Childish Dosti (Mayur ff) Updated 16/05/11 - Page 62

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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzz do....though i'll read ths ff again... i forgot bit of story..sorry... but plz do continue
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offcourse u should...i love ur ff...and u have to continue...waiting for ur update

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u shuld continue...
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oye don't think to stop it..........i loved it.......so plz cont it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry again for the late and short update, hope you enjoy


PART 16 - Padhai Ya Kuch Aur 😉

N- mom main mayank ke ghar ja rahi hu padhne ke liye

NM- Kyaaaaaa, tu aur padhai, yeh kaise ho sakta hai

N- mom aap bhi an, main padhti hu exams se pehle aur waise bhi ab mujhe mayank padhane wala hai

NM- tera toh pata nahi par mayank jaroor nahi padh payega

N- mom please

ND- meri beti ko pareshan mat karo

N- dad acha hua aap agaye

ND- chalo ab jao aur dil lagake padhai karna, all the best

N-thanks dad

In Mayank's Room

M- dekho nupur, yeh law ko aise prove karte hain, ok?

N- kya mayank, kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha, hume ab ko cd ke equal prove karna hai toh itna sab likhne ki kya jarurat hai seedha seedha kyun nahi likh sakte

M- by god nupur tum kitni lazy ho

N- hawwwww mayank so rude, mujhe nahi padhna yeh sab aur tum se baat bhi nahi karni

Nupur sat their totally angry, mayank smiled and shifted towards her

M-nupur apni aankhen band karo

Nupur didn't closed her eyes, mayank slowly moved his hand on her eyes and closed them

M- ab uss cheez ke baare mein socho jo tumhe bahut pasand hai aur jiske baare mein sochte hee tumhare chehre pe smile aa jati hai

Nupur thought about mayank and her being at the place of raj and simran of DDLJ and were hugging eachother in the khet, a big smile appeared on her face

M-that's it, ab issi smile ke saath tum aaram se samjho and I am damn sure tumhe sab samajh aa jayega aakhir meri girlfriend ho toh intelligent toh hogi hee na

N (smiled)-acha acha ab jyada mat bano ok, now start

After Two Hours

N-wow mayank, tumhe toh coaching deni chahiye, you are great

M-thank you, thank you, waise idea bura nahi hai, waise bhi college mein bohat saari ladkiyon ko help chahiye hoti hai toh main unki help kar dunga

N-oh hello, don't you dare think about anybody else

M-ok ok baba, meri girlfriend hee itni beautiful ki mujhe kisi aur ki jaroorat hee nahi hai

N (blushed)-mayank ab main chalti hu

M-oye hoye, waise main yeh tution free mein nahi deta, mujhe meri fees chahiye

N-kaisi fees?

M- 2 kisses par class, fixed rate and no change

N-mayank yeh kuch nahi hai

M-arre teacher main hu na toh main hee decide karunga

He simply closed his eyes, she smiled at his childishness and slowly kissed his cheeks one by one

N-ab khush, chalo bye

M-bohat bohat khush, bye kal milte hain

Nupur smiled and walked to the door when he called

M-nupur

N-kya hai?

M-raat ko mere hee sapne dekhna, automatically sweet dreams ho jayenge (winked at her)

N (blushed)-byeeee mayank

Nupur ran outside smiling, mayank kept his hand on his heart

M-haayeee, issi ada pe toh hum fida hai

In the morning

Nupur woke by the run rays and stretched her arms, just then her cell rang, she answered

N-hello

M-good morning sweety

N (shocked)-mayank? Tumhe kaise pata chala ke main uth gayi?

M-by god aise stretching karogi toh mera ky hoga

N (more shocked)-mayank tumhe kaise pata ke main stretch kar rahi thi

M-arre pehle muh toh band karo

N-mayank bata rahe ho ya main phone rakhu

M-arre baba ab tum khud apne kamre ki khidki kholke sogi toh main kya ghar saamne khade hue doodh wale ko dekhunga?

Nupur ran to the window and saw mayank grinning and waving at her, she also waved but then came back to herself

N-by god mayank, tumhe sharam nahi aati aise kissi ladki ke kamre mein dekhte hue

M-arre mana ke mera naam Sharma hai par main kissi ke nahi apni childhood best friend, neighbor, current girlfriend, future biwi and mere bacho ki maa ko dekh raha tha

N-oh hello itni dur ki planning karne koi jaroorat nahi hai kyun ki agar tumhari harkatein aisi rahi toh main kissi aur se shaadi karlungi

M (serious)-nupur aisa kabhi mazaak mein bhi mat kehna, main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta

N-arre aisa kuch nahi hoga, main bhi toh mazaak kar rahi thi

M-chalo ab jaldi se tayaar hojao, hum caf mein suhani aur adhiraj ke saath padhai karne wale hain

N-kyun?

M-suhani ne mujhe kaha tha aane ke liye par maine usse kaha ke woh adhiraj ko bhi le aaye so that we can implement our plan

N-that's awesome, theek hai main 1 hour mein tumse milti hu, byee

M-byeeee

Precap-Mayur Try To Get Together Adhinani



Thanx Guys For Motivating Me To Continue, I hope you keep liking my work, it matters alot to me

DO COMMENT And Tell Me If You Liked It

Edited by mayur-ki-diwani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ghosh nanchie lovely update dear 👏...aww mayur were soo sweet she kissed him on cheeks awww...loved them and they r trying to get back together adahni wowww looking forward to it gr8 job...and thnx alot 4 pm 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..
aussum update
loved it
mayur r so cute.....
pls continue soon
thnx for the pm

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