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Hey guys! This is Part 1! This is the first time I'm writing an FF, so I hope you like it! Don't forget to press the like button and comment!!

Part 1/Introduction

Everyone is done with high school and they are now going to go to a new college. There is a girl's college on one side and a boy's college on the opposite side. The two colleges are divided by a golden gate. Mayank, Adhiraj, Pritvi, Sameer, Varun, Benji, Armaan, and Samrat go to St. Zavier's Boy's College. Nupur, Suhaani, Damini, Avni, Roshni, Diya, Riddhima, and Gunjan go to St. Zavier's Girl's College.

Let's begin!

December 30, 2009 (Friday) at Mayank, Adhiraj, and Riddhima's house.


Adhiraj-Papa, Riddhima kahaan hai? Mai usko kabse dund ra ha hu!

Papa-Adhiraj beta, Riddhima shopping ke liye gayi hai uske dost ke saath. Kuch kaam tha?

Adhiraj-nahi papa it's ok. Jab woh ghar aajayegi toh phir mai usse baath karlunga.

Papa-Teek hai beta. Mayank ko yaha bulao, mujhe usse baath karna hai. Aur tum jaake check karo ke hamari kal ki New Year Party ki tayariya ho gayi hai ya nahi.

Adhiraj-ok papa...

Adhiraj goes upstairs and calls Mayank. Adhiraj walk inside Mayank's room and Mayank is reading a book.

Adhiraj-Bhai!! Kitab neche rakho. Papa tumse baath karna chate hai. Aap neeche jao aur usse baath karlo.

Mayank-Teek hai, mai abhi jaatha hu.

Mayank walks downstairs and goes up to his dad.

Mayank-Hi papa. Kaise ho aap?

Papa-Mayank beta mai teek hu. Tu kaisa hai?

Mayank-Mai bilkul teek hu papa. Aap mujhse baath karna chaathe thee?

Papa-Haa beta. Monday ko Adhiraj, Riddhima, aur tumhara pehla din hai ek naye college mai. Yeh college Mumbai mai number one hai aur mai chaata hu ke tum Adhiraj ka khayal rako. Mujhe uski parahi ke liye bohot chinta hai.

Mayank-Papa, aap bilkul chinta maat karo. Mai uska kayal rakunga aur vo exams mai bohot aacha karega. Mai apse vada karta hu.

Mayank and his dad shake hands and then hug. While they were hugging, Riddhima walks in with her best friend Diya Mehra with many shopping bags.

Riddhima-Awww! How sweet! Papa! Bhaiya! Mai aagayi! Mama kaha hai?

Papa-Hi beta.

Mayank-Hi Riddhima, shopping kaise thi?

Papa-Mama ek meeting mai gayi hai.

Riddhima-Ooh ok. Shopping bohot hi amazing thi bhaiya! Mai aur Diya ne itna kuch kharide. Mai college ke liye bilkul tayar hu. I have the cutest outfit!

Papa-Diya?! Diya kaun hai?

Riddhima-Ooh, sorry papa! Mai aap dono ko ek dusre se introduce karna bhool gayi!

Riddhima turns around and tells Diya to come here. Diya comes.

Riddhima-Papa, yeh hai mere sabse aachi saheli. Iska naam hai Diya Mehra.

She turns and looks at Diya.

Riddhima-Aur Diya, yeh hai mere Papa! He's the world's best papa!

Diya-Aww! Hi uncle! Kaise ho aap?

Papa-Waah! Kitne aache sanskar hai. Mai bilkul teek hu beta, tu kaise hai?

Diya-Mai teek hu, par mai bohot thack gayi hu. Hum dono ne itni shopping ki aur mere haath laal ho gaye hai.

Papa-Ooh sorry beta. Tora aaram karlena.

Diya-Ji uncle. Aap se milkar mujhe bohot kushi hui.

Papa-Mujhe bhi beta. Tum konsi college jaane wali ho?

Diya-Mai St. Zavier's Girl's College jaane wali hu. Meri college Monday ko shuru hone wali hai.

Papa-Wow! Riddhima bhi vo college mai jaane wali hai. What a coincidence!

Riddhima- Haa aur hamari teen aur saheliyaa bhi jaane wali hai hamare saath.

Papa-Mujhe bohot khushi hui yeh baat sunkar. I hope you all have fun.

Riddhima-Thanks dad, par yeh college sirf larkia ka hai...iss college mai koi larke nahi hai.

Mayank-Aacha hai. Tumhe tumhari parahi par dhyan hoga.

Riddhima-Bhaiya, aap bhi na! Hamesha parahi ke peeche par jate ho. Have some fun!

Papa-Ok Riddhima, Diya, aur Mayank tum sab Adhiraj ke paas jao aur check karo ke kal ki party tayar hai ya nahi.

Diya-Party??Wow! Kaise party? Kiska birthday hai kya?

Riddhima-Nahi Diya, kal hamare ghar pe ek New Year Party hai aur Papa St. Zavier's Girl's College ki saari larkia aur St. Zavier's Boy's College ke saare larke ko invite kare hai!

Diya-Yay!! Kitna maza aaega! Hai Na?

Riddhima-Absolutely!

Papa-Haha ab jao tum sab aur check karo. Mai ek meeting ke liye nikal ra ha hu.

Riddhima-Great papa! Kiske saath aapki meeting hai?

Papa-St. Zavier's Boy's College ke Staff aur St.Zavier's Girl's College ke Staff. Mai shaam ko aajaonga.

Riddhima-Pakka promise papa?

Papa-Haa meri princess. Mai shaam ko aajaonga. Bhaiya ko taang maat karna aur agar kuch bhi chahiye, toh mujhe call karna. Aur check karna ke sari invitations poch gayi hai ya nahi.

Riddhima-Ok papa! Bye! I love you!

Papa-Bye princess! Bye Mayank! Nice to meet you Diya!

Diya-You too uncle!

Papa leaves.

Riddhima-Mayank bhaiya, kya hum sab Galaxy Mall ja sak te hai? Please!

Mayank-Kya? Tum aur Diya ne abhi mall se aaye!

Riddhima-Haa bhaiya par please!

Mayank-Teek hai. Mai Adhiraj ko bulata hu.

Riddhima-Yay!

Mayank goes to Adhiraj

Mayank-Hey Adi, kal ki party ke liye shopping jaana hai?

Adhiraj-Sure! Par phele hum party ke arrangements check karenge. Aur phir mai apne dosto ko phone karunga! Woh bhi aapse milna chaathe hai!

Mayank-Alright. Chalo, let's get started!

On the other side at Damini, Avni, and Roshni's house.


Damini-Avni, kya mere liye koi khaat aaye?

Avni-Haa di.

Damini-Zara dikao toh please.

Avni gives Damini the card that came in the mail.

Damini-Yeh toh ek invitation card hai.

Avni-Kisiki party hai?

Roshni runs to her sisters.

Roshni-Party?!?! Wow! Mujhe jaana hai! Avni di, mai konsi dress penu?

Avni-koi bhi dress penlo. Tumhare paas bohot saari dresses hai. Aur vaise bhi tum toh bohot hi khoobsurat ho.

Roshni-Haa di, yeh baat toh saahi hai! Par mere paas sirf 57 dresses hai.

Roshni gets up and starts pacing around the room. She is worried about which dress to choose.

Damini- Mujhe nahi lagta hai ke hume yeh party mai jaana chahiye.

Roshni-Kyu???? Please Damini di! Mujhe yeh party mai jaana hai. Please!

Avni-Haa Damini di mujhe lagta hai ke ham sab ko jaana chahiye.

Damini-Teek hai. Hum sab jaayenge.

Roshni-YAY! Thank you SOOO much di! Wait, di yeh party kab hai?

Damini-Kal hai.

Roshni-Teek hai. Avni di aur Damini di mai aap dono ko tayar karungi.

Damini-Teek hai par chalo na let's go to Galaxy Mall. Thori si shopping ho jaye?

Avni and Roshni-YES!

Roshni-Ek second, mujhe Nupur ko phone karna hai.

Roshni goes to the phone and calls Nupur.

On the other side at Nupur, Gunjan, and Armaan's house.


Ring Ring (phone is ringing)

Nupur-Hello!

Roshni-Hi Nupur! Mai Roshni bolrahi hu.

Nupur-Hey yaar! Kya hua?

Roshni-Kya tuhje mail mai ek invitation mila?

Nupur-Invitation? Ek second, mai Gunjan se puchthi hu. Just hold on.

Nupur calls Gunjan and puts Roshni on hold.

Gunjan-Haa di.

Nupur-Kya hame mail mai ek invitation mila?

Gunjan-Haa di...

Nupur-Kya! Dikha toh!

Gunjan gives Nupur the invitation and Nupur goes back to the phone to talk to Roshni.

Nupur-Hey yaar I'm back!

Roshni-Hi, kya tuhje woh invitation mila?

Nupur-Haa mujhe woh mila!

Roshni-Toh kya karna hai? Kya tum jaogi?

Nupur-Umm...Mujhe pata nahi..mai bhaiya se nahi puchi hu..Kya tum jaogi?

Roshni-Mai jaane wali hu meri dono behenei ke saath. Please tum apne bhaiya se puchlo.

Nupur-Don't worry, bhaiya maan jayenge. Just leave it to me.

Roshni-Wow yaar! Mai aur meri dono behenei Galaxy Mall jaane wale hai. Tum bhi aajana.

Nupur-Galaxy Mall! Teek hai. See you!

Nupur gets off the phone and starts dancing! She's really excited!

Gunjan-Kya hua di?

Nupur-Ham saab party mai jayenge.

Gunjan-Mudje nahi jaana hai. Aap bhaiya ke saath chale jaana.

Nupur-By god! Gunjan, kab tak tum logo se bhago gi?

Gunjan-Mai logo se bhagti nahi hu, mujhe ek project karna hai. Please di samajne ki koshish karo. Please.

Nupur-Teek hai, mai Armaan bhaiya se baat karti hu.

Nupur ran downstairs and went outside to her brother and talked to him about the party.

Nupur-Kya hum sab ja sakte hai? Please bhaiya!

Armaan-Teek hai. Ham sab jaayenge.

Nupur-Thank you bhaiya! I love you! Bhaiya, ek problem hai...

Armaan-Kya hua??

Nupur-Gunjan ko nahi jaana hai. Aap please use bolo naa. Please bhaiya!

Armaan-Tum chinta maat karo. Woh hamare saath aayegi.

Armaan walks upstairs and goes up to Gunjan.

Gunjan-Bhaiya, aap?

Armaan-Haa, Gunjan tum kal hamare saath party mai jaaogi.

Gunjan-Bhaiya, please...

Armaan-Nahi Gunjan, please meri baath maanlo. Please.

Armaan looks at her with sad eyes.

Gunjan-Teek hai bhaiya. Mai chalungi.

Armaan-Yeh hui na baat! Gunjan, tum duniya ki sabse aachi behen ho!

Gunjan-Aw! thank you bhaiya! Aap bhi bohot aache ho.

Nupur-By god! Thank you bhaiya!! Mai intezar nahi karsak thi! Chalo na let's go to Galaxy Mall. Meri dost waha hai aur mera intezar kar rahi hai.

Armaan-Teek hai chalo

Other side at Pritvi, Sameer, and Varun's house.


Sameer-Hey chotu, dek hum sab ko ek party ka invitation aaya hai.

Varun-Bhaiya, mujhe chotu maat bulao. Aur party? Kiska party hai?

Sameer-Hamare college ki taraf se hai.

Varun-Aacha. Kya aapne Pritvi bhaiya se puche iske baare me?

Sameer-Nahi, par mai abhi jaakar puchta hu.

Pritvi walks in.

Pritvi-Mujhse kya puchna chate ho?

Varun-Hum sab ko ek party ka invitation mila hai.

Pritvi-Aacha, kab hai yeh party?

Sameer-Kal hai. Bhaiya, please haa bolo naa. Socho na ki kitni sari larkia vaha hogi!

Pritvi-Sameer, tu kab sudrega! Varun, kya tumhe jaana hai?

Varun-Mujhe college ke dean se milna hai bhaiya. Please chalo na.

Pritvi-Teek hai. Hum jayenge.

Sameer-Yes! Thanks chotu!

Varun-Pritvi bhaiya! Dekho na!

Pritvi-Sameer, stop it.

Sameer-Haha mai sirf mazak kar ra ha hu. Ek second, mujhe Adhiraj ka call aaraha hai.

Sameer picks up his phone call from Adhiraj

Sameer-Hi Adhiraj!

Adhiraj-Hi Sameer!

Sameer-What's up?

Adhiraj-Kuch nahi. Mai sirf yeh puchna chaata tha ki kya tum hamari party mai aareho?

Sameer-Tumhari party hai?

Adhiraj-Haa dude, mere ghar pe hai.

Sameer-Wow dude! Haa mai aaonga mere dono bhai ke saath. Toh tayariya kaise chal ra hi hai?

Adhiraj-Its going great! Mai, Mayank bhaiya, mere behen aur usski dost sab abhi khatam kare. Aab haam mall jayenge. Tum bhi chalo na?

Sameer-Sounds like fun dude! Sure mai Pritvi bhaiya se puchtha hu.

Adhiraj-Great! Mai Galaxy Mall jaraha hu.

Sameer-Teek hai. Bye!

Adhiraj-Bye!

Sameer gets off the phone with Adhiraj and tells his brothers about shopping and they all decide to go to Galaxy Mall.

On the other side at Samrat and Suhaani's house.


Samrat- Hi Suhaani

Suhaani-Hi Bhai. Aap aaj bohot hi handsome lagre ho. Kya aap ek nayi shirt pene ho? I love it!

Samrat-Thanks Suhaani, kya hua? Itni tarif kyu?

Suhaani-Aare bhai, kya mai aapko tarif nahi desak thi hu?

Samrat-Of course you can. I'm just wondering...kya tumhe kuch chahiye?

Suhaani-Haa bhai mujhe kuch chahiye.

Samrat-Aacha yeh hui na baat. Mai jaanta tha!

Suhaani-Bhai, hame ek invitation mila hai ek New Year Party ke liye. Kya hum ja sakte hai?

Samrat-Hmmmm...sure!

Suhaani-Really?!?! Thank you so much bhai! Party kal hai.

Samrat-Teek hai.

Someone rings the doorbell at their house. Samrat goes and opens the door...He is shocked when he sees....

Hi guys...here ends my first/introduction part! I hope you like it! Don't forget to comment! Kaun hai darwase par?? Samrat kyun itna daar jata hai?? Kya koi ek dusre se takra jayega Galaxy Mall mai?? Kya hoga New Year party par?? Jaane ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka!

~Alisha~

Edited by alishaL786 - 15 years ago
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Too good...
Awesomee start..
Soo all are invited in a party?
Cool...
Mazza ayegaa..
.Pleashh Cont soon..
And keep rocking..
Thnnxx for PM...
😃
*Sana*
Edited by SaJan_Sana4ever - 15 years ago
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amazing update dear i loved it thanks 4 pme

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