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Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: samratrocks
unexpected totally.. mayu is so monet minded...do cont soon..awesoem part!

Thanks a lot.....

Well, that's what i wanted.......

Mayu is not money minded.....

I am updating today....

Thanks......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice part
do try to update
longer part
thanks for PM.
continue soon

love
Riddss

Thanks a lot......

I will surely write bigger parts now onwards....

Thanks a lot.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: cool_shwets
Mahak🤗...u've updated atlast sweetie.... Kya hai na...this ff is a spl one for me....yeh super romantic jo rahega (tumne hi kaha hai😉)

The start was😍😉

.... nupur is the same girl...but a bit stylish dreaming about her dream-boy....☺️

Mayank....ufff....ab iske baare mein kuch na kahe to behtar hain.😳😳

Chalo...jald se jald update karo jaani....kyunki mayur ki first meeting ka mujhe besabri se intezaar hai😍...!!!

Yup........finally i updated......

I know that.....u told me that.......thanks for that......

Yup......i would do as i said.......

Thanks for liking the start.......

Mayank is the best!

I am updating today only......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey dear nice update but so short next time i want long hon and nice vm as well thanks a tone for pm do continue soon

Thanks a lot......

I know that its short.....

Next update would b long.....

I will continue soon....

VM credit goes to daksha.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: taibaaa
awesome update dear
do continue soon

Thanks a lot.....

I am updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: shaheen_memon
lovely start mahi.....plz continue soon

Thanks a lot......

Glad u liked the start......

I am updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
amazing biginning mahak i csn't wait nex part update soon plz thnx 4 pm

Thanks a lot......

Happy that u liked the beginning.....

I am updating today!

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Heyyy mahak
Loved the beginning
Eagerly waiting for next part
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

Thanks a lot.......

Thanks for loving the beginning......

I am going to update today.....

Thanks.......

love,
Mahak

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-sam-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#262

I think i didnt comment on this......

Yeah i didnt!

Sorry
But now i am.....

The concept is clear but intersting...

Oh ...it will be 😳😳😳😳
Mayur Romance........
i liked the first part.....
Haayla, waiting....
But when are you updating?

before updating this you should update your remaining ff's....
because you have stopped all at Intersting points and i want to read

now update........

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever
Loved Loved The Update Dear..
It Was So Awesome...
Awww..Bas Ek Dream Tha...
Cont Soon...
Thnxx For PM...
*Sana*

Thanks a lot.....

I am happy that u loved the update!

Aww.......but dreams become reality....

I am updating today only.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: -sam-
I think i didnt comment on this......

Yeah i didnt!

Sorry
But now i am.....

The concept is clear but intersting...

Oh ...it will be 😳
Mayur Romance........
i liked the first part.....
Haayla, waiting....
But when are you updating?

before updating this you should update your remaining ff's....
because you have stopped all at Intersting points and i want to read

now update........

It's ohk......

Thanks for commenting now.....

Umm.....i don't think that u can know this concept.....

Thanks for liking the first part......

I am updating today.....

Oh i know!

But thoda sa intezaar.....

I am going to update them soon.....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever
Mahi Mahi Mahi!

Itna short =(

Agle baar ek long update chaiye

Tikha?

LOL I loved how Nupur talks in Hindi

and Suzzanne doesn't know

hahaha I loved that part

cause I'm totally like that!

especially with my amercian friends

loved the part

excited for the rest of the story!

Thanks a lot......

Yup yaar......thora chota hai......but chalta haina?

ohk....aye aye captain....

Yup.....i like that part......

U like Nupur?

Grt yaar!

Thanks for loving the part.....

updating today,....

love,
mahak

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
wow...nice start dear....nice dream..lol..:)
do continue soon....
do update longer chapters..:);):P

Thanks for liking the start......

Nice dream....

I am updating today......

I will update longer........

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: armayurfan
nice start mahak.
loved those lines written for them.
but it was tooo short.
write a longgggg update next time.
continue soooooon.

Thanks a lot......

Those lines are meant for them.....

I know and i am sorry for that!

I would write a longer one......

I am updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: hazraluvroka
nice beginning...
aussum update..

and continue soon...

love u..

Thanks a lot.....

I am updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ammuakhi
superb start mahak.... i would definitely love to read more...😃😃 do continue soooooooooon...........

Thanks a lot......

Glad that u liked the start......

I will update today only!

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: .Daksha.
res edited

Ye itna chota kyun tha......ab jaldi se 2 part update kar.....

waise mere liye ye unexpected nahin tha 😆 😆 😆 😆

Coz u know that I know 😆 😆 😆

Waise brilliantly written.......Mayank apni tareef apne aap kar raha hai......koi baat nahin wo job Alice ne choda tabhi toh Nupur aayegi......right na.....koi baat nahin w8ing

Yeh itna chota tha kyunki tum update nahi karti ho......

Part 2 coming up......

i know i know....but tujhe starting different nahi lagi?

Thanks yaar!

right......main teri tarah intezaar nahi karaoongi.....

Updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
beautiful starting
jst luved it.........
waiting eagerly fr nxt update
n tnx fr pm

Thanks a lot.....

Glad that u liked the starting.....

Thanks for loving it......

i am updating today.....

Love,
Mahak

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: jasmeet khaneja
Wow..mahek.
Nice beginning....I can't wait till the nxt update.👍🏼

BTW can u update..."kaise woh pyaar tha"..

Thanks a lot.....

So happy that u liked the beginning.....

I am updating today.......so i guess u don't have to wait that much.....

Yup, i can update that......

So i would update it tomorrow......

Thank u....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: Alini-mayur
Lovely start.....
And awesome part.................

Continue soon..................................

Thanks a lot.....

Thanks for liking the part......

I am going to continue soon.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: deepaliseta
Wow dear...........
Grr888888 start..............
Seems u r quite creative..........
Luvd it very much..............
continue soon.............😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Thanks.....

I am happy that u loved the start......

I am creative? Thanks for saying that!

Thanks for loving it.......

I am going to update it today!

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: kirti123
wow mahak just loved it
thanks for updating it
and do update ur other ffs to
atleast we can enjoy mayur together through ffs na
thanks for the pm 😊 😊

Thanks for loving it......

I am updating it today!

I will update them too.....

Yup, i guess i too wanted that!

My pleasure....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: Sajan_Mayur-luv
Lovely Mahak...
Liked it very much..
Gr88 job..
Thnx for the PM..

😊

Thanks a lot......

Thanks for liking it......

Thanks....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal
awesome start dear!!......lovely first chapter!!.....just loved it!!.....so nupur is going to be her PA???......anyways......love u for updating it!!!!!!........plzzzzz update the next part soon!!!!

Thanks prerna.....

glad that u liked the start.....

Thanks for loving it.....

Yup.......but different one.....

Love u too......

I am updating it today only.......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was sooooooo niceeeeee

Thanks a lot....

thanks for liking it.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer
hey my dear jaanuable mahak.

1st thanks to ur frnd who challenged u to write a romantic story and m sure u will win this challenge with very high flying colours. 😉

@Daksha: - Awesome VM dear. ekdam extra super special awesome. Mahak is riight, no other VM can be better than this.

hey mahak back to u. actually i have not read the chapter but it sounds really really super exciting. U r already a gr8 writer n tht also on mayur and romantic FF matlab super sweets ki jelebi jaisa treat. 😆😆

i will the chapter and then edit my part.

*reserved for chapter 1.
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yaar meri pyaari si nanhi si jaan. what an intro chapter yaar!!! ekdam awesome. the starting lines itself gave me butterflies in my stomach n chudail Suzzane !! Abhi uthana tha kya??? how ridiculous. hehe. 😆😆 n look look whoz looking hot in red and blue. hmmmm.

awesome update yaar. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon. thanks for the pm too.

loads of love
vinu

Hmm.....chalo ab tumhe reply karti hoon....

Vinu......yeh toh galat baat hai!

Likh main rahi hoon aur tum meri frd ko thanks keh rahi ho *pouts*

Glad that u think that way...i will try my level best for that.....

And now i think that itna mushkil bhi nahi hai.....i mean its easy to write romance.....

hmm........Daksha made the BEST vm for my ff!

lol.....i love jalebi......

Thanks for the compliment!

Thanks yaar.......

Thanks for loving the start.......i was so nervous.....

Mayank is so hot na?

Thanks a lot for loving this part......

I am updating it today!

Love,
Mahak

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Mahima

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#265

hey mahak

do pm me when you reply to my comment

my comment is short though

but stil i'll be waiting for your reply

you have so many commenters that i find it really difficult to search for my reply

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
hey mahak

do pm me when you reply to my comment

my comment is short though

but stil i'll be waiting for your reply

you have so many commenters that i find it really difficult to search for my reply

Thanks a lot yaar......

Yup, i will pm u once i finish my comments section.....

Aree.......short hai toh kya hua? comment toh hai na!

i will pakka pm u......

lol.......but this time only one page.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: Mou.
very interesting start mahak.........i m loving it ..update next part soon! & it better be long!😆

Thanks a lot.....

I am glad that u are liking it......

Yup, the next part would be long......

Thanks.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ghtk1
outstanding start...cant wait 4 this ff.plzz update soon.😊

Thanks a lot.....

Glad that u loved the part.....

I am going to update it today.....

Just updating......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: -Jess-
Mahak.... awesome beginning... nice title of the chapter... fire and ice... kind of gives idea of what lies ahead....

update soon.

Thanks a lot.....

Glad u liked the starting.......

Thanks for liking the title........yup it is a hint.....

Glad u catch that one!

updating right now.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: daniella05
awesome n perfect start!!!
loved nupsi's good morning dialogues....very funny 😆 😆
and also our cool hunk was amazing 😉 loved him
waiting 4 their first meeting....plzzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

Thanks a lot.....

Thanks for loving them yaar......

He is toh always handsome and amazing.......

I will show that in this update...

Wait for the unexpected.......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: .Daksha.
edited my post on pg 31

i checked that....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...
great update!
that alice has some nerve!

so nupur'll be mayank's new secretary?

continue soon!!!

Thanks a lot.....

Glad u loved it.....

Yup.....true........

I am updating right now!

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: cutecancy
i just loved it

plz update soon

Thanks for loving it.....

Glad that u did....

I am updating right now....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: sweety_ursh
hey sweety grd part n thnxxx for the pm

Thanks a lot........

Glad that u liked this part.....

love,
Mahak

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: mayurlovers
Hey, Mahi

Unexpected update, I must say

I wasn't expecting update from you in nearest future, but got it... Yipeeeeeeee

Nice start

Now plsssssssssss update asap

Love,
$hrey@

Thanks a lot yaar......

I am happy that u liked this one....

Yaar in dino i get distracted from everything.....

And hence i don't update.......

Glad u liked the start......

i am updating right now....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: Senny
hey Mahak,

Wow so mr confident is set to hire someone really soon. Great update. I know how you must be feeling, we all are in the same boat man, hopefully things would get fine soon. Keep it up!

Yup.......he is gonna do so.....

Thanks a lot......

yup......hope everything is well.....

Thanks.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
saw all your three posts

how many times do i have to tell you

that you should not be nervous abt posting your updates

your updates are always amazing

and this update was rocking

nupur's dream...... by god........ mar jawan

and her hindi....... that's the best

mayank needs a p.a

hope it's nupur

waiting for their unexpected meeting

and the reply to my comment

continue soon

loads of love

mahima

Thanks a lot......

Yaar i am always nervous about posting my first part.....

They make me decide about character and everything else...

Thanks yaar.....

The colourful comments used are sooooo gorgeous.....😍

I am in love with them!

I will always reply to ur comment......and u know that....

Thanks yaar.....

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: arunabehere
Hey mahek Really sorry for Late comments dear

But here i go with the update

Beautiful answer to the one who challanged dear 😛

I did not think it was a dream ,it was kind of reality i thought

but if this is the dream then what will be the reality 😉😉😉

Nupur is too nice and more than that suzanne doesn't know hindi and she can blaber anything "I remebered Kajol from KKKG ,how she used to greet 😉"

She wil not allow her to learn hindi otherwise how will she can say what she want [he he he]

Mayank doesn't know emotions

He thinks "Money makes Many"

Bad attitude

Looking forward to mext update

Loved it dear

update soon

Yup, hope ab Anchal chup ho jaaye!

lol.....dreams do become reality yaar.....

and her dreams hold some significance....

Hey even i loved that! i just remembered.......yup....kajol was rocking!

He knows.....but u still don't know him......

I will take u close to him.......then u will understand him.....

Thanks for loving it......

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: .rumki.
like the whole part😃

con soon

rumki

Thanks a lot....

I am updating today.,

Love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: awsumgirl
Beautiful beginning Mahak...
It seems intresting but it was really very short...

Plzzzzzzz do continue soon..........

Thanks a lot.....

Glad u liked the beginnings.....

Next one wont be that short....

I am going to continue soon....

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: -krazyriya-
Hey.... hi mahak....😊 hey varshu.....

yaar tu kaha gayab rehti hai... aajkal tujhse baat hi ho pati..... pata hai.....par tum sab jaanti ho na......

anyways....yeh sab baatein baad mein karungi..... first of all I'm really sorry for commenting so so late.....😭😭 its ohk yaar........tu sorry mat bola kar......tumne comment kiya......yahi bahut hai mere liye.......

wow! such a cute teddy! u know i always lvo white teddies......i have one......

but i told u the reason nah.......so i know my sweetheart will forgive me in a second....... right 😆...?? yup........u know me too much!

Now.......what?

what an unexpected beginning yaar !! 😲😲 thank u.......the name says itself......

It was totally rocking !! ⭐️⭐️⭐️ thanks yaar..........glad ki tujhe yeh laga.....

the update was awesome... mindblowing..... cute... funny...cool...rocking.. but the most beautiful !! 😳😳😳 aww....now u are making me blush....and more than a bride! Thanks yaar..... (for this ff, i have given different tags if u have noticed...😉) yup....i did noticed.......how cudn't i?

yaar.... i have fallen for it.....totally fida on this !! 😍😍 thank u thank u......

oh my gosh.... the dream.... ab uske baare mein kya kahu yaar.......😳😳 tumne jo na kaha.....maine woh sun liya......

it was super duper romanticccc....😳....... i'm just drooling over it.... 🤪. still lost in mayur dreamland.....😍 yeh kuch bhi nahi hai.......romantic toh abhi baaki hai! mere dost......

thank u.......

but aww.... it was just a dream.... as usual... totally unexpected....😆😆lol......thanks yaar....kaha tha na.....yeh bahut hi unexpected ff hai?

i just loved this Nupur yaar.... total bindaas types....😉😉😉 she is exactly opposite to me...in some sense....even i wanted to be like her......bindass......

bechari suzanne.... she wasn't getting anything..😆😆... that Nupur was saying about her..😆 aata bhi kaise? hindio joh nahi aati hai!

nupur saying her... ''chudail friend''..... n '' mann toh karta hai ki tumhara khoon kar doon.... bewakoof kahi ki !'' ... wowww.......lol.. 🤣 lol.....glad ki yeh baatein tujhe hasa paayi.....love to see u smiling.....

haste raho........smile suits u.......

it was super duper rocking funny scene yaar..... itna has has ke toh ab mera stomach bhi pain hone laga hai yaar.....😆😆 Lol.....glad ki tujhe yeh scene pasand aaya.......

so Nupur going to orphanage..... n Mayank to going to orphanage for donations.... great..😉😉 grt.....yup.....unki meeting bahut hi unexpected hai...... but i will not expect anything now.... bcoz its an unexpected FF nah.... 😆😆 yup....it is......it is completely unexpected......

omg.... Mayank ka attitude.... haye allah.... 😍😍 mayank toh bas mayank hi hai....simply the best....

He is super cool..😎.....handsome hunk..😛..... n he possesses too much attitude yaar...(atleast what i feel from this part) ..... still loved him....😳 yup.....he is handsome.....and super cool......par usmein attitude nahi hai........wait to know that.....i too love him loads......

i'm fida on his style...... but i'm more fida on this bubbly bindaas Nupur.... 😉😉 glad u love her so much......

thanks a lot........glad that u think that its cute......

stunning... marvellous.....just outstanding update dear.....👏👏👏 thank u thank u ji......bas bhi kar apni is "thanks" ki "varsha"

but dont u think.... it was quite small..... hai na... 😆😆 yup....it was small.....

now... i just can't wait for the next part.......😔😔 dekhti jaa......it wud be a little long....

just update it as soon as possible.......OK !! updatign right now baba.......

yaar... i have tried to comment in an unexpected way this time..... hope u liked it !! 😕 i loved it.....

yeh tera ''unexpected'' ka bhoot .... i guess mujh par bhi chad gaya hai....😆😆 lol........acha hai.....mere liye..😍...main toh bahut hi zyada khush hoon.....

love u forever my sweetest bubblypie....🤗 loev u too chocopie.......love u loads.....
your varshu😳

Thanks a lot yaar.....

I had to reply to ur comment like this only.....

Varna main toh sirf thanks hi likhti reh jaati!

Aur tu samajh bhi nahi paati ki kis liye thanks hai......

So thought of using my words where necessary!

Love u varshu......

thanks for such great great compliments.......

hope u will like the rest of the story......

love,
Mahak

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver
Awesum Update Mahi...👏
wonderful Beginnin... thou it ws a dream...
luvd Nupur's convos wid her chudail frnd...
ahh.. Mayu ws so rude.. but her smart secretary... gave him nice chakma..
wow .. d precap sounds interestin...
cant wait 4 d next update
pls update soon.. & next tym... i need a long update...
thnx 4 d pm...
luv u loads...

-supriya

Thanks a lot supriya....

Yup it was a dream.....but dreams do become reality......

Lol.....thank god u liked that!

Yup...but mayu is really nice!

Thanks a lot........

thanks for using such cute cute smileys for my ff........it made me smile...

Yup will get a long update.....

Thanks a lot......

hugs to u......

Love,
Mahak

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#268

Thanks a lot guys!

I am done with replying to everyone!

i have written the update!

I am just waiting for [....Anchal....] to comment.....

Actually she was the one who asked me to write this ff......

And she has forbidden me to update until she comments......

So i am going to call her to now comment!

love,
Mahak

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....Anchal....

@....Anchal....

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#269

I know i know that i am late!

sorry na!

And ya, i know ki tujhe kitna dukh hai nupur ki maut ka.

So shut up and now lemme read.

"Fire and Ice"......hmm......kahin woh dono isi tarah toh nahi hain na?

WOW! aswesome....stupendous....min boggling....romantic and a very beautiful.....DREAM?????? WHAT THE HELL!

tune itna pyara sa dream banaya.....

i can see that u are really working hard on romantic things......good....

meri toh har tarah se jeet hi hogi chahe tu romantic likhe ya na nahi

the lyrics are beautiful......but tum toh kabhi bhi english songs sunti hi nahi ho....tum toh woh baba adam se zamane ke gaane sunti ho.....

to yeh lyrics kahan se aaye? kahin tumne aise gaane sunna shuru toh nahi kar diya?

lol.....yaa suzanne scene was hilarious.....

and for once, nupur ekdum alag hai!

thank God woh sweet, simple, innocent ladki nahi hai.....kyunki tum already vaisi ho aur main toh jaanti hon ki tum kaise react karti ho....

yahan par nupur rocking hai.....tumhari tarah seedhi saadi down to earth nahi....

so i love this change......

orphanage.......hmm......toh yahan par kahani shuru hogi!

and mayank is so full of attitude.....

dono opposite lagte hain.....par unmein ladai to hogi nahi......i wonder tumhe agar pata bhi ho ki ladai karne ke liye kya karna padta hai....cause tum toh kabhi ladti hi nahi ho.....

mayank kitna work alcoholic hai....good.....

wow yaar........brilliant update.....par kuch zyada chota nahi tha?

chal koi nahi.....main hoon na....

and i forgot to say that......jaldi update karo!

Mahak.....tu jaldi se next part post karo.....

i know woh toh romantic hoga nahi.....kyunki first meeting haina......

par haan....mujhe yeh part bahut acha laga.......mujhr lagta hai ki main bet haar jaaoongi.....

i mean tum mujhe challenge hara kar hi dum logi......cool!

kyunki acha hai....isse mujhe romantic padhne ko milega......

aur yaar mujhe koi mills and boon ki book padhni achi lagti hai........so un books se zyada romantic likhna....

update!

P.S.- looks like logon ko tere update se zyada mujhse pyaar hai! thank God that i challenged u! thank u doston.....main har baar mahak ko challenge karke koi ache updates maang loongi.....

tere liye,
Anchal