..Pyar dosti aur mohabbat'MJHT FF'..Ep 6 pg 51 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: marisol45

hey dear
awesome parts
sorry fr not commenting on time
ws out of town so...
well firstly i loved the characters intro
its just like some srk movie😉
really liked gunur-mayank-shilpa aunty convo
do continue soon and thanx for the pms😊

hey thanks for the awesome comments mari!!
and no need to say sorry buddy you can read it whenever you want so don,t say sorry again yaar!!
and thanks for loving all the characters😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

Phew finally caught up wid dis ff so I will comment for inro n all 3 updates together k I will summarize it lol here goes so wow wow da way u describe the intro was so so cool n unique da characters were introducing themselvs like dey were actually talking so cool writing style dear loveeeeeeed ur intro so much so wow story ke andar story lol haha gunur telling der love story awesome n den 1st chapter loveeee sajan scene I mean gunji n Sammy scene lol Sammy kabhi shudhar nahi sakta naa haha mein maa ko bolke apni nazzar utarwaoengi lol so funny haha I loveee how u use da pic it was totally same like wat characters were doing I mean wen u wrote gunji palatati hai n u show dat pic only anyways den 2nd part awesome entry of mayu nips was describing mayu lol n den da song by sayank n gunur loved it n den 3rd part mayur fight In phone lol n yay gunur in Mumbai awesome can't wait for sajan meet nw n den party awesome continue soon n add me in ur pm list btw m already in ur buddy list haha coz u r new reader of my ff teenager love so I will not have to add u in my buddy list lol so jst don't forget to pm me k n sorry for such a long post lol

hey anu no need to say sorry yaar!!infact i lovedddddddd the whole comment!!😊😊
Thank thank you soooooooo much for the super duper megaaaaa comment buddy!! i,m really glad to hear that you liked it do keeep reading!!😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks buddy!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiii ash how r u ?
awesoooooooooooome ud dear
mindblowinggggggggg
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy
superbbbbbbbbbbbbb
loved it

love
deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

hiii ash how r u ?
awesoooooooooooome ud dear
mindblowinggggggggg
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy
superbbbbbbbbbbbbb
loved it

love
deepa

hey thanks for the lovely comment deepa
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyy ash
Read all the updates
They were just fab
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur

Heyyyy ash
Read all the updates
They were just fab
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

hey thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiii ash...its a fabulos ff
too good
i think that guy is mayank
cont soon when u can
see yaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hiii ash...its a fabulos ff

too good
i think that guy is mayank
cont soon when u can
see yaaa

hey thanks for the comments😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Pyaar,Dosti aur mohabbat

Episode 4
Hi Friends!!Sorry for a long break but finally i,m going to update today.One thing i,ve to mention that the sigs of gang is not of my own they are created by someone else so please no credit to me as it would be unjustice.Well enough of my little bak bak😆as usual,i,ll start the update so here goes.
As soon as the train reached Mumbai,the bhusion sisters stepped out of the train.Both were seeing here and there to find someone for their welcome and suddenly,Nupur,s eyes spotted a very handsome person ,waiting for someone but he isn,t able to find that person.
Nupur,s POV
As i was searching for shilpa aunty for me and my sister,s welcome,I spotted a pesron who was undoubtedly too cute that my eyes were forced to look at him only😳.I noticed that his brown-hazel eyes were searching for someone but who could that be.Oh how I wished that i was the lucky peron for who,s that guy looking for and look i think he is proceeding towards us.As he started walking towards my direction,I felt something in my heart but i,m not able to understand what is that sound.Is my heart beating?NO NO! Nupur how could this be.It must be something else.Maybe these voices are showing that i,m hungry😆but how could it come from my heart?Just as i was drowned in my silly thoughts,a familiar voice interrupted me.POV end
Mayank:HI Chipkali kabse dhoond raha hoon aur tum to kahin mil hi nahi rahi thi.
Nupur:(Aray ye to wahi ladka hai jiske baare main main abhi abhi soch rahi thi.magar chipkali to mujhe sirf ek hi insaan bulaata hai and that is"MAYANK"!!)TUM!!
Mayank:cheekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai main hi hoon aur yahin khada hoon.
Gunjan:Di!!dekho mayank kitna badal gaya hai aur mayank hum kabse tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain aur tum hoke ab jaake aaye ho.
Mayank:Sorry gunjan asal main tine dinooon baad milain hain so mujhe shakal pehchaanne main dair lag gayi.
Nupur:tum chup karo monkey kabse main iss kadi dhoop main khadi hoon aur tum.Ghar chalo tumhari khairiyat nahi😡
Mayank:Tum mera kuch nahi bigaar sakti chipkali.
Gunjan:Ab ba bhi karo tum dono.Mayank mere saath gaadi main saamaan rakhne main madad karo aur di tum shaant se jaake front seat pe baitho.
N:par gunjan..
G:Di!
N:ok mam!!
Although Nupur was elder than gunjan but she always listen to gunjan and never ignored her and same was with gunjan,she also litened to her every advice.If Nupur adviced her to stay away from someone then she will do as she was told like a good little sister.Now Mayank was driving and Nupur was sitting beside him and Gunjan on the back seat.Nupur was seeing mayank with a fully disgust look in her eyes.By seeing her looks,Mayank did nothing but laugh and that made nupur more angry.
M:Agar tum issi tarah dekhti raho gi to main hans hans ke pagal ho jaaonga🤣
N:tumhari to main!!
G:DI!!Mayank!!tum dono jhagarna band karo warna main aunty ko batadoon gi.
M&N:Issne pehle shuru kia tha!!
G:mujhe ise koi farq nahi parhta kisne huru kia aur kissne nahi so mayank ab chup chaap gaadi chalao please.
And so after a long ride,finally they reached home.Mayank helped gunjan and nupur to take their luggages inside and as soon as they went in,Shilpa aunty was already their to welcome both the girls.
SA:Aao meri pyaari baitiyon.Kitna arsaa hogaya tum dono ko dekhe hue.
Both sisters went and hugged her and burst out into tears.Mayank also got tears in his eyes by seeing this beautiful moment nad after that he went into his room.
SA:kaisi ho tum dono?aur kitni badal gayi ho.
N:aunty hum aapke bagayair kaise theek reh sakte thay.
G:Haan aunty di bilkul sahi keh rahi hai.humne aap ko bohat miss kiya.
SA:Aaj maine tum dono ke aane ki khushi main ek choti si party rakhi hai jiss main mayank ke saare college friends ayainge.Magar usse pehle tum dono jaake fresh ho jaao aur jaldi se tayyar ho jaao aur mujhe zara kaam hai main raat ko dair e laautoongi so apna khayal rakhna beta.
G&N:Ji.
While in Mayank,s room,he was busy calling his firends reminding then for tonight,s small party at his house.Firstly he called Samrat.
M:hey dude
S:hi kia hua wo dono aagayain?
M:haan dude par mujhe us nupur ko thoda sa maza chakhana hai.Wo mere saath har waqt teri meri karti rehti hai.Uss chipkali ko ek bohat acha lesson sikhaane ke liye tumhari madad ki zaroorat hogi.
S:At your service yaar!!acha waise sab aarahe hain na?
M:haan bas tum dia aur uday ko pick karlena.
S:haan you don,t worry about that bas aaj ki party ka intezaar hai.
M:HMMM.aaj miss nupur ko bataonga ke mayank shamra kiya cheez hai😃.
Soon everyone was busy getting ready for the party.Mayank was setting up the whole hall where guets hadn,t arrived uptill not.
M:Benji!Benji!wo ribbons laake do aur ballons bhi.
And now we can see who was Benji
B:Haan dude aaya!!ye le.
As soon as mayank blowed up a balloon,he saw Nupur coming out and he was stucked at one place.Nupur had wear the same dress whcih she had wore on new year,s party
Mayank,s POV
I had just blown up a balloon when i saw her,the angel of my life coming down on earth.I had never expected her to be so beautiful and she looks even more gorgeous when she had opened her hair.It looks like she is coming towards me and look her eyes,her eyes are like a deep blue sea which anyone can drown in if they tried to look in them.Hey what,s happening.I think i can heard weird noices inside my chest.I,m not able to recognise them and finally i,m interrputed in my thoughts with a bog BANG!!
Mayank was holding a balloon when Nupur poke a nail in it and the balloon burst.
N:HAHAHa!!🤣
M:Nupur ye kia mazaak tha!!
N:i,m sorry par tum kahin kho gaye thay and i just tried to bring you back in your senses😆
M:Tumhe abhi batatahoon and so he start chasing Nupur in the hall.Benji tried to stop them but it wa no use and as nupur was running,she slipped due to a banana peel in her way but luckily she was held by two strong arms that saved her from falling and those arms belonged to mayank.They were having a cute eyelock when Samrat came in between and
S:Ahem ahem!!
Mayur starightened up and came back to their senses.
S:hi i,m samrat.Nice to meet you Nupur.
N:hi tum mayank ke friend ho?
S:haan hum dodno jigri yaar hain.No one can seperate us.
N;kaafi acha dostana hai😆
S:kiya bola aapne?
N:kuch nahi aaiye na baithiye shukar hai ke aap apne sadu dost ki tarah nahi hain.
M:Nupur!
N:ok na
And So both Samrat and nupur got busy talking to each other.In the mean time Gunjan got ready,looking absolutely gorgeous wearing a pink anaarkali.She stepped out of her room and as soon as she was on the last step of stairs,she slipped due to the water which had fallen on those stiars but before she could feel the ground,she felt herself in air.well not air but in someone,s strong arms but who was that guy?well to know wait for the next update😉
Ok guys here is episode 4.I know a little boring par please do pres the like button and do comment.Will be waiting here.With lotsss of love Ash😊😊
Precap:sajan,s first meet and song sequence on the whole gang and not to mention a full time mati episode😉
Edited by ash_sajan - 15 years ago

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