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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

woowow amazing part loved it....

both AR were so broken...knowing they loved someone else....

so that was the reason sid behaves so cold wid ammy...

that he thought he loves tammu....oh god....

i loved rids dream.....she saw ammy...wooww hoo.....

n sid n tamu getting suspcious.....

yaar i wanna see the flash back...hw sid came to this conclusion that ammy n tamu r gf...bf....

n hw the misunderstanding got cleared....

hope rids tell abt ammy.....that she saw him...

thnx for the pm.........

thanku yaaaaaarrrrr...... yes...nxt ya uski nxt part mein likhungiiiiii... keep hoping...lolzzzzzz welcomeeeeee
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ryka_27

hey....

awesum part....

shukar hai sari confusion clear ho gayi....

sid no. 1 numoona ... bhai - behen ko lover samajh betha.....

ri:kyaa...over react..sid yeh over react kaise hoga..jab tumne inn logon se kaha hai ki...ki...vo...jo bhii...aur tu jaantha hain ki main tumse nahi balki...
she bit her tounge...she was about to say'armaan"

haye keh deti to maza aa jata...😍

sapne mein ridhima ne armaan ko dekha... so cute...

kya nxt part ridhima armaan ka naam batayegi...??

cont. sooon...

thnx for the pm.....


achaaaaa...itni aasani se kaun kehtha hain yaaaarrrr......wait karooooooo
thankuuuuuu......
welcome
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiii continue sooooon and do pm to me
vyshu-avi thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guyssss.......kaise hain sab......thnks 4 ur lovely comments... here goes the nxt part
part-24
update
riz was in balcony..sitting on a chair her eyes were closed...she was remembering her dream..
a small smile spread over her her face.....
armaan was passing by...and saw ridz smiling to her self....his brows narrowed..he stood there watching her....
sid was ready with a plan..he was searching for ridz...he saw ridz in the balcony and armaan seeing her..he called out
si:armaan..
ridz heard it and looked back..she saw armaan...she bit her tounge..(as though he culd read her thought)...and smiled at him..armaan also smiled at her...
sid came there...
si;yaha kya kar rahe ho?
ar:aum..amm..voo..kuch nahi bas..yuhi..
he smiled..
si:acha chalo tk..neeche sab tum dono ko bula rahe hain..
they three went down..sid winked to tamanna..
tamanna nodded...
ta:arey riddhimaa..aao...aao..
ridz looked at her with a quetion look on her face..
ta:hum tumhare baare mein hi baath kar rahe the...tumhare DREAAM ke baare mein..
sid chuckeld ridz threw him a "DONT U DARE'
look...
she went and sat beside anjali..and armaan beside athul..
si:waise..tumne kisse dekha yeh toh hum kisiko bhi nahi batayiii..
ri:kyaa..(as though she dint understand)
si:arey vahi..tumhara dream boy ke baare mein..
ridz was drinking water and she chocked it out..
armaan raised his eyebrows..
ri:kkkaun..kaun drrreaammm bboy
ta:arey..subah batarahi thi naa..ki tumne kisiko dream mein dekha..
she said eyeing armaan..armaan raised his brows more..
ta:haina anjali
an:haa..bolo ridz...kisse dekha..
si:bolo ridz..bolo..
ridz culdnt stop smiling..she was smiling by folding her lips so tht no one culd notice..but sid and armaan noticed it
si:arey muskhura kyu rahe ho..
ridz immediately stopped smiling..
ri:main..main kaha muskura..
si:tk..tk..jo bhi..bolo..
ta:bolo..bolo..
all:(exept armaan):haa..bolo..
ridz sighed..
ri:tk..
she gave a look to sid..
ri:vo hainnn...
sid raised his eyebrows..tamanna was nodding for every word of ridz..armaan was eagerly waiting..
ri:vo hainn......mr..
all:.......
ri:mr.right..mera..
armaann rolled his eyes..sid hit his head..
all:ooooooo
an:arey naam toh bata naa..
ri:naam kyu..jab milega..tab directly milwaungi ..
she looked at sid and norrowed her eyes..
sid showed her teeth...
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nxt day they were gng back to mumbai..
they were having break fast....
they wer sitting like ths..
tamanna,ridz,armaan,sid....and so on..
sid pulled ridz hair from back..ridz gave armaan a serious look..armaan dnt understand anythng..
ths time sid tickled her near waist..
ridz laughed..armaan looked at her puzzeld..
this time he pulled her dupatta slightly..
ridz caught it and showed eyes to armaan..
armaan scratced his head..
nxt time sid was about to pull her hair again when armaan saw it..sid immediately withdrew his hand..
this time armaan pulled muskaans hair who was sitting beside sid..
muskaan shouted.
mu:abey o kaue..teek tarah bait..varna trei ko..
sid looked at armaan puzzeld..armaan gave a smile..
ridz was seeing all ths..armaan looked at her...
and gestured her tht sid did all those..
ri:ahhhhhhhh
every one looked at her..
she immediately closed her mouth....and showed eyes to sid..
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in the bus
rahul muskaan,
armaan ridhhima,
abhi,
anjali,nikki
athul entered..he looked beside anjali..he went to nikki and said
at:nikki..tu zara..vahaa...
nikki raised her eye brows...nodded her head and stood up..athul sat in her place..
she looked around and found place beside abhi empty...
she gave a disgusting look..she saw armaan and ridz..and went near them..
armaan saw nikki approaching..and he tilted his head onto ridz shoulder as he was sleeping..
ni:ridzi..tu jakar uss bandhar ke paas bhaitoge..
ridz was about to get up ynwillingly..when armaan pressed his head to her shoulder....
shiver passed through her spine..she looked at nikki..
nikki frowned and went and sat beside abhi...
armaan lifted his head..saw nikki,,and gave a victorious smile..
the bus started..
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rahul and muski were sleeping,abhi and nikki were ignoring each other,athul and anjali were talking sumthing,ridz was reading a book,armaan was gazing at her,ridz was stealing glances at him and smiling...
armaan took out a paper..wrote sumthng..he took out a cover attached tht paper to the cover and looked at her..
she was also lookin at him..he slowly passed tht cover to her....
she gave him a questioned look..he gestured her to take it..
she looked around and found every one busy..grabbed it..and started opening it slowly..
armaan was lookin at the way she was opening it..
ridz opened it completely and she was surprised..
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athul and anjali were discussing abt love..
an:toh tum love marraige refer karthe ho yaa..
arranged...
at:marraige jis mein love hain..vo arranged bhi hosakthi hain yaa..love..
an:oohh...
at:tum
an:mujhe arranged marriages pe hi vishwaas hain..
at:toh agar koi propose karega toh tum kya kahogi..
an:obviously no
at:koi bhi..
an;haa
at:koi bhi
an:haa baba
at:koi bhi..mmain...bhi
an:hh
she looked at him smiled and lowered her head
at:bolo anjali..
an:khdhi pooch kar dekhoo..
at:tk..jaise mumbai pahunchthe hii..
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Edited by vyshu-avi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
lovely part
loved ridz dream mention thingi
n sid irritating ridz
plzz cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago

amazing ud....loved it...

yaar rids bol dati na ammy ka naam....

simply superb ud....

sry 4 a short comment,....i have to rush....

thnx for the pm...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hmmmmmm
Kya baat hai?
Riddhima ne apne Mr. Right ko dekha? 😉
Of course!
N loved the Sid-irritating-Riddhima part n Armaan keeping his head on Riddhima's shoulder 😆
Cute part di
Thanks for the PM
Take care
Love,
Ashu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved Sid annoying ridzy
Loved everyone teasing ridzy about the dream man
Can't wait 4 read more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey...

nice part....

ridhima armaan ka naam bol nahi sakti thi kya???

armaan ne ridhima ko kya likha ki she is surprise..???

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwww dat was cute.........thnx fr d pm n cont soon

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