MN FF- The Journey Forward; Forever Yours-note-pg3

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Hey guys'..well I want to convince myself that MN have a happy life in US'.so I wrote something to convince myself and thot of posting it here'it might be boring'and im not that good a writer.. but it's a build up'where they are embarking upon the new journey of their life . the first part is more of thoughts. The fun element will cum later. Plus I'll write further on the response. those who want the PM, like the post and send me a buddy request.

This is how I want MN to be together forever!

A new country, a new continent, new people, new roads, new cars. Everything is new. Apart from them, off course, meaning- Mayank Sharma and his wife Nupur. As the two of them made their way through the US airport to the parking are in search of a cab, Nupur constantly gazed at the surroundings amazed. Everything she saw from the hi-tech airport security to the caf, to the Americans, she held his hand moving her head right and left taking everything in, smiling widely all the while. Mayank looked at her amusedly, such a child she was. All his to have.

Back in the plane, while she was fast asleep with her head comfortably placed on his shoulders and her hand securely clasped in his, he thought about his life; Everything that happened to him in the past few weeks. At that moment, Mayank, the planner was tensed about how things would shape up for him and Nupur in the new place, a totally new culture, a new job along with the MBA. Nupur shifted in her sleep, smiling slightly. He sighed, looking at her, all his tension and anxiety slowly ebbing off him and giving place to the gratitude and relief he felt on having her here tucked beside him.

There was a moment sometime back when he had almost lost her as she stood demanding divorce. It was a time when the world shattered for him, leaving him numb and clueless. He still vividly remembered the utter incompetence of himself to think straight at the moment when he felt that he was going to lose the most precious thing of his life. The fear when she had turned her back on him. The feeling of hollowness that seemed to trickle into him which he knew could only be eased away by her touch, her smile; and then he had known he wanted nothing but her in his life, to make a life. That was when he had got her back.

Now when he thought about it, he mused at how insecure she had become that he didn't love her, how she had though that he wouldn't come after her. Wrong she was. Granted, that he was not the usual romantic lovey dovey guy, but it was true that his gestures, actions and even the affectionate sarcasm was his way of expressing love. He recalled how glad he finally was when he held her in hi arms sending a silent thanks to the God above for finally letting him be there where he belonged, in her arms, holding her and looking into her eyes, slowly making her realize the presence of love in his heart and her. He smiled at how they had not spent a single moment apart from then on.

But most of all right now, looking at her sleeping peacefully, he felt happy. Happy at the though of seeing his gorgeous wife beside him, who just for the sake of being with him had been ready to give up her scholarship altogether, but things do work out when you want them to; and he was determined not let her leave all her new found dreams again. He had tried to talk her into the scholarship again. But firm as she was, once she made up her mind, not even SRK could come and talk her out of it, he grinned. And that was when he knew what he had to do. He talked to the director of the company that was employing them and finally after negotiations got her scholarship training fixed in the US branch of the company. He felt excited at the thought of how he would surprise her with the scholarship letter in their new home. He knew she was slightly anxious herself of not yet having anything planned to be done in the States. But he also knew that she knew that she would find something but there was something or someone whom she could not leave. He reflected, how his love just grew deeper and deeper for her with every passing day; and as he pictured the surprised joy on her face when he would tell her about her new training, he slowly drifted into a content slumber.

After few hours, the young couple bustled out of the airport amidst the sounds of everyday life into the new world that was awaiting them, hand in hand.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!!! Beautifully written Sneezella 🤗
Cont soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow thanks for tis 😊

mayur together.....forever....will add on later...thanks a lot shinz...it means a lot...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Reserved!:)
shinz,thank you!

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There is so much i want to say Shinzi,but before all that,once again....Thank You!!! Thank You for starting this ff,for keeping MN alive,through your imagination......so that i can still live with them,while imagining all u write!! Atleast,i have a way out now,i can depend on your creativity,for my doses of MN! 😃 Like most,i never ever wanted an accident in the serial anyway,i was very enthusiastic of MN going to US,a new country,among new ppl......how these two unique and lovely characters would live there,how their lives would be......it could all be so great! And,now you,with your exceptionally beautiful way of writing,are doing the same.....continuing with what we all dreamt and thought should have been!!

You write very well.....i'm impressed😉 LOL😆......though i knew it would be good,but this was a beautiful beginning! Its like you have sincerely,put all your heart and efforts into this,i know how attached you are to MN....and that is what makes this one ff,special!! I know it will turn out to be fantastic.....!

Coming to MN here, as i said,i could imagine all of this happening! N's excitement at visiting the new country,both moving hand in hand😍......N's innocence is what is the most endearing aspect of her character......and sigh....she gets happy at little things,being beside her hubby and acts like a kiddo........how cute! Mayank Sharma,always planning,but this time not sure.....hmm.....new country,new systems,aisa toh hoga.......but he's sure of one thing na........his love,their love!!I love the fact that you did mention about what M went through during the whole divorce thingy,that was needed! I love the surprise Mayank has for and awaiting Nupur......and oh my she'd be so glad!!! Hey,i can actually see that excited and pleasantly surprised look on her face..........sigh!!!😆 So,overall,great start!👍🏼


Khair,i just realized i've written way too much😳 see i'm giving u competition😳😆

Do continue soon........i'm waiting to read about their life @US.........two extraordinary ppl,in a different country........together,with a bond of love..........❤️

PS:how about N's shopping out in US......😳 Interesting,it would be😉 😆 (God bless the shopkeeper though😆)

Lots and lots of Love
Sonal


Edited by Mystique - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shinz u write beautifully!!!
I don't know why you understimate yourself :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was one beautiful part..

Awesomely written...dont underestimate yourself..

And yeah..i loved it..

Mn tpgether in us...sounds like my shattered dream come true...anyways hun..i would love to read and kive mayur through your words...


Please do add me to your pm list and please please continue soon..

Btw i m akansha...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely shinz do cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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& mayank & nupur always lived happily ever after ..........😃


I always try to think the end of my MN story like this..........& u put it beautifully shinz.........Thanks from the bottom of my heart for this!!!!!!!!!!.🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow shinz
amazing job
u wrote it beautifully
loved it so much
plz continue it and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautifully written...wanted this to happen in mjht...but....ok....the starting was awesome...dying to read more....and pls dont underestimate urself...u r juz too good.........

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