- part 10, 11 and 12
Pg. 7- part 13 and 14
Pg. 8- part 15
Pg.10-promo for part 16
Pg. 12- part 15b and NOTE

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Part1:
Gupta Residence, in the morning:
"Anjali beta utho. Aaj tumhari 2nd year ki pehli din hai medical college mein and plus Riddhima wapas aarahi hein, use airport se to bhi leke ana hain na. Leken woh sab bad mein pehle tum college se wapas aao phir, ok beta?" Padma is already married to Shashank here as Ridz already knows that she is adopted and stuff. 'Good morning beta, chalo chalo, jaldi taiyar ho jao phir papa tumhe college drop karenge."
"Really? Oh wow, okay mamma main 10 minutes me ready ho kar niche aarahi hoon.' Anjali says with a excited voice.

At the breakfast table:
Shashank: So, Anjali beta, u ready for college again?
Anji: Yea dad.
Shashank: Is saal Riddhima bhi U.S. se aarahi hain. Woh bhi tumhare saath college jayengi.
Anji: Yea I'm so happy dad, I can't wait.
Shashank: Well that's good ,chalo Anjali nikalte hain warna late ho jayenge.
Anji: Let's go dad.
They both wave at Padma saying bye.

At the college:
As soon as Anji enters, all the boys look at her, the girls gather around her saying hi's nd hello's but Anji was looking for her best friend Muskaan.
Anjali: where is muski, Oh my god! hi rahul, kaise ho?
Rahul: Oh hi Anji. they hugg
dey chit chat for a while bout their vacation
Anjali: Oh hey rahul, Muski ko dekha
Rahul: Oh nahii to, main bhina usko dhoond rahi thi.

Also I forgot to say my friends username is "armanlover" and she will also be posting sometimes.
Hope u guys like the part. I know it's not really that good but I tried. I'm sorry if it's not good.
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 15 years ago
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If you guys don't like it plz tell me. i'll stop posting. Just need to hear the feedback. I wud really appreciate the criticism.
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice intro
pls do continue soon
N all the best n congrats on ur 1st ff
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Posted: 15 years ago
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can't wait to read more .........please continue
love Heaven
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Thnx guys I know it was a very boring part but u guys still encouraged us to write on so thanks a lot for that. I'll posting later today including Armaan and Ridhima's entry.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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please jaldi se update karo na ..........main kab se wait kar rahi hoon
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Hi guys. I'm gonna post the next part cuz loveangle had to go some where so here it is.

Part 2:
Anji and Rahul were chit-chattin when hoards of girls start screaming.
Anji;What the hell is going on?
Rahul: Mujhe kya pata? main koyi antaryami hoon kya?
u see a basketball being dribbled.
Anji and Rahul both: ARMAAN!
Anji: Who else?
Rahul rolls his eyes.
Rahul: Aa gaya kamina.
Anji: Shut up, Rahul. Hey Armaan!
Armaan: Hey, gorgeous. and you...........what's your name again?
Anji Armaan!
Armaan: Oh yeah, how can I forgot? main to bas mazak kar raha tha Anji. Haina Raool?
Rahul: Saale, Raool nahi Rahul.
Armaan: yeah, yeah, same difference yaar. Hamesha larkiyon ki tarha chirta kyun hai? Chill yaar. By the way, Muskaan kaha hai?
Rahul: Mujhe kya pata?
Armaan: To tujhse thori na pooch raha hoon? Muskaan ki naam li iske matlaab ye to nahi na ki tujhse poocha tha?
Muskaan comes in, dressed in black skinny jeans and a red tube top. ( and btw guys Muskaan will wear salwar suits occasionally but she is kinda modern and wears this type of stuff.)
Muskaan: Oye girlz move. ( and shoos away all the girlz crowding around where Armaan was standing talkin to Anji and Rahul )
Armaan: Hi Muskaan. (and they hug, Rahul's looks kinda jealous but doesn't say anything)
Muskaan: Oye ullu ka pattha, aise dekhna band kar warna maroongi ek thappar.
Rahul: Oye, churail, tujhe kyun dekhu? Tu koi Miss india hai kya? Main to wo Sonia ko dekh raha tha. Hey Sonia! (Rahul leaves with a girl and Muskaan's face falls a little but no one notices)
Armaan: Ok guys main game finish kar ke ata hoon.
Armaan goes to play and tries to makes a basket but misses and hits somebody on the head. Armaan looks to where the ball went and is totally dazzled by the sight. A girl in tight black jeans (ripped up kind), a pink off shoulder top with a black butterfly belt. Green eyes, long wavy hair blowing in the wind. Armaan is frozen on the spot totally mesmerized.
Edited by armanlover - 15 years ago
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I hope u guys liked the part. I'm back and I am gonna post another part now.
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part 3:
Ridhima: WTF????? Dikhai nahi deta kya?
Everyone turned to see who was screaming at ARMAAN as no one screams at Armaan. As soon as they see her all the boys are staring at her top to bottom. All the girls are very jealous.
Armaan: Can we have the ball please? Oh wait, wait, lemme guess, tum to larki ho tumse to nahi kheli jayegi basketball.
Anji: Armaan...............................
Anji tries to say something but Ridhima interrupts.
Ridhima: you think you are too smart?
Armaan: Samajhti nahi sweetheart, hoon.
Ridhima: Oh you're on!
Everyone starts cheering for Armaan, They start playing and Ridz wins. Someone from the crowd says"OMG!!!! usne Armaan ko hara dia, Armaan ko. All the boys are staring at her.
Anji: Hi Ridz!
Ridhima: Hey Di.
Armaan: Ridz? Ye kaisa naam hai?
Ridhima: Ridz nahi Ridhima, Ridhima Gupta. Main Ridz sirf apni friends ki liye hoon. and I don't see you anywhere near that category honey.
Anji: Forget it, Ridzi. Lets go home. Armaan meri behen ko tang karna band karo.
Anji: Not fair yaar Anji. Behen ka aate hi apni behen ki side le rahi hain? aur mujhe thori na pata tha ke yeh teri behen hai?
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Gupta house:

Ridhima; Di, I'm mad at you.
Anji: Why?
Ridhima: You forgot? You were supposed to pick us up from the airport. Plane wale hame ghar tak aake thori na chor jaye ga? We were lucky that Payal's dad came or else I would have been so embarrassed in front of all of them.
Anji: Aww, my sweet lil sis. Sorry maaf kar de na aisa fir nahi hoga.
Ridhima: hona bhi nahi chahiye.
Anji: Ab chal apni di ko hug kar. Waise Ridzi tu bhi kuch bohot important baat bhool rahi hai.
Ridhima: Kya?
Anji: Soch, soch.
Ridhima: OMG!!! The concert! Main kitni stupid hoon. 8 baje hai na? aur abhi toh 6:30 baj gaya. Main ready kab hoongi aur un sab ko pick bhi to karna hai na? College pauchne mein adha ghanta lag jayega. How am I supposed to get ready in ONLY 1 hour?
Anji: Itna tension mat le. Main hoon na.
Ridhima: Kya di yeh lame lame Shahrukh Khan wala dialogs de rahi ho. Do something original.
Anji: Accha baba ab taiyar bhi hona hai ya nahi? Your outfit is already in the bathroom and don't panic. You gonna look fantastic................
Edited by loveangle_4ever - 15 years ago

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