Childish Dosti (Mayur ff) Updated 16/05/11 - Page 65

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Posted: 14 years ago
extremely sorry guys but its my 10th so was adjusting in my new class, now my summer vacations started so i updated, i will update its part b possibly tomorrow, till then enjoy

Part 17 a (Full On Cupid Giri)


Mayur reaches the cafe and saw Adhinani sitting there not talking much
M-easy job nahi hai
N-chill yaar, we will do it
M-ya
They both moved to adhinani's table, Adhiraj got to hug nupur but instead mayank hugged him
M-adhiraj humse bhi mil lo
A-ya ya sure
Suhani also rushed to hug mayank but instead nupur hugged her
N-suhani long time haan
S-hmmm ya right
They all settled down
A-so guys
M-so lets play something
N-hmmm truth n dare khelte hain
M-great
Nupur spins the bottle and it stopped at adhiraj
N-so adhi, truth or dare?
A-dare
N-wooo ok tum uss ladki se jake 10 mins tak flirt karo and impress her
A-wow so simple
Adhiraj goes to that hot girl and starts flirting with her
M (whispered)-nupur tum kya kar rahi ho
N-chill, pyaar ki starting jealousy se hee hoti hai
M-ok if you say
N-suhani, dekho na adhi kaise uss ladki se chipke ja raha hai
S-toh isme main kya karu
N (dumbo in mind)-arre par usne tumse toh kabhi aise baat nahi ki, oh haan may be tum utni hot nahi ho
S-WHAT?????
N-arre chill, main toh aise hee keh rahi thi
Suhani kept thinking about nupur's words and nupur winked at mayank, adhiraj also came and settled down and spinned the bottle, it came on mayank
A-so mayank
M-hmmm truth
A-ok, so tumhari first crush kaun aur kab thi
M-hmmm crush was in 8th and her name was...
N-was?
M-leave it na guys, i'll spin
Nupur was getting angry, mayank spinned the bottle and it came on Suhani
M-so suhani what you will choose
S-hmmm truth as well
M-f9 toh bolo iss restaurant mein jitne bhi ladke hain usme se tum kisse apna bf bana sakti ho
N-except mayank
S-ok ok nupur chill, hmmm yahan toh sab dumbo lag rahe hain koi handsome nahi hai, ok then adhiraj is better than these so adhiraj
A-what?
S-ya
M, N-wooo
N-waise guys seriously, you should give it a thought you both look perfect with eachother, so why not
M-ya i agree with nupur
Adhiraj and Suhani both looked at eachother and smiled...they kept looking at eachother
M-i think we should leave nupur
N-chalo
Mayur left the cafe and nupur hugged mayank tight
N-mayank mayank mayank we did it, yipeee
M-ya we did it, finally they are together so no disturbance
N-toh lets go
M-yes
They both were in the car, mayank was trying to talk but nupur was not replying
M-ab kya hua
N-tum toh rehne hee do
M-arre batao toh gussa kyun ho
N-tumhari 8th wali crush kaun thi?
M-oh toh miss nupur is jealous
N-will you pleas shut up and tell
M-hows that possible, if i will shut up how will i tell
N-arrrhhh naam batao uska
M-tum kya karogi
N-TELL NOW
M-acha batata hu, yaad hai us din tumne mujhe mere 13th birthday pe ek sweet sa card bheja tha and a teddy with love you bestie, that day i first felt something for you main tumhari uss image se pyaar karne laga tha which was made in my mind...so the moral of the story is mera first and last crush tum thi
N-awww my sweetu, tum tabse mujhe itna pyaar karte ho, i love you alottt
she hugged him and he too embraced her
M-oye hoye aaj bada pyaar aa raha hai, ek din mein do do hugs
N-ab tum baatein hee itni sweet karte ho toh karna padta hai
M-chalo ab ghar chale, padhna bhi toh hai
N-oh haan main toh bhool gayi
They both left for their homes
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Posted: 14 years ago
very cute and nice update...

mayur were so sweet
loved them a lot...

it was short but beautiful update
do cont it
take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear
great part
loved it
plz continue soon
thnx for d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome ff...pls add me to ur pm list...!!!

Congrats...u completed 100 pages👏...!!!
Edited by valiyah27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i guess i'm reading this for the first time. nevertheless, i'll read the whole ff as i get time.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updt dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
omggg mayur was so cute
dey were awesome :)
n car wala scn :P
update soon haan :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally u update...i thought u forget about it...b/w it's so sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Verry sweet update mayur were cute thnx 4 d pm

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