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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Hi dear
welcome to the forum
Awesome start.
loved it so much
plz continue it and add me to ur pm list
All the best

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice intr of mayANK DEAR...PLS CONTINUE SOON.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
all of u
thank u for ur response..
and my name is keerthi...
i am posting the intro for rati....

Part-2

There comes another busy day in Mumbai…

A girl is sleeping with the comforter on her….facing the other side…we can see that the room is quite huge decorated with perfect artifacts….everything is decorated in white…

Then suddenly we see that the girl is tossing in her bed and she is sweating profusely….

She gets up all of a sudden…and wipes her sweat..and

"oh god…everyday I get the same stupid dream..as if I am falling into a valley and someones crying for me…and as if I am loosing my love…"

"this is it I need to consult a doctor regarding my stupid nonsense dreams…how can I fear of losing my love..when I don't believe in love…that's it its decided that today I will consult a pshychiatrist…." Her thoughts get disturbed when someone calls her..

"RATI,,RATI beta..jaldi neeche ajao..breakfast nahi karna hai kya…"

She hears her father shashank malhotra calling her..

"just a minute paa…I am coming…"

"ye rati bhi jabse uk main mba karke ayihe…sirf English mai hi baat karti hai…aur aaj tho ajooba hogaya hai..rati malhotra aur late!!!!! Ye koi 8th wonder se kam nahi hai…haina kaka?"

Just then we see a girl with big chocolate brown eyes coming down the stairs wearing a formal suit..and looking totally gorgeous with her hair held loose..

R:"kya hai papa aap mera mazak udarahe ho…kabhi kabhi late hojathi hai..aakhir main bhi tho insaan hu…;)"

D:"mujhe tho lagtha tha ki tu insaan nahi chalthi phirthi computer ho..jo hamesha kaam ke alava kuch nahi sochthi…"

R:ab aur mazak nahi..aap jaldi se breakfast karke ready hojayiye…aapko tho yaad hogana ki aaj aapki flight hai US keliye..

D:haa meri maa mujhe yaad hai…lekin ye US ki branch ko supervise karne tu bhi tho jasakti hona…mujhe kyu bhejrahi ho…tum jawan ho..sunder ho..thoda US jakar enjoy karleti..

R:"papa aap phirse…maine kitnee bar aapse kaha ki mera enjoyment sirf meri kaam se hoti hai…aur aap tho jaanthe hai ki yaha Mumbai ki branch main kuch problems chal rahi hai..mujhe yaheee par rahna hoga..aur sab kuch thik karna hoga…ab bohot baatein hogayi hain..main office keliye late horahihu..bye paa..take care..aur haan flight miss math karna…main aapse baad me phone per bath karlungi..aap 1 mahine keliye jarahe ho..tho apna medicines time pe lelena..aur.."

She stops in the middle seeing her dad laughing at her..

"kya hein paa ..aap has kyu rahe hain…"

D:kuch nahi beti yeh dekhrahi hu ki tum meri beti se maa kab bangayi…agar tu nahi hoti tho mera kya hotha…"

R:paa aap bhi na main hoo na

D:rati malhotra aur srk ki dialogue…kuch gadbad tho nahi haina…

R;paa ye koi srk..krk ki dialogue nahi hai..ye tho sirf meri mooh se nikal gayi..ab main late horahihu office kelliye..bye paa ..luv ya…

D:rati

R:ha paa..

D:who karan ke baareme kya socha hai…

R:paa plz maine aapse pehle bhi kaha hain ki mujhe is shaadi waadi se koi matlab nahi hai..aur jaha tak karan ki baat aati hai to who mera dost hai aur rahega..iske jyada kuch nahi..main karan ko samjhadungi..

D:thikhe beta..maine tumhe kabhi kisi baat pe force kiya hain kya ki aaj karunga…lekin meri khatir shaadi ke bare me sochna..karan nahi tho koi aur hi sahi…

R:sochungi..ab chalti hu…

Rati sitting in the car starts thnking…

Aaj sab gadbadh horahihe…pehle who stupid dream ki wajah se mein late hogayi..RATI mlhotra late hogayi..aur phir paa se shaadi ki baat..aur maine shaadi ki bareme sochne keliye raazi hogayi….aur maine srk ki dialogue boli…oh god..i think this is enough bad for today…hope everything from now on goes well today…

So this is our heroine Rati malhotra laadli of shashank malhotra owner of malhotra industries..she is an example for perfection…for her life means work work and only work…she has a friend karan..who is her bestie actually he loves her since 4 years…..but she has no feelings for him..she is the chairman of malhotra industries..a very able young enterprenuer…the only thing which bothers her is a dream which irritates her every night..the same dream has been coming since past 6 yrs after she met with an dreadful accident..where in she was badly hurt and got a head injury…after the accident she was fine in all aspects except for that haunting dream..

So by now many of u must have guessed the story..

So this is the introduction of our heroine …how is it guys….

i will try to update next part soon….

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update.
keep going, just provide the links with pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi
nice intro of rati
totally opposite of Nupur
loved it
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
nice dear do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Loved the concept

Loved the way mayank has faith on his nupur that she will be back

Loveed the way he wan everything to be same as it was with nupur

Do continue and do PM me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice intro of rati dear.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Nice part please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice conc plz cont i loved both parts plz add me ur pm list

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