Does Love Need A Reason? {Abhi-Niki} (NOTE pg 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow sheenu
First thanks for giving this AN ff dear.
Many ppl doesn't like this marriage concept of AN story but i like it honestly.
Love is happen at anytime n anywhere.I know ppl find it wrong for married person to fall in love.It against the law or rules whatever u say but the chances of love happen more when u put restriction against it.
They both know about the marriage but still can't help to love each other.Thats might put wrong example but when someone is in love than they can't think above that.
Love is like a drug in their case that they can't live with each other nor can't live apart.Thats why i love them.They hav unconventional lovestory.
I want someone to write this story as CV can't handle this well but afraid tht may b eno one likes this matter.Thanks for starting this ff.
Add me to ur pm list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sheenuuu!!! 🤗
Wow...you're on a roll! 😉 😃
And I'm loving it!
My fav line was when Dr. Shashank said, "You'll be free" 😆 That's such an understatement!
And Abhi talking to Nikki...that was so sweet! 😳 And talking about getting married and having two kids...aww! I wanted to go and give Abhi (yours, mine, and Nikki's 😉) a tight hug! The poor thing...he needs reassurance! 😕
looking forward to how this goes on...as I guess, you'd have imagined this as just 3 parts. But right now, it's extending! Hai na? 😛 😆
And I love you for this! 🤗
Oh! and P.S. - love the signature line! 😆 😆 😆 🤗 Will find it for you! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey
Wow this was so touching...
Glad that they found Jiah the culprit in all this
Oh God hopefully Nikki will make it thru
Loved the end bit where Abhi is talking to her...
Too good..
Thanks for the Pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 4



4 months later…

Abhi kept looking eagerly at the door, waiting. A couple minutes later, the door opened, and out walked Muskaan and Ridhimma, wheeling Nikki in front of them. Abhi stood up from the bed and walked towards them, a sad smile on his lips.

Nikki was dressed in a royal blue salwar kameez, decorated with simple silver sequined patterns. Abhi knelt beside her wheelchair, and took one hand in his and cupped her face with his other hand. He slowly lifted her face, so that she was looking into his eyes. He looked into her eyes, trying to search for some sign of recognition, some sign of acknowledgement… but he couldn't find it. The big brown eyes, which once glittered with love for him, were today dark and frozen. The innocent and naughty girl who loved to play pranks on anyone and everyone was today so silent and unmoving. Why? Because of their love…


*flashback*

NOTE: THIS IS A CONTINUATION OF PART 3'S ENDING

Abhi was talking to Nikki as if nothing had happened until suddenly the monitor started beeping. He looked up and saw that her heartbeats were getting slower, until they were so far apart that it was almost half a minute between each beat. Dr. Keerti, Atul, and Dr. Shashank ran in from the doorway, each checking a part of her body. Abhi just sat there, numb, staring at Nikki, who was shuddering and breathing heavily. Oblivious to him, the other doctors were conferring about Nikki.

"Doctors, we have to do something. Her heart rate is not stable, and a chance of death is very much possible in this case. The tiny rip in her lung has become very big, and she is having trouble breathing. Her pancreas and right kidney have also been penetrated. We have to do surgery immediately," Dr. Shashank insisted.

"But, sir, aapne to kaha tha ke her condition is very fragile, so surgery will not be a good option…"

"Dr. Atul, haalat waqt ke saath badal jaatein hain. And now Dr. Nikita's condition is such that we cannot wait. Dr. Keerti, please get all the necessary equipment ready and meet me in the OT in half an hour. Dr. Atul, it is best if you do not participate in this surgery."

Atul opened his mouth to object. "No, Atul…Right now, Dr. Modi needs all the support he can get. It is better if you stay with him."

"Okay sir. The OT will be ready for you in half an hour."





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Posted: 15 years ago
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*EDIT*

That's all I have to say...😭
Nikki in coma...I'm depressed. Please make my Abhi smile...
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oye.......Nikki's not in coma......she's just sort of brain dead......
because of that stupid Jiah.......

but the ending is happy now!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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jai ho!!! this is why i love you sheenu!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thanks sheena for pm dear.
I loved it but its very short.
How u r feeling now dear?🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks guys!
Part 5 is coming in about 2 mins and part 6 is almost finished!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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2 mins ho gaya Sheenu...am waiting. :P
Waise I can't even tell if you're online. You're red. :S

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