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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys! I will post soon!!! 😊 I PROMISE! I know all of you must be really mad at me..im REALLY sorry! I have just been sooo overwhelmed with schoolwork and exams that i havent had a chance to come on and post. But i promise that i will post it VERY soon! 😊
~Alisha~
Edited by alishaL786 - 14 years ago
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I will update soon! 😊
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Hey!! I'm soo sorry that I'm updating right now..I got so busy with school stuff that i never got a chance to get back to this FF. I am really really very sorry! I have many parts ready to post, but i just havent had the time at all to post them on IF 😭 I'm really really sorry! Well, I going to go ahead and give you all a fresh update of my new part along with a recap on what has happened in my FF since its been a LONG time! I really apologize for any inconveniences and i will try my level best to update once a week!

~Alisha~


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Recap Time!!

Part 1:

  • Introduction of all of the students of St. Zavier's Boy's College and St. Zavier's Girl's College. There will be a New Year's party. The party will be at Riddhima and Mayank's house. 🄳
  • All of them are going to go to Galaxy Mall to get outfits for the party since the dress code is black and white.
Part 2:
  • Prtivi goes to the parking lot of Galaxy Mall to park his car and so does Damini with her car. There is only one parking space and they almost hit each other's cars. Pritvi gets in an arguement with Damini and they start insulting each other.Then Damini angrily turns around and she slips in a puddle of water! She's about to fall when Pritivi comes and she holds on to his arm. They look into each other's eyes and wind starts to blow their hair. They keep staring into each other's eyes. They are looking deeply in each other's eyes for a few seconds and then a car behind them starts horning and they break their eyelock! (Pehli mulaqat, kya patha, kab pyaar ho jaaye? šŸ˜‰)
  • Nupur is talking to Roshni on her cell phone when it drops. She can't find it. Later, Mayank finds it and takes it to the Galaxy Mall Lost and Found. Nupur is in front of Mayank in line and Nupur says that she wont leave until she gets her phone. She doesnt know that the phone that Mayank has in his hand is hers. Mayank and Nupur get into an arguement and start insulting each other. Mayank gets so impatient after waiting in line for over an hour so he gets in front of her and puts the phone on the counter. She notices that it is hers so he gives it to her in her hand. The phone falls to the floor and Mayank and Nupur both go to pick it up. They are going to pick up the phone when they hit each other's heads. They look up at each other and stare into each other's eyes. Nupur's hair starts to flow and Mayank holds the hair that's bothering her and puts it around her ear for her. Nupur looks at Mayank and he looks at her. He give Nupur her phone and gets up and leaves. (Pehli mulaqat mai takraar 😊)
  • Samrat meets his friend Sameer. Sameer tells Adhiraj that Samrat is the BEST basketball player ever! Adhiraj gets mad and challenges Samrat. They will play a basketball game when college starts to decide who the real champion is..šŸ¤” just have to find out who wins!!
Part 3:
  • Riddhima, Diya, Damini, Avni, Nupur, and Gunjan find their gorgeous outfit for the New Year Party.
  • Gunjan is trying to find an outfit and Samrat sees that she is tensed so he goes and buys her an outfit for the party. The cashier goes and gives the outfit to Gunjan and she gets really happy. There is a bill at the end of the bag and a letter. Gunjan looks at the bill and it says SAMRAT SHERGIL. She doesn't pay attention to the note.. (but we will look at that in the part coming up soon!! Stay tuned! 😊)

That's all for the recap! Now time for my new update!! Thanks for reading! 😊
~Alisha~

Edited by alishaL786 - 14 years ago
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Hey guys! This is Part 4! Sorry for the late update! 😭 I hope you like it! Don't forget to press the like button and comment!!

Part 4

Roshni starts looking everywhere for a pretty outfit.

Damini and Avni are walking down when they see a girl that has a really pretty ghagra choli in her hand.

Damini-Avni! Woh outfit!

Avni-Haa di! Woh outfit bohot hi acha hai! Woh Rosh par bohot acha lagega!

Damini-Haa! Chalo let's go get it! Rosh kitni kush hogi!

Avni-Di, woh outfit uss larki ke paas hai..ham kaise le sak thee hai??

Damini-Ooh..pata nahi

Roshni-Kya hua di??

Avni-Hame ek outfit pasand aagaya.

Roshni-Kya?!!!! Dikhao na di!!!!! Jaldi!!

Damini-Rosh..ek problem hai..

Roshni-kya?!?! ab kya hua?

Avni-Rosh, joh outfit mujhe aur Damini Di koh pasand aagaya, woh outfit kisi aur larki ke paas hai..

Roshni-Kya??! Nahi di!!

Damini-Haa meri princess..aab hum kya karenge?

Roshni-Di!!! Umm.. mai kuch sochthi hu.. Voh larki kaha hai??

Avni-Vaha, voh section mai..

Avni points to the girl that has the outfit and Roshni goes to her.

Roshni-Hi! Mera naam Roshni hai! Roshni Gupta! aacha naam hai na?

Girl-Hi Roshni. Kya mai tumhare liye kuch kar sak thi hu?

Roshni-Actually... haa! Woh outfit joh tumhare paas hai, mujhe bohot aachi lagi aur mujhe voh chahiye! Kya aap mujhe de saak thi hai??

Girl-Umm..teek hai, par ek shart pe..

Roshni-Shart?! Mujhe sharte aachi nahi lagthi hai.. Kaise shart?

Girl-Tum mera makeup karogi.

Roshni-Bas itni si baath?? Of course! Kitna easy hai!! Woh toh mera bai haath ka khel hai!

Girl-Great! Yeh lo.

Roshni-Thanks! Tum sabse aachi ho!

Roshni takes the outfit and goes and tries it on.


Roshni-Di! Kaisi hai?

Damini-Tumpe bohot hi pyara lagta hai!

Avni-I love it! Kya tumhe pasand hai?

Roshni-Mujhe bohot pasand hai!! Mai sachme ek princess largri hu!!!

Damini-GREAT!

Roshni-Mujhe yehi outfit chahiye! Please di!!!!!

Avni-Haa Rosh! Pata hai.

Roshni changes back and comes out.

Roshni goes to the girl and does her makeup for her.

Roshni-Tumhara makeup hogaya! Chalo di!

Avni-Ha ha Suhaani kaha hai?

Suhaani-Mai yaha hu! Roshni, kya tumhe ek outfit mila?

Roshni-Haa! Mujhe ek bohot bohot aacha outfit mila! I'm going to look beautiful! As always! Kya tumhe ek outfit mila?

Suhaani-Haa! Dekho!

Suhaani shows Damini, Avni, and Roshni her outfit.


Roshni-Wow!!! Suhaani ye toh bohot aacha hai! I love it!

Damini-I think its so cute!

Avni-Kitna pyaara hai!

Suhaani-How sweet! Thank you! Roshni, chalo yeh outfits koh pack karte hai.

Roshni-Ha chalo! Mujhe matching jewelry, shoes, bangles, aur makeup bhi chahiye!!!

Damini-Teek hai jaldhi karna. Aur tumhe Nupur koh phone bhi karna hai.

Roshni-That's right! Teek hai.

On the other side, Mayank and Adhiraj are searching for clothes.

Mayank-Adi..kya hua?

Adhiraj-Bhaiya, kya mai basketball acha keltha hu?

Mayank-of course! Tum kyu puchrahe ho?

Adhiraj-Mujhe aaj Sameer mila.

Mayank-Kya tum woh Sameer ke bareme baath kar rahe ho jo Cells(report) ka paper lika tha?

Adhiraj-Haa mujhe lagtha hai..aapko paper se naam kaisa yaad hai?

Mayank-Adi woh aasan hai..par anywas tum Sameer ke baremai kya kehrahe thee?

Adhiraj-Jab hum dono shopping kar rahe thee toh phir uska dost aaya..

Mayank-Kaun tha woh?

Adhiraj-Uska naam hai Samrat Shergil.

Mayank-Cool. Toh tum naraz kyu ho?

Adhiraj-Uss larke ne mujhe challenge kiya! Usko lagta hai ki woh mujhse aacha basketball khel le tha hai!

Mayank-Aww!

Adhiraj-Aur Sameer bhi mera saath nahi diya! Aab mai Samrat koh jeetke dikaonga! Varna mera naam badal dena!

Mayank-Adi don't worry tum hi jeetoge!

Adhiraj-Mai jaantha hu bhaiya ki koi bhi basketball mai mujhse aacha nahi hai!

Mayank-Tumhari game kab hai?

Adhiraj-College ke phele din pe! Aap dekna!

Mayank-Teek hai Adi. Calm down.

Riddhima and Diya come.

Riddhima-Bhaiya! Kya hua?

Mayank-Kuch nahi! Tumhe tumhara outfit mil gaya?

Riddhima-Haa bhaiya! Mai aur Diya koh apni outfits mil gaye!

Mayank-Awesome! Mai aur Adi dundrahai.

Riddhima-Mai jaanthi thi! Bhaiya!!! Rukho mai abhi aathi hu.

Riddhima goes to the counter and gets a sherwani and a suit.

Diya-Yeh kya hai?

Riddhima-Maine yeh sherwani aur yeh suit Mayank bhaiya aur Adhiraj bhaiya ke liye kareedi.

Adhiraj-Tumne yeh kab kiya?

Riddhima-Aaj subha! Jab mai Diya ke saath mall aayi toh maine yeh suit aur yeh sherwani dekhi aur mujhe yeh doh bohot hi pasand aayi!

Mayank-Tumne hame bataya kyun nahi?

Riddhima-Surprise tha bhaiya!!

Adhiraj-How sweet! Dikao toh zara!

Diya-Haa mujhe dekna hai!

Riddhima-Yeh Mayank bhaiya ke liye.


Riddhima-Aur yeh Adhiraj bhaiya ke liye.


Diya-Wow! I love them!

Mayank-Thank you so much Riddhima! Tum kitni aachi behen ho!

Adhiraj-Thank you! Tumne hamari problem solve kardi!

Riddhima-I have the best brothers in the world! I love my bhaiyas!

Diya-Awww! Aab chalo!

Riddhima-Haa papa hamara intezar kar rahe hoge! Chalo!

Riddhima, Diya, Mayank, and Adhiraj take their car and go home.

On the other side, Armaan is looking for a suit.

Armaan-Yeh kitna mushkil hai.. mujhe nahi patha hai ki konsa outfit kareedu..

Nupur and Gunjan come.

Nupur-BHAIYA!! By god, kya kisiko madad chahiye??

Armaan-Nupur! Mai daar gaya!

Nupur-Sorry bhaiya..mujhse raha nahi gaya.

Gunjan-Kya aapko madad chahiye?

Armaan-Haa mujhe nahi patha hai ki konsa outfit mai kareedu..

Nupur-Bhaiya! Yeh mushkil tori naa hai.

Armaan-Aacha? Toh konsi outfit tumhe pasand hai?

Nupur-Yeh wali (Nupur picks the outfit that's on the right)

Armaan-Gunjan, tumhe konsa pasand hai?

Gunjan-Mujhe woh outfit pasand hai joh di ne chuni.

Armaan-Teek hai! Mai yeh outfit karedunga.


Nupur-Yaay! Aab mai Roshni koh phone karthi hu.

Gunjan-Teek hai di.

On the other side, Pritvi, Sameer, and Varun are looking for suits.

Varun-Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki aaj hame kuch bhi milega..

Sameer-Party toh kal hai!

Pritvi-Toh phir nahi jayengi. Usmai konsi bari baath hai.

Sameer-Kya??? Pritvi Bhaiya!! That's not fair! Mujhe woh sari larkia se milna hai!

Varun-Aur mujhe principal se milna hai!

Pritvi-Teek hai jaldhi karo.

Pritvi, Sameer, and Varun went through each stack of clothes at the front to find something.

Varun-Mai vaha dekta hu.

Pritvi-Aur mai vaha dekta hu. Sameer, please kuch kapre dund!

Sameer-Teek hai bhaiya.

Sameer sees Damini, Avni, Roshni, and Suhaani walking outside the store and all of a sudden Avni's dupata flies in the air.

Avni-Mera dupata!

Sameer to himself-Sameer..kuch socho. Agar tu uss larki ka dupata pakarlenga, toh tu hero banjayega! Aur tu toh already itna handsome, smart, aur strong hai. Yeh larki toh mere bai haath ka khel hai!

Avni is running after her dupata and Sameer runs to help her.

Sameer-Mai tumhari madad karta hu,

Sameer and Avni look up and they see that the dupata is on the top of the stairs.

Sameer-Mai abhi aata hu.

Sameer goes up the steps.

Sameer to himself-Yeh riya!

As soon as Sameer goes to get the dupata, the fans turn on and the dupata flies all the way up and gets stuck on the top of the elevator.

Sameer to himself-Ugh! Are you serious?? Yeh fans koh abhi chalu hona tha!

Sameer stands up and turns around to look at Avni.

Avni-It's ok mai kisi aur koh puchlungi. Thanks though.

Sameer-Nahi, mai lelunga.

Damini, Roshni, and Suhaani come.

Roshni-Kya hua di?

Avni-Mera dupata urgaya!

Roshni-Aur woh larka kaun hai?? He's so cute! Bilkul hero type ka hai. Shayad voh tumhara prince charming ho di!

Avni-Rosh..I just hope ki woh larka gir na jaaye.

Sameer goes to the elevators.

Sameer to himself-Agar mai yaha se neche gir gaya, toh phir mujhe bohot chot lagegi..par mai dupata kaisa pakru..ek rasta hai! Jab elevator top pe rukjayega toh phir mai jump marunga aur phir jab elevator neche pe rukjayega mai utar jaunga. Sameer, you're a genious!

Sameer is getting ready to jump on the elevator when it stops at the top.

Roshni-Di! Yeh larka toh tumhare liye apni jaan bhi dene ko tayar hai! How sweet!!

Avni-Mai sirf yeh prathna karthi hu ke uss insan ko kuch nahi ho!

Sameer jumps on the elevator and grabs the dupata. Everyone at the mall shouts with excitement. Sameer looks at Avni and winks at her.

Roshni- Di!!!! Dekhno na! Voh tumse abhi mila aur voh tumhare dupatta ke liye apni jaan bhi deneko tayar tha! Voh shayad tumhara PRINCE CHARMING hai di!!!!!! Use milgaya!

Avni-Haa! Woh bohot hi aacha insan hai, Uska dil kitna saaf hai!

Roshni-Yeh baath toh tu sahi boli. Aare di! woh toh yaha aara ha hai.

Sameer gets off the elevator and goes to Avni.

Sameer-Mujhe lagta hai ki yeh tumhara dupatta hai!

Avni-Thank you.

Sameer-You're welcome.

Avni-Kya aap teek toh ho?

Sameer-Haa mai teek hu. Vaise tumhara dupata ne mujhe bhagaya.

Avni-Aww mujhe maaf kardo.

Sameer-It's ok. Tumhare liye kuch bhi kurbaan. (gets down on one knee)

Avni-Aare, uto. Par aapne toh mujhe abhi mile..

Sameer-Aap nahi bolo, please mujhe tum bolo.

Avni-Sorry..tumhara naam kya hai?

Sameer- Sameer! Aur tum?

Avni-Mera naam Avni hai. Sabkuch ke liye Thank you!

Sameer-Please aab tum phir se thank you maat kena..

Avni-Haha teek hai, nahi bolungi..Mujhe jaana hai, bye!

Avni turned around to leave but her dupata got stuck. She got really scared. Avni froze.

The fans started to blow and her hair started to flow. She slowly slowly turned around.

Avni-Dekho..please

Sameer-..

Avni looked at Sameer and he looked back at her. They kept staring into each others eyes. Then Sameer winked and they broke the eyelock.

Avni-Mera dupata..

Avni looked down to where her dupata was stuck and Sameer raised his hand and Avni saw that her dupata was stuck in Sameer's bracelet.

Avni-Haha sorry!

While Avni was trying to get her dupata out from Sameer's braclet, Sameer was looking at Avni.

Sameer-Mujhe lagta hai ki tumhara dupata mujhe chorna nahi chata hai aaj..

Avni-Haha mujhe lagta hai..sorry!

Sameer-Mujhe try karne do.. Yeh lo khul gaya

Avni-Thanks!

Sameer-Avni, Sambal ke jaana, hopefully hum badme milege?

Avni- Ha Sameer! bye

Avni leaves with Roshni, Damini, and Suhaani.

Sameer starts smiling and walks back inside the store when he sees his brothers standing there.

Hi guys...here ends my fourth part! I hope you like it! Don't forget to comment! Kya kahega Pritvi? Avni kya sochegi? Gunjan ke present bag mai note peh kya lika hai?? Kya hoga aab? Kab Pyaar Ho Jaaye? Jaane ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka!

~Alisha~

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Alisha,šŸ‘šŸ¼
By god what you have done???šŸ‘
Its brilliant your FF i just lubed it all the more, Mayank suit was really good
The entire FF was so brilliant that it just drawn me into it.....
Just amazing FF on the entire IF, beautifully written....
I never knew that Alisha was such a fab writeršŸ¤—šŸ‘
I hope u write more and more such FF's, looking forward for the rest of the installments
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey bestiešŸ¤—
it's awesum
luv all da parts
specially da costume partšŸ˜
mayak costume iz awesum
gud job galšŸ‘
keep up da gud wrkšŸ‘šŸ¼
ā¤ļøshirin
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome!
Its like you updated after so LONG yet its captivating! :)
do cont soon wid some SaJan , VarNi and SaVni scenes...

~~Adya

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