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Posted: 15 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht
Lovely part

Do cont soon

thnxxx 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: ridhima1_gunjan
wowwwwwwwwww

lovely updt jaana...

loved it to the **core**

keep it up...

continueee soonn...

thnxxxx a tonn 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Aditi_sajanfan
amazing n rockkiinng n fab part dear
i was busy these days so sorry for the late reply

thanx for the pm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u rock!!!!!!!

its okay dear thnku so much 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: me_angel
Hey Pragya....It was really a nice update

O my Sammy chooooooo sweet..........apni Chashmish ka kitna khyaal rakhta hai..

Fallen in love with ur ff forever and that too truly, madly n deeply...........

Continue soon sweety n thanx for the pm........

Love

Aditi

thnkkkksssss a ton dear......thats such a sweet comment

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#315

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
nice update
cont soon
plz pm me nxt time

thnku so much 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: kris97
Awesome update..Please update next part soon...

thnxxx a ton 😊

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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya
tu kab update karegi?

dnt know exams on.... and usse pehle i will update the other one.... and madam u havent commentd for the last part

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Posted: 15 years ago

#318

pragya plzzzz update soon lov thnx

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#319

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
pragya plzzzz update soon lov thnx

yeah i will... 😊

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PART 24
okay guys at last i am updating... sorry but i had my exams.... and i think this one mi8 be a bit long which... and this one is especailly for aashi... whos bday just went away.. i wanted to update on that day itself but as i said i had by exams hope u guys enjoy and have fun... :)

SAJAN IN OFFICE
S: so chashimish... aaj dekho hamara kaam jaldi khatam hogaya...ab kya kare
G: ha khatam toh hogaya.. aur mayank bhi ghar chala gaya hai... hum bhi ghar chale
S: how boring chashmish... ghar jakar kya karenge.... waha par bhi bore honge..
G: toh kya kare???
S: jo tum chaho..
G: ummm.... sachi....
S: ha
G: pakka?
S: yup
G: r u sure?
S: ha i am sure... aisa kya karna chahti ho chashmish jiske liye tum mujhse itne baar ek hi sawal puch rahi hoon...
G: ummm main woh...
samrat giving that confused look with the frown on his head..
G: main SHOPPING JAN CHAHTI HOON ( HAPPILY)
s: oh ( he sat back at his chair)
S: KYAAA(getting up) SHOPPING NAHI... DEKHO SHOPPING BAHUT BORING HOTA HAI....
G: jo bhi ho ab toh tumhe chalna hi parega... tumne ek nahi do nahipure teen baar ha bola...
S: not fair chashmish
G: awww everything is fair in shopping and more shopping... ( pulling his cheeks)
samrat has a wide smile on his face...
S: okay baba tum hari main jeeta... ab chale..
G: chalo...
they go down... and when they sit in the car and samrat is about to start the car
G:EK MIN
S: kya hua?
G: woh main apna mobile toh cabin main hi bhool gayi... sorry main lekar aati hoon.
S: uffo.... tum bhi na.. okay no probs... jao... main wait kar raha hoon. jaldi aana..
gunjan smiled and went...
she went to the cabin and took her mobile.. while returning she heard some voice from the room beside

IN THAT ROOM
there was a boy.... who was talking to somone.. but gunji cudnt see the person's face
the voice was of a girl
Girl: yeh lo file... jab kaam ho jayenga tumhe paise mil jayenge
Boy: ji madam... kaam hote hi main aapko phone karunga
Girl: good aur dhyaan rakhna ki is baat ka pata kisi ko kano kan ghabar nahi hone chahiye.. warna tum jante ho...
Boy: ji ji.. is baar koi galti nahi hogi
Girl: theek hai ab tum ja sakte ho...
when the boy left gunji hid herself
after the boy went... gunjan was abt to enter the room... when her mobile rung
it was samrat
S: chashmish kaha ho tum... tumne do min bola tha.. 10 min hogaye hai.. main kabse wait kar raha hoon... jaldi aao
G: oops sorry.. abhi aayi...
cuts the phone
G: ab kya karu andar jau ya nahi.. samrat mera wait kar raha hai...
and she opens the door of the room but finds no one... pata nahi kauna hoga... us insan ke itna kareeb hokar bhi main use nahi pakar payi..
and she leaves from there..
BACK TO CAR
S: kya hua chasmish itna samay kaha laga diya..
G woh sorry mujhe mera mobile nahi mil raha tha...( she didnt wanna tell sam anything without she herself being confirmed)
S: chashmish tum bhi na.. kya karti ho
G: sorry...
S: its okay..
gunjan was a bit upset after what she heard... she was just thinking bat that.. samrat was also looking at her he was confused by such a behavior
S: kya hua chashmish? tum mujhe pareshan lag rahi hoo?
G: nahi samrat aisi koi baat nahi hai( fake smile)
S: are u sure?
G: yaaa...
S: waise pata hai.. tum bhi baki larkiyon ke tarah ho
G: kya matlab hai tumhara..
S: BORING..
G: what?
S: ha.. mujhe lag tum alag hogi differnt hogi.. shopping achi nah lagti hogi.. par tumhe bhi shopping pasand hai... yaar shopping karna main kya maaza hai? tum kitna boring
G: shut up samrat.. agar tumhe shopping pasand nahi toh iska matlab yeh nahi ki mujhe bhi pasand na ho...
S: whatever.. tumhe ye mana hoga ki tum boring ho
G: nahi
S: ha
G: nahi
S: ha...
G: nahi
S: ha
G: nahi...
samrat stopped the car in full speed..
he came closer to gunjan
gunjan was totally confused and had a scaring expression on her face.. .
S: ho boring...
he comes back to his seat
G: tum sach main pagal ho.... mujhe toh dara hi diya
S: isleye ... darpok boring chashmish
G: HOW DARE U?
S: I LOVE U ( i cant help kal ke scene ka nasha chaya hai .. i had to gve this one... written this one especially for jyoti and charmz... )
G: what?
S: kuch nahi mazak tha...
G: mazak band karo.. aur ha nahi main darpok ho nahi hi boring..
S: really? abhi pata chal jayega...
samrat zoomed the car in full speed..
G: SAMRAT... pagal hogaye ho kya? gari dheere chalo... samrat dekho... aise.. she saw a truck coming from front she shut her eyes...
after she opened it... the car had stopped..
G: phew.
samrat was grinning
s; kyun? manti ho na har...
G: ha baba .. man gyai tumse jitna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai..
S: i knew it..
G: ab iapne apko dharti par lao.. aur ab plss ache se shopping par chalo..
S: CHSH-MISH... hum already pahuch gaye..
gunjan looked outside the window... the had already arrived..
shopping time
samrat and gunjan go for shopping...
S: so tumhe kya khareedna hai..
G: kuch bhi nahi..
S: matlab..
G: matlab yeh ki mujhe shopping nahi karna. .sirf window shopping karna..
S: ab main bol sakta hoon ki main galat tha... tum wakai dusri larki jaise nahi hoo... ek toh tumhara pati tumhe shopping ke liye la raha hai aur tum ho ki kuch nahi khardeena chahti... agar tumhari jagah nupur hoti na.. toh mayank ka pura cash khatam kar deti..
gunjan smiled..
G: par tum.. mere pati nahi ho.. mera matlab hai ki..
S: bas main samjh gaya.. rehne do main tumhara lagta kya hu.. jao.. jo karna hai karo... main khud shopping kar lunga..
he leaves..
G: oh god yeh ton naraz hogaya.
she goes after him...
G: samrat
S:....
she put her hands on her shoulder..
he removed it
G: okay baba i am sorry..
S:.its okay... ( sternly)
G: acah theek hia main shopping bhi karungi
S: khud karlo main nahi karwaunga
G: nahi... main toh pane pati ke cash ko khatam karke hi shopping karungi.. itna bada golden opportunity kaise miss kar sakti hoon..
samrat smiled..
S: sachi?
G: muchi...
S: okay chalo... he gave his hands to her.. she held it and they went
G: tum sach main bache ho...
S: so toh hoon...
G: par main kharidu kya? acha ab tum mujhe shopping karwa rahe ho toh tumhe mujhe kuch dilao...
S: okay.. chalo us counter main chalte hai aur tumahre liye kuch salwar dekhte hai..
G; okay..
gunjan sees few dresses she cant understand.. as she is picking.. samrat is making faces like acha hai. .acha nahi hai... theek hai... horrible and all..
and both of them remeber before sangeet time.. when samrat was doing the same nautanki to find gunji's saree...
G: samrat tum kabhi nahi sudhroge.. i am sure abhi tak tumne mere liye acha salwar dekh liya hoga... ab mujhe aisa tang karne ka bajaye batauge..
S: umm... okay... yeh waala..
he took out a white dress.. it was somewhat like what gunji wore in roshini se..
G: yeh ?
S: kyun pasand nahi aayi?
g; nahi... mera matlab bahut acha hai...
S: okay.. toh jao try karlo na.
G: okay ek min...
she goes and tries it out..
when she comes back.. she is looking like a princess..
samrat is just lost in her..
G: samrat main kaisi lag rahi hoon?
S:.............
G: samrat...
S: huh? kya?
G: main kaisei lag rahi hoon..
S: uhhu.. he looks at her.. moves around her.. maiking gunjan confused...
G: samrat kya dekh rahe ho batauge
Samrat was giving a look as if she was not looking nyc...
S: tum.. tum... he went near her and spoke in her ears( aasmank ki pari lar rahi hoo)
gunjan just looked at him..
eye lock...
and this is the end..

baap re aaj bahut likh liya,,abhi mummy akar dategi..
hope u guys liked it.. it was a sajan specail today for aashi.. u guys will get mayur in next update...
plss comment and click the like button...
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