Just A Crush - AR FF - Part 9 Updated (p.60) - Page 5

gr8 part

hey desire_20!!!!!!!!!!! gr8 start and a great part too........please pm me the next tym u continue....:) will be waiting babe....

Great part!
Do update soon!

~Sheena😃

Originally posted by: ridziqbal

This is amazing...luv how she has a crush on him it's so cute...update soon...

thnx, yeah she is stubborn but will confess soon😊

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey ayesha..that was a nice part..but sorta short..

so nikki and ridz are damn good friends..nice!..nikki knows ridz likes armaan..n she wants to get his attention but ridz won't accept it!..lol..she better do that soon!..

ridz was thinkin of armaan..n nikki suddenly started praising his smile..which got her attention..n she got jealous when he was flirtin wid su..aww..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

-aish

lol i was hoping ppl wouldnt notice it was too short, but i'll try to write longer updates😛

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Hey
Nice part par it was short
Wanna read more soon
Do PM me when you update next
Take care

thnx, n i will try to make the parts longer😊

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

hi ayesha...!!

wow...the part was so gud...!!

lol...
armaan n ridzi...!!
silly ppl...

n ridzi is toh lyk...tupis idiot dumb... !! :P

lol...
updt soon...

n introduce abhi fast...!! :))
in b/w nikki is reaaly sweettt...!!

--radz--

thnx, abhi will be introduced after a few parts, when they all are older

Originally posted by: armaanrox

hey desire_20!!!!!!!!!!! gr8 start and a great part too........please pm me the next tym u continue....:) will be waiting babe....

--fiza

thnx fiza, im glad u liked it and i will definitely pm u

Hi all, im really glad that u guys are liking the ff and commenting, it really means alot to me. I've written the next part so here it is...

p.s. this is a short part but next update will be longer for sure😛

PART 2

Riddhima and Nikki were busy relishing their chocolate chip cookies in the cafeteria when Armaan and his gang walked in. Nikki was oblivious to their entry, though Riddhima, who noticed Armaan, chose to ignore him after the hallway scene and shifted in her seat so she couldn't see him.

Riddhima's mind started drifting back to Suvarna, "ooooh, I'm Sue," she mimicked Suvarna's sugar-coated voice'Ugh, what does she think of herself? Just because she's got a hot body doesn't mean she can jump on every other guy' chipku kahin ki' stupid hot attention-seeker'

While Riddhima continued her cursing spree, Armaan was busy planning strategies with his basketball mates, while being showered with attention from the cheerleaders as well. "Ammyyyy, tonight is your last basketball game of the season and of high school! Aren't you excited baby?!" Suvarna started buttering up Armaan, "I'm sure you'll rule the basketball court Ammy!"

'Chipku, kitna makhan lagaati hai, and what's up with Ammy? His name is Armaan, you thick-headed girl!' Riddhima muttered to herself, 'and '. What the fudge!?!'

"Oh, I'm so so sorry, I didn't mean to do that," Armaan apologized after unleashing the contents of his water bottle on Riddhima's new t-shirt.

"It's ok," Riddhima commented, getting back to her shy self but when she looked up, seeing Armaan, she transformed from the beauty to the beast, "oh no, it's sooo not ok! What are you? Blind? Can't you see I was sitting here? You are ridiculous Armaan! Is that another attempt of yours to annoy me? Well, you succeeded because you're so dead now Mr. Malik!" She walked to the next table, picked up a bechara kid's tray filled with pasta and BAM! It landed right on top of the basketball champion's head.

Armaan was shocked to the core at Riddhima's reaction, "Riddhima what the heck was that? I told you I was sorry, my water bottle wasn't shut properly and Sue was trying to grab it from my hand when it fell on you! Gosh, thanks for running my day, again!" He walked to the locker room, hoping that he had an extra pair of clothes in there.

"Oh" Riddhima said, as Armaan walked away and the chipku ran after him in her 4 inch heels, "Ummm sorry, I think," Riddhima muttered, trying to understand what just happened.

"Wow Ridzy! I can't believe you did that! But since it was Armaan, I'm not surprised, by the way what you just did wasn't very nice, considering it's his big game today."

"I know, but I was just so mad that he ruined my new shirt, and on top of that, that stupid Suvarna was walking too close to him so I'"

"Yeah, I figured," Nikki interrupted, "Riddhima, instead of burying your feelings underneath your annoyance towards Armaan, can you please admit your feelings to yourself and me?" Nikki sighed.

"What?... What feelings?" Riddhima stammered, a minute blush evident on her cheeks.

Just then the bell rang, Nikki got up and said, "You know what feelings I'm talking about Riddhima," and walked off.

Riddhima decided to stay in the cafeteria for her free period. After contemplating over Armaan, Nikki's words, and her own actions and feelings, Riddhima sighed, "You're right Nikki, I do have feelings for that jerk, and yes, he does have the most adorable smile in the world. I fight with him so he notices me, but I'm not his type, girls like Suvarna are his type' Oh, and great, I just ruined his day completely and today is so special for him... Ugh, Riddhima you're so stupid!" She got up and headed towards the locker room, with the resolve that she will make Armaan smile his dimple-wali smile before his game starts tonight.

comments and criticisms are very welcome...😊

-Ayesha

Part 3 - P. 14