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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

thanks meri maa ...i know no kanjooosi

well Update kaha hai

😛😃....karungi,,,,😃😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guysssssss....

i know mujhe aaj update karni hain...par achanak ek kaam aagayi hain....issiliye kal tak..uptade kardungi.... ho sake tooohhhhh....aaj shaam ko hii.....
bye,
love,,
vyshu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshhhhhhhh

😛😃....karungi,,,,😃😉

ayii mandir se vapas ki nahi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

ayii mandir se vapas ki nahi

pehle jaane toh do..😃😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guysssssss.....kaise hain sab?...😊.. thankuuuuuuuu..😃...for those lovely comments... im glad u liked that part...😃.
i knoe mujhe kal update karni thi..as i told u b4
but...time nahi mili....chorry😃
here is the nxt one....read it and plzzzzzzzzz do comment widout being kanjus.😛😛...😆..
as i said...jyaada kanjusi sehth ke liye achi nahi hain..😉😆
part-21
recap:ridzi feeling proud and happy...
update:
ridhima was continuously gazing at armaan...
muskaan,anjali,abhi,athul came from back..
mu:arey yaar rizi..kaha thi tum...
she saw in the direction ridz was looking..
at the same time armaan also looked up and saw ridz gazing at him..he flashed his dimpled smile
mu:arey vaah....kya baath hain armaan..tum toh santa claus nikle...
an;haaa..yyaaar....
ab;agar tumhari pari madam yeh dekhegi..tab..toh vo tumpar tottally fida hi hogayegi..
ridzi came out of trance..wen she heard the word"pari"...
armaan thought"dekhegi kyaa?...dekh rahi hai.."
he chuckled
mu:aur nahi toh kya...ridzi hi impress hogayi..
armaan raised his eyebrows wantedly and looked at ridz with an expression"is it?"
ri:haaa...vo...ab..common muskaan..acha kaam karne se koi bhi impress toh hongena....
armaan was smiling his croocked smile....
at:arey yaar rahul,armaan...main bhul gaya toh aap kya mujhe bula nahi sakthe the,...
an:matlab?
at:haa...hum aisa har saal karthe hain...par haan..hamesha childrens day pe karthe the..isss baar toda jaldi karliya...
an:u mean har saal?
she asked all three..
armaan shrugged his shoulders
ra,at:haa...
ab:arey vaah....achi selection hain muski..
muskaan blushed...
rahul smiled...
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they came back to rahuls house...
it was a smaal one but cute...
an,mu,ab were seeing the paintings,show pices and all...nikki was sleeping...
ridz was reading abook....in fact
it appeard that she ws reading a book...
but in fact she was thinking abt armaan...
armaan was talking on phone...
rahul was with an,mu,ab
ra:yeh meri 10th bday ka gift tha....infact iss ghar mein jo bhi aisi paintings yaa antique pieces hain vo sab mere gifts hain.....armaan ne diya.tha.....
armaaan went near them
ar;meri tarif ki jarahi hai kya abhi bhi...carry on i dont mind...
every one smiled...
mu;oye hero...tu yeh sab paintings kaha khareedi hain...
all were waiting for his reply....
but he and rahul looked at each other...and burst out laughing....
an;kyaaa...tumhas kyu rahe ho....
ar;arey yaar...yeh sab maine kahi se nahi khareeda...
mu:chori ki...
ar;(gave her a look)maine banayi hain
thier eyes popped out...
ar:aise kya dekh rahe hain...
mu;tumme aur kitne talents hain yaar..😲
an;haa...phle guitar...phir vo bache...ab painting...
ab:abhi bata de koi aur bhi talents hain toh...eki baar ....
ra;yeh boxing aur bike races bhi ache kartha hain...
ar;tu bhi....
ab:main bhii...
every one burst out laughing...
ridzi heard the whole convo...she chuckeld slightly in the last...
armaan noticed this....
her expressions were changing..
an:ridzi bhi painting bahuth achi banathi hain...RIDZZZZ..
riddhima heard it..but dint reply...
an:RIDZII..
riddhima went near them...
ar:ohh really...
ri:haa di?
an:yeh saari paintings armaan ne banaya...
ridzi thought..."mujhe patha hain"
but she said
ri:oh
armaan raised his eyebrows and thought"vaah...kya acting kar rahi hain"
ar;acha guys....rahul..kal mom aarahi hain...
ra:reallyyy......aur tammu?
an,ri,mu,ab:taamu?
ar:(he said to them)meri behan(ridzi made a smaal "o")
ar(to rahul)vo bhii...
nikki came there with sleeping eyes
ni:kaun aaraha hain
ar:mom,tammu
ni;toh phir orphange jaana padega...kyuki tammu tumhe nahi chodegi....
mu:toh hum sab chalenge unhe pick up karne...
athul came running
at:guyss....abhi...tumhara bhai ka phone tha...vo kal aaraha hain.flight mein..usne kaha tumhara phone "not reachable aarha hain" par use mere number kaise patha..
ri:maine di thi...
at;oohhhh...
ab;so..mujhe kal usse pick up karne jaana hoga.....kaun aayega mere saath..
all were looking at each other,...
ab:armaan,rahul,athul,yeh chipkali(nikki),toh nahi aasaktha...aur muski....bhi nahii..(he smiled)
anjie?ridz?
anjali and ridz looked at each other
ridzi dint wanted to go even if that was sid..
ri:kitne baje athul...
at:usne kaha subah 5 baje...
ri;toh main nahi aasakthi..(she shrugged..she felt relieved)
armaan also dint want her to go..so he also smiled
ab:kyu...kya problem hain
ridzi gestured "sona hain"
anje chuckled,muskaan rolled her eyes..abhi hit his head..remaining smiled..
ab;ek din khurbaan karo.(she shaked her head)..ek din.(she shaked twice)....sid ke liye(she shrugged..and then shaked again)
ab:TK...math ao...mein anjie ko lejaunga..
anjali also dint wanted to go..she wants to go with athul..
an;voo....abhi
ab;KYAA HAIN...
anjie shaked her head as nothing..
ab:GOOD
every one laughed
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nxt day morning...
abhi and anjie left to pick up sid...
but there they came to know that flight was 3 hours late...
here armaan,atul,rahul,muski went to the bus station....
ridz and nikki were sleeping...
the clock struck 5...
ridz popped open her eyes...
she got ready within two minutes..and went down
her plan was to reject abhis proposal and to go wid armaan saying that she is not getting any sleep...
but by the time she reached down stairs...the hall was aldready empty...they had aldready left....
she thought "shit"
she went back to her room and tried to have some sleep...but no..she dint get any sleep...
she felt hungry...
she went to the kitchen and started preparing food for her self....she recalled armaan saying"mujhe aloo ke parate bahuth pasand hain.."
she stopped...she thought"kyu na mein alloo ke parate hi bana du...sab ke liye..."
and she started preparing them...
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after half an hour armaan.rahul,muski,athul returned wid armaans mother and tamanna..
when armaan stepped into the house he sniffed
and thought"allooo ke parate....itni subah...kaun?"
they all went inside...
armaan went into the kitchen and saw ridzi making allo ke paratae...
she was rotating the paratas on pan...she suddenly lost grip and her finger touched the burning pan..
ri;aaaaaaarrrrrrghhhhhhhh......
armaan ran to her
ar:dikhao..
he sucked her finger...blew air on it...again sucked it....
he looked at her who was looking at him...
their eyes met......
few minutes passed...
tamanna was searching for armaan..she just passed the kitchen..but again came back.....
she saw AR lost in each others eyes...
she made an"o"
and went inside but dint say anything.....and stood there smiling at them...
after few minutes...she culdnt controll her cough...
she coughed...
AR broke apart...ridzi turned the stove off...
ar;haaa...yehh..yeh tamaanna hain...tammu..yeh p....i mean riddhima hai...
ta:ohh..hai...
ri:haii....
sumone called ridzi...
so she left...
armaan was looking at her....tammanna cleard her throat...
armaan looked at her...
tammanna asked with eye brows"kyuuuu"
ar:kyaa
ta;chal chal...one side hain yaa two side....
ar:koi side vide nahi hain...
ta:oohhh really....rukho..abhi ma ko batathi hu...MAAA..
armaan closed her mouth
ar:shhhh
ta:tk tk...batha..
armaan smiled and said..
ar:lagtha hain two side hain par phir bhi one side hain...
he loked at her...her expression was blank...
ar;kyaa
ta:shaked her head
ar;kyaaa?
ta;kuch samaj mein nahi aayaa
ar;main kya karu...
saying this he left..
tammanna thought...'acha...tk...main hi patha lagvaungi.."
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precap:tamanna shocked...
ridzi dream....
ok dothon...yeh raha mera nxt part...doooooooo comment....no kanjusi allowed...
meet u again tommorow...
byeeeee.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
helo vyshu kaise hai
god hope aabb toh mandir se ho ayyi ho hi
aur baarish bhi band ho gayi ho gu
and loved the cute testi
awww that was so cute
yeh read the part
that was so cute indeed lovelly
can't wait to see what will tamana do yaar claver Riddhima woke up at 5 for Armaan hoe sweet awww Armaan can read her like an open book
and why do i have
the feeling that Tamu know sid and thats why she will be shocked
please update soon can't wait for the next part
love Heaven
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

helo vyshu kaise hai

god hope aabb toh mandir se ho ayyi ho hi
aur baarish bhi band ho gayi ho gu
and loved the cute testi
awww that was so cute
yeh read the part
that was so cute indeed lovelly
can't wait to see what will tamana do yaar claver Riddhima woke up at 5 for Armaan hoe sweet awww Armaan can read her like an open book
and why do i have
the feeling that Tamu know sid and thats why she will be shocked
please update soon can't wait for the next part
love Heaven

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Edited by vyshhhhhhhh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part...waiting 4 next one...😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
loved it
so cute scene ridzy making parahs 4 armaan
i like tammy
cant wait 2 read more
pecap looks goog
con soon
thanks 4 becoming my friend
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

awesome update

loved it
so cute scene ridzy making parahs 4 armaan
i like tammy
cant wait 2 read more
pecap looks goog
con soon
thanks 4 becoming my friend
thanks 4 da pm

i will update tmrw...
frnds koi thanks nahi bolthe hain diii....
ur welcome....

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