MayUr OneShots (6) -Maybe-final(pg 43)- 11/09/11

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

wow loved it just amazing
loved the way u wrote it
fab os ya
thanks for the lovely mayur os
and thanks for the pm
incase if u have written any mayur ffs or anything else then please pm me the links to it
would love to read it thanks ya 😊

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

woooooooow deepa awesome awesome awesome OS i really loved it the confession was the best loved it 2 core thanks 4pme

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -Jess-
Deepika awesome OS.... loved it...

I think you and I have few things in common... looks like you too hate chemistry... just like I did.... I could never remember those formulas..... and I still remember how bad I scored in the food adulteration test. Anyway.... another common thing...my liking for Hrithik and Shaheed.... I adore their smiles....along with Mr. Bijlani's smile.....😳

Coming back to your OS... loved the chemistry between MN.... thank God... Mayank didn't agree to Akanksha.... 😉.... I rather liked the new rocking jodi Akankit......😆.... now I really have to run... or else Akki will come and throw chappals at me....😆

Ahan ahan ahan.....*cries like nupur in the scene where she tries to seduce mayank n is unsuccessful*

D....i swear...i'd take revenge..

@Jess di..

Di....why me...?

😭 mayank refused me and you all are happy about it..hawwwww!

And yeah...akankit is not possible...ankit belongs to someone else..what say Deepika? *cough*

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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

I am gone deeps

Seriously what an update 😆😆😆😆

5 years 4 month 4 days [calendar]

Chemistry notes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Hrithik's new look and shadid that was really lovely 😉😉😉😉😉

She read all the notes a day before to impress him [that to chemistry ,i would have done the same if ........................]

Well he denied to college Diva [ahem ahem that was so sweet of him --This was very funny A*****A please no Gussa on me dear - sab deeps ke OS ka natija hai sach me 😭😭😭😭😭]

She knew how to coincident things also 😆😆😆😆😆

I am seriously freaking out now no no hallucinating what was going on there

2 hours only Chemistry no mistery 😛😛😛😛

He wanted to go in the last party of the school and wanted her to be his date

I loved her hear she ran so that he should not see her expressions

Both wanted to spend time and big time liars

I so loved the dance steps their closeness and the Best was the confession

I really hope confession would have been another Chemical formula [he he he]

So here i stop otherwise another OS will be written just to comment on this OS 😆😆😆😆

Now please write some more

i would love to imagine ........................

Luv u deeps

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

It was jus sho cute

Loved it

Their confession while dancing was jus too 😳😳😳

Fab

Write some more jana

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mayur_bigfan

@mayur_bigfan

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

hey..
thnx fo d pm..
wndrful os!!

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Hey Deepika!

brilliant OS dear 👏

it was written very nicely

write the next OS very very soon

nd thanx for the pm 😊

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Hey Deepika that was beautifully written. Poor Akansha, but then it must be an honour to be a part of this wonderful story. Very well written, loved the way you intricately described what they felt especially during the dance and the rehearsals. Do write more. You write beautifully.

God bless you!

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

tht was really a nice MAYUR OS

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Senny
Hey Deepika that was beautifully written. Poor Akansha, but then it must be an honour to be a part of this wonderful story. Very well written, loved the way you intricately described what they felt especially during the dance and the rehearsals. Do write more. You write beautifully.

God bless you!

Thank you senny di..

You seem to be the only one to feel bad for me...poor me.... 😭