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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

great that u updated but itna chhota sa vo bhi itne time ke baad bhi
i loved it and congratulations on completion of 2 year
plz continue soon with a looong part

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey hi,

mujhe sab se pehle ye bata ki agar itne dino baad update kiya tha to itna chota kyoun? 😕 😕 😕

Kam se kam thoda aur bada hona chahiye tha na us ko.

Anyways coming to the update.

Lovely, 😊 😊 😊 Raj is really the best hubby in the world.
🤗🤗🤗 He bought Naina's parents to her and by this he will make the satisfied that Naina is happy here and Naina will not leave him for some days two. 😉 😉 😉

Smart thinking Raj, Naina was overwhelmed to see her parents. Ab to Raj ko kahegi hi na ki kitna pyaar karti hai vo us se aur saara gussa gayab.

Naina k parents bhi khush hain aur satisfy hain.

Ab Raj to fir tease karne laga Naina ko aur Naina pehle to sharmaa rahi thi aur ab bhaag gayi vahan se gusse me Raj ko lappy de kar.

Par Raj ko to us k gusse par bhi pyaar aata hai.

Update fast.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

2 saal se ek fic likh rahi ho tum? Tumhe to punish karna chahiye...huh!! Anyways...will comment later...thoda occupied hu!! Its just didnt rcv a PM...so am reserving!!

Chalo...am here...though am super late!! But then...tum to Delay Queen ho!! Tumse thodi jeet sakti hu...😆...anyways...zyada bhashan nahi dungi...coz aaj kal main bhi delay queen banne ki race me aa gayi hu...😆😆

So coming to the SMALLL part...😡😆...of loved Raj. The way he cares for Naina & for everyone I shud say...its just too admirable!! He wanted her parents to see it for themselves that Naina is happy wid him...😳

Naina was wondering how was she so lucky to have him!! Even I wonder the same...😆

And see...how he irritates her so that she doesnt cry...ohh...he is just awesum yaar!! 😍

But not fair at all yaar...tumne yaha khatam kar diya!! And kuch ata pata bhi nahi next UD ka...😕...pls jaldi UD karna...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Next morning [Monday]

Raj left early as some urgent work needed his attention…it was 10 a.m and naina was sleeping peacefully..naina's mom came up to her room…

Naina's mom-nainaaa…utho…

Still there was no response from naina…

NM[shook her]-naina utho…dekho kya time ho raha hai…

Naina-maa sone do na…mujhe bhut neend aa rahi hai…

NM[angrily]-naina time dekho…10 baj rahe hain…ye kya tareeka hai???utho abhi…

Hearing her angry voice naina got up and yawned wide..

NM-naina ye kya hai??? Tum shayad bhool rahi ho ki ye tumhaara sasural hai…is tarah 10 baje tak sote rehna???? Tumhein koi kuch kehta nahin hai iska matlab ye to nahin ki tum apni zimdaariyaan nibhaaniyan hi bhool jaao…wahan neeche gayatri ji naashta bana rahi hain aur tum yahan araam se so rahi ho….kya tumhein ye theek lagta hai???

Naina[in a low voice]-maa ne kaha ki main jab tak chahun so sakti hun…

NM-aur tum ne maan liya??? Hey bhagwaan ye ladki kab badi hogi?? Naina tumhaara farz banta hai ki tum unki madad karo…aur main kal se dekh rahi hun ki tum koi kaam nahin karti…aisa bilkul nahin chalega…

Naina[sitting now]-par main karun???mujhe to koi kaam nahin aata…I don't even know cooking …

NM-dekha ab samjh mein aaya???jab main tumhein kehti thi ki kuch kaam seekh lo tab tumne kabhi meri baat nahin suni…ab dekh liya???kya sochti hogi gayatriji ki maine kuch nahin sikhaaya…

Naina[murmered]-hey bhagwan..main confuse ho rahi hun ki meri saas kaun hai aur meri maa kaun??

NM-kya kaha??

Naina-nothing maa…main abhi jaati hun maa ke paas….aap thodi der yahin baitho…I'll just get ready…

After 20 min-

Naina came out of dressing room dressed in jeans and sleeveless top…

NM-naina ye kya hai???

Naina[confused]-kya?

NM-ye kya pehna hai tumne??

Naina-kyun??kya hua?

NM-naina tum samajhti kyun nahin???ye tumhaara sasural hai…tum yahan aise nahin reh sakti ….tumhein khud ko badalna hoga…aise kapde pehnna ..itni der se uthna ye sab badalna hoga…kab samjh mein aayega tumhein ye sab?

Naina-par raj aur maa dono ne mujhse kaha ki main jo chahe vo pehan sakti hun…

NM-fir wahi baat??? Vo chahe jo marzi kahein par tum vahi karogi jo tumhein iss ghar ki bahu hone ke naate karna chahiye…yahaan sab bhut acche hain…tumhein koi takleef nahin hai yahan par…kam se kam tum ek acchi bahu ban kar to dikha sakti ho…chalo abhi aur koi behas nahin chahiye mujhe…jaldi jaao aur koi acchi si saree pehanlo..

Naina-sareee???????? Maa main suit pehan leti hun…I'll be very uncomfortable in saree…

NM-maine kaha na saree???har baat par behas karna zaroori hai??

Naina[sadly]-no…ok…

Then naina went in and changed into a very pretty saree and left her hair open..

NM-ab dekho kitni pyaari lag rahi ho….pata nahin kya milta hai tumhein vo ladkon waale kapde pehan kar…

Naina[made a face]-maa that's not ladkon waale kapde…

NM-mujhe mat sikha…vaise tujhe saree pehnna kaise aaya???jahan tak mujhe yaad hai tujhe to saree pehnna nahin aata tha…

Naina turned red at this…flashes of that night in goa came back to her…

Naina[hiding her blush]-ahh maa vo…meri friend hai na pooja..ussi se seekha maine…

NM-oh accha…ab jali se neeche chal…aaj se jab tak main yahan hun tujhe roz khaana banaana sikhaaungi…

Naina[immediately]-nooo maa….pleaseee…main baad mein maa se seekh lungi..

Naina knew that her maa will keep on scolding her while teaching whereas her dear sasuma will teach her very lovingly…

[ahhh…who's her saas by the way???]

NM-bilkul nahin…mujhe pata hai ki tu kuch nahin seekhne waali…lekin ab main teri ek nahin sunungi..samjhi??chal ab..

Naina[in her mind]-it's all because of you raj..why did u leave and that too without waking me up???ab maa mujhe nahin chodegi….ohh god pleasee help me…


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In kitchen…

Naina entered trying to manage a saree well…but it was very much visible that she was very uncomfortable..

Maa-arre beta uth gayi…maine tere liye tere favourite paranthe banaaaye hain…aaja garam garm khaale…

Naina smiled wide and kissed maa on her cheek..

Naina-I love you maa..u r the best…

NM glared at naina to which naina gave a confused expression…NM indicated her to touch maa's feet..

Naina---ohhh…

She immediately bent down and touched maa's feet..

Maa-arre arre ye kya kar rahi hai??

Naina-vo mainn..

Maa-subah subah t.v dekh kar aayi hai kya??pagal ladki mujhe to tere waala gud morning zyada pasand hai[she indicated her cheek]

NM was shocked seeing maa's cool attitude..but still in her view a bahu should behave as one..

Maa-ye pair choone waala kaam to raj ke liye rakha hai maine..usse zarra si dheel di nahin maine poora ka poora angrez bann jaayega…

Naina giggled at this..

NM-gayatriji aap rehne deejiye…ab ye sab naina kar legi…aap thoda aaram kar lijiye..subah se kaam kar rahi hain aap..

Maa-haaye!!! Meri bacchi kaise itna saara kaam karegi?????????vo bhi mere hote hue?? Abhi to bechaari ne kuch khaaya bhi nahin…

Naina made an innocent child's face while NM gave her "stop it" look..

NM-main soch rahi thi ki ab se main isse khaana banaana sikhaaun…aaj tak kabhi isne meri baat nahin suni….par ab to isse seekhna hi hoga…

Maa looked at naina who gave her " please save me" look…

Maa-nahin nahin…ahh kya karegi khaana banaana seekh ke…vaise bhi jiske liye isse khaana banaana seekhna hai vo to khaana kha kar hi khush nahin hai…

NM-matlab?

Maa-matlab raj..kahan kuch khaata hai vo???bas vo angrezi khaana pasand hai usse…vo pasta…vo salad aur pata nahin kya kya..mere so to naam bhi nahin liye jaate…

NM-to koi baat nahin main isse vahi sab sikha dungi..mujhe aata hai vo sab banana…naveen ko bhi bilkul raj ki tarah hi khaana pasand tha…[her voive choked at this]

Both maa and naina looked at each other…they could not hurt NM's feeling now…

Maa-theek hai…aap isse acche se sikha dena..fir main raj ke khaane ki zimedaari isse saunp doongi…vaise bhi mere se nahin banta vo angrezi khaana..

NM smiled at her..

Naina looked at maa..maa was an awesome cook be it indian or italian…she was a master at it…she understood that maa was just trying to divert NM's mind from naveen's memories..

Naina-haan maa..aap jo sikhaaoge main seekh lungi…promise…

NM finally smiled whole heartedly…

Maa-par usse pehle khaana khaalo..chal naina…

Naina-ji maa..

NM went to dining table to set plates…

Maa[in kitchen]-vaise aaj saree kaise pehan li??

Naina-vo maa…aise hi..

Maa- maa se jhooth?? Dekh theek se khadi bhi nahin ho paa rahi hai..

Naina[pouted]-vo maa ne…

Maa[laughed]-samjh gayi..bhut daant padi???

Naina[like a baby]-hmmm..

Maa-koi baat nahin main hoon na…ek do din ruk ja fir main apni samdhanji ko sambhaal loongi…

Naina[hugged her]-I love you maa…u r my personal life saver here..

Maa[dramatically]-fir mere beta kya hai??

Naina[shyly]- he is my life …

Maa laughed and kissed naina on her forehead…

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in the evening...

Raj came back….he saw no one in the house…

Raj[to a servant]-kaka sab log kahan hain??

Servant-beta sab log mandir gaye hain…aur naina betiya uppar apne kamre mein hai…

Raj-ok..thanks…

Servant-tumhare liye kuch khaane ko laaun beta?

Raj-nahin kaka…baad mein…aap ja kar araam kar lijiye…

Servant-theek hai beta…kuch chahiye ho to awaaz de dena..

Saying this kaka went to the kitchen and raj to his room…

In the room…

Raj entered his room and saw naina sitting on the couch and watching mr.bean and laughing her lungs out…raj smiled seeing her so engrossed in the show which usually kids watch…wait a minute…naina wearing a saree???????hmmm today is surely raj's lucky day..

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Raj went towards her and slowly kissed her on cheek…

Naina[startled]-aap???

Raj[teasing]-kyun???kisi aur ke aane ka time hai??

Naina[angry]-haha..not funny…

Raj-kamaal hai…mere se accha to ye tv waala cartoon hai jisse dekh kar tum atleast khush to hoti ho..

Naina-he is not cartoon…he is mr.bean…

Raj-jaanta hun..bhut baar tolerate kiya hai isse maine..thanks to aryan…

Naina[frustrated]-aap ko to meri har cheez se problem hai…infact aapko kya har kisi ko meri har cheez se problem hai…

Raj-arre baapre….temperature itna high??????hmmm zaroor kuch hua hai…kyunki subah jab main gaya tha..tab to u were smiling in your sleep..

Naina-subah ki baat mat karo aap….infact mujhse baat hi mat karo aap…

Raj[sighed]-ab maine kya kiya?????

Naina-yahi to problem hai ki aapko jo karna chahiye the vo aapne nahin kiya…

Raj[teasing]-ahh kya karna chahiye tha???

Naina knew what he was hinting at…

Naina-main bilkul bhi mazaak ke mood mein nahin hun…aapne jaane se pehle mujhe uthaya kyun nahin????

Raj[smiled]-ohh to ye baat hai??par maine tumhein aaj se pehle bhi to kabhi nahin uthaya…I like when you sleep peacefully…mmm maybe dreaming about me…

Naina couldn't help but smile at his reasoning…

Raj turned her and hugged her from behind..

Raj[nuzzing her neck]-hmmm…aaj ye special saree treat kyun???

Naina-its not treat..its punishment..

Raj[kissing her neck]-hmmm…it is…it actually punishes my poor heart…

Naina-I didn't mean it that way…aapko yahan masti soojh rahi hai…pata hai subah se mere saath kitna torture hua hai…

Raj-kyun kya hua???

Naina-agar aap mere baalon ke saath khelna band karoge…tabhi to main kuch bataa paungi…

Raj[still busy with her hair]-sorry that's not possible right now…

Naina[pouted]-theek hai mat suno…koi meri baat nahin sunta..

Raj turned her in his arms and kissed on her nose sweetly..

Raj-aise kabhi ho sakta hai ki tum kuch kaho aur main na sunun???come on tell me..kya hua???

Then told him everything starting from her maa's pravachan on her waking up late..then her clothes and finally last but not the least…her zero cooking skills…

Raj was in fits by the time she ended….

Naina[loudly]-rajjj…stop laughing…

Raj[still laughing]- naina...i can't believe this…

Naina-aapke believe karne na karne se kya hota hai???main bol rahi hun na...aur ye sab aapki vajah se hua hai…agar aap mujhe utha dete to atleast subah subah daant to nahin padti na…

Raj-accha baba meri galti hai..khush????? hmmm to maa ki vajah se tumne saree pehni…mujhe to laga aaj mera lucky day hai..

Saying this he embraced her again…

Naina- saree ki to aap baat hi mat karo…pehle to isse pehnne mein itni problem hui…yaad hi nahin aa raha tha ki kaise pehnte hai…aur jab pehan liya to chalne mein problem…I can't wear this everyday…

Raj[tracing her cheek with his lips]-agar pehnne mein problem hoti hai…to don't worry…I can help u everyday..

Naina-aapko mazaak soojh raha hai??

Raj-mazaak????nopes..i am very serious…

Naina[lost in his touch]-hmm..aur baaki problems ka kya?

Raj-unka bhi kuch karenge…vaise aaj kaise bach gayi maa se?

Naina-maa ki vajah se..jab maa mujhe khana banaana seekhaane lagi to maa unhe delhi ke mandir ghumaane ke bahaane bahar le gayi…

Raj[laughing]-to maa aajkal tumhaare liye suraksha chakar ka kaam kar rahi hain..hmm???

Naina-yess…unhi ki vajah se to abhi tak yahan sahi salaamat khadi hun..nahin to ab tak maa ne daant daant ke mera bura haal kar diya hota..subah se maa ne ek line pakdi hui hai..khud ko badlo…khud ko badlo…

Raj-don't worry..main maa se baat karunga ki meri naina ko bilkul nahin daante...agar mujhe tumhein badal ke hi pyar karna hota to main tumse pyaar karta hi kyun???

Naina[like a kid]-aapko thode na pata tha ki mujhe khaana banaana nahin aata…vo to shaadi ke baad pata chala na..

Raj[lovingly]-naina..tumhein kya aata hai kya nahin isse mujhe kuch farak nahin padta…ye sab bekaar ki baatein hain…important baat ye hai ki hum ek doosre se pyar karte hain..aur jahan pyaar hota hai na vahan ye sab baatein bemaayne ho jaati hain…

Nainapsmiled]-aap kaise mujhe itni jaldi shaant kar dete ho..

Raj-mujhe kuch khaas nahin karna padta…kyunki jahan tak main dekh sakta hun…tum mujhe apne aas paas dekhte hi shaant ho jaati ho…am I right??

Naina blushed at this and hid her face in his chest..

Raj-bolo maine sahi kaha na???

Naina-jab aapko sab pata hai to poochte kyun ho??

Raj[kissed her head]-kyunki mere poochne par jab tum sharmaati ho…main vo dekhna miss nahin kar sakta…

Naina smiled and slowly kissed his jaw…

Raj held her face in his palms and slowly traced every feature of her face with his lips…placing a soft kiss on her lips he picked her up and carried her to the swing outside in the garden…he sat on the swing with naina in front of him…

Then the rest of the evening was spent with raj being busy kissing naina…thanks to the lovely saree providing him all the access he needed to make naina melt in his arms…


End of the part..


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
so Naina's mom is becoming her saas more than her ma
I loved Naina's dialogue and her expressions
Raj is so romantic as always
please update soon with a long update
today's update wasn't long enough to satisfy all these day's wait
nice part once again
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely very nice update
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raj is getting too romantic
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dear great part
loved the way Raj and his Mom love Naina
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


hi


nice update...loved it


love the bounding between them!!!!!


wah naina ke mum...saas ke tarha react karr arahe hai aur raj ke mum naina ke mum ke tarha🤣

plz cont soon

i am not feeling good...can't give a long comment even though u deserve one...shhoy

love u tons

esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely n hillarious update Aww Naina is so cute-kitna mast dialogue boli usne raj is her life n rajs mom is her life saver , what to say abour rajs mom ,she is too sweet sab ko aise hi saas mile ,Naina ki mom subah subah shuru hogayi,kitne daant padha bechari ko ,ab kya kare uski mom apni farz nibha rahi hain ,she want to see her daughter as adarsh bahu
raj n nainas scene is so romantic,chalo saasumaa ki wajah se raj ka to lottery lag gayi ,first thing ghar main koi nahin hain aur upar se naina saree pehni hain,enjoyed the whole scene
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Dear

Wonderful update..👏👏😃
Naina's mother is so angry to see her sleeping this late and then not helping her mother-in-law.😆😆😆
She forced her to wear saree and then ordered her to act as a real bahu.
Raj's mom was so surprised to see Naina like this and she tried hard to save her.
Its really confusing now.who is Naina's real mom her mother or her mother-in-law😆😆
She is really lucky here.😊😊
Raj was so shappy to see Naina in saree.he loves her in it.
He really loves her a lot as she is.😊😊
Raj ko Naina ke sath romance karne ka kitna acchha chance mil gaya hai😆😉😉
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago

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