MayUr FF: All You Need Is Love-New thrd link-pg145 - Page 81

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Gosh Akku 🤣

U r crazy !! ... Could you please get ur brain checked for once? 🤣 I wanna know ki usme hai kya ? 😆 .... You always make me smile with your updates ya.. and esp after the conscience talks, m laughing like crazies or grinning looking at the pc screen !! * i tell u m gonna blame u, if ppl doubt my sanity * 😆

Awesomeeeeeeeeee update as always! m loving the way the story is moving ... its not loosing its pace ..smooth and steady ! love it ! 😳

Continue soon.. thanks for d pm..

Love
Vini 🤣

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome update!!!!

really it was amazing....

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

mindblowing update dear

luved their conscience fights....

nupur had changed so much

waiting fr mayank challenge to kiss her

cont soon n tnx fr pm

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Akki

first of aLl weLcum back yaar

loved the update

I seriously love their conscience

and the proof which u gave abt mayank being dedicated to studies was excellent

fabulous yaaarrrrr

simply loved it to the coreeeee

and the song is one of my favs toooo

it's beautiful

cont soon

and the upd8 was big enough

give these kind of bigggg upd8es

u know I love this ff of urs!!!!!

It's just too good!!!!!

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

i realy love mayu conscience 😆

this update it's superp n loved it

i'm sure next update will be mayur kiss 😍

can'tw ait next update

i never listen green day songs

but i'll listen i like the lyrics

thanks 4 d pm hun 🤗

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

*Reserved* =]

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Choti Niviiiiiiiiiiii🤗 Badi Nivi!!😆😆😆😆😆

You know who was the star of this update? Definitely Mayank's conscience 😊 I think Nupur's conscience is becoming lazy these days😉 Ofcourse..Mayank's conscience is the start of all the updates! I am partial towards it!😃
😃

And my fav (Fav?? I mean most fav) line of this update is

Mayank was killed one day and troubles decided to suicide on the friendship day.

🤣 Oh yea! I doubt anyone else but you has noticed this line!😊

Aki - sach sach batana ,do you really crack these kind of lines in your daily conversations or is it reserved only for us?? 😃 In any case, we are so lucky to have you 🤗 You are simply amazing...Daily conversations..Yes! These things just dont come out of the blue..But rght now my life is too sad to have these things.. So i am kindov getting rid ov my frustration thru these updates!😆 Thank you!

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

mind blowing......gr8 update...i love this ff...

love every bit...sweet sms chat...the mess...n the challenge too

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooooooooooome............

superb.........

loved the upd.

thanx for the pm.........

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Aki
haye meri sweetu
awesome update re
not only awesome---------
its fantastic
mind-blowing
beautiful
fantabulous etc ec............

i just loved it to the core


haye i loved my mayur as sual
now i m waiitng to know how myank will kiss nupur.............


Akki u r a brilliant writer and u prived it in ur each n every update
i love u and ur ff
u r rockkkkkkkkkkkk
aa gale lag jaaaaaaaaa.

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

awesome awesome awesome dear!!!........ just loved it beyond words!!....... wow another kiss coming up!! "winks"......... ;)....... plzzz update asap!!

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

hey akki

nice part...

gosh i love mayank and his conscience...

it feels nice to read it

the song also was very nice

thanks for posting it in hear...

keep writing...

update soon

divya

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Akki! 🤗 Daanu!🤗

Ohemgee! This update was just so wicked awesome!Yeah! Wicked awesome! 😎

*sigh* I keep falling for Mayank Sharma's conscience more than I like him. 🤣 I absolutely loved that bath soap bit 🤣 Bath soap. Ri-ight! Love sick ppl make me sick! Seriously!

And aww the messaging part was just too cute! And gosh, I was actually shocked when I read that all he sent her was a 'Hi' 😆 And the best part when the conscience takes over 🤣 Maynak's conscience is more like an entity. its more of my thougthts over their actions. 😆

Aww, it's nice to see that Nupur sits with them at lunch for Mayank. Sweet =D

Gosh, I so wanted Mayank to get molested once more but now it seems it's going to be another way! I knew that you wouldn't be able to keep your obsession at bay for long 🤣 Make it GOOD! But then I know you will. Obsession at bay? never! You want the kiss? Arent you tired of it!??? Lets see if i make them kiss!!

Mayank Sharma and his studying habits sound way too much like mine! I usually remain stuck on one page for hours at times 😆 Then me and you are twins!😆

Amazingly written Akki! I so loved it to bits <3<3

Do continue soon!

Love

Daania

Thanks daanu!
Will continue asap!

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Everytime i read this ff i started talking to my conscience....
U should read a ff on conscience love...
BTW absolutely mindblowing update...Loved the sms part...The 'hi' wz very cute...😍
So mayu gonna kiss her...Its so magical...
Im very excited...also a little scared with nupur's past...
Cont soon...I wait for this like hell...
*hugggggs* this is for all the kiss parts...🤣🤣

Originally posted by: myownarea

No kidding Akki, I m in love with this FF. I love the characters their consciences (now thats a first!!) then i loved everything u write, you write it exceedingly well and with so much humour, its such a pleasure just reading them doing nothing but messaging random things and living in confusion and loving that feeling..its absolutely wonderful!!

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

hey Akki,

really nice part

love mayur's conscience

just awesum

waiting for nupur's mystery

do continue soon

thxs for the pm😊

Krushi

Originally posted by: thithutop14

hey!!

i jus lllllllloooooooveddd...............

LOVED mayank n his conscience......😉

gosh this part of urs ws simply amazing😃

n hhhmmmm......nupur ke raaz kya hai dting to noe...😕

n obvio dying to noe hw n wen the challenge is gona gt complited..😆

plz continue soon n ya thnx fr the pm!😊

Originally posted by: kirti123

😊fab update

just love mayur n thier conscience

loved it😊

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

I am loving this Ak !!Hehe!😆😳

I know..i have been a miserable case on the fact of commenting on this FF...but tu samajh sakti hai na ???..lol EB !! Nahi yaar! I know..Mein nahi samjhungi toh kaun samjhega??*aansu*

Okk.. coming to ur update..

I am lovin' Mayank , i soooo can understand that why u loveeee Mayank sooo much ... Ur wite-up actually makes me feel that . Ahh..wish someone Mayank of ur FF kind can actually come into my life.. :D :D I love Mayank yes. I think i can relate to him in real life!!

Right. You were supposed to study today. No wonder you are exhausted. Would you be exhausted if I called Nupur to kiss you?

i love this liness...lol. It almost cracked me up ! ...Amazin stuff re .Thank you hun! Mere zindagi ki gaatha hai..kaash kiss bhi hota!!

Coming to Nupur, well my personal fav. [Hehehe..I am Straight ] For a change she is listening to different genre ! Wel , that mostly happens with any ordinary gurl n i adore the fact that u penned it down this way !

Finally Nupur jelling around with people around.. Wowie !! A Commendable Change .. Mayank deserves a tap on his back for sure ...

That idiot (Mayank) never called me by the way; neither did he ever ask me out. I wasn't going to take the first step this time

The wayy u show ordinary gurl in tough Nupur is amazin ! .. Literally....Amazin Nupur is the ordinary girl..she has the thoughts..its just the things in her lfe that make her behave the way she is..

Wel my fav line being -

So, our short meeting only consisted of clumsy smiles and then just because there wasn't anything to talk about, I asked him whether he had completed the Physics assignment. The look on his face made me hate myself more than ever. But well, it was funny. I kissed his cheek and ran away smiling to myself.

Lovely , Mindblowing Update ..

Ruchi

PS- Hope this makes out for my previous miss ;) ;)

Thank you for quoting! Glad you liked it!!
It does make out for the previous miss! And its okay hun!!

Love ya!
Akki!

Originally posted by: -Aish-

Akki, unnecessary stretching is bad.. Agreed.

But I'm sure you won't make that STRETCHING unnecessary, it'll become quintessential. Don't you worry..! 😉

<3 Aishwarya

Originally posted by: ak12

Ri-ight!

I usually get bored of my stories very easily..i do get bored of this too..

But anyway, lets see how it goes!!

Originally posted by: -Aish-

This is BAD!! You're not ALLOWED to get bored of this FF. You get that?